The Oncoming Storm ²

By NxusDarkNova

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(UNDER EDITING) What happens when the Doctor's wife travels with him through time and space. Seer: a person w... More

The Eleventh Hour
Eleventh Hour pt.2
The Beast Below
The Beast Below pt.2
The Beast Below pt.3
Victory Of The Daleks
Victory Of The Daleks pt.2
Victory Of The Daleks pt.3
Victory Of The Daleks pt.4
Time Of The Angels
Time Of The Angels pt.2
Time Of The Angels pt.3
Flesh & Stone
Flesh & Stone pt.2
Vampires In Venice
Vampires In Venice pt.2
Amy's Choice
Amy's Choice pt.2
Amy's Choice pt.3
Hungry Earth
Hungry Earth pt.2
Cold Blood
Cold Blood pt.2
Vincent & The Doctor
Vincent & The Doctor pt.2
Vincent & The Doctor pt.3
The Lodger
The Lodger pt.2
The Lodger pt.3
The Pandorica Opens
The Pandorica Opens pt.2
The Pandorica Opens pt.3
The Big Bang
The Big Bang pt.2
The Big Bang pt.3
A Christmas Carol
A Christmas Carol pt.2
A Christmas Carol pt.3
The Impossible Astronaut
The Impossible Astronaut pt.2
The Impossible Astronaut pt.3
The Day Of The Moon
The Day Of The Moon pt.2
The Curse Of The Black Spot
The Curse Of The Black Spot pt.2
The Doctors Wife
The Doctors Wife pt.2
The Doctors Wife pt.3
The Rebel Flesh
The Rebel Flesh pt.2
The Almost People
The Almost People pt.2
The Almost People pt.3
A Good Man Goes To War
A Good Man Goes To War pt.2
A Good Man Goes To War pt.3
A Good Man Goes To War pt.4
A Good Man Goes To War pt.5
Let's Kill Hitler
Let's Kill Hitler pt.2
Let's Kill Hitler pt.3
Night Terrors
Night Terrors pt.2
The Girl Who Waited
The Girl Who Waited pt.2
The God Complex
The God Complex pt.2
The God Complex pt.3
The God Complex pt.4
Closing Time
Closing Time pt.2
Closing Time pt.3
The Wedding Of River Song
The Wedding Of River Song pt.2
The Wedding Of River Song pt.3
Asylum Of The Daleks
Asylum Of The Daleks pt.2
Dinosaurs On A Spaceship
Dinosaurs On A Spaceship pt.2
Dinosaurs On A Spaceship pt.3
A Town Called Mercy
A Town Called Mercy pt.2
Power Of Three
Power Of Three pt.2
Angels Take Manhattan
Angels Take Manhattan pt.2
The Snowmen
The Snowmen pt.2
The Snowmen pt.3
The Bells Of Saint John
The Bells Of Saint John pt.2
Rings Of Akhaten
The Rings Of Akhaten pt.2
Cold War
Cold War pt.2
Hide
Hide pt.2
Journey To The Centre Of The TARDIS
Journey To The Centre Of The TARDIS pt.2
The Crimson Horror
The Crimson Horror pt.2
Nightmare In Silver
Nightmare In Silver pt.2
The Name Of The Doctor
The Name Of The Doctor pt.2
The Day Of The Doctor
The Day Of The Doctor pt.2
The Day Of The Doctor pt.3
The Day Of The Doctor pt.4
The Time Of The Doctor
The Time Of The Doctor pt.2
The Time Of The Doctor pt.3
The Time Of The Doctor pt.4

Eleventh hour pt.3

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"First floor, on the left, fourth from the end" Amy gets a text from Rory's phone. 'Duck!' She and Rory do, and the fire engine ladder comes crashing through the window. The doctor and I enter through the window.

"Right! Hello. Are we late? No, three minutes to go. So still time" the Doctor says.

"Time for what, Time Lords?"

"Take the disguise off. They'll find you in a heartbeat. Nobody dies" I say.

"The Atraxi will kill me this time. If I am to die, let there be fire."

"Ok. You came to this world by opening a crack in space and time. Do it again. Just leave" the Doctor says.

"I did not open the crack."

"Somebody did."

"The cracks in the skin of the universe, don't you two know where they came from? You don't, do you?" she changes to a little girl's voice "the Doctor and the Seer in the TARDIS don't know. Don't know. Don't know!" and back to the adult voice
"the universe is cracked. The Pandorica will open. Silence will fall."

"And we're off! Look at that. Look at that!" the Doctor points the clock which says 0:00 "yeah, I know, just a clock. Whatever. But do you know what's happening right now? In one little bedroom, mine and Seer's team are working. Jeff and the world. And do you know what they're doing? They're spreading the word all over the world, quantum fast. The word is out. And do you know what the word is? The word is Zero. Now, me, if I was up in the sky in a battleship, monitoring all Earth communications, I'd probably take that as a hint. And if I had a whole battle fleet surrounding the planet, I'd be able to track a simple old computer virus to its source in, what, under a minute? The source, by the way, is right here" there is a bright light outside.

"Oh! And I think they just found us!" I say.

"The Atraxi are limited. While I'm in this form, they'll still be unable to detect me. They've tracked a phone, not me."

"Yeah, but this is the good bit. I mean, this is my favorite bit. Do you know what this phone is full of? Pictures of you. Every form you've learned to take, right here. Ooo, and being uploaded about now. And the final score is, no TARDIS, no screwdriver, two minutes to spare. Who da man?" I look at the Doctor "oh, I'm never saying that again. Fine."

"Then I shall take a new form."

"Oh, stop it. You know you can't. It takes months to form that kind of psychic link" the Doctor says.

"And I've had years" Amy collapses.

"No! Amy? You've got to hold on. Amy? Don't sleep! You've got to stay awake, please" the Doctor says.

"Doctor" Rory says, the Doctor and I look over to see that Prisoner Zero has transformed into a gangly man with a ripped shirt and floppy hair, I go wide-eyed while the Doctor looks on confused.

"Well, that's rubbish. Who's that supposed to be?" he asks looking at me.

"It's you" I reply.

"Me? Is that what I look like?"

"You don't know?" Rory asks.

"Busy day. Why me, though? You're linked to her. Why are you copying me?" the Doctor asks, a little girl comes from around a curtain along another duplicate which looks like me holding both duplicate's hands.

"Oh" I say, completely lost for words.

"I'm not. Poor Amy Pond. Still such a child inside. Dreaming of the magic Doctor and Seer she knows will return to save her. What a disappointment you've both been" the little girl says.

"No, she's dreaming about us because she can hear us. Amy, don't just hear us, listen. Remember the room, the room in your house you couldn't see. Remember you went inside. We tried to stop you. But you went in the room. You went inside. Amy, dream about what you saw" I say.

"No. No. No!" the little girl, as well as the two duplicates, transform.

"Well done, Prisoner Zero. A perfect impersonation of yourself" the Doctor says.

"Prisoner Zero is located. Prisoner Zero is restrained."

"Silence, Doctor and Seer. Silence will fall" Prisoner Zero disappears in a rush of wind.

"The sun. It's back to normal, right? That's, that's good, yeah? That means it's over" Rory says, Amy wakes up

"Amy. Are you okay? Are you with us?"

"What happened?"

"They did it. The Doctor and Alex did it" Rory says.

"No, we didn't" I say.

"What are you two doing?"

"Tracking the signal back. Sorry in advance" the Doctor says.

"About what?" Rory asks.

"The bill" the Doctor phones the Atraxi.

"Oi, I didn't say you could go! Article fifty-seven of the Shadow Proclamation. This is a fully established level five planet, and you were going to burn it? What? Did you think no-one was watching? You lot, back here, now. Ok, now I've done it" the Doctor says, I sigh.

"Did he just bring them back? Did he just save the world from aliens and then bring all the aliens back again?" Rory asks, I nod.

"Where are you going?" Amy asks at the two of us walk off.

"The roof. No, hang on" the Doctor says as we all walk into a doctor's locker room.

"What's in here?" Amy asks.

"I'm saving the world - I need a decent shirt. To hell with the raggedy. Time to put on a show" the Doctor says chucking various clothing items around the place.

"You just summoned aliens back to Earth. Actual aliens, deadly aliens, aliens of death, and now you're taking your clothes off. Amy, he's taking his clothes off" Rory says, I giggle while Amy stares.

"Turn your back if it embarrasses you," the Doctor says, continuing to undress.

"Are you stealing clothes now? Those clothes belong to people, you know" Rory turns and he looks to Amy "are you not going to turn your back?"

"Nope" I also continue to watch a small blush covering my cheeks.

*Time skip*

The Doctor walks out in a new shirt, several ties draped around his neck and a pair of suspenders which weren't on but hanging down, Rory, Amy and I follow him out. The Atraxi is hovering overhead.

"So this was a good idea, was it? They were leaving" Amy says.

"Leaving is good. Never coming back is better" I say.

"Come on, then! The Doctor and Seer will see you now" the Doctor shouts, the eyeball drops onto the roof and scans the Doctor and me, Rory points to the giant eyeball but says nothing.

"You two are not of this world."

"No, but we've put a lot of work into it" I say, as the Doctor puts his suspenders on properly he then looks at his selection of ties.

"Oh, hmm, I don't know. What do you think?" he looks to me.

"Is this world important?"

"Important? What's that mean, important? Six billion people live here. Is that important? Here's a better question. Is this world a threat to the Atraxi? Well, come on. You're monitoring the whole planet. Is this world a threat?" the Doctor asks, the Atraxi projects the world between them.

"No."

"Are the peoples of this world guilty of any crime by the laws of the Atraxi?" I ask.

"No."

"Ok. One more. Just one. Is this world protected? Because you're not the first lot to come here. Oh, there have been so many" I say, doing up the Doctor's tie into something special, the projection shows the Daleks and all the other enemies that have tried to take Earth "and what you've got to ask is, what happened to them?" the projection runs through of all the previous Doctors and Seer's, then both the Doctor and I step through the projection the Doctor with a jacket and bow tie, and me in completely new clothes.

"Hello. I'm the Doctor"

"And I'm the Seer.

"Basically, run," we both say smiling, the eyeball zooms back to its ship and leaves, very fast. There is a brief materialisation sound, then the Doctor and I gasp slightly and we both take a glowing TARDIS key out of our new jacket pockets.

"Is that it? Is that them gone for good? Who were they? And Alex how'd you change so fast?" I giggle.

"Call it magic" I say winking, the Doctor grabs my hand and drags me down the stairs and we both run out of the hospital.

*Time skip*

Running back into Amy's garden, the TARDIS is waiting for them.

"Ok, what have you got for us this time?" the Doctor asks, quickly opening the door with his key, we both walk in and laugh in awe "look at you. Oh, you sexy thing! Look at you!" Amy and Rory run up just at the TARDIS dematerialises."

*Time skip*

The sound of the Tardis wakes Amy up. She runs outside, to see the Doctor and I standing in front of the TARDIS.

"Sorry about running off earlier. Brand new TARDIS. Bit exciting. Just had a quick hop to the moon and back to run her in. She's ready for the big stuff now" I say placing my hand on the side of the darker blue looking TARDIS.

"It's you two. You came back" Amy says.

"Course we came back. We always come back. Something wrong with that?" the Doctor asks.

"And you kept the clothes."

"Well, we just saved the world. The whole planet, for about the millionth time, no charge. Yeah, shoot us. We kept the clothes" I say smoothing out my new clothes.

"Including the bow ties" Amy smiles.

"Yeah, it's cool. Bow ties are cool" the Doctor says playing with his bow tie.

"Are you two from another planet?"

"Yeah."

"Ok."

"So, what do you think?" I ask.

"Of what?"

"Other Planets. Want to check some out?" I ask.

"What does that mean?"

"It means. Well, it means come with us" I say.

"Where?"

"Wherever you like," the Doctor says.

"All that stuff that happened. The hospital, the spaceships, Prisoner Zero."

"Oh, don't worry, that's just the beginning. There are loads more" I  say jumping up and down a little bit.

"Yeah, but those things, those amazing things, all that stuff. That was two years ago."

"Oh! Oops" the Doctor mutters.

"Yeah."

"So that's..."

"Fourteen years!"

"Fourteen years since fish custard. Amy Pond, the girl who waited, you've waited long enough" I grin sticking out my hand.

"When I was a kid, you two said there was a swimming pool and a library, and the swimming pool was in the library."

"Yeah. Not sure where it's got to now. It'll turn up. So, coming?"

"No."

"You wanted to come fourteen years ago," the Doctor says.

"I grew up."

"Don't worry. We'll soon fix that" I snap my fingers making the TARDIS door open, Amy looks at us and laughs, The doctor and I follow Amy inside.

"Well? Anything you want to say? Any passing remarks? We've heard them all" the Doctor says as him and I walk to the new console.

"I'm in my nightie."

"Oh, don't worry. Plenty of clothes in the wardrobe" I say gesturing to a hallway.

"And possibly a swimming pool" the Doctor adds.

"So, all of time and space, everything that ever happened or ever will Where do you want to start?" I ask leaning on the console my jacket no longer on, Amy walks up to us hitting a few buttons and whatnot.

"You are both so sure that I'm coming."

"Yeah, we are," the Doctor says.

"Why?" I stand up straight and walk around the console, along with the Doctor and Amy.

"Cause you're the Scottish girl in the English village, and we know how that feels" the Doctor presses a bell.

"Oh, do you?"

"All these years living here, most of your life, and you've still got that accent. Yeah, you're coming" the Doctor says.

"Can you get me back for tomorrow morning?"

"It's a time machine. We can get you back five minutes ago. Why, what's tomorrow?"

"Nothing. Nothing. Just you know, stuff."

"All right, then. Back in time for stuff" a ding sounds and two identical sonic screwdrivers rise from a slot in the console.

"Oh! New ones! Lovely. Thanks, dear" I say patting the console, the TARDIS hums in response, the Doctor uses an old typewriter wired into the console.

"Why me?"

"Why not?"

"No, seriously. You are both asking me to run away with you in the middle of the night. It's a fair question. Why me?"

"We don't know. Fun. Do we have to have a reason?"

"People always have a reason."

"Do we look like people?"

"Yes."

"Been knocking around on our own for a while. Our choice, but I've started talking to myself all the time. It's giving me an earache" the Doctor says looking at me.

"You ramble," I says.

"You're both lonely. That's it? Just that?"

"Just that. Promise" I say nodding.

"Ok."

"So, are you okay, then? Because this place, sometimes it can make people feel a bit, you know" the Doctor says.

"I'm fine. It's just, there's a whole world in here, just like you two said. It's all true. I thought. Well, I started to think that maybe you both were just like a madman and women with a box."

"Amy Pond, there's something you'd better understand about us, because it's important, and one day your life may depend on it. We are definitely a madman and women with a box" I say.

"Ha ha! Yeah. Goodbye Leadworth, hello everything" the Doctor shouts as he sets the TARDIS in flight, the three of us laugh.

--

My character will be referred as Alex or Seer.

She will be called Alex by Amy and Rory and Seer by everyone else. I just thought of it because the Doctor was very high off of the regeneration energy, Alex popped into his head and he just said it.

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