My Abhi Promise

By Jenisundar

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She is a simple girl with huge happiness of being herself...ever since she realised that she is in love with... More

Character intro
Friends forever..
Angel..
Pragya's indifference
Number 📞
Abhi and Sanjana
Naa mein sahi... naa Tu galath
The race...
Ranbir's birthday
New trouble
Is money everything?
Baba...
so far yet close to heart...
Things changed a lot
I need you here..
Stepping inside a lion's den
Game is mine..
Who spared whom ?
PTSD
Long distance relationship..
Search for pragya
That Shocking moment..
Dark room
she is being strong for both
Being a woman is not easy..
New guests..
Pragya's decision
Marriage
Every wait has a worth..
So this is love...
Relationship status..
U r my north star..
Bulbul's baby shower..
Couple's quarrel..
you are my treasure.
Husband and wife...
You got me..... I got us...
Break from tradition..
without maa...
Lost peace
she
Sunset

Come back soon..

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Both are silent for long...

Pr: we need more money for Baba's medicines, for nurse,..
we should pay back the dept soon...what are we going to do..

A tear drop fell on pragya's hand..

Pr: abhi...we will manage ... please don't cry..

Abhi felt so little Infront of her selfless nature...

He avoided her because Sanjana felt insecure but here she is running his family like his mother..

He cries and says," I am done with Sanjana "

Pr: what

Ab: I broke up with her.... she loves money more than me..

Pragya didn't ask more because she knows that already..

Ab: why can't she love me like I love her..she called me a beggar..

He sobbed hard...

Pragya caresses his head ..

She is controlling her tears seeing him crying for his lost love..

Pr: sometimes love just isn't enough abhi..we need trust and many others things...

She can bear anything but not his tears..

Pr: love is giving everything and sometimes not getting anything in return...

She thinks about her love for him..she sadly smiles thinking how they both are unlucky in love..he is crying in her shoulder for someone and she is consoling him while hiding her ocean of tears..

Pr: shall I talk to her..

Ab: no fuggy...she doesn't feel the same for me and I don't want to force her..

Pr: let me try once

Abhi nods..

Then next day abhi sees pragya talking to Sanjana...he is watching them from far..he couldn't hear them

Pr: please Sanjana..I am very sure, abhi will take care of you very well..

Sa: common pragya...

Pr: please Sanjana..

She folds her hands Infront of her ..Abhi grits his teeth seeing that..

Pr:  please...please Sanjana ...soon he will get a good job with more salary..I trust him, he..

Sanjana cuts her...

Sa: if you trust him this much then why don't you marry him..

Pragya looks at her..

Sa: what happened...what are you thinking...are you thinking that how can you live with a beggar..

Pragya suddenly slaps her hard making Sanjana to stumble...

Abhi's eyes widened seeing that..

Sanjana shouts

Sa: you..

Pr: uvwx....keep everything with you itself...from first I am seeing you are talking badly about my abhi.. what do you know about him..how dare you call him as selfish...you are selfish, your family is selfish , your whole khandani is selfish..

Sa: oh god I have never seen a girl like you...cheap middle class..

Abhi immediately comes there and holds pragya's hand..

Sa: what is this abhi...is this your work to insult me..she slapped me, I Will not leave her

Saying she marched near pragya but abhi stood Infront of pragya..

Pragya pulls him back and says

Pr: you stand behind me..I will handle this..

Seeing the crowd Sanjana says," next time I will show you who I am"

Pr: why next time...you can show me now itself..

Abhi holds pragya's hand and pulls her from there..

Pragya turns and shouts," next time you bad mouth about my abhi , I will break your mouth and that pretty costly face of yours.."

Abhi pulls her near a tree and made her to sit on the stone bench..

Abhi glares at her while she looks on the floor..

Ab: why did you go there..

Pr: to patch you both

Ab: but what you did.

Pr: I...

Abhi chuckles seeing her face...

Pragya stands and says," why are you laughing now ,actually mistake is yours, Don't know what you saw in her... didn't you get some other girl.. looking pretty from outside but very bad at inside...my blood is boiling because of her.. come we will eat gola"

Saying she pulled him and went from there...

Abhi sees her eating her Gola and thinks," she can beg for me as well us fight for me..you are an ultra blessing in my life fuggy.."

Then at night pragya tried hard to convince ranbir but he said that he will talk to abhi only after Baba becomes normal..

Two months later...

Abhi wipes her tears,

Pr: please abhi..we will do something..I am here right, then why should you suffer alone..

Ab: fuggy...we already decided right..

Pr: please abhi

Ab: please fuggy... don't send me with this crying face..

Pragya pulls her tears in but again burst into tears..

Abhi hugs her...

Then he tells," rhea when I am not here don't trouble my fuggy"

Rhea smiles lightly and hugs him..

He gets blessings from Sarala..

Sa: come back safely

Abhi jokes," coming back ?"

Pragya hits his head harshly and started crying loudly...

He hugged her...

Ab: fuggy... take care of ranbir and papa

Pr: I will not take care

Abhi smiles...

Sa: pragya beta..it's okay.... now put on a brave face..

Pragya hugs her and says," you don't understand maa"


Sa: don't make it hard for him

Pragya wipes her tears and nods..

She flashes a smile at abhi..

Abhi mouths a thank you to Sarala and then after bidding bye to others ,he gets Inside the train..

From outside the window pragya says," if they call you to war or fights...you tell you are not feeling well and stay inside the tent itself okay"

Ab: okay..

Pr: eat at correct time

Ab: okay

Pr: if you didn't like the work , then come back okay..

Ab: okay

Pr: if anyone hit you then call me

Bu: Haan she will come and eat their heads..

Pragya hugs bulbul..

Then the train starts moving..

Abhi waves his hand..

Ranbir watch all these by hiding behind a tea stall..

Even though she didn't want him to go, with teary eyes all could she say with a smile is ," Abhi..."

She waves her hand and shouts," come back soon Abhi..."

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To be continued...

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