MaNan FF : Tere Pyaar Main

By AKHImilon

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hello. this is my first story. Please support me and ignore grammar mistakes. * Prolouge * ... More

character sketch of their childhood
chapter 1- their childhood
character sketch after leap
chapter 2 : 8 year leap
chapter 3: guilty Manik
chapter 4: mission search manik
chapter 5:from neighbour to guest
chapter 6: awkward moment's
chapter 7:digging her own grave
chapter 8: he cares
chapter 9: it's time to go home
chapter 10: jealousy
chapter 11: friendship day
promo
chapter 12 : sweet old memories
chapter 13: jallad teacher
chapter 14: new growing feelings
chapter 15: his possessiveness
chapter 16: his Angry bird
chapter 17: jealous nandini
chapter 18: More then special
chapter 19: start living their life
chapter 20: It's confession time
important detail
chapter 21: kissa bike ka🏍
chapter 22: kissa bike ka part 2🏍
chapter 23: Amusement park 🎡🎢
chapter 24: Emotional fool😢
Happiest Moment for Kyy Fans
chapter 26: damage control
Parth and Charlie's MV #Nishaa
chapter 27: who's right,who's wrong
chapter 28: happy birthday
29 chapter: helpless
30 chapter: his gift
New Story
chapter 31 : out of control
Chapter 32 : he is coming back
Chapter 33 : Nafratein
Chapter 34 : insecurities

chapter 25: tit for tat

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By AKHImilon

Hi guys.. how are you all? update is really. And it's longest one.. i know you guys are not interested in this story anymore.. that's why so less comment. Now me too not expecting any good comment.. and if anyone is still interested,happy reading🙂



Manik yaar bolna teri gf kaisi hain? Naam nehi bol sakta but uske bareme to bol hi sakta hain na? Bata?

Abhi was irritating manik with his question... they were in jamming room.. only these 2... others were outside.. manik rolled his eyes hearing abhi's rant.. they were sitting,leaning on wall.. abhi asked him..

Abhi: accha woh dikhne me kaisi hain? I'm sure,she must be super hot and sexy.. aakhir manik malhotra ki girl friend jo hain.. kyun,hain naa?

Manik smiled hearing abhi.. and was looking down..

Abhi: kya hua?

Manik: actually she is very cute.. babyish.. naive hain bohot...

Abhi: omg really? But tujhe to aisi larkiyo se nafrat tha na?

Manik: dude... mujhe har tarha ki larkiyo se nafrat thi...

Abhi: now it's changed?

Manik: abhi bhi hain... bas meri girl friend ko chor ke.. i mean... no one can hate her.. she is so cute man..😋😋

Abhi laughs and asked looking at him with a smile..

Abhi: GOD!!! you are really in love manik.. so this is a serious relationship?

Manik blushed..

Mani: of course.. i don't have time for time paas😉

Abhi: Ok Ok... now i can't wait to meet her...

Manik: hmm.. ab chal bahar chalte hain...

They both start going outside.. manik bump into someone.. it was dhruv..

Manik: dekh ke nehi chal sakta.. pairo me paiye laga ke chalta hain kya?

Dhruv: I'm sorry bhai. Woh main ghar jaa raha thaa.. jaldi jaldi me..

Manik: ghar? Tere to abhi tak class baki hain.. kyun jaa raha hain?

Dhruv: woh kal prom he naa. To uske liye taiyari karni hain..

Manik: kya? Iska matlab tu bhi aayega prom me. I thought you were not interested..

Dhruv: haa but i thought enjoy kar leta hoon... bhai aap kisko aapna partner banaoge?

Manik: umm woh... main.. main dekh raha hoon.. kisi ko bhi. Jo pehchaan me aaye.. tu kiske saath ja raha hain.. partner hain kya?

Dhruv: haa bhai.. mere paas partner hain..

Manik laughs at dhruv in his mind

Manik in his mind: haha.. seriously.. matlab ab isko kaun haa bol diya? Andhi hogi..

Manik: accha.. to kaun hain woh?

Dhruv: NANDINI!!!!

Manik was shocked.. it's like thunderstorms fall on him.. he can't believe what dhruv said..

Manik: say again? Whoo?

Dhruv: Nandini bhai.. hamari parosi wali... subha i asked her to be my partner.. after sometime she said yes...

Manik: she said yes?😲

Dhruv: haa bhai.. I'm very happy.. I'm going with my best friend.. accha main chalta hoon..

Abhi: manik main bhi aata hoon..

Manik was silent.. anger was rising in him.. he just want to kill everyone around..

Manik to himself: she is going with dhruv? How dare she? Matlab mere chote bhai ke saath? Is she mad? how can she do this to me?

He was thinking about all this while going near his classroom,just then priya come in front of him and said

Priya: umm hi manik...

Manik did not reply.. she again start

Priya: i know manik you will get angry on me again. But i can't imagine anyone else as my partner other then you.. please please manik you will go with me tomorrow? I know you will not agree.. but still...

Manik: OK!!!

Priya: what?

Manik: kal ready hokar mere ghar aa jana..

Priya: you... you are ready?

Manik: hmm but just as a prom partner.. nothing more.. faltu me hope paalne mat lag jana..

Priya was very surprised.. how come manik said yes to her? But that really doesn't matter.. she is happy,and that's enough..

Priya: OMG... thank you thank you.. so kal sham ko we will go together...😍 what should i were?😜

Manik glare at her.. she gets scared..

Priya: ok ok.. I'm sorry...

Priya left from there happily.. manik sign and left from there with a heavy heart..

After half an hour...

Nandini come to canteen,while thinking about her mistake.. she realized that what she did was not correct. she become emotional for her best friend..

Nandini to herself: kya kar diya tune nandini? Matlab... socha bhi kaise? Ab manik ko kya bolegi? Kya... kya woh maan jayega? Kaise react karega woh,jab uss ko pata chalega ke main... dhruv ke saath jaa rahi hoon? Mujhe manik se baat karni hogi... but woh phone kyun nehi utha raha?

Just then she hear some people were laughing and talking behide her table.. first she try to ignore them

1st girl: omg priya,bata na,kya sach me manik tere saath jayega?

They were nandini's seniors.. hearing manik's name she become curious.. and start concentrating on there conversation..

2nd girl: haa yaar priya... bol naa.. sach me manik ne tujhe apna prom partner banaya?

Hearing this nandini's eye's got wide.. it's like, some electric pole fall on her.. she was shocked..

Priya: yes.. manik said that he want me as a partner..

Nandini don't know what to think now. She don't trust these girls.. what if they are lying?

Priya: he want me,And only me as his prom partner..

1st girl: accha bol na.. kya bola usne tujhse?

Priya: he come to me and said priya,will you be my prom partner? First i said no.. but woh bohot force karne laga.. bolne laga ke mere alawa nobody can be his partner. I'm perfect.. he will not go if i refuse him..

Everyone know that she is lying.. manik will never say all this. But nobody said anything to her.. on the other hand,nandini was controlling her anger..

Priya: and then i said yes..

3rd girl: you know what priya... mujhe to ab tak yakeen nehi ho raha ke manik ne tumhe pucha.. woh tumhare saath ja raha hain..

Priya laugh and said..

Priya: aahaha.. lol.. isme yakeen na karne wali kya baat ho gayi? Ab manik mere saath nehi to kya is.. is behenji ke saath jayega?😆

Priya said pointing at nandini randomly.. everyone laughs...

Nandini become furious hearing this.. how can she say that? She don't deserve to go with manik? That's what she meant? She get up from her sit and come in front of there table.. priya give her a weird look..

Priya: what?

Nandini: kya kaha tumne?

Priya: kya? Kya kaha mene?

Nandini: memory loss hua kya? Abhi.. 1 minute pehle kya kaha tumne mere bareme?

Priya also get up from her chair and stand next to nandini,folding hands on her chest...

Priya: bohot gussa aur akar hain tum me.. aise baat karte hain apne senior se? Tameez nehi hain? Chalo,ab respect deke baat karo..

Nandini become more furious and said in high pitch

Nandini: KYA KAHA TUNE MERE BAREME?😠😠

Priya glared At nandini..

Priya: accha.. sunna hain? To suno.. manik mere saath nehi,to kya tum jaisi BEHEN JI ke saath jayega

Saying this she laugh.. other laughs at nandini too.. tears start flowing from her eyes.. she was feeling insulted.. seeing her crying,they start laughing more.. but what happend next,made them shocked.. nandini jump on priya .. grabbed her hair in tight fist and start pulling priya's hair with full force.. priya start screaming her lungs out.. everyone was shocked.. priya try to hit her.. everyone was standing like statue

Priya: AAAAAAAA!!!! LEAVE MEE.... IT'S HURTING.... SOMEONE HELP...

her friends come out of there state and try to pull her away.. but nandini was not leaving her at all... she become wild cat.. when someone come near her,she scratched there face,and again start pulling priya's hair.. everyone gather around them.. manik was walking near when he heard some boy's conversation..

1st guy: arre tune dekha canteen me kya ho raha hain?

2nd guy: kya hua?

1st guy: woh hamari senior priya hain na... ek junior student uski dhulai kar rahi hain canteen me..

2nd guy: kya? Kaun?

1st guy: hain ek larki.. choti si..

Hearing this manik become curious.. so he start going near canteen and after reaching there he saw nandini and priya where fighting like wild animals.. some girls were pulling priya and some were pulling nandini..

Manik: NANDINI!!!

Manik run to her and and start freeing priya from nandini's grip..

Manik: nandini leave her.. choro usse..

Nandini was not listening to him.. she was stubborn..

Manik: teachers will come now.. leave..

Nandini was still not leaving her.. that's why manik hold her from waist and picked her up..

Nandini: aahaa.. leave me...... nehi chorungi main isse.. kya samajh ti hain yeh apne aap ko...

Priya finally come out of nandini's grip.. she was crying very much.. her head was paining now.. everyone start consoling her..

Manik put her down.. nandini was still fuming at priya. she looked at manik with tears in her eyes.. Manik dragged her from there angrily.. he bring her her in rooftop.. manik noticed some hair on nandini's fist.. it was priya's..

Manik: KYA KAR RAHI THI USKE SAATH?

Nandini: kuch galat nehi kiya..

Manik: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?

Nandini: what's wrong with me? What's wrong with you? Suna tumne woh kya kaha? Woh bol rahi thi that you are her prom partner..😢😢

Manik: ha to kya galat kaha usne?😡

Nandini: iska matlab... iska matlab tum sach me uske paas gaye the,usse apna partner banane ke liye?

Manik: pehli baat... main nehi,woh mere paas aayi thi.. she wanted ME, as her partner.. aur dusri baat.. isse tumhe koyi fark nehi parna chahiye.. kyun ki tumne to apna partner chun liya...😑

Nandini stare at him with teary eyes..

Manik: kyun bura laga? Kuch galat bol diya?

Nandini: i... i can explain...

Manik: ok then explain...

Nandini: ma... manik dhruv mere.... mere paas aaya tha.. main nehi chahti thi uske saath jana.. but woh bohot sad ho gaya aur.. aur phir mene galti se usse haa bol diya... I'm sorry..

Manik: ho gaya tumhara?

Nandini: manik.. main bas apne best friend ke bareme soch rahi thi..

Manik: haaa.. tumne bas dhruv ke bareme socha.. mera kya nandini? Tumne mere bareme nehi socha? hamare bareme nehi socha? Ke mujhe kaisa lagega?

Nandini: manik main kya karti,dhruv ne mujhse pucha bohot baar. Main kya karti..

Manik shout at nandini

Manik: ha to bol sakti thi na ke tumse pehle hi kisine puch liya aur tumne haa kardiya.. kya zaroorat thi sab sach ugalne ki?😠😠 hum sath me jaa sakte the damm it!! Agar woh akele jata to jaane deti.. kya ab main akele jau?

Nandini: i.. i know but.. but agar hum saath jate to.. to woh kya sochta... kya bol... bolti phir usse...

Manik: excuses excuses... jitni excuse tum abhi mujhe de rahi ho,aise hi us wakht de sakti thi naa.. bol deti kuch bhi.. aur ab to hum dost bhi hain naa.. usko pata hain.. to phir?😡😡

Nandini was sobbing.. she is more guilty now.. literally she didn't think all this at that time.. she was very nerves then..

Nandini: main manti hoon mujhse galti huyi hain.. par ab tum bhi galat hi kar rahe ho.. tum uske saath kyun jaa rahe ho?😭

Manik: TO MAIN KYA KARU?

Seeing manik shouting,nandini shivered..

Manik: to ab tum chahti ho,main ghar pe baithu aur tum log enjoy karo? Haa.. bolo? Soch bhi kaise liya? Meri girl friend meri jaga mere chote bhai ke saath jayegi,aur main... main chup chap yeh bardasht karunga? You are wrong.. aur haa.. ab pata chala,mujhe kaisa feel hua hoga jab tum usko ha bol diya? Hurt hua naa? Jaali na?

Nandini: I'm so... sorry manik.. pl.. please mujhe maaf karbo..

Manik: it was a special day for me.. for us.. but you ruined it..

Manik said that looking into her eyes.. and left from there angrily.. while nandini was crying very much..

Nandini: you.. you are so... dumb nandini ( with sob).. why you did this? Why you couldn't think properly at that time? Now.. now manik is so hurt.. kya karegi ab?

Manik was sitting in a empty classroom.. he was hurt. Very hurt.. he don't know what to feel..

Manik to himself: how could she?  how could she do this to me? To us? Usne mere bareme bilkul nehi socha... this dhruv..😠😠 he literally blackmailed her emotionally.. and she being a dumb fall for it.. dimaag nehi hain uske paas? Aur ab... ab woh expect karti hain main kisi ke saath na jau? Why? Jab woh jaa sakti hain to main kyun nehi? Kya main ghar pe unka wait karu? Ke kab ayenge woh dono? No. Main nandini ko dhruv ke saath akele nehi bhej sakta? Agar dhruv uspe chance mara to? Yeh to hain hi dumb.. samjhegi kuch nehi.. mujhe hi iska khayal rakhna hoga.. but I'm not talking to her.. she accept dhruv,it's mean she rejected me.. it's unacceptable..

Evening time...

Nandini come out of her house when dhruv called her from behide..

Dhruv: nandini!! Nandini wait..

Nandini: what!😒😒

Dhruv: mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hain..

Nandini: jo dikhana hain jaldi dikhao.. I'm not in a good mood..

Dhruv: umm yeh..

(Imagine this dress as a gift)

Nandini take that dress and looked at dhruv annoyingly..

Dhruv: kaisa hain?😶

Nandini: nice. kya karna hain iska?😑

Dhruv: yeh tumhare liye hain.. woh main tumhare liye gift laya hoon..

Nandini asked him with gritting her teeth

Nandini: kisliye..😬

Dhruv: aise hi.. tum kal prom me yehi pehen na..

This time nandini replied him rudely

Nandini: no thanks.. mere paas apni dress hain.. main wohi pehnungi.. iski zaroorat nehi hain.. take this back..

Dhruv become worried seeing her angrily..

Dhruv: kya hua nandini? Accha nehi laga?

Nandini: dhruv i said naa.. mere paas dress hain.. mujhe kisi aur se nehi chahiye?

Dhruv: i know nandini,but as a friend,i'm gifting you this.. please rakh lo naa.. please.. mujhe accha lagega..

Nandini: enough dhruv.. wapas lo isse

Dhruv: arre par main iska kya karunga? Return bhi nehi lenge shop me. Aur ab main iska kya karunga.. yaha to koyi larki nehi hain.. kise du? So please please please accept it🙏🙏

Nandini give him annoying look.. she did not melt this time.. she was damm pissed. And did not want to argue more..

Dhruv: thank you😄😄

He left from there.. just then manik come there and said

Manik: kya baat hain...

Nandini looks at him..

Manik: your so called partner ne tumhe dress gift kiya?😌

Nandini: manik please...

Manik: what? Jaise uske baato me aake usko apna partner bana liya,kya ab uska dress bhi pehnogi? Matlab.. i will not be shocked.. you know what.. tumse kuch expect karna hi bekar hain nandini..

Saying this he left from there angrily..

Nandini looks at that dress and again go back to her house...

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