Pure (Complete) Sample

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Pure
Life of Analise
Prank...
Smart coward or dead hero
Dying Hurts
New Vampire...
Memories...
First Feed...
Hype...
Ability...
The Pit...part 1
The Pit...Part 2
Escape...
***Bonus***Seb Pov*****
Welcome Home Ana...Part 1
Welcome Home Ana....Part 2
Welcome Home Ana......Part 3
Meeting with Maximus...
Fact or Fiction...
First Party...
Emotional Roller-coaster
Helia~The Great Witch~ Part 1
Helia~ The Great Witch~ Part 2
Hello, My Name Is Analise Walker...
Ana vs. Kim...Round 1
Is Santa Clause real too?
Ana & Seb Vs Kim & Talon...Round 2
Trouble Down Under....
There's no place like.....Nexus.....
Unexpected...
This happens when you anger a vampire...
Witch Intervention...
He's not Prince Charming....
The Princess...
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3...2..1
We're Live!

Blood Castle....

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Blood Castle....

Ana Pov

“What do you have in mind?” Jace questioned raising a brow

“We’ll have to knock him out” I say biting my lip. Knocking out Seb was not something I was looking forward to.

“No, we won’t but you will” Jace said. He folded is arms in a serious manner

“Why can’t you just do a spell?” I asked

“Because I don’t want to deal with him being mad at me for knocking him out and letting you get taken” Jace words rang true. Seb will be royally pissed off and it will all be directed at Jace once I’m gone. I can’t have that.

 Jace reached into his back pocket and pulled out a set of handcuffs

“Looks like you’ll need these” He said handing me the cuffs. I raised a brow

“You just carry handcuffs in your back pocket?” I asked taking the shiny pair

“Never know when you’ll need them” Jace replied with a smile. I couldn’t help but smile back.

“Ok let’s get started. We don’t have much time” I state turning to head back to the house. Just as I leave Jace grabs my hand and spins me around. Without warning he smashed his lips to mine. At first I’m too stunned to move but soon enough the kiss melts me and I move my lips in sync with his. Jace kisses are so gentle and sweet. He really puts how much he wants me into them.

All too soon he pulls away.

“I’ll find you” He said breathless. I wanted to say something but he didn’t give me the chance and instead jogged off towards the house. That kiss just made everything ten times harder for me. But now wasn’t the time to think on that. I had to find Seb and restrain him...

When I stepped inside the house I knew finding Seb wasn’t going to be a problem. He was standing in the doorway waiting for me.

“Can we talk?” I asked a bit nervous. Seb nodded. I opened the side door and began to walk down into the basement for the second time today. I could hear his heavy steps following me.

The basement seemed colder now for some reason. Or maybe it was just my imagination. There were metal pipes running from the ground to the ceiling. Those will be perfect to tie him to. I don’t stop walking until I’m close enough to one.

“Ana?” Seb said in his deep serious voice. I had no clue how I was going to pull this off. I am fast but I have to get close enough to him for this to work. Looking at him now all dominant and manly I figured out what I had to do.

Slowly I glided to him until we were chest to chest. His heart beat picked up and if I had one mine would too. The heat coming off his body completely warmed me and staying focused became the new challenge. Seb reached down and gently caressed my cheek. From the gaze in his eyes I knew his guard was down.

No more stalling.

Quickly I threw him up against the pipes, swiftly pulling cuffs from my back pocket and chaining him. It all happened so fast Seb was barely aware, until he tried to move and realized his wrist were handcuffed.

“Ana, what are you doing?” He asked pulling at the cuffs as they clanged around the pipe

“I’m sorry. This is for your own good” I said taking slow steps away. Seb’s face changed from confusion to panic and he doubled his efforts to free himself.

“Get me out of this right now!” He demanded.

It hurt to see him like that without giving him an explanation but if he knew why that would only make it worse. Seb would without a doubt endanger himself to protect me. That wasn’t going to happen today. With one last look I dashed from the basement. I could hear him screaming my name even after I was back upstairs.

Jace ran around the corner just as I closed the basement door.

“He’s taken care of?” Jace asked. Seb screamed my name again giving Jace his answer. “Alright. I spelled the house so that no one gets in or out except you” He informed me. I nodded my head trying to force Seb’s pleas from my mind. If I didn’t get out of here soon I would go back to him.

From the laughing in the kitchen I knew the others didn’t have a clue what was going on. That I was thankful for.

“Please tell everyone I’m sorry but not to worry okay?” I didn’t give him a chance to reply. With my supernatural speed I fled from the house.

~~~~~~~

 Outside I could feel a change in the air. It was a buzzing on my skin; very minimal but alarming. It sent warning bells off in my senses and made me have the urge to run. It must be them coming.

Taking a deep breath I tried to calm myself. If these men came to kill me I would go down with fight but Cora said they wanted to take me to the king. Why do vampires need a king anyways?

I wish I could have talked to Simon. He has been doing a lot of reading on all this stuff and could have probably given me information on the royals. Now it was like I was going in blind. Too late to change it now.

A gust of wind swept over me and in an instant I was surrounded by dozens of armed men. There armor shinned through the darkening sky. There were so many of them that I didn’t even bother counting; they cocooned me.

One of the men separated himself and approached me. From his stride it was obvious he was the leader. His wavy brown hair and rough features reminded me of someone.

“I guess he wasn’t lying” The man said raking his eyes all over me. I raised a brow not having any idea what he talking about. “My name is Maximus and we are the elite guard. You are being taken for judgment” he added

“Why?” I questioned. Seeing all these soldiers around sort of unnerved me it. It was hard not to start drawing in my powers and taking out as many as I could.

“You are accused of conspiring to the kill the vampire king Ferox. We shall take you to the palace where your punishment will be decided” Maximus stated firmly. What is he talking about? Yes, Helia has been pushing the idea on me about killing the royals but I never actually conspired to do so.

“You’re wrong” I state. Maximus watches me curiously as if figuring me out

“That’s not for me decide” He replies and then motions to his men.

Quickly they pounce on me and shackle my hands and feet. What are we in the Stone Age? The guards waste no time and throw me over the shoulders of one. Before I had a chance to counter this cave man style abduction, the men took off. They were running so fast and gracefully it amazed me.

The guard was organized too; sprinting in straight lines faster than a bullet. My head was clanging against the chainmail of the guard carrying me making it hard for me to see where we were going. They ran at full speed for at least two hours before coming to stop in lot full of black vans. They ushered me into the back of one and Maximus got in beside me. After that we were off on an unknown road to an unfamiliar place...

“Are you really kinetic?” Maximus asked me after a few minutes of silence. I regarded him curiously figuring it might be best to keep my power to myself. Better for escape if they underestimate me rather overestimate.

“Are you really the king’s bitch?” I snapped back. He studied me for a moment before chuckling

“Feisty. My brother left that part out” He commented. However his short sentence had my full attention. 

“Brother?” I questioned. Maximus looked at me strangely before figuring out I was serious.

“Yes, my brother and your co-conspirator” he stated. But when I still didn’t get it he added the last name I expected  to hear “Marcos” I’m sure my eyes bugged out of my face when he said my captures name. What is going on here? They think I’m working with Marcos of all people to kill the king! I’m more likely to kill Marcos. At least now I know who he reminded me of; a hot version of Marcos, much hotter. 

“Wow you look genuinely surprised” Maximus stated. I huffed

“Well it’s not every day you find out your supposedly plotting with your kidnapper” Honestly they have everything twisted. Unless Marcos was planning to use me to kill the king. Actually now that I think about it makes sense. He used to have me training practically every day with Seb; it was as if he was training me to become a weapon. One that he could use against the king. Damn the king really has stacked up some enemies, must be for reason.

The remainder of the ride was blur. I was lost in my thoughts; wondering what would happen once we got to the palace. Unfortunately I didn’t have to wonder any longer as we arrived at the beach of all places.

“Are we going to tan and take a dip while were here” I asked sarcastically as two guards yanked me from the van.

The part of the beach we were on was deserted and covered in eroding boulders. Even still everything looked spectacular. The morning sun made the never ending sea of blue glisten like diamonds. I was so distracted by the view I didn’t mind the sand seeping into my shoes. This is almost like a secluded paradise. I wondered briefly where in the world we were but I thought of a better question instead.

“Where are we going?” I asked as the guards pushed me along. There defiantly isn’t a palace sitting in the sand.

“You can’t see it?” One of the men beside me asked.

I followed his eye movements to the ocean and that’s when it began to appear...

A Huge red kingdom sitting in the middle of the ocean; it was large and grand and completely unreal. The pointy tops soared into the morning clouds. It was the type of structure you’d see in a children fairy tales.

“How?” I asked in wonderment. We had reached the tip of the ocean and Maximus was on his phone talking angrily to someone

“The blood castle is what it’s known as. It was spelled by the darkest witch known so that it can only be seen by the blood drinkers” The guard with ashy blonde hair and scruffy face said. He was the only one to speak to me besides Maximus.

“What if people are out there? If they can’t see it, won’t they run into it?” Seemed like a reasonable question to me.

“No, the spell misdirects them when they get too close; they never know. And once were in it we become part of the cloak.” He replied

“Rex! Stop talking to the prisoner!” Maximus yelled. He stormed over gripping me by my elbow and pulling me forward.

Maximus practically dragged me into the water until we were knee deep. I did not have clue how we would get to the blood castle unless he expected me to swim. Which would be difficult considering my hands and feet are still chained.

All of a sudden something in the water began to lift our feet. I scrambled but Maximus grip on me held me in place. Beneath us a glass platform rose; it pressed us to the surface of the ocean and swiftly glided us smoothly against the water. It was so graceful that I bet any onlookers would assume we were floating or walking on water.

Whatever magic this was worked fast because in less than a minute we were in the middle of the ocean staring at enormous doors. The double doors opened wide reveling an immaculate grand entrance.

The ceiling was swirls of black and red with a marvelous black chandelier with bright glowing bulbs. There were two sets of spiral staircases on each side but we didn’t go up. We walked through the center passing multiple doors and servants hustling about.

Abruptly we can to a halt when a creepy vampire stepped onto our path. He was fair skinned with a skinny dark beard that fell from his chin and ended with a point. His eyebrows were also unusually thick and curled up at the ends; overall the man looked evil.

“Is this the girl?” He asked raking his eyes over me like he expected better.

“Yes Henry it is” Maximus stated proudly. Henry snarled

“It’s still Lord Henry to you Maximus” Lord Henry snapped at Maximus who only chuckled in response. Cleary these two have an issue and aren’t friends from all the hostility I’m sensing.

“For now. So step aside and alert the council we have her” Maximus was very sure of himself and it was kind of annoying.

Why am I’m so important anyways? I’m sure this king gets death threats all the time and I’ve technically on been a vampire for two years. Helia believes that I can become strong enough to kill the royals but after seeing this place and all the guards, I’m not so optimistic.

Lord Henry scowled but stepped aside none the less. Behind him was an old fashioned iron door. Two vampires were guarding it and opened the door at Maximus request. Of course it was a stone steps spiraling down into the darkness.

As we began our descent into what I assumed was my prison cell, torches lit up along the wall lighting our path. Funny how this huge castle couldn’t spare proper electrical system for its dungeon.

The further we walked down actual fear began to creep up my spine. I’ve been taking it well so far but that’s because I haven’t really let myself think about what’s happening. These people more than likely want me dead. And I have no clue how I’m going to escape a prison sitting in the middle of the ocean. Really hope Jace has a magical tracker or something because I’m coming up empty on ideas already.

Once we reached the bottom the smell of blood hit me first, then rust, decay and death.

It was nauseating.

The chambers held barred cells on each side, running at least a mile long. Maximus and four other guards led me down the long chamber to an empty cell. They swiftly removed my cuffs and tossed me into the dingy old cell and locked the door.

There wasn’t a window, bed or toilet in the room. Just some old rags that could barely pass for a blanket. I ran my hands through my hair trying to come up with a plan. The problem is this place is too well guarded and I don’t know the layout.

“Hello doll face” The sound of his voice immediately had my blood running hot. I couldn’t believe I was hearing it. Maybe I’m going crazy already; I’ve only been here 2 minutes. Slowly I turn on my heel and look at the person in the cell across from me...

“Talon” I sneered gripping my jail bars. I wanted to pry them open just to get to this maniac

“Nice to see you too” He teased. Talon slowly got to his feet but he was clutching his stomach. I caught of whiff of blood and knew he was seriously injured. An injury he most likely earned.

“Welcome to hell...”

Prince Pov(not in 1st person)

Cassius was in his room enjoying last night’s shindig; two sexy blondes. He had a thing for blondes. Currently the two naked girls were over top of him feeding from each other. Blood sharing is so sexually thrilling. Cassius enjoyed it but he never let anyone taste his blood, for personal reasons.

 A hard knock on his door interrupted the fun. However he ignored and sank his fangs into the side of one of the vampire’s neck. The other began to sexual lick down his chest...

Suddenly the door burst open and in strode his number one headache; Gwendolyn.

Her honey complexion with her platinum blonde hair would look ridiculous on any other woman but not her. She was cold and intimidating; what Gwen wants she gets. What does she want now? The princes hand in marriage. Everyone knew her motives, even though she was a respected council member, her goal was to be the next queen.

“Get out” she demanded to the nude vampires Cassius was playing with. The weaker vamps didn’t dare question her and left the room in a flash.

“Must you always ruin my fun Gwen” Cassius remarked

“All you do is have fun and sleep with whores. It’s time to grow up and settle down” She snapped placing her hand on her hip.

Cassius gazed at her perfect figure in that tight white blouse and black pencil skirt. He licked his lips. She was the only vampire he couldn’t bed. But he understood why she was holding out; she wanted more than to be bedded by him.

“I’m four hundred years young! It’s time you have some fun and join me” He replied allowing his eyes to brighten. Vampire women loved the red eyes of the royals. It was so rare, that’s usually all he had to do to get anyone he wanted.  

“There’s only one way I’m getting into that bed” She added with a smirk. Cassius rolled his eyes

“You’re not my mate Gwen. What makes you think I will marry you? It’s been two hundred years, give up already” Cassius stood up from his master bed and walked to his dresser, not bothering with clothes. He then poured himself a glass of whisky.   

“Trust me when I say fate wouldn’t dare give you a mate” Gwen sniped. What she didn’t say was if his mate did ever magically appear, she would kill her…

 Cassius threw the glass with lightning speed. It shattered against the wall beside her head.  His eyes were pulsing red with anger at her words.

“You may be part of the council but I am your Prince you will show me respect or I will make you” Cassius said using his power and forcing her to knees. Gwen tried to fight it but she stood no chance. No one could resist his commands; it was part of his ability. Like a brick Gwendolyn crashed down her knees.

“Apologize” He ordered

“I-I’m sorry your majesty for my lack of respect” Gwen answered. The force he was using to hold her down was painful. The longer he held her the more it felt like cement stacking on her shoulders.

“Good girl” He said petting her head like a dog “Now why are you here?” he asked finally releasing her. Gwen instantly began taking deep breaths once the pressure was gone.

“The final traitor has been captured and is ready to be interrogated” she informed him getting back to her feet. Cassius walked to his shelf and poured another drink.

“Why should I care? I don’t interrogate, my sister does.” He stated simply downing another shot.

“King Ferox and Princess Catalina haven’t returned from Nexus” Gwen said. Cassius began to laugh

“My father is still in no man’s land searching for something that will never be found? Unbelievable” he continued to chuckle while pouring another drink.

“Yes. And in his absence it is your duty-

“Screw duty!” He laughed downing another drink. Last night he fed from some extremely intoxicated humans, including a couple that was high on drugs. Clearly he was still feeling it.

“I’ve already had the guards remove her from her cell and take her to the interrogation chamber. Are you giving me permission to question her alone?” Gwen asked carefully. Cassius spun around sloppily to face her.

“Her? The traitor is a woman? Is she hot?” He asked now that his attention had been peaked.

“Yes it is a woman. One that is being accused of plotting to kill your father” She replied almost reprimanding him for asking such useless questions.

“Yeah but is it worth my time to see her?” Cassius was curious. There hasn’t been a female traitor since Cassandra tried to help Marcos abduct his mother. He wondered what other woman had the balls to go against the crown. She had to be hot.

“I haven’t seen her yet Prince” Gwen snapped with attitude. Her fangs almost came out she was irritated. She may not love Cassius but she sure did have a jealous streak.

“I’m in! Let’s go!” He shouted throwing his hands in the air. Gwendolyn pointed down to his bare body.

The wild, bad boy prince only shrugged and tossed back another drink. She gave him a stern look and he finally caved and put on some clothes. Cassius chose to wear black dress pants with a black button down dress shirt; he felt he looked good in black.

Twenty minutes later he was walking behind Gwen on their way to the interrogation room. Vampire interrogations were unlike any other; they were brutal. Before your even questioned you’re stripped to your undergarments and whipped with platinum chains. It was barbaric to say the least but it was there way. It made the prisoner more willing to talk by the time they came to question.

Princess Catalina was usually the one handling these things; his evil little sister had a thing for torture. Cassius preferred the finer things in life that came with being royal.

Once they entered the room the beating had clearly already begun. The prisoner was chained; hands chained to the ceiling and feet to the ground in the center of the room. Her perfect body was covered in healing wounds and blood. Her head was hung so he couldn’t see her face and black long hair flowed down.

Something didn’t feel right to him all of a sudden. He had seen vampires beat before but this was making him uneasy for some reason. Cassius stood back by the door as Gwen walked further in; heels clicking on the tile floor.

“State your name!” She ordered the girl. The mysterious vamp didn’t lift head but laughed instead.

“Kiss my ass” She shot back.

Cassius was stunned by her boldness but Gwen was pissed. She motioned to both the guards to whip her some more. The elite members gathered their chains and swiftly struck her. One cut across her stomach and the other her back. She threw he head up and howled in pain. It was the first time Cassius caught a glance of her face...

It was like time froze…

Everything in his undead body began to hum…

She was beautiful…stunning…perfection.

Even covered in blood and healing cuts she took his non breath away. He would lay down his heart for her right now. The beautiful vampire finally turned her head and locked eyes with him. Sparks flew through the air; they pulled him to her. Her crystal blue eyes held him captive. From the look in her eyes she felt it too. Cassius hadn’t realized he had been taking slow steps from the door...

The guards struck her again and this time when she screamed he felt it in his core.

Red hot rage overcame him. How dare they hit her!

Without thinking twice Cassius snatched up the nearest guard by his throat and then ripped his heart out! He dropped the lifeless body to the ground and turned his rage on the other one.

The vampire dropped his whip and held is hands up in surrender, but it was too late. In a second he shoved the dead vamps black heart down his throat and then picked up his whip and strangled him with it until his head tore off...

No one would ever hurt her again.

After he was done with the men he slowly walked back to his beautiful creature...

She was staring at him with shock and confusion.

Cassius gently ran his bloody finger down her smooth perfect face only whispering one word…

“Mate…” 

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****A/N: AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIRD MATE IS REVEALED!****************

****************PRINCE CASSIUS!!!!!!*******************************

************A LOT OF YOUR SMARTY PANTS GUESSED ALREADY!******

******************NEXT CHAPTER IS EVEN BETTER FANGERS!*********

**********FOR THOSE WHO WANTED IT TO BE THE KING THERE IS A REASON WHY IT WASNT.....SOON YOU'LL KNOW********************

********************PIC ON SIDE IS GWEN***********************

******************NEXT CHAPT WILL BE PIC OF CASSIUS BUT I NEED YOUR HELP CHOOSING SOME ONE TO PLAY HIM***HOTTIES ONLY***

*********THANKS FOR ALL THE SUPPORT FANGERS! YOU ROCK!******

*********I WANTED TO ENTER THE WATTY BUT PURE ISNT DONE******

**************SO LETS JUST BE NUMBER 1 MY SWEETS!***************

*************800 VOTES/200 COMMENTS! YOU CAN DO IT!***********

**************ANYONE KNOW HOW TO MAKE A TRAILER? JW******

****************WELL ITS LATE AND IM SLEEPY SOOOOOOOO*********

******************FANG OUT! AND ROCK ON!******************

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*******************FANG ON AND ROCK OUT!*******************

******************BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!*********************

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