One Hundred Fantasy Clichés T...

By Timegear33

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From the same writer that pointed out some of the worst tropes in popular culture in A Hundred Clichés That N... More

Fantasy; The Flawed Yet Fun Genre In Fiction
#1: Being Human is a Bad Thing
#2: Zombies Completely Wipe Out Humanity
#3: A Princess Must Always Be The Damsel In Distress
#4: The Evil Wizard
#5: Vampires Going Out During The Day
#6: De-Wolfied Werewolves
#7: The Clueless Parents
#8: The Brave, Always Successful Knight
#9 The Evil Queen
#10: All The Characters Are Eye Candy (Hot)
#11: Mermaids Are Pure Creatures
#12: A Lack of Creature Diversity
#13: The Main Character Must Die
#14: Romance Everywhere
#15: The Brooder Always Dies
#16: Animals Are Reserved Only for Kid's Books
#17: The Wicked Witch
#18: Unoriginal Twins
#19: A Lack of Family Dynamics
#20: The Lonely Guardian
#21: Endless Ammo
#22: Immunity to the Virus
#23: Too Much Action
#24: Humor is a Bad Thing
#25: Never Do Fan Fiction
#26: Always Create a Prologue
#27: Give The Main Character a Love Interest
#28: Turn the Main Character Into a Villain
#29: Secondary Characters Are Not Important
#30: The Secret Sibling
#31: The Fake-Out Death
#32: The Over-Powered Character
#33: The Surprise Villain
#34: Tonal Shifting
#35: Milking Out the Story
#36: Killing Off a Character
#37: Too Much Information Too Fast
#38: The Power of Friendship
#39: Plot Formulas
#40: Copycat Work
#41: Depressing Endings
#42: The Last Man Standing
#43: The Bland Main Character
#44: Wizard Stories
#45: Fast Weaponery Mastery
#46: Children are Annoying Secondary Characters
#47: A Small Cast
#48: The Hero is Always in the Right
#49: Humanity are Monsters
#50: Your Idea Will Never Catch On
#51: Status Quo
#52: Edgy Characters
#53: The Heroic Sacrifice
#54: The Runaway Princess
#55: Mistranslated Words
#56: Forbidden Love
#57: The Creator's Pet
#58: The Chosen One
#59: The Ex Machina
#60: The Forced Apology
#61: Long As Heck Character Descriptions
#62: The Animal Sidekick
#63: The Always Pure Princess
#64: Time Travel
#65: Multiple Universes
#66: The Mutant Minority
#67: The Body Swap
#68: Shoving Morals Down the Audience's Throat
#69: The Emotionless Loner
#70: Innocent Fairies
#71: The Warriors Effect
#72: All Supernatural Creatures Are Immortal
#73: The Name of the Monster is Frankenstein
#74: The Typical Werewolf Pack
#75: Edgy Scarred Characters
#76: Mistaken Identity
#77: Plot Holes
#78: Violence is Necessary
#79: The Skyler Perspective
#80: The Gary Sue and Mary Sue
#81: Historial Inaccuracies
#82: Love Triangles
#83: The Genocide Route
#84: The Mindless Zombie
#85: Actions Do Not Have Consequences
#86: The Tragic Backstory
#87: Be Afraid of Risks
#88: The Betrayal
#89: The Villain is Entirely Wrong
#90: The Reformed Villain
#91: Blood is Everything
#92: Not Finishing What You Have Started
#94: Unbreakable Weapons
#95: The Villainous Protagionist
#96: The Hero Versus Villain Dynamic
#97: A Limited Target Audience
#98: Every Story Idea Has Been Done
#99: The Dark Half
#100: The Imagination Quota
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#93: The Goody Two-Shoes Character

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  Before you plunge into your fantasy epic, there are a few checkpoints you need pass in order to continue.  This relates to your main character, who will make or break the story.  First off, is your main character extremely nice to others, to the point of annoyance to the audience?  Do these characters never stop being nice even when insulted or seeing one of their friends going through a rough patch?  Also, is your character potentially the weakest party member in your story's group of explorers, both psychically and character- wise?  Finally, does this character have the cliché blond hair and blue eyes, which are usual signs of an unrealistically nice character?  If you answered yes to at least two of these questions, then congratulations, you have created a one note goody two-shoes character that nobody is going to relate to in any way.  Your potential fantasy epic is now dead!

  When it comes to these types of characters, nine times out of ten, they end up being the death of an otherwise solid storyline.  This type of character is one of the most overused out there and almost always results in the character ending up being flat.  By the character always being positive in any given situation, relatable aspects of the story are lost.  If your main character is always trying to save the bad guy even if their actions are completely unforgivable or try to be the peacekeeper in a situation that could easily be fixed on its own with time, the audience gets frustrated from the slew of predictability in the storyline.  It is like having an overbearing parent, only ten times worse.  The worst part is in battle, where they usually end up being the weakest when it comes to any type of combat.  They become damsels in distress and almost always find themselves saved by another team member again and again.  Characters like these lack any dynamics or unpredictability, making them a snore for audiences to try tolerating.

  The reason these types of characters exist also can be connected to another cliché that should be avoided like the plague; the creator's pet.  These characters usually are based on the authors themselves, thus receiving special treatment in the plot.  It would not be much of a stretch to see in this situation that other characters in the plot do suffer both psychical and mental pain from the ailments given from the overall adventure.  Heck, these other characters could end up being completely written out of the story as well from their untimely death.  However, because they are the author's favorite, the sickly sweet character stays around for the entire plot line with no explanation at all as to how they made it through while much stronger characters perished.  With these two clichés combined, unnaturally nice characters are the cold sore to fictional writing.

  If you still love your nice character despite hearing all of this negativity connected to them, there is a simple solution to the problem.  The solution is simple; make the character have realistic flaws and be just as prone as the other characters to being trapped in a long slew of nasty dog days.  In fact, making the nicest character more prone to breaking despite their seemingly perfect exterior makes for quite a complex, realistic persona.  Seeing that this kind of character can be equal to their comrades in the emotional spectrum helps to build up the kind of person they truly are in the story.  The best example I can find of this is towards perhaps the most selfless character from the anime Puella Magi Madoka Magica, Sayaka.  Just wanting to heal the love of her life so he would be able to play the violin once more, Sayaka made a contract to become a magical girl.  At first, the new job looks like a great fit to her until she realizes the whole process of transforming into a magical girl basically turned her into a zombie, as her soul was extracted from her body and placed into an item known as a soul gem.  The dark truth slowly pushes Sayaka into despair, making her reject the idea of being in a relationship with the boy she helped because of what she became.  Worse, her fighting skills are comparatively weaker to other magical girls, giving Sayaka the inability to fight former witch minions called familiars before they become witches themselves and harm unsuspecting humans.  This causes her to go into a complete mental breakdown that makes Sayaka see herself as useless and a self-made plague on the world.  These negative feelings seal Sayaka's fate as she is transformed into the evil witch Octavia to the horror of her friends.  So she cannot harm anyone in this form, Sayaka later has to be killed by another magical girl, leaving her entire story a self-made tragedy and a lesson about the dangers of being too kind.

  Sayaka is the example of a nice character done right through her many trials that lead to massive amounts of development, even if the final results were not desirable for her.  With characters like Sayaka in existence, I do not know why more writers do not try to invert the trope by adding relatable situations that shows other shades of what would have been a bland character.  Through these kinds of situations, audiences grow to love the character and the story they are being presented with.  It is killing two birds with one stone metaphorically speaking.  If you want a character with an extremely caring personality, be sure to show there are more than one shade to this particular person.  Give them secret fears, flaws that could lead to either their advancement or complete downfall, or best of all some type of internal conflict.  Do that and your character becomes potentially a complete highlight of the entire story.

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