Hans ke, kyu tor diye waade

By craziest24

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Ishq ke bandhan ka hoga aghaz Ishq se naate jod lene ke baad... Kya kabhi samjh payega Neil apni Avni ka haal... More

Characters
Part 01
Part 02
Part 03
Part 04
Part 05
Part 06
Part 07
PROMO
Part 08 (SPECIAL)
Part 09
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
PROMO
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 34 (The Confession)
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37 (The New AvNeil)
Part 38
Part 39
Last Chapter

Part 33

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By craziest24

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There was a complete different glow on vidyut's face. He moved forward and pulled Neil into a tight hug.

V : Aaj Mai bohot khush hn Neil ! Aaj maine kitni zindagiyon ko tabah hone se rok liya hai.. mjhe maaf krdo ! Mai jaanta hn ki mere tareeke thode se zyada tedhe the magar mere iraade bilkul bhi galat nhi the... Tum samajh sakte ho Nwil iss baat ko achi tarah se , Main shadi shuda hn meri beewi bache hai aur mai apne parivar se bohot pyar krta hn lekin meri maa zabardasti inn sab ke bawajood meri shaadi Avni se krwana chahti thi... Maine uss din isse bataya bhi tha par pta nhn kyun ise koi farq hi nhn pada aur Avni iss rishtey ko todne ke liye raazi nhn hui !
(today I am very happy Neil! Today I saved so many lives from getting destroyed but plz forgive me! I know that my ways were absolutely wrong but not my intentions! I hope you'll understand me, I am married I have my family and I love them unconditionally! I told Avni about it but it didn't matter to her and she wasn't ready to decline the relationship)

Neil aur Avni tum dono ki aankhon main ek dusre ke liye bahut pyaar dekha hai maine ... Aur kabse tum dono ki dosti ke baare main bhi jaanta hn main .. Isiliye iss shaadi ko rokne ke liye mujhe ye galat kadam uthaana pada !
(I have seen so much love in both of your eyes and then I have heard tales of your beautiful friendship! And thus to stop that marriage I had to take up this wrong action)

( Looking at Avni ) Main jaanta hn Avni maine tumhe bhi bahut hurt kiya hai ! Lekin agar aaj ye shaadi nhn hoti to yahan kitni zindagiyaan barbaad ho jaati ! Mujhe maaf krdo Avni mera aisa iraada nhn tha lekin sab theek krne ke liye aaj ye kadam uthaana bahut zaruri tha ! Aap dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho aur meri Bhagwaan ji se yahi duaa hai ki tum dono aur mayan ko humesha khush rakhe !
(( Looking at Avni ) I know Avni that I have hurted you too much! But If today this marriage didn't happen it would have led to destruction! Please forgive me I just wanted to set things to normal... You both are made for each other and wish that God keeps you two and Mayan happy forever)

A (angrily) : Aur aapse kisne kaha ki hum sab ke baare main itna sochein aap ! Aapko rishtey mazaak lagte hai kya Vidyut ! Rishton ki ehmiyaat ko samjhna aapne zaruri nhn samjha ! Agar aap iss shaadi se khush nhn , agar aapko iss shaadi se taqleef hai to aap humari shaadi kisi se bhi krwa denge !
(and who had told you to think so much about us all? Do you think that relationships are a joke? Didn't you consider it necessary to understand the importance of relationships! You didn't want to marry me so you got me married to anyone)

V - Wo koi aur nhn tumhara best friend jise tum iss duniya main sabse apna maanti ho wo Neil hai ! Main maanta hn ki maine jo kiya wo sarasar galat hai aur tumhe bahut dard bhi diya hai Avni ! Lekin ab main iska pachtawa bhi karunga aaj main tumse raakhi bandhwa kar ek naye rishtey ki shuruwaat karunga ! Humesha ek bade bhaai ki tarah tumhari hifazat karunga !
(he is none other that your best friend whom you are so close to.. He is Neol! I know I have done something I shouldn't have done also I'll regret for lifetime and today I want you to tie me a rakhi and make me your brother.. I want to start afresh! I'll protect you like a big brother)

N : Kya bola tumne Vidyut behen ??? Behen shabd ka matlab bhi jaante ho tum ? Behen ko yun iss kadar kidnap krke nhn laate hai ... ise hifazat krna nhn kehte hai ( Grabbing his collar ) Iss kadar uski shaadi kisi bewa insaan se krwa dene ko bhaai ka farz nibhaana nhn kehte hai , Iss tarah ka sulook krke tum use apna bhaai bolte ho !!
(what did you say sister? Do you even know the meaning of sister? Does one kidnap his sister? Is this the way you protect her( Grabbing his collar ) you got her married to a widower! This kind of behavior is not of a brother!)

V : Neil tum kyun nhn samjhte ho ki Tum Avni se mohabbat krte ho .. beinteha mohabbat ! Pyaar ka dusra naam hai dosti , aur bachpan se tum dono ka pyaar dosti ke roop main parwaan chadh raha hai ! Zindagi ne fer se tumhe ek mouka diya hai ... jahan tum fer se apni zindagi main pyaar ki barsaat laa sakte ho....fer se apni zindagi main naye rang bhar sakte ho ! Tumhe yahi lagta hai na ki Avni tum jaise widower ko deserve nhn karti...Sarasar jhoot hai ye ! Avni ko tumse acha humsafar mil hi nhn sakta hai ! Tum maano na yaa maano lekin sach yahi hai ki tum aur Avni dono ek dusre ka saath deserve krte ho ! AUR SACH YAHI HAI !
(Neil why don't you understand that you love avni... You love her unconditionally! The other name of love is friendship and both of your love has been living since childhood in the form of friendship! Life has given you a second chance neil you have to just allow it to drench you once again with love! To once again fill the canvas of your life with colours! What do you think Avni doesn't deserve a widower like you? But this is a complete lie! Avni cannot get a life partner better than you! You agree or not but no one but you to deserve each other the best! AND THIS IS THE TRUTH)

Neil without answering or telling him anything grabbed Avni's hand and pulling her ,they both went outside!

Putting her inside the car he drove the way to home while all throughout the journey she looked out of the window as if trying to hide those stubborn tears which were not ready to stop. Without any noise she continued crying.

N (without looking at her) : Avni bas karo ! Tum jaanti ho na bachpan se lekar aaj tak mujhe tumhare aansu kabhi bardasth nhn hote fer bhi kyun tum ro rhi ho ! Abhi meri saansein chal rhi hai ... Dhadkne bhi band nhn hui hai uss din ke liye apne aansoon ko bacha kar rakho jis din ye sab na ho... jis din mar jaun main ! Neil zindagi main kitne bhi dard , kitni bhi mushkilon ko dekh sakta hai lekin apni Avni ki aankhon main aansu nhn dekh sakta ! Do you get it !
(Avni stop it ! You know na I cannot bear tears in your eyes since childhood! Then why are you crying? I am still breathing, my heart is still beating! Save your tears for the when all of this day! The day I die! Neil can tolerate any pain in life but cannot tolerate tears in his Avnis eyes! Do you get it!)

A : Bas kijiye aap ! Marne ki baat ki bhi kaise aapne ! Ye koi khel nhn ki jab man ho tab aap kuch bhi bol denge ! Abhi abhi shaadi hui hai aur aap humein bewa bana denge ! Aur agar aapko mere aansoo bardasht nhn hai to kyun humse shaadi ki ... kyun apna wajood humse jod liya ... kyun humari zindagi hi badal di aapne ! Shaadi saat janmo ka pavitra bandhan hota hai koi khel nhn ! Samjhe aap !
(pls stop it! How did you even speak of dying? It ain't a joke that you'll say anything you want to! It's just a few moments ago that we get married and you talk of getting me widowed this soon! And if you couldn't tolerate my tears then why got married to me? Why did you get us Connected in this pure relationship of seven lives! This ain't a joke at all! )

N : Tumhe samajh nhn aati kya ek baat Avni ! Agar aaj main wo sab nhn krta to wo Vidyut tumhare saath pta nhn kya krta ! Tumhare liye...Tumhari jaan bachaane le liye maine wo sab kiya...Kya galat kiya ismein maine ?
(don't you understand or what I did everything to save you Damnit! If I wouldn't have taken this step then that Vidyut would have done God knows what with you! I did everything for you! To save you! What wrong was in it?)

Agar...agar tumhe kuch ho jaata na Avni to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhn kar paata ... Tumhe to khud ki koi fiqr nhn hai lekin tumhare hone ya na hone se yahan bahut logon ko farq padta hai isiliye maine ye kiya ! Bachpan se lekar aaj tak tumhari har choti baat .. har choti - badi zid ko maine pura kiya hai...chot tumhe agti aur dard mujhe hota ! To zara socho agar aaj tumhe kuch ho jaata toh main toh.....
(if anything would have happened to you today then I would have never forgiven myself! You don't care about yourself but their many to whom your presence matters! Since childhood I have bowed my head infront of each of your demand each of your wish.. It's you who gets hurt but my tears flow down my eyes! So just think if today possibly something would have happened to you what would I have done!)

Avni kept her finger on his lips and nodded in negative and then hugged him tight and let her tears roll down causing his shirt to get wet.

A : Shayaad aapne kuch galat nhn kiya....Shayaad haalat hi aise the....lekin ye sahi nhn hua...Bilkul theek nhn hua..main iss duniya main jeene layak bhi nhn ..
(I guess you weren't wrong and situations were so but today what happened wasnt good! I dont even deserve to live after what all happened!)

( Crying ) apni behen ka haq cheenna chaha maine...apni behen ki mout ki duaaien maangi maine ... aaj tak main khud ko maaf nhn kar paayi aur shaayad kabhi naa kar paaun ! ab kis haq se main aapse shaadi kar sakti hn....usn....usne..usne kaha tha ki aaj se mera dil aur dhadkan tumhara....use pta tha....main apni hi nazron main gir gayi hn...Main...main uski jagah lena chahti thi..apni behen ki jagah lena chahti thi aur...aur usne mout ko gale laga liya...jitni takaat aap sab ki duaaon main nhn thi usse jyada meri badduaaon main thi...cheen liya maine us..se aap sab se...Sab khatam ho gya...kuch nhn bacha !!!
(I have snatched evrythung from my sister I have eaten up her happiness by praying for her death to lord! And now how could I marry you?! She had told me during her last breath that her heart and uts beats belong to me! I have fallen down in my own eyes! How could I do it? How could i want to replace her? And now lays down hugging death.. The strength in my cursings were more than all of yours blessings! That is why she aint with us anymore! She in not there with you all becoz of me! Evrything has ended!)

Precap : Tum maano ya naa maano lekin aaj se ye shaadi mere liye meri zindagi hai...mera sab kuch hai...aaj se tum meri beewi ho..aur meri har cheez pr tumhara haq hai...meri aakhiri saans pr bhi sirf tumhara haq hai !
(You agree or not but since today thus marriage is my life! You are my wife! All that is mine belings to you ! And i'll live for you till my last breath!)

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