MaNan FF : Tere Pyaar Main

By AKHImilon

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hello. this is my first story. Please support me and ignore grammar mistakes. * Prolouge * ... More

character sketch of their childhood
chapter 1- their childhood
character sketch after leap
chapter 2 : 8 year leap
chapter 3: guilty Manik
chapter 4: mission search manik
chapter 5:from neighbour to guest
chapter 6: awkward moment's
chapter 7:digging her own grave
chapter 8: he cares
chapter 9: it's time to go home
chapter 10: jealousy
chapter 11: friendship day
promo
chapter 12 : sweet old memories
chapter 13: jallad teacher
chapter 14: new growing feelings
chapter 15: his possessiveness
chapter 16: his Angry bird
chapter 17: jealous nandini
chapter 19: start living their life
chapter 20: It's confession time
important detail
chapter 21: kissa bike ka🏍
chapter 22: kissa bike ka part 2🏍
chapter 23: Amusement park 🎑🎒
chapter 24: Emotional fool😒
chapter 25: tit for tat
Happiest Moment for Kyy Fans
chapter 26: damage control
Parth and Charlie's MV #Nishaa
chapter 27: who's right,who's wrong
chapter 28: happy birthday
29 chapter: helpless
30 chapter: his gift
New Story
chapter 31 : out of control
Chapter 32 : he is coming back
Chapter 33 : Nafratein
Chapter 34 : insecurities

chapter 18: More then special

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By AKHImilon

Hi guys. Seeing so less comment,i'm loosing interest in writing. But still continuing for regular reader's.😔anyway,enjoy reading!!



They reached home.. rajeev and manik come out of there car.. murthy family to come out of there car and start going to there house but rajeev stoped anuraag and said

Rajeev: Anuraag ji,chaliye kuch baat karni hain..

Anuraag: ji kya baat hain?

Rajeev: arre.. aayiye.

Nandini: papa jaiye na,uncle bol rahe hain na..

Anuraag come to rajeev and asked him slowly

Anuraag: kya hua bhai sahab?

Rajeev wisper in his ear

Rajeev: aare abhi tak humne drink karna shuru hi kiya tha,abhi kaha ja rahe hain.. chaliye mere ghar. Bohot brand ke drinks hain..

Anuraag nodded in yes.. others were confused,what are they talking about?

Anuraag: umm ma aap aur nandini ghar main jaake so jayiye.. main baad main aa jaunga.. thik hain.. wait mat kariyega..

Nandini: OK Papa..

Manik looks at her,she was smiling at him, they waved at each other..

Manik come to his room and start taking off his shoes.. he opens his room's window.. nandini also opened her room's window.. manik smile at her and waved.. manik message her..

Manik: tumhare saath time spend karke bohot accha laga..

Nandini reads his message and give him a shy smile.. she message him too

Nandini: mujhe bhi bohot accha laga.

Manik: really?

Nandini: hmm😊😊😊

Manik: kya karogi ab?

Nandini: kuch nehi. Will just read some book's.. yeh uncle aur papa kya kar rahe hain?

Manik: don't know. Woh bahar baithe hain shayad. Balcony me.. hongi kuch idhar udhar ki baate. Leave it.

They start messaging each other,laughing,enjoying.. On the other hand rajeev and anuraag were drinking continuously..

Anuraag: aah bhai sahab. Maza aa gaya.. lagta hain aap ghar me bhi drink karte hain.

Rajeev: haa.. peeta hoon kabhi kabhi. Ab kya kar sakte hain,akele 2 jawaan beto ko samhal na parta hain..

Anuraag: samajh sakta hoon main..

Rajeev: dhruv ko to samhaal leta hoon but manik ko nehi samhaal pata. Jiddi hain bohot. Pata nehi uska future kya hain..

Anuraag: aap uske saath jeyada strict mat hoyiye. abhi itna samajh nehi hain usme. Kuch saal baad sab thik ho jayega..

Rajeev: kaise? Phaate huye kapre pehenta hain. Lambe lambe baal rakhta hain,ek guitar leke ghumta hain. Aur jo mile usse fight karta hain..

Anuraag: hahha.. yeh to aaj kal ke larko ka fashion hain bhai sahab.

Rajeev: hmm bekaar fashion

Anuraag laugh hear this

Rajeev: niyonika yaha hoti to shayad manik aaj dhruv ke jaisa hi hota. Woh sirf uski maa ka hi sunta tha.

Anuraag: aap bohot miss karte hain na apni wife ko?

Rajeev: ha karta to hoon. Waise ek baat bolu?

Anuraag: ha boliye na..

Rajeev: aap ne dusri shaadi kyun nehi ki?

Anuraag: zaroorat nehi pari.. i love my wife..

Rajeev: haa but puri zindegi akele thori na rahenge. Aap to bohot young hain. Main to kehta hoon shaadi kar hi lijiye phirse..

Anuraag: arre nehi nehi. Kya bol rahe hain. Uski zaroorat nehi hain. Waise young to aap bhi hain. Aap karlo shaadi..

Rajeev spit his drink and said loudly

Rajeev: arre marwayenge kya? Manik ne sun liya to meri drink me zeher(poison) mila dega.. bohot possessive hain apni maa ko lekar. Agar sun liya uske liye sauteli maa laya jayega to jinda gaar dega humko. Aur bina waje dhruv ko bhi.. aur haa... niyonika to hain hi mujhe sowarg se dekhne ke liya. Usko jawaab bhi to dena hain..

Anuraag laughed seeing rajeev so scared..

Rajeev: is matter ko yahi chor dete hain..

Anuraag: ji. Accha ab mujhe chalna chahiye. Maa aur nandini dono so gaye honge,to abhi jana safe hoga.. namaste..

Saying this he start walking with lots of difficulty. He was really drunk.. he enter in there house slowly,without making any noise. Because he don't want to wake his mother and daughter up. But he don't know his daughter was chating with a boy whole night.

Next morning..

Manik enter in jamming room and saw his friends already there.. manik said hi to them.. abhi said

Abhi: welcome angry young man.. kal kya ho gaya tha tujhe?

Manik: nothing yaar,bas mood kharap tha.. sorry

Cabir was not looking at him.

Manik: sorry cabir..

Cabir did not respond and start pretending that he did not heard anything..

Manik: cabir yaar.. bola na sorry ab gussa thuk de

Cabir: kaha thuku? Tere muh pe?

Manik: shut up. Mere samne tantrum throw mat kar. Sidhe sidhe sorry accept karle barna

Cabir: barna kya? Saale jalta hain tu mujhse. Mere paas new bike jo hain,aur tere paas nehii

Manik: teri to main...

Manik run to hit him but abhi and maddy stoped him. Cabir hide behind mukti..

Abhi: chor de manik.. cabir!! Already itna chira hua hain manik,isko aur mat chira. Khatam kar.

Cabir: accha sorry.

Cabir come and hugged manik and said

Cabir: chal gale mil jaa. Aur bhao mat kha ab..

Manik hugged him and they start rehearsing..

Abhi: lets take a break. Bohot thak gaya hoon. Aur mujhe library bhi jana hain.

Mukti: abhi wait,mujhe bhi jana hain tumhare saath..

Maddy: umm yes. Mujhe meri gf se bhi milna hain. Bye guys..

Manik to himself: thank god. Aaj koyi bahana nehi banana parega..

Manik: okay. Tum log jao jaha jana hain.

Cabir: chal manik..

Manik: kaha?

Cabir: main bilkul free hoon teri tarha..

Manik cursed cabir in his mind.. cabir and manik start walking out side. Manik want to meet nandini but cabir was not leaving him alone. He saw nandini was coming

Manik said to cabir

Manik: arre cabir woh dekh rakesh.

Cabir: kaha?

Manik: arre woh us class room me ja raha hain. Usne tujhse 1000 rupe udhaar liye the na. Aur abhi tak lautaya nehi...

Cabir: haa yaar.

Manik: Aur mene suna he ki woh bol raha tha nehi lautaunga,kya kar lega cabir?

Cabir: accha,yeh kaha usne? Chorunga nehi aaj usko. Tu yehi rukna. Main abhi aata hoon uska dhulai karke..

Saying this cabir run from there,to get his Money back..

Manik also run to nandini.

Manik: hey nandini.

Nandini gets surprised seeing him.

Nandini: hi..

Manik: kaha jaa rahi ho?

Nandini: class me.

Manik: okk.

Nandini: manik aaj raat ko main tumhe ek surprise dungi..

Manik: kya?

Nandini: abhi nehi. Raat me

Manik: please abhi..

Nandini: no. Wait for tonight..

Manik: arre but mujh me sabar nehi hain.

Nandini: sabar to karna parega,kyun ki sabar ka phal meetha hota hain..

Manik: kya yaar tum bhi..

Manik noticed cabir was searching him. Manik said bye and come back to cabir

Cabir: kaha tha tu?

Manik: woh.. woh sir bula rahe the. Accha paise diye usne?

Cabir: haa but sirf 500. Baki ka kal de dega..

Manik: hmm. Accha chal is paise se mujhe kuch khila..

Cabir: no. Kal kyun nehi aaya? Ab nehi dunga koyi treat.

But manik forcefully take him to the canteen..

night time..

Manik was waiting for nandini. She was very late today..

Manik: nandini aaj itni late kyun hain? Roj to jaldi jaldi aa jati thi.. woh aaj kuch surprise ki baat kar rahi thi. Kya hain surprise? I should call her..

Manik called her. Nandini smile when she saw manik's call

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Nandini: hello manik..

Manik: nandini kaha ho tum,aur abhi tak aayi kyun nehi?

Nandini: ha bas 10 minute aur

Manik: kya kar rahi ho?

Nandini: surprise ready kar rahi hoon

Manik got excited hearing this and said

Manik: really? Hmm.. i waiting for my surprise.. come soon..

Nandini cut the call and smile at herself.. 10 minute passed. Manik was sitting in the hall. Playing guitar softly. He was thinking about nandini.. just then he heard someone's footstep.. he slowly looked up. And saw her in completely different avatar.

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Manik could not take his eyes of her. She was looking so beautiful. She was wearing floral dress with hight hills. Her hair was completely straight. Beautiful smooth legs. She has done minimum makeup,but still looking so pretty. She was looking totally different from what she use to look. She was looking hot and cute at the same time. Nandini rised her eye brows and gesture him how is she looking

Manik was looking at her without blinking his eyes.. nandini slowly walks up to him and sites beside him..

Nandini: manik!! Manik!!

Manik come out of his la la land and said

Manik: you.. you are looking so beautiful!!😍

Nandini blushed..😶😶

Nandini: thank you!!

Manik: aaj rehearsal me concentrate nehi kar paunga main

Nandini: kyun?

Manik: ab agar kisike samne koyi angel jaisi larki baithegi to woh kaise apne kaamo me concentrate kar payega?

Manik said playfully,nandini become red like a tamato because of blushing.

Nandini: tum bhi naa. Chalo start karte hain..

They both start practicing.. nandini was playing guiter and manik was holding her hands,showing her how to play.. they were sitting very close.. manik was looking at her only.. nandini looks at him too..

Manik: yeh tha tumhara surprise?

Nandini just nodded her head..

Manik: i'm really surprised then. Ek baat batao,tumne pehle kabhi aisi dress nehi pehni. To aaj kyun?

Nandini: pehle koyi reason nehi mila. Aur pehle koyi nehi tha jiske liye main khudh ko sajau.

Manik: iska matlab ab koyi hain?

Manik was looking at her intensely. Nandini shyly looks down.. her hair was covering her face.. manik tucked a stand of hair behide her ear. And cupped her one cheek. There face were very close.. they could feel each other's breath. Manik was tracing her cheeks. It was so soft,he thought.. they both were looking into each other's eyes. Manik slowly kissed her cheeks. Nandini closed her eye. Feeling his touch on her body.. after that manik looks at her face lovingly.. nandini open her eyes and look at him.

Nandini: ma... main co.. coffee bana ke aa.. aati hoon..

Saying this she run to kitchen. She was feeling very shy.. manik kissed her. For the first time he touched her like that.. manik also come there and put his hands on her waist. Nandini gasped.. manik hugged her from behide and start hiding his face on her neck.. nandini start feeling weak at her knees.

Manik: tum mujhe yeh proof karna chahti thi na ke you can look hot? You don't like na,when i praised those girls. Hain na?

Nandini just nodded weakly. Manik turned her around and intwined his hands with her and bring her close to him..

Manik: heyy.. you don't have to proof anything.

Nandini: what you think,what should i wear?

Manik: tumhare kapre pehen ne me koyi kharabi nehi hain. Tum jisme comfortable ho,wohi pehno. Aur main tumhe is tarha ki dress pehen ne se mana nehi karunga. Kyunki short dress pehen ke koyi bura nehi ban jata.. aur tum jo bhi pehno,mere liye tum sabse khubsoorat hi lagogi.. kyun ki sirf tum hi woh ek ho,jiske bareme main har wakht sochta hoon,tumhare saath hi har ek paal gujaarna chahta hoon. Tumhare saath rehke main khush rehta hoon.. You know why nandini?

Nandini was looking at him with love and longing

Nandini: Why?

Manik cupped her face and said directly looking at her eyes

Manik: because you are more then special for me...

Nandini was not able to believe this. Manik come near her and kissed her forehead.. nandini smiles brightly and imminently hugged him.. manik laughs at her cuteness and hugged her back tightly..

They didn't have to say anything more. They can feel what is between them..

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