Something which I had thought have already mentioned... but just realised it ain't so I had forgotten😅😅😅
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. So people this story is based on the Urdu Novel Bin Roye Aansu by Farhat Ishtiaq...
. I have added this now to the desription as well..
. Anyone has read it?!
. Also the sole reason for telling you people about it is that I trust you all that you will do come back to know how I shape the story my way....
. Also I am giving this update a lot before the target completes... So pls do vote and comment... 🤗🤗
Avnis house...
(Note- they are living in avni's house only cauz soon they will shift so they wish to spend as much time with avni)
Neil- kahan hai meri bawli Juhi?
A(smiling)- yeh rahi...
Appearing suddenly at the door...
N- kahan thi tum haan? Tumhe koi idea bhi nhi kitnaa yaad kr rha tha tumhe mai...
A- idea humein hota bhi kaise... hum jiji thodi hai.. aapse pyaar thodi krte hai.. jo aapki man ki baatein parh le...
N- kyu? Ek dost apne dost ka haal-e-dil nhi jaan skta? Aur phir hum toh best friends hai...
A- dekhe aap humein seedhe se yeh bataye ki aapko humse kaam kya tha?
Neil shocked with her behaviour
N- wo keh raha tha mai ki tum mai aur Juhi saath mae kahin bahar ghumne chalte hai... waise bhi abhi kuch dinon mae hum shift ho jayenge aur isliey mai tmhare saath bitaye hue lamhe apne saath meethi yaadon ki tarah le jaana chahta hn.. wo yaadein jo mere sapnon mae bhi ek muskurahat le aaye, chehre par...
A- kaafi ache plans hai aapke lekin agar hum bole ki hum nhi aaskte toh?
N- toh mai tumhe zor zabardasti uthakar lekar jaunga...
A- dekhe Neil humare tests aarhe h hum aapke saath nhi aaskte hai... aap aur Juhi chale jaiye....
N- lekin bawli tumhe hua kya hai?
J- please avni chalo na.. apni barhi jiji ki baat nhi manogi? Itne pyar se bol rhi hn na... waise bhi ab hum chale jayenge.. tmhari itni yaad ayegi... aur jahan tak tests ki baat hai.. meri avni hai hi itni hoshiyar ki saare tests aasani se pass kr legi...
A- teekhe lekin sirf aapke liye jiji...
Smiling she went away to get ready....
And then they go to some beach side... a place where cool breeze was blowing... birds chirping... a perfect place where one can find solace.... a place where a mind going through turmoil can find peace....
Avni sat down on the rock... and got lost in the nature around... and her own thoughts while Neil and Juhi enjoyed themselves near the water....
N(shouted)- Avni!! Avni!! Bawli! Sun na...
But Avni was so lost that she didnt realise Neil was calling her...
He went near her....
N(shaking her,)- ho kya gya h tumhe bawli? Phle toh is qadar behave nhi krti thi? Koi takleef, koi pareshani hai kya? Apne paglu ko batao.... mai har baar ki tarah is baar bhi koi solution nikaal dunga....
A- baat sirf itni hai ki...
N(not letting her complete)- ki ab tum barhi ho chuki ho.... mai maanta hun bawli tum barhi ho chuki ho... lekin barhe hone ka matlb yeh nhi ki tum kho jaogi... meri shararat krne waali bawli kho jayegi.... Avni tum sirf shararte krte hue aur apni zidde manati hui achi lgti hn.... yh chup chaap waali Avni mujhe nhi psnd....
Aao mera haath thamon....
And he put his hand in front of her.... slowly she put hers on his... and he grabbed it tight...
A(to herself)- wo zidd aur shararte krne waali Avni jo aapse muhabbat krti thi wo toh kahin chooth chuki hai... ab jo bachi hai wo sirf aur sirf aapki dost hai.... kaash aapne apne haath ko humein zindagi bhar thaamne ko kahan hota kaash ki aapne Juhi ki jagah humein chunna hota.... humse muhabbat ki hoti.... humein apna humsafar banaya hota... kyu ab bin roye bhi mere dil par aansu ki bunden jhalakti hai... aur rokar bhi mere dil ko sukoon nhi milta.... shayad yahi tha mere taqdeer mae adhoora hokar jeena.... tukro mae jeena...
Aaj se mai Avni Mehta apni is zindagi ko ab waqt aur kismat ke hawale krti hn.... kyuki ab mai khawaishe rakhkr unke tootne ka dard bardasht nhi kar paungi... Mai waada krti hn khudse ki mai kabhi bhi Juhi aur Neil ki khushiyon ke beech nhi aaungi....
After enjoying some time in the beach and having fun moments they came back home....
Neil sat alone with dadi...
N(worried)- pata nhi dadi... kya hogya hai usse? Bohot fikar lagi rehti hai uski....
D- fikar? Kis baat ki?
N- wo dadi bawli ki... najane usse kya hogya hai... bohot takleef hoti hai dadi usse yuhn dekhkr... mai bayan nhi krta lekin mai dekh rha hn kuch dinon se bohot badli hui hai... aakhir ho kya gya hai usse? Mujhse naraz hai kya kyuki humne yahan se jaane ka plan kia hai?
D- nhi beta.... avni bohot khush hai tum dono ke liye.... yeh sab ulool julool baatein apne dimag mae mat lao... wo thoda sa pareshan hai abhi bas... uske tests aarhe hai na.... tum fikar mat karo bache sab teekh hai.... abhi kuch dinon mae wo waapas pehle jaisi ho jayegi....
N- pata nhi dadi... kaash aisa hi ho... uske chehre par udaasi mujhse bardasht nhi hoti.... bachpan se hi... aap toh jaanti hi hai na?
D- haan mere bache....
And Neil hugged dadi....
N(to himself)- bhagwan kare ki aap jaisa keh rhi hai... waisa hi ho.. meri bawli teekh ho... usse kisi tarah ke bhi dard mae dekhna mere bas ki baat nhi... aur phir ab toh usse waapas dur jaana hai...
On the other side....
Ting Tong....
Pinky's Son opened the door...
Son- Tum?
Person- haan mai? Kyu expect nhi kia tha na? Aaj ghar ke andar bhi aane doge ya phir ghar se bhi nikal doge.... itne dinon se contact krne ki koshish kr rhi hn... lekin tumhe toh jaise...
Son- aao na Alia andar aao... hum andar baith kar baat krte hai...
Alia- teekhe... chalo...
Sholly for not showing the precap here... but the chapter was becoming too long.... next part mae pakka😅😅😁... also there will be avneil conversation....
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English summary...
The chapter starts with neil asking Juhi about Avni's whereabouts this is when suddenly she appears at the door... Neil asks her to get ready as they are going out.... She denies at first but on Juhi's insitence gets ready and only because of her....
They go to some beach side... a place where cool breeze was blowing... birds chirping... a perfect place where one can find solace.... a place where a mind going through turmoil can find peace....
Avni sat down on the rock... and got lost in the nature around... and her own thoughts while Neil and Juhi enjoyed themselves near the water....
Neil goes towards Avni and asks her the reason behind her being lost all the time.... he asks her to not change and forever remain the same Avni who was very misheivous.... Avni gives him the reason that she has grown up but Neil tells her that for him she has to always remain the same.... he gives his hand to Avni... asks her to get up... grabbing his hand she got up..
And thinks to herself... that the Avni who used to love him immensely and be naughty is now lost and the one that remains is just his friend.... only friend....she feels bad about how instead of her her paglu chose Juhi as his life partner.... his better half... she also promises herself to never ever come in between them or their relationship..
After enjoying some time in the beach and having fun moments they came back home....
Neil sat alone with dadi... and told her about his concern regarding avni.... and how now he has begun to feel that his Avni, bawli is angry on him... dadi tries to expain him that she aint angry instead she is worried because of her upcoming tests and that he should stop fretting so much about her.... He should think instead of his life and future with Juhi....
On the other side....
The bell rings... Pinky's son opens the door.... and finds a girl standing outside... he gets shocked to see her... the girl accuses him of not picking his calls.... later with their conversation she is revealed to be Alia....
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