AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
avnis decision
note
consoling him
confession
dinner!!!
avnis denial
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
dressing
Untitled Part 34
AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 66
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
family !!!
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

horror movie

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By alka000


Neil takes avni to a movie which is a comedy horror movie, he first doent tell her that it is a horror movie because of a known fact that she doesn't watch horror movies , when she understood that it is a horror movie , she shut her eyes close and clutched neils hand tightly murmuring something against neil

Neil simply laughs at his wifey and he adores her cute antics , he know that he should face a war from her after going home , but for now he is enjoying it

It is short movies of duration one and half hour so there is no break to escape

After completion of the movies they four came out , neil was ready to get hit by his wifey but she was calm

Ali : ok guys bye , and yes avni did u like the movie

He says to tease her all while laughing

Neil : oh yes more than movie she enjoyed scolding me

All the three except avni burst into laughter's

Avni : hahaha so funny

Riya: ok ok now stop teasing my sister and yes ali come let us go its already late

Neil : ok ok bye

All of them head towards their home ,

In car

Neil : avni sry

Avni doesn't say anything

Neil : avni yaar see , y do u get scared those r just fictional characters , so be cool

Avni still doesn't speak anything

They reach their flat , they both had their dinner , while all this avni did not utter a word , nani and neil both tried to make her talk but she just replied to nanis questions and ignored neil completely

Avni goes inside the room , in the hall nani and neil have a talk

Neil : nani I think wifey is really very upset

Nani : hmm yes she is and y did u do that , see u r only getting punished for that

Neil : but nani plse help me what should I do ?

Nani :hmm u r her husband u must know what to do ?

Neil : ok nani I will try something

Nani : ok ok go now all the best

Neil goes to his room and hears shower running in the bathroom

Later avni comes out of the shower and lays on the bed of her side

Neil goes and sit beside avni on the bed

Neil : avni yaar plse talk something , I promise I will never take u to horror movie anymore

Suddenly there is a power cut , avni gets scared , (she is not scared of darkness but when she watches horror movie that day she gets scared )

Avni : neilll

Neil : avni don't worry I am right beside u

Avni hugs him tightly and he smiles

Avni : don't think I forgave u , as soon as the power comes I will again not talk to u

Neil : while smiling , ok wifey as ur wish but for now come more closer saying this he pulls her more closer towards him holding her waist

Avni smiles and places her head on his chest

They sleep like that , next moning neil wakes up first and adores his wifey

He nuzzles her neck , avni feels tickling sensation and cuddles more into him , this time neil replaces his nose with his mouth , and bite on the crook of her neck

Avni : ouch neil

Neil caresses the bite

Neil : sry and he kisses the spot where he had bit

Avni : neil now move I have to go to hospital

She shoves him away and runs to washroom, neil gives wht look

Neil : avni , what is this , if u continue like this then we can never take our relation to next level

Avni smiles on his frustration inside the bathroom

Neil gets a call from his office that there is an important meeting today and he gets ready as soon as possible and leaves before avni

Neil drives his car fast and he meets with an accident

People see him and joins him in the hospital

Here in the flat avni sees neils mobile

Avni : hmm neil forgot his mobile , I will go to his office and give him

She goes to his office , in the office no one knows that she is Khanna , she goes to the reception and asks for neil

Receptionist : sry mam , u cannot meet him without appointment and he did not come yet

Avni : what?

Receptionist : yes mam

Avni : ok thanku

Avni pov : by this time neil should have come to the office , may be he went to any other branch

Thinking this she goes to hospital , while she is going to her cabin she hears some nurse speaking about a accident case

Nurse 1: poor gu , he must be of 26 years and he is very handsome too , but don't know who is he ?there was nothing in his car to know about him ,not even his mobile

Nurse 2: yes but there must be his driving licence right?

Nurse 1 : no , they did not find it , may be it got lost when accident took place

Listening this avni heart beats faster

Avni pov : no no avni , r u mad , it could not be , shh shh avni don't even think in that way , I will call papa and ask him about neil , neil might be with papa

Avni calls Prakash

Avni : hello papa ji , neil is there with u right?

Prakash : no puttar he is not here , infact I tried calling him many times but he is not picking his calls

Avni : actually papa ji neil forgot his mobile in our house

Prakash : oh but where did he go , u know avni beta from morning I am feeling that something bad is going to happen

Tears roll down from avnis cheek , but she keeps herself strong

Avni : nothing will happen papa ki , be positive

Avni runs towards the operation theatre to check the patient , she finds mithali crying outside the operation theatre and stops running and stands numb , because she understood that person is her neil

Rohit sees avni and goes to her

Rohit : avni

Avni doesn't speak anything

Rohit : avni (he shakes her )

Avni : h ha haan ?

Rohit : avni inform neil parents about his accident , they should know , mithali is crying hard and she did not inform yet

Tears roll down from avni cheeks , rohit gets sad avni seeing like this

Rohit : avni plse just call them

Mithali : no need I will call them

Mithali informs khannas and they all run to meet their son , by the time Mehta , ali also get to know about neils accident

Swetha comes running there , she sees avni standing numb , she decides to go to avni and hug her but mithali comes and hugs her tightly , Prakash , bebe and neela couldn't guess what avni is going through , they just look at their avni , after sometime the doctor comes out

Swetha: doctor how is my son ?

Doctor : he is absolutely fine , u can meet him after he gains conscious

Avni releases her breath , she goes from there to her cabin , swetha sees her and follows avni

Avni goes to her cabin and sits down placing her knees close to her chest and sobs out loudly , swetha comes in

Swetha: avni

Avni : maa(she cries out loudly and hugs swetha)

Swetha: beta don't cry beta , see now neil is fine , we can meet him , if u cry like this he will ask me y did I make u cry

Avni : maa n ne neil will be fine right?

Swetha: yes beta , now plse come out

Avni and swetha goes out of her cabin , mithali sees them together and gets angry

Mithali goes straight towards swetha and places her hand on her shoulder and takes swetha away from avni , swetha and avni both gets angry ,

Avni was about to give her left and right but swetha nods in no , avni stops

Neela: swetha ji u don't worry , neil will be alright , we all are there right? So now get relaxed

Mithali : yes aunty u don't worry , I will take care of neil, I will be his doctor , right neela aunty?

Avni gets angry , she looks at neela

Neela: no mithali neils duty will be given to miss avni

Avni gets happy and mithali gets very angry

Mithali : but aunty I know him very well than avni

Neela: no mithali my decision is final and ur subject is not of accident cases right , u r just an oncologist , avni can manage this very well so plse respect my order (sry guys this might be silly )

Mithali fumes in anger and leaves from there to her cabin

Rohit doubts are increasing day by day , y r all taking avnis side , y si swetha aunty with avni in her cabin , y is avni crying a lot for neil , his thinking is distrcted by neela

Neela: now u all can leave to ur respective works

All the doctors left for their respective works    

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