manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

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My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
💃💃💃...1.5 Million Reads...!!!💃💃💃
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER- 94

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PLEASE FORGIVE ME READERS..! DAY BEFORE YESTERDAY I WAS BUSY IN MY PARENTS SILVER JUBILEE OCCASION.. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR WISHES.. AFTER THE COMPLETION OF THE FUNCTION, I LOGGED ON TO WATTPAD AND SHOCKED TO SEE WHATEVER HAPPENED.. I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THE AWARDS DISTURBANCE..! YOU ALL VERY WELL KNOW THAT I'M NEW TO THIS WRITING THING..! EVEN THOUGH I'M GIVING IT A TRY.. BECAUSE YOU PEOPLE ARE LIKING IT AND SUPPORTING IT TOO.. I DONT WANNA DISRESPECT ANYONE... MAY BE I'M WRONG AT MY PLACE.. I ALREADY MENTIONED IN THE FIRST PROMOTIONS OF THE NOMINATIONS ITSELF THAT I'M LEAST INTERESTED IN THESE AWARDS THING.. BECAUSE OF SOMEONE'S INSISTENCE I TOOK PART IN THIS NOMINATIONS.. SO I'M NOT THAT SAD FOR LOOSING IT..! YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT IS MORE THAN ENOUGH INSTEAD OF THOSE AWARDS...!!

TO MY DEAR BASHERS, THIS IS THE FIRST TIME.. I FOUND BASHERS FOR MY STORIES.. PLEASE KEEP THIS IN MIND..! YOU CAN POINT OUT THE FAULTS IN THE STORY.. BUT YOU DON'T HAVE ANY DAMN RIGHT TO GO AGAINST MY READERS AND SAY ANYTHING TO THEM.. GET THAT STRAIGHT..! NORMALLY I'M A CALM GOING GIRL.. NEVER SHOW MY ANGER AT OTHERS TOO.. MY SILENCE DOESNT MEAN THAT I ACCEPTED MY DEFEAT.. ITS JUST THAT I'M LEAST INTERESTED IN YOUR COMMENTS.. BECAUSE I GET LOTS OF LOVE AND SUPPORT FROM MY READERS.. THATS WHAT MADE ME GET MORE VOTES.. CURRENTLY, MY READERS ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT PEOPLE IN MY LIFE.. I WONT BEAR ANYTHING AGAINST THEM..!

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SORRY READERS AND MOST IMPORTANTLY FOR DISAPPOINTING YOU ALL..!

LETS CHUCK THIS UNWANTED THING.. DONT YOU WANNA KNOW WILL RIYA TAKE NANDU ALONG WITH HER OR NOT..???

CHALO... DEKTHE HAI.. AAGE KYA HOGA..! HAPPY READING...!!

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MURTHY MANSION

Nyo(smiled)- riya.. Come.. Let's go..

Riya- ha bua.. Nands..!! Chalo..

Nyo- nandu kyu..??

Riya- offo buwa..!! Aap ko patha nai.. Aaj ye party Isliye raka hai ki hum Nands ko humare ghar le jaane wale hai..!!!

Everyone glared at manik..

Manik- What did i do now..?

Cabir- Ab patha chalega..!

MAnik- kya..???

Cabir went near Riya and bent a little to reach her height..

Cabir- Riya baby.. aap ko Nands ke sath chalna hai na..

she nodded excitedly..

Cabir- then what are you waiting for..?? jao.. Nands ko leke.. she's all yours..

Manik(anger)- Nahi..!! Nandu kahi nahi jayegi..??

All of them giggling themselves..

Navya(dramatically)- kyu manik..! Abhi se nandu pe hukum chala rahe ho..??

Nandu glared at him..

Manik to nandu- Baby..! maine aise nahi kaha..!!

Mukthi- Phir kaise kaha Manik..!!

Manik- Is Madhubala ko tum jaanthi ho na.. kitna drama karthi hai..!

Navya- ha.. ha.. mein hi drama karthi hu..!! Tum toh mahan ho..!

Manik- please stop it madhubala..!!

Cabir- ha navya.. why are you wasting the time..!!

Nyo- Riya..! chalo na baby..

Riya- mujhe Nands ke sath hi jaana hai..!

Manik- Riya darling..! abhi tak party khatam nahi huyi na.. so nands ko yehi pe rehna hoga..

Cabir- par manik...! Party toh kabka khatam ho chuka tha..!

Riya- ha.. Chalo na Nands..!

Manik glares at cabir.. he winks at him in return..

Meanwhile Riya mom comes and scolds Riya..

Riya mom(Manju)- Riya..! This is bad manners..

                                                                                    (RIYA MOM- MANJU )

Riya- mumma..!

Riya dad(Sekhar)- Riya..! mom tikh keh rahi hai.. aise jidh nahi karthe hai beta..

she became sad..

                                                                         (RIYA DAD- SEKHAR)

Nyo- Sad kis bath ki Riya..!! Nandu waha aa nahi sakthi par Riya baby toh yaha ruk sakthi na..

Riya clapped and jumped in joy..

Manik- No..

Nandu stamps on his foot and intervenes in between..

Nandu- sure Aunty.. come Riya..!

she happily nodded and joined Nandu..

both of them hified to each other..

All the Malhotra's left the Murthy Mansion..

only youngsters and Riya are present in the living room..

they all settled on the sofas in an order like...

manik cabir Navya Mukthi on one sofa..

Alya Dhruv Abhi Arya on another one..

where as Nandu was sitting on a chair with Riya on her lap..

she completely forgot that she just got a new relation with manik and he need her attention..

he was completely pissed off now..

he liked the bonding between his jaan and Riya..

but he cant stand the truth that she's giving him least interest..

his chain of thoughts broke when Cabir spoke..

Cabir- what about Party guys..??

Manik- tumhe abhi bhi lagtha hai koi party hone wala hai..!!

he glared at nandu and answered him..

she didnt realize his glare as she was busy with Riya showing her some pics in her mobile..

Dhruv- I think ab kuch bomb blast hone wala hai..!!

Alya- Kyu baby..??

Dhruv- just wait and watch baby...

he said calmly..

Cabir- Riya..! tum hum logo se bath nahi karoge..??

Riya frowned and looks at him with an innocent expression..

he went near her and sat on the chair handle in which Nandu was sitting..

Cabir- do you know all our names...??

she nods as no..

Cabir- koi bath nai.. mein sabko introduce kar detha hu..

Mukthi- Cabir..! hamara introdution already ho chuka hai..!

Cabir- wow..! when..???

Navya(laughing)- ALya ka introduction toh bahuth acha se huwa hai.. Kyu Mukthi..??

they both burst into laughter.. Nandu too joined them..

where as Alya just fumed in anger..

Dhruv- what happened girls..???

NAvya- mein bathathi hu..

Mukthi- nai.. nai.. mein hi batha dethi hu..

Cabir- dont test our patience girls.. speak up..

Mukthi and Navya together- Riya ne Alya ko aunty kaha..!!

Everyone else- what..??

Mukthi- yes..

all of them together shared a laugh..

Alya- enough guys..!! kya mein itni moti dikthi hu that she called me that.. Dhruv tum bhi has rahe ho...??

Dhruv- nai baby... you've perfect figure..

Arya(smiling)- but alya..! seriously aunty...???

Cabir- waise bhi.. it sounds good right..! Alya aunty..!!

Alya- cabir..! stop calling me that..!

Cabir- Alya aunty.. alya aunty.. alya aunty..

she got angry and thrown a cushion on him..

he caught the cushion and shown her his tongue..

Now her anger raised and she was about to beat him...

he ran away from her..

their both tom and jerry show continued..

everyone were laughing like hell..

Riya ko aaj live cartoon show mil gaya hai.. she's enjoying too..

But Manik is still grumpy..

Sanju comes with some snacks..

Sanju- in dhono ko kya huwa..??

she asked as she found Alya pulling Cabir's hair and he's shouting in pain..

Abhimanyu explained her the scene.. she too laughed at cabir's condition...

Sanju- acha.. tum log ye snacks khalo..

everyone nodded where as manik didnt answer anything..

Sanju- Manik..! you okay..??

Manik- ji aunty..!! mujhe kuch kaam yadh aa gaya.. mein nikhaltha hu..

Dhruv- arey.. thoda dher aur rukho na buddy..

MAnik- mere yaha rehne se ya na rehne se koi pharak nahi padtha hai dhruv..

he said staring at nandu..

this time she noticed him..

before she could say anything he left..

Sanju- Nandu.! phir se jagda kiya tum dhono ne..?? tum dhono na kabhi nahi sudhoroge..!!

NAndu- mom.. par maine kuch nahi kiya hai..

Sanju- phir manik gusse me kyu chala gaya..!!

NAndu- i dont know..

Mukthi- aunty..! we'll see.. aap phikar math kijiye..

she nodded and left..

nandu handed Riya to cabir..

NAndu- guys..! ishe achanak kya huwa..??

Abhi- doll..!! I think you're at fault..

Nandu(shocked)- what did i do bhai..??

Arya- aur nahi toh kya nandu.. aaj itna special day hai tum dhono ke liye.. But you tho busy with Riya..!

Mukthi- exactly.. you didnt even spend some quality time with him..

Dhruv- bichara... subah se kitna try kar raha hai.. tumhare sath rehne ke liye..

Nandu- Omg..!! what should i do now..??

NAvya- ye tumhe patha hona chahiye..! tumhara monster hai.. hum sab se jyadha tumhi janthi ho ushe..

Nandu nodded..

later everyone dispersed to their respective homes...

Nandu too changed herself into a long anarkali and went to Malhotra Mansion along with Riya..

                                                                            (NANDU DRESS)

MALHOTRA MANSION

She entered and found Riya mom there..

MAnju- Nandini tum..??

Nandu- ji.. riya ko leke aayi hu..

MAnju- isne tumhe pareshaan toh nahi kiya na..!!

Nandu- bhilkul nahi..! she's sweet girl..

Riya smiled..

Manju- wo toh hai..!

Riya(tired)- mom.. mujhe nindh aa rahi hai..!

Manju- aww baby.. come.. eat something and sleep..

Riya- nands ne already mujhe khila diya..

Manju- you sure..??

she nodded..

MAnju- okay.. come.. mein tumhari night suit nikhalthi hu..

she turned towards nandu and spoke..

MAnju- just 5 min nandini.. will be back..

Nandu- no problem.. mein jane hi wale thi..!

Manju- Tikhe.. 

she went away with Riya..

Slowly Nandu sneaked into Manik's room but didnt found him...

she searched for him in the whole room but he is no where..

at last she found him swimming in the pool from the balcony..

she stared at him from there and thought..

Nandu pov- wow..!! so hot..!! Nandu..! itna hot ladka tumhara hero banne wala hai..! Lucky you..!!

she patted her shoulder and praised herself...

he felt someone's gaze on him and looked towards the direction..

there he found nandu staring at him from the balcony..

he gave an angry glare to her.. she smiled at him..

but he ignored her smile and continued swimming..

she frowned in angry..

Nandu pov- monster kahi ka.. kitna khadus hai.. mein bhi kam nahi hu Mr. Malhotra.. get ready to face Ms.Murthy.. Oops..! to be Mrs. Malhotra..

saying this she blushed herself..

Manik pov- ab badi aayi mujhe manane ke liye.. Ms. Murthy.. sorry to be Mrs. malhotra.. aaj tum jitna bhi try karlo mein nahi maan ne wala hu..

she came down to the swimming pool area without getting noticed by anyone..

he heard her foot steps but didnt look at her..

she came near him and cleared her throat to get his attention..

but he didnt gave her any attention which irked her..

she calmed herself and made sounds with her bangles..

he again ignored her..

she frowned in anger and shouted..

Nandu- Manikkk...!!!

he smiled a little and turned towards her..

he got amazed with her dress and completely lost in her beauty...

Manik pov- argghhh.. how can she mange to be so beautiful all the time..?

Nandu- because the eyes looking at me are beautiful.. or may be you love me in whatever dress i wear..

he frowned in confusion..

MAnik pov- ishe kaise patha chala ki mein kya soch raha tha..

to distract him from his thoughts.. she twirled around and asked..

Nandu- Manik..!! how is my dress...??

she was wearing a long pink anarkali.. Looking like a doll..

without knowing what he's doing, his legs paved him towards her slowly..

she smirked as her plan succeeded and grinned..

Manik was so lost in her and reached near her..

she bent and made an eye lock with him..

they were staring at each other for few minutes..

after that reality struck manik..

Manik pov- Manik she's trying to trap you.. 

he break the eye lock and turned to move away from her..

as he turned away nandu started acting as she fell down..

Manik(concerned)- kya huwa..??

Nandu(smiled)- kuch nai..!!

he glared at her and with force pulled her into the pool..

within seconds, she landed on the pool and her hands were resting on his chest..

Nandu(yelled)- paagal ho kya..?? mujhe bhiga diya na.. aww.. mera dress..

Manik(staring)- this is the punishment for ignoring me..

she looked at his eyes and found he's hurt..

she snaked her hands around his neck and whispers..

Nandu- sorry jaan..

he smiled a little..

Manik- you should be..

Nandu- ab toh gussa nahi hona..???


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MY WORKS:

manan- a cute love story

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