Avneil ff - Destiny ✔

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Avni Ayesha, a bold and fierce girl, lost her mother in childhood. Abandoned by her family and society, Neela... More

1. Avni's POV
2. Neil's Pov
3. Helpless decisions
Promo
5. Tears...
6. I will never let you go
7. Avneil..
8. Party...
9. When things go wrong
10. Secret...
11. New problems...
12. Will neil get to know the truth??
13. Apart??
14. Fear of losing her..
15. Sorting out...
Promo
16. Plan
17. Teaming up..
18. Stepping ahead
Clarification (A/n)
19. Sensing danger..
Promo
20. Taken away..
21. Fighting with death..
22. Healing..
23. Home..
24. Her strange behaviour..
25. Misunderstandings..
26. Jealously..
27. Melting into each other
28. Time to leave..
Promo..
29. Missing you..
30. Their tears, her faiths..
31. Saving my love..
32. Entering into danger..
33. Win over the Evil..
34. Back to normal..
35. Again a tiff..
36. Surprise..
37. Love in air
38. A happy ending..
Epilogue..
#Thanks.

4. Truth out..

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Avni left the house in tears. Neil went in his room and locked it. He started throwing things here and there. Just he was going to throw Avni's photo which was kept beside the bed, he stopped. He broke down in tears.

Neil's Pov
Avni tum yeh kese kar sakti ho?? Kya humara pyaar itna kamzoor (weak) tha ki itne jaldi tut gaya... Kyu avni kyu..tum kyu mujhe chodd kar chali gayi...Sorry Avni lekin yeh jaroori tha varna mai real culprit ko kabhi nahi pakad paunga.

I immediately dialled to DD.

Me (on call)- dd kaam ho gaya??
Dd- yes sir ho gaya.Mujhe kuch pata chala hai sirji..
Me- kya??
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Me- ok dd thanks aage ab jo karna hai voh me karunga.
Dd- ok sir.
They end the call.

Avni mai tumhe lene aa raha hu ab tumhe mujhse koi dur nahi kar sakta. Koi bhi nahi.

End of Neil's Pov

Avni on the other side was on the way to airport and again called Neela maa.

Avni (to herself) - Maa aap mera call receive kyu nahi kar rahe ho?? Kahan ho maa aap??

Just then she received a call from neela maa.
Neela maa- kya hua baccha itne saare calls kuch kaam tha kya??
Avni- maa aap bhi na. Aap mere calls kyu receive nahi kar rahe the?? Pata hai me kitna pareshan ho gayi thi..
Neela cuts her

Neela maa- baccha calm down mai thik hu. Ab bataogi mujhe kya hua??

Avni tells her whatever happened in last 2 days. Neela maa was shocked to hear this.

Avni(crying)- maa mai yaha se hamesha hamesha ke liye chale jana chahati hu. Ab mei yaha nahi ruk sakti.

Neela maa- nahi baccha problem se bhaagna uska solution nahi hota. Tum ab sidhe mere ghar aao. Hum milkar baat karte hai phir tumhe jo decide karna hai voh kar lena.
Avni- par maa..
Neela maa- agar tum mujhe sacch me apni maa Maanti ho toh meri baat sunno aur ghar aa jao.
Avni (sighs) - thik hai maa aapse koi nahi jeet sakta. Mai aa rahi hu.
Neela maa- thik hai mai tumhara intezar karungi.
They end the call

Avni- bhaiya mujhe iss address par le chaliye and gives him address.
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Neil there was in the house. He came down and saw no one was there and he called everyone down.
Shweta- tillu kya hua?? Tu kyu chila kyu rahe hai..
Bebe- haa puttar kya ho gaya??

Neil saw Riya standing with Shweta.
Neil (in anger slowly walked towards her)- Ohh toh aaj shikar shikari ke jaal me khudh chal ke aaya hai GREAT!!

Riya never saw him in such anger. Riya slowly walked backwards.
Riya(with fear)- N..e..ei..l meri baat...s..unno..
Neil- arrey riya kya hua darr kyu rahi ho abhi tak mene tumhe kuch nahi kaha..
Shweta- tillu!! Yeh kya kar raha hai tu iss maasoom si bacchi ko aise kyu dara raha hai??
Neil- enough(in little angry tone)
Aapki iss maasoom si bacchi ne kya kiya hai aap sab jana chahenge. Rukiye...
Neil goes and attaches the pendrive in Tv.

Video plays.
Video..
Riya- auntie are u sure?? Matlab..
Shweta-Nahi Riya uss ladki ne mere tillu ki zindagi barbad kar di hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai voh mere tillu se pyaar karti hai..nahi usse sirf hamare paiso se matlab hai aur kuch nahi aur vese bhi aisi ladkiyon se aur ummid bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai??
Riya- Thik hai auntie. Aap ke kehene par plan execute ho chuka ab aap jaake yeh divorce papers usse de dijiye.
Shweta- Thank you Riya.
Riya- No problem auntie.
Shweta- kaash tum hi meri bahu hoti, aaj aise din toh maa dekhne padte.
Riya- ok auntie ab mai chalti hi mujhe agar kisi ne dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi.
Shweta- thik hai beta.

Video ends.

Neil- dekh liya aap sabne. Mom..
Aapki toh mujhe mom bulane ne me sharam aa rahi hai. Aapne mere sath aisa kiya jo me kabhi sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta. Aapko pata hai naa mai uske bina nahi jee sakta phir aapne aisa kyu kiya maa. Kya aap mujhe iss halat me dekhkar khush hai?? (With tears in his eyes)!
Shweta- nahi tillu aisi baat nahi hai..
Neil-toh kaisi baat hai maa??
Aapne jo bhi kiya uske vajah se meri patni ne mujhse saare rishte naate todh diye...
Saying this he breaks down and a long tear escapes his eye.

Neil- Riya aur tumne bhi mom ka saath diya. Tumhe yeh sab karke kya mila ha??
Riya- Nahi Neil aisi baat nahi hai. Shweta auntie ne kaha tha ki avni tumhare pas iss liye hai kyuki tumhare paas paise hai varna voh tumhare saath kabka chod deti. Issliye meine Shweta auntie ka sath diya. I am sorry neil mujhe sachai nahi pata thi.

Prakash and Bebe were really in a shock. Bebe couldn't control her anger any more. After hearing Riya's words she was more angry. And in the next moment everyone heard a sound.

Bebe slapped Shweta very hard.. so hard that she lost her balance and fell down on floor.
Prakash- helping her to get up.
Aap yeh kya kar rahi hai bebe...
Bebe- nahi sunny aaj isne jo kiya uske baad hai Ye toh kuch nahi tha. Shweta jaa apna samaan bandh aur iss ghar se jane ki tayari kar. Agar meri beti iss ghar me vapas nahi aai toh tujhe bhi yahan rehene ki koi jarurat nahi hai.
Shweta- bebe...
Bebe- Shweta usse pehle mere vapas haath uth jaye apne kamre me jaa. (Yells)
Shweta silently goes.

Bebe- puttar jaa meri beti ko vapas lekar aa. Jaa puttar jaa..
Neil- ji bebe
Prakash- lekin beta yeh toh bata ki tujhe ye video kaha se aur kisse mili??

Flashback
Neil (on call)- dd kaam ho gaya??
Dd- yes sir ho gaya.Mujhe kuch pata chala hai sirji..
Neil- kya??
Dd- Mujhe garden ke cctv ki footage mili hai. Usse pata chala hai ki iss sabke pichhe riya ka haath hai aur mataji ne uska saath diya hai.
Neil- ok dd thanks aage ab jo karna hai voh me karunga.
Dd- ok sir anytime.
They end the call.

Neil- Avni mai tumhe lene aa raha hu ab tumhe mujhse koi dur nahi kar sakta. Koi bhi nahi.
Flashback ends.

Neil- papa mai Acp hu aur mere ghar ke safety ke liye tight security bhi jaroori hai. Ghar me har jagah cctv hai. Ek kitchen me, do garden me, aur ek ek audio device hum sabke kamro ke bahar.
Prakash- lekin tune hume bataya kyu nahi??
Neil- bata deta toh aaj yeh saboot kese milta??
Bebe- puttar lekin humne ghar me toh ek bhi device nahi dikha.
Neil-kyuki use aise fit kiya gaya hai ki use koi naa dekh paye.
Bebe- puttar tu ab deri na kar. Tu jaa avni ko vapas le aaya aur iska kachumbar me banati hu(giving a death glare to riya)
Neil- jee bebe..

Neil goes.

There Neela tried explaining avni but she was not ready to listen anything.

Neela maa- thik hai baccha agar Jana chahti ho toh thik hai main bhi tumhare sath aaungi.
Avni- thik hai maa mai Hamare tickets book kar deti hu aap packing kar lijiye.
Neela maa- thik hai baccha. Saying this she gets up but Avni stops her.
Neela maa- kya hua baccha??
Avni-maa aap abhi mat jao. Mere paas betho naa. Mujhe aapki Lori sunni hai aap sunaoge na??
Neela maa had tears in her eyes
- kyu nahi baccha aao.
Avni keeps her head on Neela maa's lap and neela maa starts singing...

Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

Ho chaand chahe aadha
Ho phir bhi roshni (x2)

Umeed jo na chhute
Har baat hai bani
Raato ke sur se nikle
Subah ki ragini

Lori tujhe sunau
Lori tujhe sunau
Bachapan ki ek mein
Lori tujhe sunau
Bachapan ki ek mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

Mein aasam ko khidkiyon se
Ghar mein laayi hu (x2)

Saare ke saare taare
Yahan chunke laayi hu
Sapno mein rang man ke
Yuhi bharte aayi hu

Har dard bhool jaau (x2)
Yuhi khel khel mein
Har dard bhool jaau
Yuhi khel khel mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

Dena tu man ki shakti
Maalik mere mujhe (x2)

Meri katha vyatha
Hai sab pata tujhe
Mein jab bhi dagmagau
Tu thaamna mujhe

Chhode hai swapn saare (x2)
Teri deh rekh mein
Chhode hai swapn saare
Teri deh rekh mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

Neela maa sees avni sleeping peacefully.

Neela maa's Pov

Baccha jo step tum uthane ja rahi ho voh tumari zindagi ka rukh badal dega. Mai tumhe aur dard me nahi dekh sakti. Kash koi rasta ho jisse tum maan jao.

End of neela maa's POV

She gets up slowly and goes in kitchen to make something for avni.
Neela maa- mujhe pata hai avni kal yeh sab hone ke baad tumne kuch nahi khaya hoga.
She makes poha for her.
Avni comes down and sees her in kitchen.

(Neela- N and avni-A )
N-arrey baccha tum uth gayi
A- haa maa bhukh lag rahi hai aap kya bana rahe ho??
N- socho..
A- poha!!!!!
N(smiles)- haa bas ready ho gaya hai jao tum betho me lekar aati hu..
A- thik hai maa
N- yeh ladki bhi naa!!

After having some hearty moments avni books flight tickets.
A- maa!!
N- kya hua baccha chila kyu rahi ho..??
A- maa saare flights ko cancel kar diya gaya hai because of weather conditions aur 2 weeks tak koi flight nahi hai..
N- calm down baccha it's ok hum tab chale jayenge.chalo itna mat socho jao fresh ho jao aur rest karo.
A- thik hai maa
Avni goes to her room

Neela maa's Pov
Baccha kudrat bhi nahi chahata ki tum neel se dur na jao. Mai jitna Neel ko jaanti hu voh tumhe kabhi apne se durr nahi jaane dega..saying this she smiles..

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