Author :@jyothi89
My review :-
The book is quite interesting. I loved it and enjoyed reading it. The author has done a very good job in keeping the grammar and spelling errors. One or two don't count. The other thing I would like to say is that the description are really good. They are neither too much, nor too little. The writing style and the language also impressed me. The summary was good too. It creates my interest. The mystery is well created and Hayden's emotions are well captured. The emotions of other characters are also well written. Kudos to you. I would love to read the other parts.
Weakness :-
Even if you are planning a sequel, please do end your previous novel satisfactorily, which is not done in the case. I could directly compare the novel's plot with the Chausiku Series by Pamela Cash (on Wattpad plus that one is published). Also long sentences in the initial chapters are annoying.
Overall rating : 8.5/10
You have the talent to be one of the best writers. Just keep doing the hardwork