Hans ke, kyu tor diye waade

By craziest24

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Ishq ke bandhan ka hoga aghaz Ishq se naate jod lene ke baad... Kya kabhi samjh payega Neil apni Avni ka haal... More

Characters
Part 01
Part 02
Part 03
Part 04
Part 05
Part 06
Part 07
PROMO
Part 08 (SPECIAL)
Part 09
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
PROMO
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34 (The Confession)
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37 (The New AvNeil)
Part 38
Part 39
Last Chapter

Part 23

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By craziest24

Hola people! An update after one year😂😂😆... Chalo is khushi mae is chapter mae aapke ek liye surprise hai aur is hi khushi mae do vote and comment warna agli update agle saal😂😂😂
Dedicated to BaishaliNayak

Target: 80+ votes and 30 comments
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Avni- 2 saal hogye hai! Sach kehte gai log, waqt sab kuch badal deta hai... kis qadar 2 saal phle tak mai Neil se bawlon jaisa pyar krti thi... kis trh mjhme bachpana aur pagalpan bhara hua tha lekin ab bhi bhalle mera pyaar na badla ho lekin maine khud ko kaabu mae rkhna sikh lia hai! Uske bina jeena seekh lia, apne mae khush rhna seekh lia! Khud mae apni khushiyan dhundh li hai...
(Its been 2 years... its true that time changes everything... how mad was I about Neil... in his love... but now i have finally learnt to control my feelings and emotions... I have learned to be happy in myself...)

Beep beep! she heard sounds of a car horn and rushed downstairs smiling only to greet Neil & Juhi with little Mayan in their arms....

A- Mayan!! Mela baby aagya finally...
(Mayan! My baby has come finally... )

And Juhi handed mayan to Avni who happily took him in her arms and without even looking at Neil she rushed inside with Mayan.... While Neil smiled seeing her bond with his son....

N- dekh rhi ho tum is bawli ko! Mayan ko lekr bhaag gyi aur uska pglu jo itne saal baad aaya hai.. usse na hi bola na hello, mtlb kya zamana aagya hai!
(Are you seeing her... she ran away with Mayan... she is meeting her pglu after long.... and no hi no hello...)

They too went inside.... only to find Avni already playing with Mayan...

N(dramatically)- Dekh rhi ho Juhi! Dost dost na rha!!.
(Are u seeing Juhi... Friend aint a frnd anymore...)

J(dramatically)- na dost dost rha na.. behen behen! Koi toh sirf ek rishta nibhane mae busy hai! Wo bhi sirf Mausi ka! Humein lene bhi nhi aaya koi airport par sbke saath!
(Frnd aint a frnd anymore.. sister is also not a sister anymore.... someone is busy in fulfilling just one realtionship properly of being a mausi (aunt).. she didnt even come to recieve us at the airport..)

A(getting up)- ohho Mayan dekh rhe ho tum! Kch logon ko tmse jealousy bhi hone lg gyi hai! Keh do inse ki mai aise logon ko recieve krne nhi jaati jo mjhe hurt krte hai!.
(Ohhoo Mayan are you seeing! Some people are getting jealous of you... tell them that i dont wish to speak to those people who hurt me!)

N(concerned)- hurt?! Maine tjhe kbhi hurt kia kya ?! Galti se hua hoga?! Bata tuh....
(Hurt? Did I hurt u some how? It might have happened unintentionally... tell me!)

Avni looked deep in his eyes...

A- relax woh toh maine bas kehne ke liye keh dia tha!
(Relax! I told it just like that!

N- kehne ke liye kch bhi bolegi! Pagal!
(You'll say anything just for the sake of saying! Crazy!!)

And he pulled her in for a bone crashing hug... and both of them became emotional! Juhu joined the duo in their hug...

J- mtlb bawli aur pagal milaap mae toh Juhi ko bhul hi jaaya jaata hai! Koi mtlb hua bhalla ?! Zabardasti ghusna prhta hai!
Avni apni behen ko galle nhi lagayegi kya?! Is paglu se hi chipki rahegi...
(Once both bawli and pagal meet they forget this Juhi! I need to forcefully get amidst you both... Avni wont u hug ur sister? Will u just stay stuck to your pglu?)

Now both sisters hugged each other!

A- bohot acha kia ki tum log yhn aagye! Maa baba mai dadi Sanvi hum sab bht khush hai! Apne busy schedule se aap logon ne humare lie time nikala pure do saal baad.. hum toh saatve aasman par pohoch gye hai!
(You ppl did really great by coming here... Mom dad dadi sanvi and I are really happy taht you two busy ppl took out some quality tine for us too from your busy schedule... i am literally in the skies right now)

J- chal chal nautanki kahin ki!

This way Juhi & Neil were living in India, Avni and Mayan became so attached to each other that they didnt use to leave each other alone.... While the rest use to adore their bond!

One day...

Avni- Mayan woh dekho bahar baarish ho rhi hai! Aao chalte hai hm bahar!..
(Mayan see.. its raing outside... come lets go out...)

And both of them went outside! She closed her eyes to feel the moment, and this was when she felt two hands on her eyes!

A(slowly)-Neil!

N- this is cheating yaar! Tune mjhe kaise phchana!
(this is cheating yaar! How did u recognise me?)

A- lakhon logon mae bhi phchan lu mai apne paglu ko aur aapke aas paas aate hi mai aapko mehsoos kr leti hn! Aap kya jaane!
(Ill recognize you in even a crowd of hundreds.... as soom as you some near me... I can sense you...)

N- par aisa Q? Itna important hn mai tere liye?
(But Y? Am I that imp to you?!)

A- jawab jaante ho lekin phr bhi har baar puchna zaroori hai na...
(Uk the answer but still u have to ask me each time)

N- tmhare muhn se sunna zyada acha lgti hai bawli! Tmhare alfaz tmhare muhn se nikalte hue hi bhaate hai....
(I like to listen from ur mouth itself... your words suit only you the best..)

And all of them started dancing in the rain... with Mayan jumping on the puddles... Juhi who saw all this from upstairs had a smile on her face, but soon it changed from smile to a frown...

Juhi closed her eyes and
"meri zindagi ke faisle krne ka haq aapko kisne dia hai?! Kya lagte hai aap humare? Humare baba hai aap? Humare bhai hai aap? Best friend!! Best friend ki had ko aapne cross kar dia hai.. yh haq aapko nhi hai ki aap mere liye larka dhunde aur mjhe bataye ki mai kisse shaadi karru aur kisse nhi..."
(Who are you to decide all this And take my life decisions? ... i havent given you ths right... who are you my dad? My brother? Bestfriend.... you are my best friend... but you have crossed the limits of that relationship.... You cannot decide who I will marry and who not...)

" haan ho gyi hn mai pagal... dimag kharab ho chuka hai mera... mjhme toh koi smjh hi nhi hai.. (sarcastically)kisse shaadi kru kisse nhi aur kisse kaunse haq du aur nhi"
(Yes I have become mad... I have lost it completely... I have no sense in me... (sarcastically) I cannot even think or decide who to marry nad who not...)

"mjhe yahan par kabhi aana hi nhi chahiye tha... andaza tha mujhe ki aisa hi kuch hoga...."
(I should have never come here... i knew that something of this sort will happen...)

"Tum mujhe bewakoof nhi bana sakti ho... Jiji hun tumhari,meri bht yaad aayi na? Tum isliey kal pheron ke waqt bhi chali gyi thein. Avni maine tumse kaha tha na k tmhari jiji humesha tmhare saath rahen gi... Zra halat dekh apni, Ro ro kr ankhein sooj gyi hen..Yeh kya haal banaya hua hai.."
(You cannot fool me I am you elder sister! Now tell me you were crying remembering me na? You were not there during the pheras too! This is the reason right... Avni I told you na that ill remain with you forever.... just look at yourself... what have you done to yourself crying! )

Tears rolled down her eyes and she felt immense pain...

J(to herself)- Iska matlb ki bawli bhi aaj tak pyar karti aayi hai apne pagalu se?! Kahan ki brhi behen hn mai?! Apni behen ka dil, uska dard, uski takleefein mjhe nazar hi nhi aayi! Apni khushiyon mae itne masroof hogyi ki kab meri behen tanhai aur dard mae kho gyi mjhe maloom hi nhi chala!
Bhagwan ji yh kya kr dia aapne? Dono behenon ko ek hi insaan se prem krwa dia? Kis qadr jiyegi woh....woh ... mjhse nafrat toh nhi krne lgi hai?... nhi.. nhi.. aisa nhi hai woh mjhse har pal bht ache se baat krti hai! 5 saal se woh tadapti rhi lekin mjh tak uski awaz pohochi hi nhi! Mai bhalla hi usse Neil na de paati mgr uski takleef kam krne mae nadat toh kr skti thi, uske saamne Neil se ishq ki baatein wgerah krke uske dard ko toh na barhati!
Kya kya nhi dekha hai usne bhi zindagi mae... apne pyar ke chin jaane ki taklif se toh usse chod dete aap bhagwan jii!!

(This means that bawli has loved her pagalu till today?! What an elder sister am I... I couldnt even understand her pain her problems... I got so busy in my happiness that I forgot completely about her...
Oh lord! What diid you do? You made both sisters fall in love for the same person! How will she live? Does she hate me?!.. no... noo... her behaviour is normal with me! She had suffering since the past 5 yrs ajd I didnt even hav ethe slightest idea!.... what pain has she possibly not seen in life? Atleast you could have left her free from this pain god)

And she broke down sitting in the balcony itself.... she spent the entire afternoon there...  By evening Neil also reached there searching for her! And was shocked seeing her sit alone....

N- Juhi! Sab tkh hai na?! Koi baat hogyi hai kya?
(Juhi! Everythings alright?)

J- haan sab tkh hai!
(Yes everything is fine..)

N- tm udaas lag rhi ho?
(You r looking upset.)

J- humein aapse kch puchna hai!
(I wanted to ask u something!)

N- pucho na! Tmhe kch pchne se phle bhi ab mjhse pchna prhega?
(Yes ask! Now will you hav eto ask me before you wish to speak to me..)

J- ji woh! Aap itne good looking, handsome aur dashing hai!
(Yes actually you are so good looking, handsome aur dashing)

N- kya baat hai.. aaj brhi tareef ho rhi hai meri...
(Wow! Today u r praising me so much!)
(Flicking his hairs)
But realising the seriousness of the moment!
Haan tm kch keh rhi thi...
(You were saying something! Go ahead)

J- ji toh aapse toh kahin ladkiyan muhabbat krti hongi?! Bht saari ladkiyon aap chahiye hote honge!
(Yes so many girls would have loved you?!)

N- Haa toh?! Woh mjhse muhabbat krti hai lekin mai nhi na?! Maine apni zindagi mae sirf ek baar muhabbat ki woh bhi srf Juhi Neil Khanna se... baaki log chahe krte rhe mjse muhabbat lkin mera yh dil yoh kisi ki amanat already hai na... tmhe is baat ki fikar krne ki zaroorat nhi hai ki mai aage jakr kisi aur se ishq kr baithunga... humara ek beta.. itna achi zindagi hai! Bhalla koi reason hai kisi aur se ishq krne ka....
(Yes so? Thay love me but i dont! I have loved only one person all my life and that is Juhi Neil Khanna... let the others keep loving me but my heart is just yours... and you do not worry about me falling for some one else! Why will i possibly love anyone else... when i have such a happy life with you.. a son...)

And he pulled her nose...

Ab yh sab sochna band kro! Phli aurat dekhi hai apni sautanon ki fikr mae apna haal kharab kr rhi hai! Kya maza aata hai tmhe fazool ki soch apne dimag mar bharhkr...
(Now stop thinking all this nonsense stuff... the first woman i have seen thinking about her sautans.... what fun do you get by thinking about nonsense things?)

And Juhi smiled....

And both of them went downstairs.....

Juhi- Avni! Avni! Hum bahar mall ja rhe hai! Tuh bhi chal na humare saath...
(Avni! Avni! We are going to the mall! You also come along na!)

A- ji jiji! Mai abhi aayi ready hokr..
(Yss jiji... i'll just get ready and come..)

And soon they reached the mall! Both the sisters became mad while shopping... while Neil clumsily followed them... with many shoppong bags in his hands...

N- shukr hai jo hum Mayan ko Maa baba aur dadi ke paas chodkr aaye hai.. wrna tm dono behenon ke jo lakshan hai.. shayd bechare Mayan ko bhi shopping bags uthane prh jaate! Harkaton mae zameen aasman ka fark hoga lekin shopping ke maamle mae puri ki puri behene ho tm dono...
(Thank god that we left Mayan at home.. otherwise you both would have handed him also shopping bags... you both are very different otherwise but when ut comes to shopping... you both are like and really sisters...)

A- thank u thank u.. itna tareef ke liye😆😆...
(thank u thank u.. for the compliment😆😆)

After they were done they sat in the car!

Juhi- Neil ek shopping bag missing hai! Shyd hum usse wahi shop par bhool aaye hai.. aap pls usse le aayenge... usme Mayan ke kch kapre hai...
(Neil one shopping bag is missing! I guess we forgot it in the car itself... will u pls get it.. it had mayans clothes in them..)

N- haan mai abhi jaata hn.. tm dono jab tak wk dusre ko pakao...
(Yes ill get it.. in the mean while u two bore each other...)

J- excuse me! Hum nhi pakate ek dusre ko! Aap hai pakau!
(Exuse me! We dont bore each other infact its u who bores us!)

N(giggling)- acha baba... mai bag lekr aata hn...
(Okay na! Ill get the bag now)

And he went away.... while both Juhnj began chatting as Neil had already said😋😋... While chatting Juhi's gaze fell on a flower shop across the street...

J- Avni! Woh dekh kitne khubsurat phool hai na wahan! Mai jakr le aati hn haan! Neil ko dungi... (she said blushing)
(Avni see those flowers r so beautiful na! Ill get them! Ill gift them to Neil(she said blushing))

A- par jiji kya zaroorat hai.. Neil aayenge tab unko bol denge na laane ke liye....
(But jiji whats the need! When Neil will come we will ask hin to get it na!)

J- arrey baba! Road cross krke hi toh jaana hai... knsa london mae jaana hai... mai lekr aati hn na chutki.. tuh baith aaram se...
(arrey baba! I have to just cross the road and get it and not go to london... ill vet it you sit nicely...)

While Avni just smiled at her jijis antiques who was the mother of a son but still a kid heart... sitting in the car she kept seeing her jiji... who was returning with a bouquet of flowers in her hands... it was just when within a second she saw  a car pass by in full speed hit her hard.... throwing her away... and their she lied on the ground in a pool of blood flowing from all parts of her body... and the bouqet fell on her... as if it they were showering from heavens... Crowds of people gathered by around her... while Avni who had been shook deeply....

G(yelling)- jijiiiiiiii!!!

Precap: Aaj se meri dil aur meri dhadkan tmhari hai....
(From today my heart and its beats beling to you...)

All of you were eagerly waiting for this moment🙌🙌🙋... It has come! You all were getting irritated so I just pushed all the things that had to be written in 2-3 chps into 1... It might not be really good... And I am sholly for that as I was not getting any inspiration...😭😭... Also I had my exams yaar😫😫

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