I'm posting this again because some people still can't read it...
Tris' POV
I follow Tobias to wherever he is taking me and whoever he's taking me to meet. All around me are abandoned warehouses, so it's really hard to believe anyone else is around.
While I'm walking, I glance at Tobias. He's so sure footed, dodging every crack and steeping over all the fallen street lights.
At then there's me, tripping over almost every obstacle.
Tobias must have been here before. I had my suspicions,, but now they are confirmed. No one who came here for the first time could walk so sure footed as him, no matter how good the directions were.
My mind wonders who he is taking me to meet. He's been around me so much lately, I wonder when he's had the time to meet them.
Just when my mind is running wild with questions we stop. In front of me is a very old abandoned warehouse, made of corrugated iron and just like all the other buildings around me, has began to rust away, so much so, I'm afraid it will fall down, right on top of us.
There's an old sign on the iron. I can only make out the word 'STORAGE' .
Tobias knocks on the door. Not once, but three times.
We wait a while, until a boy, who looks about my age comes to the door.
He's quite good looking, short brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. He wears a black, dauntless sweater, blue, erudite trousers and sensible, grey, abnegation shoes. A factionless boy.
The look doesn't quite go.
"Hello?" he says.
"I'm here to see Evelyn," says Tobias.
I only know one Evelyn, correction, I only USED to know one Evelyn. I attended her funeral, almost 9 years ago.
The boy seems almost as uncomfortable as me, like he wish he was anywhere else but standing there.
"Umm, I'll have to check," says the boy, "What's your name?"
"Tobias. Tobias Eaton," says Tobias.
The boy is suddenly very apprehensive and looks even more uncomfortable than he did before.
However, he opens the door, but only enough to let us both barely fit through.
"Follow me," he says.
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A/N
I wrote this all out and then Wattpad deleted it so I had to write it twice :s
Please go & read my other fanfic 'We Will Be Selfless. We Will Be Abnegation.' (It's about if Tris & Tobias both choose Abnegation instead :) )
I have part of my REAL English exam next week and I'm really scared because I can't write x_x
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