Written by~MaryumAmin
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1. TU JO HAI
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They spend their lot of time with each other .They want to know each other more and more with this chit chat suman said ok i'll make coffee.
Shravan ~ Ok i 'll come with you
Suman ~ No No No you sit here i 'll be back in five minutes.
Shravan ~ Please....
Suman~ Only 5 minutes my lo.....
Shravan: what??...
Nothing said suman...
(In her mind) sumo are you mad
I think i love him yar....
Shravan turns on the music player and listen the music...
She is also humming the song in kitchen while baking cake for shravan .She specially bakes chocolate almond cake for Him. It's sweet surprise for Him . She knows he'll feel sooo happy when after seeing this.
Sumo it's 11:30. Come soon i m feeling sleepy yaar.....
Suman~ Wait just 5 minutes plzzz
Shrav~ Ok again 5 minutes..
It's tooo late...
Suman ~ Ok the wait is over ta ta ta tain
Shravan was shocked when he saw the beautiful trolley decorated with balloons, candles, ribbons and flower and there is a delicious cake on it....
Shravan~ What is this i mean wowww sumo..yeh kya hai
You baked this.
For me...
Suman~ Actually shravan i wanted to surprise you in my style but I chose adi's idea because I wasn't confident. But Now, I have gain my strength.
Shravan~ Ok Ok. I m surprised ,my sweet sumo and I like this very much .
Suman~ Mr Shravan now cut the cake, then we'll dance together n then you can go to your home ...Ok...
This is my plan for you...
Shravan~ Ok sumo
Let's cut this
Suman~ No first you wish something then cut this...
Shravan ~ Ok My Lord.
They close their eyes and wish for each other .
Plz God shravan or mai ek duje ke vaaste hamesha rahe .
Shravan also wishes the same...
Then he blow the candles and cut the cake. Sumo burst the balloons and says
happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday dear shravan
happy birthday to you...
and claps yeahhhh (she sing this) oh it's 12 am shravan you cut this cake on last moment oh my God...
Shravan ~ you behave like a kid sumo...
Suman~ And you Mr malhotra you are also a kid ...6 by 4 ka kid hahahah...
Shravan ~Ok I m going, bye.
Suman ~ Don't feel bad Mr. Photographer and don't go anywhere .Plz feed this to me...
Shravan~ What, if i dont?
Suman~ Then I'll put your face in it. (naughtily)
Shravan ~Ok ,If you want to eat this cake, then put your face in it and eat.....
Suman ~ No, i'll spread this cake on your face and then I'll lick it from ur face shravan...
Shravan ~Oh, Can you Really do this?
She realizes what she just said n bites her lower lip in embarassment. He chuckles.
Suman ~ Ok sorry you are my birthday boy .Dont be sad. I won't spread it on you. plz sorry.
Shravan ~Hmm...
Suman ~What hmmm....(mimicking him)
feed this to me, You idiot...
Shravan~ Ok (grinning)
Then they feed each other and enjoy a lot...
Afterwards sumo hear the music and they dance on the song...
This is my favourite song shravan....
Pyar ko ho jany do
Pyar mein kho jany do
Aitbaar kis ka hai
Intzar kis ka hai
Abhi na hua to phr kbhi nhi kbhi nhi
La la la la la la la
shravan keep his one hand on her shoul and with the other hand he turns her round. She smiles when he touches her. She controls her breath.
Pyar k beech mein
hum nhi aayen gay
Jis tarf le chala dil
Chale jayen gay
He turns her again and hugs her from behind.
Dur sa gaya
You laga dil gaya
Abhi na gaya to phir
Kabhi nhi kabhi nhi
Pyaar ko ho jaane do.
He twirls her. She hides her face in his chest and they beautifully enjoy this moment .
Adi comes there n sees suman dancing with shravan. He coughs to draw their attention, And they withdraw their hands from each other immediately.
They turn to adi.
Suman ~Adi, what happened ? Are you ok?..
Adi~ Hey doremon don't say adi, it's......
Suman ~ yah ,whatever ady.... (cutting him off)
Adi~ So shravan ,did you like my idea ?
Shravan ~Yeah ,i like it but i enjoyed this moment also.
Adi~ So you like sumo style surprise, right?
Shravan smiles and says yes i like her everything...
Adi~ What???...
Shravan~ I mean what ever she did for me and what ever she does i like her innocent surprises very much...
Aditya Smiles.
Shravan~Ok sumo i think i should go now. it's getting late i hope there are no more surprises for me.
Yeah said suman ok bye
He is a true gentleman sumo says adi
Sumo: hmmm
What...
You are right ady i think i have fallen for him....
Adi~ What ?
Suman ~Nothing (smiling)
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When shravan returned back at home preeti asked where were you shravan?
it's toò late and your cell
where is your mobile?
Why didnt u attend my call?
Shravan ~Di relax....
what happened?
why are you so worried?
I m not a kid anyways I was at sumo's home with sumo's surprises...
Oh di I m sooo happy i like the way she surprised me, she didnt hurt my feelings .I like her plans . I enjoyed a lot with her di....
Preeti ~Aaj mere bhai ko neend aaye gi kya...
Shravan ~Of course aaye gi or mere dream mein bhi wo mere sath ho gi...
Acha g said pushker
bhaiya koi khazana mil gaya kya...
Hua kya bhaiya subha mood to bahot bura tha party ka maza bhi....
kher choro ab konsa khazana loot laye ho...
Preeti~ Janab celebrate kr k aa rhy hain birthday.
suman ne surprise diya hai...
Pushkar~ Oh really bhaiya ...Great yaar...
I m so happy for you bhai
Carry on with sumo at least one day she would become my bhabi hahahaha
Shravan ~Shut up pushky....(punching pushkar's chest)
Pushkar~ Ok bhaiya..
Shravan~ Di aap ko koi baat krni thi...
Preeti~ Yes shravan!
i have decided that we are going to manali ...i want to go there to enjoy the weather .....
you know na
I love this kind of weather so we are going tomorrow...
and that's final.....
Shravan is silent...
Preeti~ Shravan ab kya hua kuch galat keh diya
Shravan ~ No no di I just want that....
I hope....
you know...
Bhaiya itna confusion what's the matter? said pushker.
Keep quite chote...I m talking naa.....
Pushkar ~Ok bhaiya (keeping finger on his lips like a kid)
Shravan ~Di I was thinking that if sumo could join us...
Preeti~ Of course you ask her once. I hope you'll not become sad if she refuses to come with us.
Tomorrow final ok.
Shravan ~Thanks di.
Preeti is about to go in her room ,she stop there for a second and says I think sumo mana nhi krey gi mere pyare se bhai ko.
Shravan ~Thanks di I hope so aisa hi ho......
Next day shravan call to sumo and says I want to meet you urgently...
Suman~ Ok wait i'll come to your home in half an hour i m little busy...
Shravan~ Ok I m waiting...
When she comes, she asks him
Shravan aesa konsa tofan aa gaya tha mei aa hi rhi thi you know you called me 10 times...
I know, ok tell me will you come to manali with me?
What? said suman.
Shravan ~I mean di planned a trip so we are going to manali so I want you to come with us.
Suman~ When are u going?
Shravan~ In the evening..
Suman~ Oh it's not possible but she change her facial expressions and said yes shravan i also want to come with you to manali trip
i know it's good trip for us
he hugged her and said
Shravan~ Yes for our relation.
Suman~What did you say?
Shravan~ Oh nothing ,ok go and pack your luggage i know suman there ll be too much cold and snowfall i like this kind of weather.
Suman ~ Ok i m leaving now because I want to pack my luggage.
When she get back home she asks her mom for trip..
She says yes and adi makes faces there...
She also makes faces, ooooh i m going now with my friend ....
He smiles and thinks, she is accepting this relation slowly slowy ,anyways i m so happy for her...
Adi~ Aunty can i go with sumo na plzzzzz
wo doremon kaha apna khayal rakhy gi..
Sumo's mom~Don't worry adi shravan is with her you stay here with me...
Adi~ Okkkk....(Unwillingly)
She quickly packes her luggage and calls shravan to tell him that she packed all the things she needed..
Shravan said ok i'll come to pick you from there.
On the highway they enjoy a lot in car they listen music ,sing songs, and eat lots of things like chips,snakers,crackers.
Shravan feels so good and can't control his feelings he thinks about her....
Pushker says bhaiya just purpose her one more time it's romantic in snow fall beautiful weather i think it ll have good impression good on sumo.....
bhaiya aap or sumo, bus sumo or aap.....(dreamily)
Shravan ~Pushker plz keep quite yarr..
Ok bhaiya and he makes a puppy face.
Aik to meri advice ki bhi koi value nhi hai..
He told me keep quite, shut up huh..
Bhalai ka zamana hi nhi hai...
Next day in afternoon they arrived manali first they go to hotel sumo n preeti are very excited ...
Suman~ Mountains look beautiful in snow. i love this shravan
Weather is tooo cold
suman wear your jacket
said preeti.
Yes di,
Shravan booked the rooms in hotel they take their room keys and go to their rooms preeti and sumo share the room..
Shravan and pushker share another room..
Preeti says, sumo we should take some rest and afterwords we will go outside and enjoy there...
Ok di,
In the evening they go outside
Pushker said bhaiya i m going back to room if i 'll stay here for 30 minutes definitely i'll freeze here .Aap enjoy karo mere sath konsi koi girlfriend hai.... you enjoy with your....
Pushker don't be silly we ll enjoy together come .....said sumo.
Ok sumo just for you,
Ok come.
They take dinner outside the hotel when they get tired , they get back to their rooms.
In room sumo plans to wear sari in this cold weather. She shares this with preeti and she was ok with that and says
mera bhai khush ho jaye ga when he ll see suman in saree... i know she ll look hot and beautiful.
Next day both wear saree and preeti said yarr
It's too cold weather how we will manage this saree....
Di relax it's my dream which came true in manali aesi sardi kb hoti hai delhi mein.
Sumo definitely you and me will catch cold....
Di kuch nhi hoga..
Ok mei aati hoo....
Preeti leaves the room. When sumo comes out she feels her back lace untied
Oh shit ......
she stands in front of mirror to check her blouse....
oh di bhi chali gai ok i'll try this ....
But she fails to tie the lace and then door openes .
She thinks di is back ..... Even without looking she says.....
thank God di aap a gayi.. plz tie this lace.
But she was not preeti di
(So our hero is there)
When he ties the lace suman says...
di your hands are too warm in this cold weather......
Suddendly she sees him in the mirror n get shocked.....
Suman~ Aaaaap...
Shravan~ Relax sumo
Suman~ Aap kab wo mei di...
Shravan~ Its ok sumo ,we are friends na so plz relax.... come...
They are waiting outside, come fast...
But she feel embarassed.....
Don't feel bad sumo by the way you look beautiful in this Saree
Mje nhi pata tha k tum itni khubsurat lgti ho.
With hesitation
she just said hmmm..
They all enjoy but sumo was ignoring him.....She was lost in her own world....
Preeti said sumo kya hua itna pleasant weather or tum aesy moo latkye kya hua...
Sardi lg rhi hai
No di..
Adi...
What preeti said.
Adi is here di.
She change her mood
Hi aditya
When did u came aditya ?
Adi~ Sumo it's ady ok...
Sumo~ Yes di meet my elder brother
Brother but you have no brother said preeti
Suman~ No di he is my elder cousin Mr aditya ahuja.
Preeti~Oh nice to meet you aditya
Adi~ No, Call me ady....
Preeti~ Ok ady....
Adi ~By the way you look stunning in saree
Preeti ~thanks (shyly)
Adi~Saree in manali hmmm kya baat hai dor...
Sumo madem...
Suman~ Tum ko kis ne bataya hum yahan hain...
Adi~Of course shravan ne my dear
I call him to ask about you and he said Come adi
And adi is here
Kesa lga surprise
Bht bura said sumo..
Very funny
So they enjoy there manali trip n click lots of pictures.
Shravan never told her that he loves her
But they can't control their feelings..
Love was in their heart, in the air of manali, in the feelings, & in their mind..
But they were yet to confess their feelings for each other.....
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