These are some short scary stories I wrote
The horror movie force, oh no! It separated them because they were being logical, the most terrifying of beats!!!
And, this, And, that. Too many Ands!! Not hate just feedback!!
Doing stories from a 1st person POV is hard and does not belong in this story
How is he being dragged by a body without a head when it says its a head unattached to a body
If you think about it, the entire story happened because of a rock
Instead of saying 'I started disappearing into mid air' you could say 'I felt reality slip away as I faded into the darkness' or something like that and make it sound really awsome and stuff also this is just constructive critisism, no hate! Really liked the story! X