A Growing Affection

By Shi_Kira

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After a misunderstanding reveals hidden emotions, Naruto and Hinata begin training together, getting to know... More

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Chapter 1: Revelation
Chapter 2: Training: Rasengan vs. Eight Trigrams Palms Heavenly Spin
Chapter 3: His Greatest Treasure
Chapter 4: Training II, The Hokage's Strength
Chapter 5: Mother of a Shinobi
Chapter 6: Training III: Power of the Five Points Rasengan
Chapter 7: A Father's Prerogative
Announcement!
Chapter 8: Challenge: Which is the Strongest Dojutsu?
Chapter 9: Trapped: Cavern of Treachery
Chapter 10: Internal Struggle
Chapter 11: Dancing With a Demon
Chapter 12: The Value of a Life
Chapter 13: The Secret
Chapter 14: Undercover or Vacation? The Oceanside Mission Begins
Chapter 15: The Damiyo's Daughter
Chapter 16: From the Mist: Ally or Enemy?
I don't remember the title. Sorry!
Chapter 18: Skinning a Snake
Chapter 19: C-Rank Mission, S-Rank Enemy
Chapter 20: Naruto's Weapon
Chapter 21: Round 2: Naruto Vs. the Reaper
Chapter 22: The Ninja Cram School (Part I)
Chapter 23: The Ninja Cram School Part II
Chapter 24: The Brothers' War Part I
Chapter 25: The Brothers' War Part II
Chapter 26: The Night Out
Chapter 27: The Truth in Silence
Chapter 28: Bearing the Noise
Chapter 29: Deafening
Chapter 30: Muted Time
Untitled Part 32
Chapter 32: Singing Blades
Chapter 33: The Ringing Palm
Chapter 34: Hissing Anger
Chapter 35: Funeral Dirge
Chapter 36: Broken Song
Chapter 37: A Small Freedom
Chapter 38: The Trial of Naruto Uzumaki
Chapter 39: The Best Laid Plans
Chapter 40: Coming of Age
Chapter 41: A Home Never Known
Chapter 42: Yuletide Mission
Chapter 43: Play Fighting
Chapter 44: Playtime is Over: The Puppets of Nicholas
Chapter 45: Return to the Hidden Waterfall
Chapter 46: The Reformation
Chapter 47: Protecting the Twice Princess
Chapter 48: Behind the Scenes
Chapter 49: AAAnnnddd CUT!
Chapter 50: The Regenerated Snake
Chapter 51: The Fallen Clan
Chapter 52: The Last Son of the Uchiha
Chapter 53: Kunoichi Sleepover
Chapter 54: Lead By Following
Chapter 55: March 11th
Chapter 56: Alliances under Attack
Chapter 57: The Birds and the Beans
Chapter 58: Grass vs. Leaf
Chapter 59: To the Highest Level
Chapter 60: Red as Blood
Chapter 61: Hidden in the Dark
Chapter 62: Jonin Trials, Day 1
Chapter 63: Jonin Trials, Day 2
Chapter 64: A Hero's Legacy
Chapter 65: Jonin Trials, Day 3
Chapter 66: Jonin Trials, Day 4
Chapter 67: Jonin Trials, Day 5
Chapter 68: Deliberations
Chapter 69: April 20th
Chapter 70: Gathering the Troops
Chapter 71: Where You Are
Chapter 72: The Canyon of Dawn
Chapter 73: The Power of the Tailed Beasts
Chapter 74: A Jinchuriki's Fate
Chapter 76: A Kekkei Genkai is Born: Kitsune No Chishio
Chapter 77: The First and the Last
Chapter 78: A Bijuu's Pain
Chapter 79: The Infinite Abyss
Chapter 80: Second Encounters
Chapter 81: The Blood's True Form
Chapter 82: Escaping Daybreak
Chapter 83: The Next Three?
Chapter 84: Returning Home
Chapter 85: Hinata's Fiancé
Chapter 86: War Preparations
Chapter 87: Love and Honor
Chapter 88: Rematch
Chapter 89: Who Shall Inherit?
Chapter 90: The Hyuga Clan's Justice
Chapter 91: The Gravest Matters
Chapter 92: Invading Death
Chapter 93: Sakura's Chance
Chapter 94: Hinata's Worry
Chapter 95: The Legacy of Death
Chapter 96: Useless No More
Chapter 97: Toad and Snake

Chapter 75: Sharingan Vs. Sharingan: For Eternal Life

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By Shi_Kira

Red eyes, touched by triplicate black tomoe, watched with sadistic  delight. The three Leaf and two Sand ninjas hopped and dodged  frantically around the valley below, while the One-Tail Tanuki lashed  out at them with sadistic joy. Still cloaked in the form of Sasuke  Uchiha, Orochimaru watched their desperate struggle from the cliff far  above, unhindered by the lingering jutsu that prevented most shinobi  from adhering to the rock with their chakra. Of course, he was the one  who had created the technique, during his tenure with the Akatsuki, so  he knew how to bypass it.

The body thief took a few steps closer,  making sure to stay outside the glow of the floodlights. The Sharingan  did not have the same distance as the Byakugan, and he wanted to get a  first-rate view of the battle.

"Not good," Shikamaru barely kept his bland tone of voice as he jumped backwards.

"No,  no, it's very good, little monkey," the sand demon rumbled happily, "I  thought I'd never get to see my beloved older siblings again, and now  here they are."

He lifted his right forepaw and pointed it at  Temari. A tendril of dust shot towards the young woman, who quickly  pulled her fan over her shoulder and blocked the attack. But the sand  kept flowing, pressing against her weapon, and starting to wrap around  it to grab her. Shikamaru jumped forward, slicing through the sand with a  pair of kunai. No longer connected to main body, the One-Tails'  silicate dropped to the stone below, and the young couple separated and  moved back.

Kankuro had used the initial exchange to free his four  puppets from their scroll. He held Black Ant and Salamander close,  while sending Crow and Moon out to slash at the demon's other front leg.  Though they were able to dislodge a few small lumps of sand, Shukaku  just look down at them with joyful disbelief, and then kicked them back  at their controller.

"You two are the smart ones," the puppeteer  shouted at his sister and her boyfriend, as he forced his marionettes  back to their feet, "What's the plan?"

"Don't look at me,"  Shikamaru groused in response, "You two know more about this monster  than we do. What even works on it? I'm guessing earth and lightning  jutsus are out of the question."

Temari nodded, while Ino barely  avoided the tanuki's tail. Choji punched with his enlarged fists, but  the sand absorbed the impact almost gently, and Shukaku snorted. He sent  out a blade of sand, which the big Chunin rolled away from, however in  the process he took a deep cut in his left shoulder.

"Lightning  does nothing," the elder blond agreed, "Neither does fire. Earth jutsus  can knock off parts of Shukaku if the technique is powerful enough, but  it's much easier to do with wind. And a large enough water jutsu can  slow him down, but doesn't hurt him."

"Then what do you suggest?" Shikamaru grunted in annoyance.

"Wind and water attacks until we can escape," she shot back, "Unless you know a sealing expert?"

"Yeah, two of them," the genius smiled ironically, "But neither one is here."

"Wait,  why doesn't fire work?" Ino asked. She had finished tending to Choji,  and the both of them narrowly dodged another giant kick.

"He's a  desert spirit made of sand," Kankuro couldn't keep the touch of mockery  from his voice, "a little heat doesn't bother him."

"But what  about a lot of heat?" the Leaf Kunoichi countered, "Both Sakura and  Hinata told me that during the Sound liberation, Kankuro fought Gaara by  fusing his sand into glass, which Gaara couldn't control. Can Shukaku  control glass?"

"That could work," Temari admitted, with a hopeful glance at Shikamaru. But her boyfriend didn't share her optimism.

"Yeah, but where are we going to get enough fire power to fuse this guy solid?" he asked.

"You  guys are from the Land of Fire!" Kankuro yelled, " Aren't your leaders  always rambling on about 'The Will of Fire'. You should know all kinds  of fire arts."

"Not us," Choji shook his head ruefully, "Ino and I  both know a few minor techniques, but this team is mostly earth style,  with some water thrown in. What about you?"

"I'm air, and Kankuro is earth," the elder sister added.

"We need Kiba or Tenten," Shikamaru complained, "Or even Shino."

"Are you done down there?" the Bijuu asked, and they all suddenly realized he had not been attacking.

"Because  I'd like to get back to killing you now," Shukaku's statement seemed to  be directed at the five teens, but the monster kept looking back over  his shoulder at the wall.

Amusing though it was to watch them try to formulate a plan,  Orochimaru had a different reason for returning to the Canyon of Dawn.  So, reluctantly, he turned his attention away from the fight against the  demon, and continued down the valley at a brisk trot. The Leaf renegade  saw a burst of blue fire rise above the edge of the middle passage, and  splash of green water flow over the southern ravine, and he shook his  head in shocked amusement. The snake summoner would not have expected  Pein to unleash three of the Bijuu to guard one base. But there could  only be one reason such a large group of Leaf and Sand ninjas were  attacking this fortress, the Akatsuki had finally captured the  Nine-Tails Fox. The thought worried him slightly; he wondered how close  his old allies were to completing their plans. And then he immediately  started run through his mind ways to use this to his advantage. He had  already allowed the Leaf to have Itachi's final report on the Akatsuki's  movements. Though he wanted the conflict to continue, he could not  think of a way it would benefit him to rescue the boy. And killing him  was too much of a risk; the demon might escape.

Orochimaru passed a  few dozen mid-level Akatsuki soldiers, apparently backup in case the  invaders escaped the monsters. None of the retrained bandits looked up,  confident that no one could bypass that particular defense.

'I  guess they didn't think I would come back,' Orochimaru whispered to the  soul of Sasuke Uchiha. But the trapped teen did not acknowledge him, and  the rogue Sannin returned his attention to his infiltration. The  entrance to the citadel was just ahead, and the snake angled downward on  the wall until he reached the bottom of the ancient lakebed. He crept  along the wall, his skill rendering him invisible to all but the  sharpest eyes. Not that anyone was looking in his direction.

Outside  the massive steel doors was a familiar face. Deidara watched the three  chasms with a look of annoyed indifference. Orochimaru padded forward,  passing within eight feet of his former ally. He wanted to laugh,  wondering how someone with a total lack of stealth and perception ever  became an elite ninja. The serpent briefly considered murdering the  explosives expert, but decided now was not the time to play. He was  there for a reason, and getting discovered this early would only hinder  his goal. Instead, he did something else he knew the Akatsuki believed  to be impossible; he used the Body Flicker Technique to bypass the door,  reappearing inside the entrance hall. The Leaf traitor brought the  floor plan of the building up from his memory, and started plotting the  most likely places his target might be.

"Ino hit him with you best water techniques, and then Temari, tear  him apart with your wind," Shikamaru ordered, throwing three kunai at  the demon. Each knife had a paper bomb around its handle, and the  explosions blasted off sections of Shukaku's stomach and left rear leg.

"It's  tickles," the monster tanuki giggled, and his tail swept over the  dislodged sand, reabsorbing it. The two women quickly began to follow  the genius's direction, Ino launched into a string of hand signs, while  Temari summoned Kamatari to double her wind power.

"What about us?" Choji asked. Kankuro nodded his agreement for the sentiment.

"There  isn't much we can do right now," Shikamaru told him, "Defend the girls,  and if you have any paper bombs, try to help take him apart."

But he also caught Kankuro's eyes, and indicated the Jonin should close ranks.

"What?" the Sand warrior whispered as they closed ranks around Temari.

"Suiton:  Hand of Waves!" Ino completed the technique, and fired a jet of water  at the demon. His light brown material absorbed the liquid, turning  darker. The leg she hit moved sluggishly, and the lash of sand he sent  after the Kunoichi in response only scraped Choji's arm slightly when he  intercepted it.

"There is no way the Akatsuki would just turn one  of the Bijuu loose," the apathetic Chunin answered the puppeteer's  question, "They have to have someway to prevent the demon from escaping,  or maybe even a way to control him. And I'm guessing whoever is holding  that leash is close by. While we keep the One-Tails busy, you find his  handler."

Kankuro nodded with an impressed grin, and darted away from Shukaku's outstretched paw, towards the opposite side of the ravine.

"Double  Cutting Whirlwind," the Kazekage's sister proclaimed, as she swung her  fan and her weasel familiar swung his scythe. Translucent blades of wind  chakra shot towards the lowest of the Bijuu, slicing clean through his  left front leg. The monster collapsed, but he fell on the disconnected  sand, pulling it back into his body and reforming the destroyed limb.

"Suiton: Hand of Waves!"

"Partial Expansion Jutsu!"

Ino  drenched Shukaku again, and Choji hammered the monster down with both  enlarged hands. The demon's body pulled in Akimichi's fists, and started  to crush them. The large warrior canceled his jutsu, returning his  limbs to normal size before the demon could render them unusable.  Despite his quick action, Choji's fists were moderately injured

"This  would be a lot more fun if I was at full strength," the demon  complained, as he sent spikes of sand after Temari, Shikamaru, and  Kamatari. As the wind chakra experts were engaged in crafting another  jutsu, Shikamaru had to push Temari out of the way, and then he scooped  up Kamatari in his arms as he dove to the side. But the delay cost him,  and the cloud admirer took a serious hit to his back, stripping skin and  muscle nearly to the bone. The Shadow user landed in a crouching  position, taking the strain to his legs to avoid falling on his damaged  back.

"Shikamaru!" Ino shouted.

"I'm fine, stay there. Keep  up the plan," he ordered her, gritting his teeth through the pain.  Kamatari hopped down, but looked back at the injured human.

"Thanks, kid," the weasel offered.

Despite  being shoved, the Sand Kunoichi was able to finish her jutsu, and she  destroyed the projections that had attacked them, while carving a few  furrows into Shukaku's belly.

Kankuro darted around the edge of  the canyon, until he felt a queasy feeling in the pit of his stomach. It  was the miasma of the One-Tails, but he was too far from the beast to  feel it directly. The middle child turned away from the demon, following  the trail in the other direction. But the trail ended at the rock face,  and the puppeteer began a jutsu to search for signs of concealment.  Before he could complete his technique, a fist appeared from the wall  and clocked him in the jaw. Kankuro felt some of his teeth loosen in  their sockets as he forced himself back upright. He drew his constructs  back for a counterattack, but was too slow. The teen gaped in  recognition of the face that emerged from the stones, and was knocked  back by a powerful kick. He landed nearly twenty feet away, right next  to his sister and her boyfriend.

"Temari, it's Shima," Kankuro  grumbled, forcing himself up on one shoulder to view his attacker. The  man appeared to be in his late twenties or early thirties. He had sandy  blond hair, and his navy blue eyes were covered by reinforced goggles.  The Akatsuki aspirant wore light robes of tan and brown silk, and his  hands were empty. The belt at his waist had a Hidden Sand shield, marred  by the Akatsuki's rough slash through the insignia. Shima took another  half step forward, smiling slightly at them.

"Who?" Ino demanded, moving to check on Kankuro, and Shikamaru's back while she was at it.

"Shima  was a Jonin from the Sunagakure," Temari explained, "But he quit the  village, because he refused to accept Gaara as the Kazekage."

"What a hassle," Shikamaru noted, "But now that we've found him... Ino?"

The  young woman looked up from her counterfeit medical examination,  creating a loop with her hands and stating, "Ninja Art: Mind Transfer  Jutsu."

Shima did not even react, and a few moments later Ino  cried out in pain and terror. The mentalist healer fell backwards from  her crouching position onto her butt. Shikamaru frowned at her for an  instant, and then returned his attention to the renegade. Shima was  still just far enough outside the floodlight's perimeter that the Nara  clan member could not use his Shadow techniques. His paramour had no  such limitations, however.

"Wind Scythe Jutsu," she intoned. But  again the Sand traitor did not react. The blades of air struck him, and  his surface cracked, and some dust blew off of him. But the next instant  the cracks sealed, and his appearance was unmarred.

"I have taken  a page from your beloved Kazekage's book," Shima noted, "I have a layer  of Shukaku's body covering me as armor. Miss Yamanaka's attempt to  invade my mind thrust her into the demon's psyche instead."

"Speaking  of me, aren't you forgetting something!" the monster tanuki roared,  sending dozens of spears of sand at the closely grouped shinobi.

He tapped his fingers on the table. He was not concerned about the  battle; sending out the first three Bijuu was overkill, even as a show  of power. No, he was worried that he had let the persona of Tobi slip  too far in making the decision. The look Deidara had given him told  Madara his 'senior' was suspicious. Or more accurately, more suspicious  than he had been previously.

Still, the bomb artist had always  been a borderline liability to the Akatsuki due to his rebellious and  destructive nature. His usefulness was limited, and Madara would have  been more than happy to remove the firebug. If the three replacements he  had chosen succeeded, the Akatsuki would be able to absorb the loss of  Deidara. Madara could make Mayuko Tobi's partner, in more ways than one,  and assign Shima and Daisuke as the fourth team.

Despite having  worked through his concerns, Madara continued to drum the table. It was  the sort of nervous tic Tobi might display when forced to lead a major  battle. His acting was rewarded when the door burst open. But instead of  a messenger, one of the guards flew backwards into the makeshift  command center. He landed on the table, quite dead. Tobi leapt to his  feet in surprise, when a familiar face strode through the door.

"Orochimaru-senpai?" the masked ninja asked in confusion, upon seeing Sasuke's face, "What are you doing here?"

The  stolen Sharingan observed him for a moment, and then the invader burst  into laughter, Orochimaru's voice issuing from Sasuke's lips.

"Is  this his last revenge, trying to trick me into confronting you?"  Orochimaru asked himself, "Or was he truly unaware of how close his  target was?"

"I don't know where Madara is," Itachi shuddered in pain, as his  brother's hijacked face leaned in close, "If I did, one of us would  already be dead."

"But you have a suspicion," Orochimaru  purred, "I heard your whole conversation with my old friend; you must  think you are close, to want to stay undercover at this late stage of  the game."

The double agent wanted to tell the snake  where he could go, and what to do when he got there. But another part of  him, the very Uchiha part, wanted revenge against his villainous  ancestor at almost any cost.

"Tobi," Itachi finally  relented, "He was inducted into the Rings with no testing. And Lord Pein  tries to hide it, but he always defers to Tobi or agrees with his  plans. I think Tobi is Madara's mole, inserted in our ranks to keep a  closer eye on us."

"Good boy," Orochimaru congratulated him, "And now as promised, your reward. Amaterasu."

"You can drop the act, Madara," Orochimaru said conversationally,  "That doesn't fool me. I recognize your movements, especially now."

He tapped the left side of his borrowed face right next to his red eye.

"You  already have the Sharingan active?" Madara mocked, dropping the  pretense and removing Tobi's spiral mask, "Did you have that much  trouble getting here?"

"Oh no," the snake shook his head, "I have  trained this body to the point where the first stage of the Sharingan is  my default mode. I actually have to expend chakra now to suppress it,  when I need to look normal."

Madara looked impressed in spite of himself.

"So why are you here, Orochimaru?" the first Uchiha asked in false civility.

"You have something I desire," the Sannin answered honestly, "And I am here to get it."

"You plan to steal from me?" Madara's response was incredulous.

"Not  steal," the former ring bearer countered evenly, "It is knowledge that I  want you to share, and I am prepared to offer something of value in  return."

The Akatsuki leader's eyes widened, and he indicated his former ally should continue.

"You possess the one thing I want most in this world, the secret of immortality. It is the main reason I acquired this body."

Madara blinked in amazement, and then his face turned dark.

"I  don't think so," the immortal countered, "Aside from the fact you  killed the last two members of my family, I don't need the competition."

"You  abandoned your family decades ago," Orochimaru disagreed smoothly, "  And what competition? You want to rule the world, and I want to master  every jutsu; and we both want to see the Konohagakure burn. Our goals  are not incompatible."

Madara shrugged to concede the point, but his face still looked deadly.

"Nevertheless, there is nothing you can offer that is worth sharing that power."

"Not  even my services?" the body-thief offered smugly, "Give me the secret  to eternal life, and I shall happily rejoin the Akatsuki. Having an  immortal ally with my knowledge and power could only benefit you."

"As  if I could trust you," Madara said coldly, his eyes boring through the  snake, "But for the sake of the current operation, I will allow you to  go in peace. Leave."

"Now that is a problem," Orochimaru was  unperturbed. His eyes transformed, the tomoe transforming into daggers  pointing at his pupils.

"If you will not share this power with me willingly, I will have to extract it from you, by any means necessary."

The sound of birds filled the room, and the whites of Madara's eyes turned jet black.

Salamander and Black Ant tumbled free from the attack. Salamander's  compartment opened when it hit the side of the valley, spilling out  Temari, Shikamaru, and Kamatari. After Ant stopped rolling, his doors  were quickly pushed open from the inside, and Ino extracted herself.

"Expansion  Jutsu!" roaring with rage, Choji grew until he was roughly the same  size as the demon. He charged forward, body-slamming Shukaku into the  wall, knocking the sand monster away from Kankuro. At the same time,  Kamatari pragmatically began to send wind blades at the tanuki again.  Shukaku sent more barbs of dust at Choji, who took a few hits but was  able to shatter most of them with his enhanced strength. The One-Tails  struck out again, shaping his paw into a hammer, and knocked Akimichi  into the battlements. As Choji pulled himself to his feet, he coughed  once, and blood wet his lips. With the enlarged human temporarily  disposed of, the demon fired gobs of sand at the weasel, willing to  briefly lose control of the silicate to try to eliminate the small  annoyance.

The other three shinobi rushed over to the puppet  wielder. As they approached, Shikamaru recognized the remains of Crow,  shattered into a thousand pieces. The two women knelt over the Sand  Jonin, and despite her training, Ino almost vomited. Kankuro's torso and  limbs were riddled with dust covered stab wounds, leaking blood across  his uniform, staining the black material red. Most of the makeup on the  right side of his face had been scoured away, and the skin underneath  was scratched and bleeding. The medic swallowed her bile, and started to  try to heal him. But the damage was too great. Ino recognized that even  if she had Tsunade, Shizune, and Sakura with her, they still might not  be enough.

"Heh," Kankuro coughed hollowly, "Just like I always expected..."

He  gasped again, and then stopped breathing. Ino turned her attention to  his heart and lungs, but the medical jutsu was not up to the task. She  looked over at her friend with tears in her eyes.

"I'm sorry,  Temari," Ino said sadly, reaching up to close Kankuro's eyes. The  Kazekage's sister did no respond. Her eyes were red and wet, but they  were filled with a hateful gaze. She stood slowly, deliberately, and  spread her fan to its widest configuration. She turned back towards  Shima with murderous intent.

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