CANDLES

CANDLES

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Carmella Hastings By Carmella_Hastings Updated Mar 10, 2012

What would you do if a psychotic dictator ruled your Nation? Would you do whatever it takes to keep your little sister from being taken away to the Federation? Would you smuggle medicines to the Feds to keep them from brainwashing you? When 17-year-old Moreland and 18-year-old Katrinella collide in their quest to destroy their dictator, Brill E. Ante and resist the Feds, there is nothing they can't do. But Katrinella is hiding a terrible secret that may come to destroy everything. It's up to the mysterious full-filler of the Prophecy to set things right. How far would you go?

Carmella_Hastings Carmella_Hastings Mar 13, 2012
Thanks guys! I wasn't too sure on the quotes so thanks for the tip! And I'll try to incorporate some more humor as the plot gets darker. Promise I'll read your stories tomorrow <3 thanks so much loves!!
AbigailTheAmazing AbigailTheAmazing Mar 13, 2012
Very interesting plot.
                              
                              Nice word usage, some humorous effortlessly, which is a sign of a good writer.
                              
                              Loved the bolded words!