manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

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My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
💃💃💃...1.5 Million Reads...!!!💃💃💃
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER- 84

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HELLO READERS..!! AGAYA MEIN EK AUR UPDATE LEKE..!!

CHALO CHALO.. JALDI PADKE BATHA DHO KAISE LAGA...!!

hAPPY readinG Fellas...!!!

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Oops..!!! I forgot to introduce Mr.Malhotra right..!!!

here we go..

presenting Sameer soni as Mr.Raj Malhotra...!!!



NOW HAPPY READING...!!!

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NAndu- Its not enough manik..! suna tum ne..! its not enough..

everyone gets startled looking at her fierce look..

Manik- par meri bath toh suno..

Nandu- Mukthi..! can you please take your friend out of my room..! i need some space..

she stressed the word friend..

Mukthi- Manik..! abhi nahi..! lets give her sometime..

they all moved out of her room..

As no one dare to bear Nandu's anger.. they accepted their defeat and left her alone..

they came down to the living room..

Manik sat in the sofa and all the time looking at nandu's room as if waiting for when'll she open the door..

Sanju- Kya kaha nandu ne..!

Mukthi- wo bahuth gussa hai aunty..!!

CAbir- mujhe laga wo act kar rahi thi..! but she's really very angry..!

Nyo- Dont worry manik..! wo maan jayegi..! Phikar math kar..!

MAnik- kaise phikar na karoon mom..! she's not feeling well beause of me..!

Raj- ab samaj me aaya..!! wow..!! happy realization manik..!!

Manik just lowered his head..

Yash and Nyo glared at raj..

Raj- look kya dhe rahe ho..! i'm with my princess..!!

YAsh- you dont worry manik..! hum sab tumhare sath hai..!!

Raj- chalo..! dekthe hai..!

Sanju- tum sab dinner nahi khaya hoga na.. chalo.. mein dinner arrange kar dethi hu..

Cabir- yeah.. mein toh

Alya cut him in between..

ALya- No aunty...! that's fine...!

Cabir whispers to alya- agar tumhe nahi khana hai toh.. math khao.. agar mein nahi khaoonga toh  bhuka pet mar jaonga yaar..!!

Mukthi(glares)- Cabir..!!

he stood silent..

Cabir- yeah aunty..! we can manage..

he said in a low tone and abhi just then gets a call..

he excused himself and attended the call..

after finishing up the call.. he joined all of them again..

Abhi- uncle..! sab log sath me hai toh.. i wanna share something..!

Yash- kya bath hai abhi..!

abhi- wo uncle...! kal hi mera aur Mukthi ka engagement hai..!!

everyone got striked that they actually forgot it..

Arya- Bhai..! we're so sorry.. nandu ki chakkar me sab kuch bhul gaya..!!

Dhruv- yeah abhi..! kuch help chahiye..? batha.. hum abhi jathe hai..!!

Abhi- chill guys..! everything is done..! dont stress up..!

ALya- Mukthi tumhara shopping..???

Mukthi- Mom ne sab kuch already arrange kar diya Alya..!

NAvya- Tumhe time pe sona chahiye... kal tum sab se beautiful toh dhikna hai..!!

Sanju and Nyo smiles looking at them..

Sanju- aap sab ki care dekh ke mujhe jald se jald nandu ki sadhi karne ka mann kar raha hai..!!

Thats it for manik..

he stood up all of a sudden and came towards sanju and yash..

Manik- uncle.. aunty.. mujhe aap logo se kuch kehna hai..!!

they knew what he wanna talk about..

YAsh- yeah manik..! go for it.. we're listening..

said compressing his smile..

MAnik- wo.. mein..

Cabir whispers to mukthi- ye aaj bhi nahi batha payega..!!

Mukthi whispers- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai..!!

RAj- YAsh..! chod dhe yaar..! Tumhe lagtha hai wo kuch batha payega..! chalo dinner karthe hai..!

MAnik closes his eyes and shouts- "I LOVE NANDU"

as there is no reaction.. he slowly opens his eyes..

everyone were shooting angry daggers at him..

and all at once started laughing..

he didnt understood...

Nyo hugs him..

Nyo- hum sab ko patha hai budhu..!!

Manik- what..??

SAnju- ha beta..! bas tum dhono confession ka wait kar raha tha..!!

MAnik- phir wo proposal and all...??

Abhi- sab drama tha dude..!

MAnik- tum sab ko bhi maloom hai..!

Alya- hmm...

MAnik- This is not fair guys..!!

RAj- everything is fair in love and war beta..!!

MAnik- dad.. mom.. i didnt expect this from you both..!!

RAj- expected reaction manik..!!

Manik- aunty uncle.. aap dhono bhi inse mile huye kya...?

yash made a help less face..

Sanju- trust me manik..! ye sara plan nyo ka tha..!!

he glares at nyo...

Raj- oye..! mere wife ko ghoorna bandh kar aur ja.. apni jaan ko manalo..!!

MAnik(smiles)- ab toh wo jhat se maan jayegi..! mein confess toh kar diya na..!

CAbir- ah aha.. you're wrong manik baba...!!

Manik- what do you mean ha..??

Mukthi- we mean, tumse pehle nandu ne apna feelings already confess kar dhiya tha..!!

Manik- what..? when...??

Raj- when you ignored my princess and left her all alone..

YAsh- Manik..! on a serious note.. this time i let you go.. but next time.. if you make my princess cry na.. then i wont spare you..!!

raj- mere hothe huye aise kabhi nahi hoga yash..!! so chill..!!

MAnik- i'm sorry uncle..! mein toh gusse me..

Nyo- har bath pe gussa karna tikh bath nahi hai manik..!!

Manik- now i got to know..!! i'm really ashamed of my behavior..

Sanju- dont be manik..!! jo huwa.. so huwa.. ab toh tumhe tumhari princess mil gayi na...!!

NAndu was listening to them from the upstairs..

actually when manik shouted and confessed..

she immediately rushed out of her room but didnt came downstairs..

she was on the heaven right now..

now no obstacles between her and manik..

she thanked the almighty some hundreds of times..

Yash found her smiling hiding from them..

Yash(shouts)- Nandu..! smile karna allowed hai..! par niche toh aaja..

everyone looks at her..

she blushes..

Navya and alya brings her to the downstairs..

Nyo and sanju side hugs her..

she was smiling all the time..

Raj and yash too side hugs manik..

Sanju- toh kal mukthi abhi ka engagement hothe hi.. manik nandu engagement ka date fix karwa dethe hai..!!

Manik looks at nandu with a winning smirk...

she again gets back to her angry mode and interrupts..

NAndu- no mom.. mujhe nahi..

Manik cuts her in between..

Manik- aunty.. dinner time...!!

nandu laughs at him.. making sure no one notice her..

Sanju- ha... ha.. chalo.. lets eat together..

Mukthi and abhi make an excuse and leave to their homes..

The elders along with nandu settles down on the dinner table..

and the youngsters adjusts themselves in the living room as lack of space in the dining table...

CAbir whispers to manik- smart move ha manik..!!

Manik whispers- nahi toh ye jhansi ki rani engagement bhi nahi hone dhegi..!!

Cabir(shouts)- jhansi ki rani..????

all the youngsters except nandu only heard him.. so they looked at cabir questioningly....

Manik immediately closes cabir's mouth with his palm..

Arya- ye jhansi ki rani bich me kaha se aa gayi...!!

MAnik- wo.. wo.. ha.. cabir ko jhansi ki rani bahuth pasandh hai na.. bas is liye yadh kar diya..!!

Navya- par hume toh nahi patha that he likes jhansi ki rani..!

Alya- mujhe bhi..!!!!

MAnik- arey khana khalo na..!! thanda ho jayega..!!

Dhruv- par buddy..!!

MAnik- dhruv..!! khane ke time bath karna achi bath nahi hai..!!

Cabir whispers- you've to pay for this..!!

MAnik whispers- nahi toh..!!

Cabir glares- nandu..!!

Nandu- kya cabir..??

MAnik pleads him with eyes..

Cabir- kuch nai..! wo dal paas kar dhena...

Manik shies in relief..

CAbir- haha..!! i'm loving this moment..!!

Manik glares at him..

soon everyone finishes their dinner and disperse..

MAnik stays back at murthy mansion..

he tried all the ways to talk with his jaan..

but she never allowed him...

as no chance is left he too get back to malhotra mansion...



PRECAP- MUKTHI ABHI ENGAGEMENT AND MANIK NANDU MANAO SESSION..!!!



#chalo..!! this time precap bhi batha diya..!!


my other ff: "manan- it hurts to hurt you"


loads of love..

sru..

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