manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

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My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
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CHAPTER- 106

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By sruthilaya13

HELLO LOVELIES....

I WANNA SKIP MUKBHI'S MARRIAGE AS I WANTED TO GIVE MUCH IMPORTANCE TO MANAN MARRIAGE AND CONCENTRATE ON THEM.. SO IN THIS PART YOU'LL GET TO SEE NANDINI BIRTHDAY CELEBRATIONS WITH SOMEONE SPECIAL...!!

NOW TELL ME.. HOW MANY OF YOU ARE EXCITED..??

BOLO..BOLO..

HAHA.. ;-)

HAPPY READING...!!

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JOURNEY TO SHIMLA

Cabir- Guys..! Isnt this journey boring..??

Manik- Here comes the cabiraaa-the master mind...

Mukthi- Guys.. Its really boring.. Lets talk something na..

Arya- I've a great plan..!

Dhruv- whats that..??

Arya- we can plan Nandu's birthday party..

Before he could say anything, Manik bumped in between saying..

Manik- whatever you guys plan... dont involve me.. This time no masthi.. and i'm serious..

everyone were shocked with his statement.. Luckily Nandu is not with them.. 

he went to the other place to be seated..

Cabir- what the hell man..! 

Arya- Guys.. someone pinch me...!

Mukthi- It's not time for any jokes Aryaman..

Dhruv- Buddy ko kya huwa.. why did he burst in such a way..?

Navya- Guys.. we seriously need to help them..

Abhi- Lets just wait till the wedding gets complete.. Till then may be some moments might take place between them which can eventually get them back together..!

Everyone- Hope so...!!

Finally the Mukbhi's wedding finished and all these days manan were same as before.. They were missing each other badly but their ego didnt let them unite.. Their friends tried all the ways to get them together but none of their plans worked.. Even Manan parents came to know about the cold war between manan but they didnt intrude as they want manan to solve their disturbances themselves.. The days went on.. But the result was as usual failed..

The night before Nandu's birthday.. - 30th August ( Its my mom birthday..! ;-) )

She denied all their friends request of celebrating her birthday.. But they forced her.. She had no other option... So to avoid the situation, she locked herself in her room the whole day after the completion of Mukbhi's wedding.. 

It was 12 already.. But the most important wishes she was waiting for are not yet reached her..

She felt hurt and upset.. She switched off her mobile in anger and dozed off..


NANDU NIGHT DRESS

The next morning, its her birthday.. but there was no charm or excitement on her face as before..

She dont want to wake up.. So, she laid on the bed lazily gaping at the room walls..

Suddenly, her eyes found the sight of a little creature moving inside her duvet..

She shouted in fear.. With her shouts, someone comes from behind and asks in concern..

Person- what happen..? Are you okay..? 

She was hell shocked to find the person there in front of her that too in a very horrible position..

But right now, the most important task for her is to bug off from the little creature..

So she shouted again as the creature started moving towards her.. 

WHen she was about to get up, the duvet slowly moved upwards, this really startled her.. 



she immediately hopped on him in fear..

Manik- Nandu.. Just calm down.. Its not going to eat you..

Nandu- Manik..! There is something inside..

Manik- Arey.. Its just a small creature.. why are you afraid of it..?

Nandu- Manik.. please na.. look what is that..

Manik- well.. I can.. But my hands are not empty.. So.. you can see yourself..

She tighten her grip on his shoulders and replied..

nandu- no.. no.. I cant..

Manik- wait.. let me show you..

without waiting for her reply, he broke the hug and moved towards the bed and removed the duvet slowly..



she was surprised to see a rabbit moving on her bed and she shouted in joy..

nandu- omg...! Am I dreaming..?

Manik- dream..? Its damn real dude..!

Nandu- This looks so cute...

she excitedly moves towards it and touched it lovingly..

It cocooned inside her palm.. And Nandu felt ticklish.. she chuckled and rubbed on its back again and again to feel the touch..

Manik eyes were struck at his girl's happiness and kept on adoring her... 

After a while, he came out of his trance and asked lovingly..

Manik- Do you like it..?

Nandu- Its so lovely Manik..! Kitna cute hai.. aww...

she said making cute faces...

Manik- wait.. let me show you something..

Nandu- I cant take my eyes of it.. I'll see your surprise later.. let me adore it completely..

she was holding it in her palms and observed its face and features..

Manik- arey.. ek baar dekho toh sahi..

Nandu(irked)- kya hai manik..??

she asked irritated turning towards him..

He gave her a coffee cup covering it from one side..

nandu- I dont want any coffee.. ye tha tumhara surprise..?? arghh... tum bhi na.. mera mood spoil math karna..

he nodded in unbelievable and spoke...

Manik- tikh se dekho Nandu..

saying this he removed his palm on it and she was amazed to find a very little rabbit in it totally cuddling into itself..



nandu- aww... My goodness.. how cute..!!!

she with one hand held the first rabbit and with other hand just caressed its head..

Manik removed it from the cup and placed it on Nandu's palm while Nandu just jumped in excitement..



nandu- Its very small yet cute  manik..! 

Manik- Yep.. This is the smallest among 3 of them..

nandu- Three..?? 

Manik- oh.. yeah.. one min..

he went near the door and returned walking in backward direction..

Nandu- Manik..! why are you walking backwards..??

she asked in confusion.. he then turned side wards  to clear her view.. and here she noticed the biggest rabbit among three walking on the floor following manik foot steps..



Nandu- oh my my.. kitna pyaara hai..

she went near it and kneel down infront of it..

she was confused how to hold this one as she already have two rabbits in her both the hands..

So making a sad pout she looks at Manik..

he just chuckled at her cute expressions and said..

Manik- wait.. let me help you..

he tried to take one of the rabbits from her hand but she pushed his hand away with her elbow and turned to the other side...

Nandu- why are you taking it from me..?

Manik- arey.. you wanted to hold it na.. thats why I'm helping you..

she got convinced with his answer and handed him one of the rabbits reluctantly..

Manik- arey baba.. You'll have them with you only.. dont get upset.. Now go.. the big one is waiting for your welcome..

he gestured towards the big rabbit on the floor and spoke..

she gave him a bright smile and caressed it with her right palm..

Manik- surprise acha laga..??

Nandu- bahuth acha tha..

she replied him instantly without taking her eyes off the cute rabbits..

he got a big smile on his face looking at his love smiling wholeheartedly after a long gap of 2 weeks which was hell for him..

Meanwhile he heard her giggles and asked..

Manik- what happened..??

Nandu- Manik.. see na.. It responds to my touch.. 

she said as the rabbit is cocooned into her palm as she caressed its forehead.. 


Manik smiled at her childish nature and smile is not at all leaving his face..

Nandu- tum aise dekh kya rahe ho..?

he frowned in confusion..

Nandu- arey.. I wanna take their pic and upload.. go bring my mobile..

Manik- hmm..

he brought her mobile from the side table and switched it on..

Manik- why is your phone off..??

she didnt answer and asked..

Nandu- stop your interrogations and click their pic..

Manik- fine..

he said making a grumpy face...

Nandu- wait..

Manik- what now..??

she placed the 3 rabbits on the bed and spoke..

Nandu- just take care of them.. I'll be right back..

she went outside running..

After a blink of minutes, she came back with 3 glasses which are transparent..

Manik- what did you want to do with these glasses..??

 Nandu- wait and watch..

she took the 3 rabbits one by one and placed them inside the glasses..

Manik- smart ah..!!

he praised her..

Nandu- wo toh mein hu hi.. ab time waste math karo.. jaldi se pic click kar na..

Manik- okay.. okay... relax..

he clicked their pics and shown it to her..

Nandu- aww.. they were so cute... Let me upload this..

Manik- come on.. you can do it later on..

she didnt listen to him and uploaded the pic in Insta...


Aww...!! My new companions.. I'm already loving it..!!! #BestBirthdayGiftEver #LoveYou <3 


Manik- Did you upload..?

she nodded excitedly..

Manik- Are you happy..??

Nandu- I'm feeling so happy Manik... you dont even know how much I'm loving the current moment..

Manik- so..

Nandu- what..??

Manik- Am i.. I mean.. Am I forgiven..??

the reality hit her.. she came back from the rabbits love world and made a grumpy face..

he observed her change in expressions and immediately responded..

Manik- please dont change your mood Jaan.. Atleast today..

hearing him calling her Jaan after almost 2 weeks pricked her heart.. A silent tear escaped from her eye..

he immediately removed the tear and lovingly spoke..

Manik- aaj ka dhin no crying.. Its very special day for me..

she glared at him..

Manik- and dont you dare glare at me..! Atleast you loved my surprise gift na... please do some mercy on me..!

Nandu- acha.. aur kuch..??

Manik- haa.. I've decided that.. that I .. I..

Nandu- speak up Manik..

she said gritting her teeth..

Manik- I've decided to give you space and not over shadow you ever..

Her face filled with continuous tears.. He was worried..

Manik- sorry.. Did I do any mistake again..?

Nandu- So you decided..??

she asked still tears falling on her red puffy cheeks..

Manik- yeah.. thats what you wanted na.. and most importantly this distance game.. I cant play it anymore.. got tired with this and its so painful..  bahuth miss kar liya tumhe.. ab aur nahi..

She started hitting him on his chest and hugged him with great force..

Nandu- I missed you too Mannu...

He was taken aback with her sudden hug but listening her confession his face lighten up..

he tightened his grip on her and she too held him with same strength..

Both were enjoying each other embrace..

Manik- HAppy Birthday Nandu..!!!

he said caressing her hair while hugging..

Nandu- Thank you so much Mannu.. Love you..!

Manik- Love you too Jaan...

he said lightly pecking on her forehead not breaking the hug..

Nandu- Manik..! I need one more gift from you..

He broke the hug and asked..

Manik- you just order me whatever you want..

Nandu- Please dont stop overshadowing me.. I love to be protected by you.. I want be your possession.. I hate being away from you.. And I dont want to miss you ever.. I'm really sorry for my earlier behavior.. Please forgive me..!!

her words make him speechless.. He smiled brightly and pecked on her cheek for a long time..

she too smiled feeling his touch on her..



--will be  continued WITH LOT OF DHAMAKAS..


#So.. did you get to know the someone special..!! uff.. finally brought manan together.. As last chapter is short one.. I wrote a really big part of 2000+ words.. happy..???

 I know... It was the cute update and I'm the cutest..! haha ;-) I dont know your feeling but I just loved writing this manan surprise celebrations.. Hope you feel the same.. And most important thing is I LOVE RABBITS.. I WISH TO HAVE ONE BUT I'VE NONE... :-( 

Please comment with your views.. SILENT READERS..!! PLEASE DO RESPOND.. I WRITE THESE UPDATES JUST FOR YOU PEOPLE SACRIFICING LOT OF WORKS..!! 


NOTE: NAME THE 3 RABBITS OF YOUR CHOICE.. LETS SELECT THE BEST ONES..!!



MY WORKS:

manan- a cute love story

Manan- It hurts to hurt you

Manan- Connected through hearts



loads of love

Sru.. 

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