Untold

Untold

967 Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
Kyrra By KyrraKaye18 Updated Feb 02, 2011

Danielle is a normal teenage girl. 
Living the life as the most popular girl in the school. 
Suddenly the dreams that have plauged her as a child might not be jst dreams?
Could this man be her only chance to live? 
Please read to find out =)
Kyrra xxx ^^

ParadiseSurf ParadiseSurf Feb 08, 2011
It's cute it's mysterious just the way it should be! :D keep up the great work! :3 
xThisDarkenedHeartx xThisDarkenedHeartx Feb 07, 2011
the beggining is really good! really drags you in! except for the mistakes i thought the story was really intresting! please upload more :)
thelionftw thelionftw Feb 07, 2011
Can't wait to read the rest! You're a very talented writer. I can perfectly picture what's going on in my mind. Voted(:
dustclears dustclears Feb 04, 2011
Very good desciption and interesting plot! Please upload soon this story had caught my attention! =D
KyrraKaye18 KyrraKaye18 Feb 04, 2011
@embernite I know, people have been talling me that. This is my first try at a REAL story and not a fan fiction soo THank you :) @author_lydianne  I am going to work on it tomorrow and tonight! 
mjRamirez mjRamirez Feb 04, 2011
not bad at all. sentences were a bit choppy but overall this a making for a great story!!! really good.