this poem is about the contras between my hart and the world to day.
@Stupid_CupiD i think your the first to understand my poem and thx and let me know if you need anything
I lithe message and its quite true. . . We are two different beings one good one bad, one real and one for the world to see...
but to cry under the loveless sun..
people die.. yyour life begins..
its good.. its always the opposite of you with other people or the world.. i can feel the "some of a kind of attention" that you didnt get... good job..
@Strongheart Thats true but i hope i sorted out the spelling mistakes
Nice changes and true enough we all want to unique and we are in our ways. Again for your poem to have the most impact your spelling should be corrected other than that you excellent changes
@Strongheart I made a few small changes but some times you need to break away from the normal way to show your different.