In a Valley beyond Mount Nespe, there lived a girl named Valerie. She longs to visit The Forbidden Island, so one day she and her friend, Isabel go there. But they have no idea what journeys and adventure awaits them.
Advice:Take all the time u need as long as it is made late and perfect it's better than early and imperfect
It's kinda nice but like the other gal said, it ended abruptly
I know but thanks! I don't like to keep people waiting too long by taking the time to make my chapters longer so yeah
thanks!....i know it ended quickly but i needed to make it interesting so ppl would keep reading.....and because i was so eager to post
wow this is interesting
i think chapter 1 ended a bit abruptly and that u need to give a little bit more information but other than that, amazing!
good job and remember to update
Plz comment and tell me how it is........Vote if you like it! :)