Narrator: Jane had 10 minutes to get to Rafeal's penthouse but who knows jane could never come back. Sorry guy little to much tension there anyway let see what gonna happen.
Rafeal: (Jane where are you? I've left 30 miss calls in the past 20 minutes where are you?)
(Petra approaches)
Petra: Mother what have you done? But why mother why.
Narrator: Magda is petra mother from czech
Magda: What I've simply made your life easier yes no now jane is out of thé picture you and Rafeal could be togther then take all his money and we would be rich yes no
Narrator: Rafeal was hearing nearly everything but he didnt say a thing.
Petra: Mother I got to go bye
(Petra screams)
Petra: How long have you been here?!
Narrator: Rafeal pretendes to be on the phone so he could look suspious or that it looked like he didnt here everthing what she said and what her mother Magda said.
(Rafeal ends the fake call)
Rafeal: Petra what are you doing here I was in the middle of a important call.
Petra: Sssooo you didn't here what I wass talking about?
Rafeal: No why? Anyway have you seen Jane she was supposed to met me at my penthouse
Petra: Noooo no (I cleared my throat i think he know im looking very suspicous right now let me just leave.) Oh look at the time I have to go now
Rafeal: Ok that was awkward
Narrator: Rafeal drives to Janes moms Xo and abula house to see if she went there
(Rafeal runs to the door pounding on the handle and Xo came half awake to the door)
Xo: Raf whats wrong its 11pm dude
Rafeal: I know and I'm sorry but its Jane. I think Magda kidnapped her.
(Scene changes to Jane in an underground mine tried up somewhere)
Narrator: Woah now thats how to build tension I wonder whats gonna happen next....