MaNan FF : Tere Pyaar Main

By AKHImilon

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hello. this is my first story. Please support me and ignore grammar mistakes. * Prolouge * ... More

character sketch of their childhood
chapter 1- their childhood
character sketch after leap
chapter 2 : 8 year leap
chapter 3: guilty Manik
chapter 4: mission search manik
chapter 5:from neighbour to guest
chapter 6: awkward moment's
chapter 7:digging her own grave
chapter 8: he cares
chapter 9: it's time to go home
chapter 10: jealousy
chapter 11: friendship day
promo
chapter 12 : sweet old memories
chapter 13: jallad teacher
chapter 14: new growing feelings
chapter 15: his possessiveness
chapter 16: his Angry bird
chapter 17: jealous nandini
chapter 18: More then special
chapter 19: start living their life
chapter 20: It's confession time
important detail
chapter 21: kissa bike ka🏍
chapter 22: kissa bike ka part 2🏍
chapter 23: Amusement park 🎡🎢
chapter 25: tit for tat
Happiest Moment for Kyy Fans
chapter 26: damage control
Parth and Charlie's MV #Nishaa
chapter 27: who's right,who's wrong
chapter 28: happy birthday
29 chapter: helpless
30 chapter: his gift
New Story
chapter 31 : out of control
Chapter 32 : he is coming back
Chapter 33 : Nafratein
Chapter 34 : insecurities

chapter 24: Emotional fool😢

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Manik and nandini reached home...
manik stopped his bike and said

Manik: nandini,go inside.. apna teddy chupake jana.. aur agar dadi puche to bol dena extra classes ke waja se late hogayi thi.. ok?

Nandini nodded..

Manik: good.. raat me baat karte hain..

Saying this manik kissed her forhead.. nandini start going but come back again and kissed his cheek..

Nandini: thank you for today.. this day will be very special to me... bye..

Saying this she left.. manik was thinking about abhi..

manik to himself: yaar. Aaj to bach gaye.. par kya abhi ne dekh liya? I hope not..

At night..

Nandini was in her bedroom,playing with her teddy bear,which manik gifted her.. she kissed the teddy many time.. and then start recalling there moments in amusement park..

Nandini to herself: manik care for me so much.. he is so sweet.. hain na teddy?

She said looking at teddy bear..

Nandini: it's ok. You don't have to reply.. I know he is..

Saying this she hugged her teddy tightly and sleeps...

Next morning

They were in college..

Manik was in canteen,with his friends.. chatting with nandini on phone.. manik was ignoring abhi completely. He knew what abhi will ask him.. abhi was observing manik.. nandini messaged him to come and meet her. Manik smile and look at his friends,who were busy in talking.. so he sneaked out from there. Abhi was pretending that he was busy,so that manik could not doubt him.. and he saw manik going somewhere..

Abhi to himself: zaroor yeh apne mehboora se milne jaa raha hain.. pata lagana parega.. aaj to tujhe range haat pakrunga..

abhi come out searching manik..

Abhi: yaar kaha chala gaya?

Abhi was standing outside.. he looks aroud.. and noticed manik was in 2nd floor... a girl was standing there facing her back.. manik come to her and smiled.. that girl hugged him.. abhi hide behide a wall.. they were talking,holding hands,manik was tucking her hair behide her ears..

Abhi to himself: i was right.. larki ka chakkar hain.. but who is this girl? Jise hum nehi jaante? Should i follow  this girl?

Suddenly period bell ring,and nandini  start going..

Abhi to himself: oh shit.. yeh kis taraf chali gayi? Ab kaise follow karu? Chal chor.. pehle is khotte da puttar ko dekh leta hoon...

Manik was coming down from stairs when abhi suddenly jump in front of him and shouted

Abhi: PAKAR LIYAAA!!!!

Manik was about to fall seeing him so suddenly..

Manik: darata kyun hain? Aur tu.. tu yaha kya kar raha hain? Aur pakar liya ka kya matlab hain? Hide and seek khel raha hain kya?

Abhi: beta hide and seek to tu khel raha tha hamare saath.. aaj jaake pakar me aaya hain..

Manik: kya matlab?

Abhi: kal tu hi tha na amusement park me ek larki ke saath?

Manik start stammering hearing this..

Manik: kya? Noo.. no.. main... main to kal ghar me aa... aaa gaya tha... tu... tune kisi aur ko dekha hoga..

Abhi: accha ji... to aaj kisko dekha mene? Woh bhi bata de...

Manik was silent...

Abhi: kya hua? Ab Muh chooha jaisa kyun ho gaya? Thori der pehle to bohot has has ke romance kar raha tha upar.. ab bhola ban raha hain.. chal bata ki tu relationship me hain..

Manik: just because i talked to a girl,that does not mean I'm in relationship.. ok? I was talking to that girl randomly.. she like my singing.. so that's why i talk to her politely..

Abhi: acchaaa.. jo kal tak kisi larki se seedhe muh baat tak nehi karta tha,woh aaj unko hug kar raha hain.. politely baat kar raha hain.. is she special?

Manik: NO!!!

Abhi: are you sure?

Manik: Yes..

Abhi: 100% sure?

Manik: KBC khel raha hain tu mere saath? Option bhi dega? Samajh me nehi aata tujhe?  Chal bhaag yaha se..

Manik left from there in hurry..

Abhi: accha... aaj dikhata hoon tujhe beta...

Manik was unaware of that he did a mistake by ignoring abhi's question.. now abhi is irritating him with same question everywhere..

manik was in classroom.. trying to concentrate on his teacher. Or just pretending.. abhi writes note and show it to manik.. manik read it..

Accept that you have a girl friend😌

Manik glare at him. Abhi gives him a "i don't care" look.. teacher notice this and throw them out of the class..

Manik was in library.. trying to hid from abhi.. he was standing near bookshelf..

And looking around.. he said thank god because now abhi was not coming after him.. but abhi jump from other side of bookshelf and shouted

Abhi: accha to yaha chupa hua hain baba..

Manik looked behide and saw abhi grinning.. manik made a cringing face

Abhi: chalo chalo jaldi se bolo you are in love..

Manik pushed the bookshelf on abhi and run from there.. abhi shouted in pain..

They were in jamming room.. practicing.. abhi asked manik.

Abhi: manik please bata de naa..

Mukti hear this and said

Mukti: Haa manik bata de  naa.. but abhi... manik kya batayega?

Mukti asked confusedly. Manik glared at abhi and said

Manik: kuch nehi. Bas abhi mujhse yeh puch raha hain ki kya koyi larki usse kabhi date karegi? To mera jawab hain nehi.. just look at you.. so boring.. bata diya.. ab khush?

Abhi made a face at him..

Abhi was coming behind manik everywhere.. from classroom to bathroom,from canteen to rooftop.. manik was getting damm irritated..

Manik was walking near garden.. abhi was walking behide him.. singing love song.. manik was not paying attention to him..

Abhi: pyar too hona hi thaa... pyaar too hona hi thaaa...

Manik looks behide and give a angry look to abhi.. abhi stops.. manik again start singing..

Abhi: kaho na pyaar hain.. kaho na pyar hain......

Suddenly manik picked up a brick and throw at abhi angrily...

Manik: you know what abhi,you are behaving like cabir. So stupid..

Abhi: haa to tu bata kyun nehi deta sach?

Manik: meri marzi.. tu kyun itna hyper ho raha hain? This is non of business..

Abhi got sad and said..

Abhi: fine.. I'm not following you anymore.. and i will not ask anything to you... bye..

After some hour.. manik was playing guitar in a empty classroom... abhi come there and said with a grumpy face

Abhi: manik.. tujhse koyi baat karna chahta hain... le..

Saying this he give his phone to manik.. manik without looking at the callers name said hello..

Manik: hello kaun hain?

Caller voice: pehchan kaun😼

Manik's eyes got wide and he shouts in excitement

Manik: ARYAAAA!!!!! SAALE..... Tu...

Aryaman: hahah... sahi pehchana.. kaisa hain tu?

Manik: meri chor tu kaisa hain? Aur itne dino se phone kyun nehi kiya? Saale ab itna paraya ho gaya hoon main.. bhool gaya woh bachpan ki yaari?

Aryaman: kuch nehi bhula.. tujhe kaise bhool sakta hoon? Main apne 54 gf ko bhool sakta hoon,but tujhe nehi..

Manik: arrre pichli baar to 46 girl friend thi.. ab 54?

Aryaman: arre barh gaye.. itne din makkhiya thori na maar raha tha yaha.. time pass hain..

Manik laughs at him...

Manik: tu kabhi nehi sudhrega..

Aryaman: haa but tujhe yeh kya ho gaya?

Manik: matlab?

Aryaman: bhai udte udte khabar aayi hain ki you are in relation...

Manik gets shock and looks at abhi. Who was trying to stop his smile.. he glare at abhi..

Manik: what rubbish.. tu... tujhe abhi ne bataya? Dekh... us.. uske baato par bishwaas mat kar. Pagla gaya hain cabir ki tarha.. you know me naa..

Aryaman: i know you... tujhe janta hoon issiliye puch raha hoon.. kya hua? Tu itna stammer kyun kar raha hain..

Manik: abbe saale kuch nehi... woh to

Aryaman: tujhe meri kasam... sach bol.. are you in love? Is there someone special?

Manik was silent.. but he has a smile on his face.. abhi was excited and try to hear there talks.. manik sign and said

Manik: yesss!!! I'm in a relationship.. and i have girl friend now..

Abhi rised his both hands in victory.. it's like he won a world cup...

Aryaman: arre yaar,kis jhamele me par gaya tu mere dost.. i feel for you.. larkiyo ka chakkar... bohooot bura hain...

Manik: come on aru.... she is not that bad.. she loves me...

Aryaman: hey bhagvaan... manik is talking about love and all.. hahaha...

Abhi laughs too..

Manik: dekha.. issiliye... issiliye main nehi bolna chahta tha tum logo ko..

Aryaman: ab kar bhi kya sakte hain.. tujhe aise baat karte roj nehi dekhte hum.. it's rare.. accha kaun he woh?

Manik: i can't tell..

Aryaman: arre but

Manik: tujhe meri kasam..

Aryaman: fine but problem kya hain?

Manik: ummm she is not comfortable.. she don't want our relation to come out.. not for now.. she need time.. so...

Aryaman: it's ok...

They talk for sometime and then cut the call...

Abhi: wow... I'm so happy.. finally tune accept kar liya. Mujhe pata tha. Tu mujhe mana kar sakta hain but aryaman ko kabhi nehi... main baaki dosto ko bata ke aata hoon...

Manik hold him and said

Manik: ruk jaa.. kaha jaa raha hain? Kisi ko kuch nehi batayega tu.. aur cabir ko to bilkul nehi.. agar usko pata chal gaya to kal tak poore college me news phel jayega.. samjha tu? Yeh baat sirf hum teeno me rehni chahiye.

Abhi: ok ok... par woh larki hain kaun?

Manik: chup.. bilkul nehi puchega yeh mujhse..

Abhi: arre par kya bigar jayega? I want to meet her..

Manik: dekh pehle main usse baat karlu iske bareme.. phir...

Saying this he left..

Abhi to himself: chal mat bata... 2 din baad prom night hain.. woh larki is college ki hi lagti hain.. agar aayega to uske saath ayega.. tab dekh lunga..

Abhi said with a naughty grinn..

Next morning...

Nandini come to college early.. she looks everywhere.. every boys were asking girls to be there partner for prom night.. and they are accepting happily.. nandini smile at them.. she start day dreaming about manik asking her for prom night... nandini blushed imagining this.. she saw dhruv was coming..

Nandini: hi dhruv....

Dhruv: hi nandini..

Nandini: itna late kyun hua aaj?

Dhruv: kuch nehi. Bas late utha..

Nandini: ohh..

They looks around.. noticing all this dhruv said

Dhruv: chalo hum bahar baithte hain.. class shuru hone me abhi time hain..

Nandini: haa chalo..

They come out and site's in a bunch.. nandini feels that dhruv want to say something to her..

Nandini: kya hua dhruv? Itna chup kyun ho?

Dhruv: kuch nehi..

Nandini: nehi dhruv,kuch to hain.. bolo naa...

Dhruv: ummm woh you know na nandini parso prom night hain... aur yeh hum dono ka pehla prom night hain..

Nandini: haaa...

Dhruv: i want to go but i don't have a partner... so main yeh puchna chah raha tha ke... ke...

Nandini: ke....

Dhruv: kya kisine tumhe prom ke liye pucha?

Nandini: ummm nehi... ab... abhi tak to nehi...

Dhruv: really? Accha... to kya tum mere saath jaogi? I mean will you be my prom partner?

Nandini was shocked hearing this.. dhruv was asking with lots of hope in his eyes.. nandini was speechless for sometime.. dhruv asked her again..

Dhruv: bolo nandini,will you go with me?

Nandini: ummm woh dhruv... I'm... I'm sorry... i don't... i mean.. I can't be your partner..

Dhruv's face fall hearing her answer..

Dhruv: what... why?

Nandini: yaa.. I'm really sorry.. it's just...

Dhruv: it's ok nandini... i know why you don't want to go with me... i know I'm not a perfect partner for you.. not just for you.. for everyone.. why will someone want to go with me? I'm  not that special..

Nandini: arre nehi dhruv.. tum galat samajh rahe ho... mera waisa matlab nehi tha.. anyone will feel lucky to go with you..

Dhruv: rehne do naa nandini.. mujhe accha feel karwane ki zaroorat nehi hain.. it's ok..

It was written all over in dhruv's face that how sad he is.. nandini was feeling very bad for him.. it looks like he will cry any time soon..

Dhruv: i think.. i will not able to go for prom night.. I'm sorry yaar nandini.. woh kya hain na,first time hain na. To bohot jeyada excited ho gaya tha..

Dhruv was feeling very dejected.. he was not understanding at all.. Nandini could not see her best friend so upset.. so without thinking much she said to dhruv..

Nandini: please dhruv don't be so upset... i.. i will go with you..

Dhruv's face lighten up..

Dhruv: iska matlab you are ready to be my prom partner?

Nandini: ya...

She said with a sad face..

Dhruv: tum yeh bas mujhe batter feel karwane ke liye too nehi bol rahi?

Nandini: don't think much about it..

Dhruv: thank you thank you thank you... it will be a memorable day for us.. dekh lena..

Saying this he left for class.while nandini was regretting.. what a blunder she did.. emotional fool she is.. now what will his monster do?

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