Don't judge, this is my first (short) story, it is also my english essay
Sunny Peterson, a drink addict and a ophan, suddenly meets a man that changes her life... but will it be for better or worse? (another marraige story).
when you introduced your character as laying on the couch cuddled with a bottle of vodka, I just burst out laughing. Here I was expecting some kind of suspense story and then the first thing I saw was vodka! LOL by the way, you have a interesting writing style, its nice!