MaNan FF : Tere Pyaar Main

By AKHImilon

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hello. this is my first story. Please support me and ignore grammar mistakes. * Prolouge * ... More

character sketch of their childhood
chapter 1- their childhood
character sketch after leap
chapter 2 : 8 year leap
chapter 3: guilty Manik
chapter 4: mission search manik
chapter 5:from neighbour to guest
chapter 6: awkward moment's
chapter 7:digging her own grave
chapter 8: he cares
chapter 9: it's time to go home
chapter 10: jealousy
chapter 11: friendship day
promo
chapter 12 : sweet old memories
chapter 13: jallad teacher
chapter 14: new growing feelings
chapter 15: his possessiveness
chapter 16: his Angry bird
chapter 17: jealous nandini
chapter 18: More then special
chapter 19: start living their life
chapter 20: It's confession time
important detail
chapter 22: kissa bike ka part 2๐Ÿ
chapter 23: Amusement park ๐ŸŽก๐ŸŽข
chapter 24: Emotional fool๐Ÿ˜ข
chapter 25: tit for tat
Happiest Moment for Kyy Fans
chapter 26: damage control
Parth and Charlie's MV #Nishaa
chapter 27: who's right,who's wrong
chapter 28: happy birthday
29 chapter: helpless
30 chapter: his gift
New Story
chapter 31 : out of control
Chapter 32 : he is coming back
Chapter 33 : Nafratein
Chapter 34 : insecurities

chapter 21: kissa bike ka๐Ÿ

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Nandini: Dhruv!!

Yes. Dhruv is back.. nandini was surprise to see him. She and manik forget that dhruv was coming back today.. while dhruv was confused seeing nandini in nee lace dress. And coming from manik's room..

Dhruv: nandini.. tum bhai ke room me kya kar rahi thi?

Nandini was nervous... Manik also come there and get pissed of seeing dhruv back..(kaisa bhai he na manik?chote bhai ko dekh kar khush hone ke wajay gussa ho raha hain😐😁)

Manik in his mind: lo aa gaya kabab me haddi.. matlab kuch der baad nehi aa sakta tha? Itna perfect moment ban raha tha hamare bich.. sab spoil kar diya isne..

Nandini: abb.. woh.. woh mene tumhe bataya nehi. Man... manik mujhe music sikhata hain..

Dhruv: What.. really bhai? Aap uski music teacher hain?That's great.. par nandini,tumhe kab se music ka shaukh ho gaya?

Nandini: arre bas aise hi..

Dhruv: hmm. By the way nandini i missed you..

Saying this he was about to hug nandini but manik jump in between. He pushed nandini aside and hugged dhruv immediately.. then he start his melodrama

Manik: DHRUV MERE BHAAI!! Kitne dino baad tujhe dekha.. kaisa he tu?

Dhruv was trying to breath properly.. because manik hugging him very tightly..

Dhruv: ahh. Bhai. M.. Main thik hoon.. dheere se..

Manik: i missed you so so much..

Dhruv: really bhai? I missed you too..

Manik in his mind: khak miss kiya. Jab nehi tha to bohot maze me tha main. Ab aa gaya phirse meri zindegi jhand karne..

Manik gesture nandini to go,who was admiring there bond.. she got confused and rise her eyebrows saying what? Manik made his eyes big and glare at her.. nandini gets scared and to dhruv

Nandini: abb... Umm dh.. dhruv main chalti hoon..

Dhruv try to come out of manik's grip. But manik did not let him..

Dhruv: ruko na. Bohot baate karni thi tumse..

Nandini: umm o..

Manik glare at her so she said

Nandini: aa.. no no. Hum baad me baat kar lenge. Abhi tum apne bhai ke saath time spend karo.. aur tum bohot tired hoge na. So bye..

She waved to dhruv and secretly gived a flying kiss to her boyfriend.. manik smiled..

When nandini gone from there,manik left dhruv with a jerk and said with a uninterested face..

Manik: Dad ko aane me late ho jayega.. to khana rakkha hain. Kha ke so jana.. good night..

Dhruv: arre bhai...

Manik: bola na kal baat karenge. Bye..

Manik also left from there.. while dhruv was very confused..

Dhruv in his mind: yeh bhai ko kya hua? Thori der pehle itna pyar aa raha tha aur ab achanak khatam ho gaya? Choro.. room me jata hoon. Thora rest karta hoon..

Manik come in his room and laid on his bed.. he was still cursing dhruv for his wrong timing.. he called nandini.. nandini blushed seeing his phone.. she received and said hello very shyly.

Manik: what are you doing now?

Nandini: thinking about you😶

Manik: accha? Well that's good.😉

Nandini: dhruv se baat ho gaya?

Manik: naam mat lo uska.. sara mood kharab kar diya bewakoof ne..

Nandini: manik!! Aisa bolte hain koyi apne bhai ke baare me? Kya bigara hain dhruv ne tumhara?

Manik: usne mera first kiss bigara hain..😠😡

Nandini blushed..😶😶 she remember how manik try to kiss her..

Manik: nandini apne ghar ke piche aao.

Nandini: haah? Kyun?

Manik: i said na,come out..

Nandini: but manik is wakht?

Manik: NOW!!!

Nandini: ok ok.. i'm coming..


Nandini take a shawl and run out of her room secretly.. she come back side of her house and saw manik was coming..

Nandini: manik yaha kyun bulaya abhi..

Manik: shhhh. Dheere bolo..

Nandini wisper and said

Nandini: ok.. but abhi kyun bulaya mujhe?

Manik: hamara adhoora kaam pura karne

Nandini: matlab?

Manik: our kiss stupid😒

Nandini feels shy and look down..

Manik: to chalo shuru karte hain

Manik come close to her lips but nandini stops him and said

Nandini: manik can we wait?

Manik made a face and asked

Manik: wait for what?

Nandini: i mean,i'm not even 18th. And i'm not comfortable..

Manik: arre ek baar karo to comfortable lagega..

Nandini: no i'm scared..

Manik: ok. Tum 18 ki hone ke baad hi we will kiss. Bye

Manik start to go. Nandini wide her eyes.she hold manik's coller and imminently fused her lips with manik's.. and start kissing him.. manik also start kissing her passionately.. both were lost in each other.. manik was sucking her lower lips.. after 5 minute,they broke the kiss..

Nandini was still looking down. Manik smirks at her and said

Manik: i knew tum kuch aisa hi karogi. Agar itna desperate thi to pehle mana kyun kiya jab me bol raha tha?😁

Nandini: haa to? Tumko mujhe manana chahiye tha,thora jor lagana chahiye tha. Par tum to ek hi baar me give up kardiye.. kyun? I didn't like it

Nandini said with pout.. Manik giggle hearing her rant and said

Manik: oh my drama queen.. har cheez me drama chahiye na tumhe? isme bhi tantrum? By the way,your lips are delicious..

Nandini hid her face in manik's chest.. manik laughs..

Nandini: waise manik. I think we should be in secret relationship.. you know,aaj kal dadi ke baato se lagta hain woh nehi chahi mera koyi boyfriend ho. Agar kisiko pata chal gaya to dadi tak kaise bhi khabar aa jayegi..

Manik: you are right. Main bhi yehi soch raha tha. Mujhe bhi koyi attention nehi chahiye is baat pe. You are not even 18th. So we should hid it.. accha kafi raat ho gayi hain. Tum jaake so jao.

Nandini: hmm bye..

Manik: Good night. Sweet dream. But dream about me only😊

Nandini nodded in yes with a smile.. then they both left from there..

Next day..

It was Sunday.. dhruv and nandini were spending time with each other like old time.. nandini told him that she and manik are friends now. Dhruv was shocked but happy too. Manik on the other hand was in abhimanyu's house. maddy was there too.. manik,abhi and maddy were sitting in bean bags and talking randomly.. when cabir come there with a poster and said

Cabir: check this out guys.. bike racing competition

Manik: Ohhh God.. so cool..

Abhi: that's awesome..

Cabir: kaun kaun participate kar raha hain? Kyunki bhai me to kar raha hoon..

Abhi: i'm in.. aur tu manik?

Manik was silent..

Cabir: kya hua yaar. Tu nehi karna chahta kya?

Manik: karna to chahta hoon. But new bike ke bina nehi. Purana wale se khatra ho sakta hain. It's very dangerous.. aur new bike ke paise nehi hain..

Abhi: tu apne dad ko bol na new bike leke dene ke liye..

Cabir: correct hain..

Manik give them a "are you guys serious" look.. and said..

Manik: tum log mere dad ko jaante ho kya? Agar yeh bolunga to meri khatiya khari kar denge.. main dhruv nehi hoon..

Abhi: kyun yaar? Tu bhi dhruv ki tarha unka beta hain..

Manik: par hum me fark hain.. yeh unka kehna hain..

Abhi and cabir site's beside manik and said him to explain..

Manik: Aao. Main tumlogo ko dikhata hoon.. jab dhruv unse kuch mangta hain,to unka yeh reaction hota hain..

They 3 looks up to see

(There Vision)

Rajeev was reading news paper when dhruv come to him and said

Dhruv: dad kuch baat karni thi

Rajeev: ha ha bolo..

Dhruv: dad kuch paise chahiye..

Rajeev: kyun? Kuch chahiye?

Dhruv: haa dad woh mera laptop kharab ho gaya hain.. study karne me problem ho raha hain..

Rajeev: accha.. pehle kyun nehi bataya.. ha main dekhta hoon shaam ko. Le aana..

Dhruv: aur kuch books ke liye bhi chahiye..

Rajeev: haa ok ok.. bas tumhari parhai ko nuksaan nehi hona chahiye..

(Vision end)

Manik: dekh liya? Ab yeh dekho jab main paise maang ne jata hoon to kya hota hain

Again these 3 looks up to vision..

(Vision part 2)

Jab main dad ke paas aata hoon aur bolta hoon

Manik: dad kuch baat karni hain..

Rajeev: Ha bol

Manik: kuch paise chahiye..

Pehle to woh mujhe 2 minute ghoorenge.. jaise ki mene unse unka sara property maang liya..

(Like this)

(Pic Credit to google and uploader)


Phir karvi awaaj main bolenge

Rajeev: paise se kya karega tu?

Manik: woh mujhe apna bike repair karwana hain..

Rajeev: paise kya pair pe ugte hain? tera baap koyi mukesh ambani hain? ya aladeen ka chiraag hain. Jisse ghiste hi jo chahe woh mil jayega.. bohot mushkil se paisa kamaya jata hain. Woh tujhe kaise pata chalega..

Phir start hoga unka never ending gyaan..

Rajeev:nalayk,nikamma,gadha,idiot(rajeev was continuously ranting. And manik was Rollin his eyes)

Rajeev: aise karega tu mera naam roshan?

Manik mumble to himself

Manik: kyun? Khudh ka naam roshan nehi kar paye kya..

Rajeev: kya kaha tune? Ruk tu

Ab woh apna chappal utarke mere taraf fekenge..

Manik: dad. Nehi chahiye dad. Ab nehi chahiye paise.. Ahhh..

(Vision end)

Abhi and cabir start Rollin on floor laughing😂😂

Abhi: hahaahh.. i.. i can't breath.. wait.

Cabir was rofling and falling on manik.. manik pushed him annoyingly

Abhi: yaar tu apne baap ka saga beta hi hain na?

Cabir: yaar woh apne baap ka saga beta hi hoga,but kya uncle hi uska saga baap hain? Manik kahi tere birth ke din tu hospital me badal to nehi gaya tha?

Manik: Can you guys stop it? First mera problem solve karo

Abhi: accha let's be serious.. tu udhaar lele..

Manik: nehi.. baad me problem ho jayegi.. aur mujhe lena nehi hain kisi se..

Cabir: dekh. Race hone me time he,tab tak paise ka intezaam karna hoga.. you know,prise money bohot jeyada hain.. jeet gaye to accha hoga

Manik: hmm. Mene pehle se kuch pocket money save karke rakkhe the. Aur kuch din save kardunga.. aur haa kuch part-time job bhi dhund lunga. Chota mota.. i'm sure. Yeh month khatam hone tak ek new bike kharid ne ke paise ho jayenge.. kya bolta hain..

Abhi: ha yeh best hoga.. abhi se paise jama karna start karde..

Nandini was in her garden. giving water to plants. When she saw manik coming back.. she looks everywhere to see if anyone was there.. after finding no one,she called him

Nandini: Manik!! Manikk!!

Manik looks at her and smile.. she run to hug him but manik stop her

Manik: woa woa!! Wait. Don't touch me.. haath me mitti hain tumhare

Nandini look at her hand and said

Nandini: oops.. sorry.. kaha the tum ab tak

Manik: woh abhi,mere dost ke ghar tha..

Nandini: ohh.. kya hua? tum tensed lag rahe ho

Manik: kuch nehi..

Nandini: please batao na... mujhe nehi bataoge?

Nandini said with a puppy face.. manik could not refuse her..

Manik: actually woh ek bike race hone wala hain. Illegal race.. mujhe waha participate karna hain. Aur uske liye new bike chahiye.. but paise nehi hain..

Nandini: to ab kya karoge?

Manik: mere paas pehle se kuch paise hain. Aur ab kuch arrange kar lunga..

Nandini: hmm.

Manik: ok main jaaun abhi?

Nandini: hmm..

Manik was about to go but nandini imminently hugged him..

Manik: arre yaar.. kya kiya tumne?bola na mera t-shirt kharap ho jayega.

Nandini giggle hearing this. Manik sign and hugged her back..

Manik: tum bhi na baby...

Nandini: sab thik ho jayega. Don't worry..

Manik: hmm thank you!! Just be with me always..

Manik kissed her cheeks and said bye.

Next morning...

Nandini get's ready for college and come out of her house and saw dhruv already there,waiting for her with his bike..

Dhruv: good morning nandini..

Nandini: umm good morning dhruv..

Dhruv: chalo aajo.. late ho raha hain na.

But nandini was not moving from her place.

Dhruv: kya hua? Jana nehi hain kya? Baitho bike me..

She unwillingly sit behide dhruv.. Just then manik also come out of his house. And saw this.. he was fuming in anger... it means nandini is not going to sit behide him? And will sit behide dhruv? Can he tolerate that? I guess No

Dhruv: nandini kaske pakarna mera shoulder.. kahi ghir na jao. Main speed me chalaunga aaj. Ok?

Nandini saw manik,who was shooting daggers at them..

Nandini in her mind: aaj to main gayi😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😣

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