Authors Note!!
I have noticed a lot of comments complaining about either not liking who I had chosen as the twins, so I have changed the twins to Max Carver and Charlie Carver, however if you are still not happy you can imagine someone else!! I wrote this story years ago and frankly I don't quite like it myself and may end up deleting it anyway!
It would be much appreciated if you could stop with the degrading comments it's not very nice or encouraging!
If you don't like the story if would be appreciated if you kept your opinions to yourself and just stopped reading, I don't need you telling me you don't like the story or that it doesn't make sense!
I am well aware that this story has lots of mistakes and needs major reconstruction and editing!
Thanking you sincerely
Phoenix 🙂