The Forbidden Island

The Forbidden Island

547 Reads 17 Votes 3 Part Story
Fluffendoodle By Fluffendoodle Updated Mar 07, 2011

In a Valley beyond Mount Nespe, there lived a girl named Valerie. She longs to visit The Forbidden Island, so one day she and her friend, Isabel  go there. But they have no idea what journeys and adventure awaits them.

SonnyDay SonnyDay Aug 04, 2014
Advice:Take all the time u need as long as it is made late and perfect it's better than early and imperfect
SonnyDay SonnyDay Aug 04, 2014
It's kinda nice but like the other gal said, it ended abruptly
Fluffendoodle Fluffendoodle Mar 08, 2011
I know but thanks! I don't like to keep people waiting too long by taking the time to make my chapters longer so yeah
Fluffendoodle Fluffendoodle Mar 06, 2011
thanks!....i know it ended quickly but i needed to make it interesting so ppl would keep reading.....and because i was so eager to post
thatpinkukulele thatpinkukulele Mar 06, 2011
wow this is interesting
                              i think chapter 1 ended a bit abruptly and that u need to give a little bit more information but other than that, amazing!
                              good job and remember to update
Fluffendoodle Fluffendoodle Mar 06, 2011
Plz comment and tell me how it is........Vote if you like it! :)