I can't tell you how much it bothers me when people don't use the return/enter.
I came to read a story, not a wall of words.
It makes it easier for my eyes.
I feel tired when I see just a block of words, it makes me frustrated.
How hard is it to click that button?
Your story may be good, but can you please make it look more professional and easier to read?
And when you copy and paste things from tumblr and you know it's good but you don't want to read words because they are crushed together.
And when you see someone that didn't capitalize...
Paragraphs are NEEDED, so PLEASE!
And thank you.