Short scary stories

Short scary stories

12.9K Reads 418 Votes 6 Part Story
Coffeeaddict1012 By Coffeeaddict1012 Completed

These are some short scary stories I wrote

Lucas_Fury Lucas_Fury Jul 04, 2017
The horror movie force, oh no! It separated them because they were being logical, the most terrifying of beats!!!
And, this, And, that. Too many Ands!! Not hate just feedback!!
AaliyahTaylor AaliyahTaylor Jul 20, 2016
Doing stories from a 1st person POV is hard and does not belong in this story
shawna_2001 shawna_2001 Dec 21, 2016
How is he being dragged by a body without a head when it says its a head unattached to a body
aaaaaminathfiza aaaaaminathfiza Nov 11, 2016
If you think about it, the entire story happened because of a rock
MyWritingAdicctionX MyWritingAdicctionX Feb 06, 2017
Instead of saying 'I started disappearing into mid air' you could say 'I felt reality slip away as I faded into the darkness' or something like that and make it sound really awsome and stuff also this is just constructive critisism, no hate! Really liked the story! X