My worlds burning

My worlds burning

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Stuart Smith By reaper-of-dreams Completed

this poem is about the contras between my hart and the world to day.

reaper-of-dreams reaper-of-dreams Feb 25, 2011
@Stupid_CupiD  i think your the first to understand my poem and thx and let me know if you need anything 
Stupid_CupiD Stupid_CupiD Feb 25, 2011
I lithe message and its quite true.  . . We are two different beings one good one bad, one real and one for the world to see...
killtheinnocents killtheinnocents Feb 08, 2011
but to cry under the loveless sun..
                              
                              no future...   
                              
                              people die.. yyour life begins.. 
                              
                              its good..  its always the opposite of you with other people or the world..  i can feel the "some of a kind of attention" that you didnt get...   good job..
                              
reaper-of-dreams reaper-of-dreams Feb 08, 2011
@Strongheart Thats true but i hope i sorted out the spelling mistakes
Strongheart Strongheart Feb 08, 2011
Nice   changes  and true  enough we  all  want to unique  and we are  in our ways. Again  for your  poem to have  the most  impact  your spelling  should  be corrected other than that  you excellent changes
reaper-of-dreams reaper-of-dreams Feb 08, 2011
@Strongheart I made a few small changes but some times you need to break away from the normal way to show your different.