So for this book, I'll start out with some things I am going to kinda rant about.
Paragraphs.
It gets really aggravating when people don't use paragraphs. Not even joking, I read a book that looked like this:
Hello he said coming over. I walk over to the small group of friends hi one of them said waving. What do you guys wanna do Sean asked I don't know anything I s okay with me
Literally, no grammar no quotations, and I stopped reading the book because it was so confusing. And, it really sucked because I think it would of been a really good book. But the whole book was like that. I don't know about anyone else, but that's super annoying to me.