Awakening

Awakening

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Charlotte Birley By Charli31996 Completed

Blood soaked the ground around me and covered my hands and arms, my blood...
I don't think I am dead yet but I'm not entirley sure if I'm still alive either, however I am certain that I am living.....
Time to show the world what a real Vampire is.

SkinnyLizzy SkinnyLizzy Mar 24, 2012
A bit gruesome, like you said but really good :)
                              Jus remember to add a few pauses - like commas and hyphens :) 
                              But really good Charlz :D
                              keep it up ;) oxox