Beyond Control

By SFscribbles

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Indian Awards :- First place in romance category Galaxy Awards :- Runner up for best title contest ******** H... More

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By SFscribbles

A short update for those who miss Zahir ❤️

Zada balled up yet another paper and threw in into the trash can near her study table

She had been cooped up in her hostel room for a few hours now trying to draw Mirrie the mythical horse.

Neha had come to her room twice and she had thrown her out both the times.

She took another paper and tried to bring into the paper what she had in mind

When yet again she failed, she decided to call her brother

She knows she is good at art, but Zian is better. He is the one who inherited that talent of their father completely

She and Zahir could draw to an extend, but Zi excels in it.

"Hello little sister" came the voice from the other side of the phone and she rolled her eyes

"I'm only ten minutes younger to you. That doesn't makes me little ,Zahir"

"I'm Zian"

"And I'm Angelina Jolie"

"God!! There is a limit to dreaming baby. Angelina Jolie is a tall order"

"Don't you have anything else to do. No girls around to charm? No boys around to show off??" She asked

"You have a very low opinion on your elder brother little Zada. I'm offended"

"Aww my heart bleeds"

"You cruel lady. What did I ever do to deserve this fate. Why couldn't I get a sweet cute and loving sister instead of you. I must have committed some terrible sins in my last birth. Or else I wouldn't be saddled with a heartless sister" Zahir said

Sometimes, he could be such a drama queen

"Oh my. You still have the habit of eavesdropping mine and Zi's conversations don't you?? This exactly was what we were talking about you the last time. What sin we might have committed to get you as our brother" Zada said and clucked her tongue in disappointment earning a grunt from Zahir

"You should feel lucky to have a brother like me"

"If you have to force us to feel lucky, you can just imagine how terrible a brother you are"

"That's because I had to share a womb with you. The company ruined me"

"So you agree you are ruined"

She heard a shuffling from the other side and then heard Zian's voice

"Hello darling" Zian greeted making her smile

Her brothers are poles apart in nature but she loves them both equally

"Zi.. Put the call on the speaker" Zada said with a mischievous smile

"Yeah tell me"

"Zi..my favorite brother. I miss you" she said dramatically and she heard Zian laughing and Zahir possibly cursing

It is still funny to wind Zahir up

He might act all tough and rough bad-boy, but deep down he is a marshmallow

He wants her to love him more that Zi

And he wants Zi to love him more than her

Could the guy get anymore possessive

God help the girl he is going to finally fall in love with

"Okay. You two can go to hell. I love Zera more" she heard Zahir screaming and can picture him throwing his hands up in frustration

God!! How she missed this when they weren't around

Now she could see them everyday and that makes talking only on phone much better

"Oh I forgot why I even called" Zada said as she remembered the reason why she called

"You mean you called for a purpose. I thought you called because you were missing your favorite Zi" Zahir taunted and Zada rolled her eyes

"Zi, I need help" Zada said

"What?? What happened?? Is there something wrong?? Did someone trouble you?? Tell me who it is??" Zahir asked in a breath

And the over protective brother is in form

"If you don't know, I'm rolling my eyes now" Zada said

"The only exercise you do. I won't stop you from doing that"

"Zi, tell him to shut up. This is important"

"What is it??" Zian asked

"I want you to draw something for me. I have been trying for hours and couldn't get it right"

"You tell me the descriptions. I will do" Zi said

"I want you to draw Mirrie for me" Zada said

"That stupid horse??" Zahir asked

"That's not a stupid horse" Zada defended fiercely

Zahir knows she hates it when he makes offensive comments about her characters and he purposely does that to get a rise out of her

"Okay, not stupid. Weird it is"

"Go to hell Zahir Singh Oberoi and never return" she yelled at him and hung up

In their apartment Zian Shook his head at his maniacally laughing brother

"You know how defensive she gets about her works and characters"

"I know. And it is fun to rile her up" Zahir said

Neha knocked again on the closed door of her bestfriend's room

She had been dying to talk to Zada about her recent encounter with one of the twins and Zada had been cooped up in the room doing God knows what

"Zada, I swear I'm going to kick open this door if you don't open it in 5 seconds" Neha warned. Both of them knows it's an empty threat

The door wouldn't even rattle if she tried, let alone break

Neha flexed her arm and poked her non existent muscle and sighed

To be strong, she will have to work out. And to work out she will have to stop being lazy. And stopping being a lazy bum would mean a personality change

And she simply can't change her amazing personality

Zada opened her doors expecting a furious Neha, instead was asked a very stupid question

"I have an amazing personality. Don't you think so??" Neha asked as she walked past her into the room

"Why are you asking that all of a sudden??"

"Oh nothing. I was just thinking about changing some of my habits. And then I thought if I did so that would change my personality. Now that would be a very big loss to the world. Wouldn't it??" Neha asked

"Ofcourse." Zada nodded for not having a better response

She closed the door and sat next to Neha

"So tell me what's it that was so urgent that you threatened to break my door" Zada asked and Neha sat upright suddenly

"How could I forget. I met one of the twins today" Neha grinned

"Who??"

"I don't know. He didn't tell me. He asked me to keep wondering" Neha pouted

"Who do you think it could be??" Zada asked

"How would I know. I don't know a single differentiating feature."

"But you have heard about them. Their character. From his behaviour what did you infer" Zada asked and Neha shrugged

She is still upset at losing such a wonderful opportunity

"Okay tell me what happened. Without leaving a single detail" Zada said and Neha recounted every single detail clearly

"Current??" Zada asked grinning

"Current static.. Kuch bhi" Neha shrugged

"Oh my my. You have a connection there" Zada said making Neha frown

"Connection? What connection??" Zada pursed her lips from blurting out the current static history in her family

If Zi comes to know, he would kill her

Let's see where it is going

"So who do you think it could be??" Neha asked

"Zian" Zada said

"How can you be so sure?? " Neha asked suspiciously

"Ofcourse I'm not sure. That's my guess" Zada said hurriedly

"Okay. What made you think so?? "

"Well for one, if it was Zahir, he would have flirted like crazy and would have charmed you into giving him your number. He would even me messaging you by now. So that rules out Zahir" Zada said

"And for two??" Neha asked

"There is no two. That one is more than enough proof"

A/n

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