8/1/17
Hey guys! It's me again. I was reading over my story and I've decided to do some grammar edits as I've learned more since writing this, but I've also had some ideas. So,
1: we have a tiny bit of dialogue added, which probably won't make much difference.
2: I change the Hinny interactions to something else based off of another fanfic, or I use both interactions . Either way, I'd have to rearrange the last couple chapters.
3: I add some characters that I've created. However, it could mean another death in the future and could alter a lot of the plotline.
4: I include the goodbyes at the end.
Please comment your opinion on these ideas and your own as I only want to improve this story! 😊