Faith with crushed words, say you'll believe

Faith with crushed words, say you'll believe

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Whiskeynscotch By Whiskeynscotch Updated Oct 19, 2010

Juat some more of my poetry

ideasasmaps ideasasmaps Jan 09, 2011
i love how you can just write if of the top of your head. :D 
                              explicitly lovely!
BlondFangs BlondFangs Dec 05, 2010
This is very powerful especially the last few lines. The guy your talking about sounds like a real douche x 
AkeenV AkeenV Nov 16, 2010
This shocked me but suprised me at how amazing it was.
                              Keep working hard.
                              Voting again.
Whiskeynscotch Whiskeynscotch Nov 04, 2010
@xxlovethedarkxx 
                              
                              awww thank you so much, i was going for something different and just wrote it in a spur of the moment type of poem... But thank you so much for your compliment i love it, and i'm glad you enjoy reading my work <3333
xxlovethedarkxx xxlovethedarkxx Oct 25, 2010
:D amazing!
                              It absolutely KICKS you in the face :)
                              
                              It is so true and real
                              I can see the honesty!
                              NO HIDDEN THINGS HERE :)
                              Lol
                              Nice job!
saints_and_sinners saints_and_sinners Oct 20, 2010
I think what I love the most is that it's real. It's not an attempt to mask feeling or hide feeling...it slaps you in the face with honesty. Bravo!!!