manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

2.9M 133K 14.6K

My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
💃💃💃...1.5 Million Reads...!!!💃💃💃
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER - 44

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SORRY.. SORRY.. KAAN PAKAD KE SORRY..!! I WAS BUSY AND NOT FEELING WELL TOO..!! STILL I WAS SUFFERING... BUT I CANT KEEP YOU ALL WAIT FOR LONG TIME..!! I WAS GETTING MANY REQUESTS FROM MANY FOLLOWERS AND READERS TO CONTINUE THE STORY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE..!! SO THIS CHAPTER IS FOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO WERE WAITING FROM SO LONG..!! THANKS FOR KEEPING PATIENCE..!! AND YEAH, I DO ASKED FROM MANY PEOPLE WHETHER I WAS DISCONTINUING THE STORY.. NOPE.. I WONT STOP WRITING UNTIL YOU PEOPLE GET BORED..!! #STAY TUNED...!! MISSED YOU ALL..!!!

HAPPY READING..!!!

she pecked on his cheek and stood up..

MAnik- -arey ye kya hai...!

Nandu- aur kya chahiye...!

MAnik- wo toh tumhe patha hai...!!

nandu- mujhe kuch nahi patha MANIK..!! and bye.. i'm leaving..

before he could stop her.. she left..

he turned to the other side of the door and stamped his foot.. she came again from his back and pecked him on the other side of the cheek and ran..

manik smiles for her cute antics..

she too left to murthy mansion..

MURTHY MANSION

Nandu's pov:

oh god..!!! kal manik ka birthday hai..!! mujhe laga sab log milke use surprise dhenge..!! par kisi ko yadh bhi nahi hai...!! mein kaise yadh dhilao sabko....!! kuch kahu toh mujhe hi tease karega..!! okay..!! kal sab ke sath milke kuch plan karthe hai..!! tab tak mujhe hi kuch karna padega...!! kya karoon.. kya karoon..!! she got a plan... she got prepared to execute the plan..

immediately she called to manik..!!

phone conversation

manik's phone started ringing.. he got a bright smile looking at the caller id remembering the situation they were before some time ago..

manik- already missing me...!!!

NAndu(shy)- aisa kuch nahi hai..!!

MAnik- acha..!! toh call kyu kiya..?

Nandu(stammering)- wo.. wo.. mujhe tumse kuch bath karni hai..!!

Manik- kya bath karni hai...!! bolo..?

NAndu- phone pe nahi.. Mujhe tumse directly bath karni hai..!!

manik- is wakth..? time dekha tumne..!!

NAndu- ofcourse.. and no more discussions.. come outside... i'm waiting..

Manik- nandu.. meri bath toh..

before he could say anything she cut the call..

Manik pov- ise achanak ho kya gaya hai..!! hope everything is well..!!

he slowly went out without diaturbing others and found her outside standing in a frock which was till her knees.. he got awestruck looking at her beauty.. he was in his casuals looking handsome as usual.. (in the media box)

Manik- iradha kya hai madam..?

NAndu gave a what look to him..

Manik- do you wanna kill me with your beauty or what...!!

she blushed...

MAnik- blush karthe rahogi... ya kuch bologe bhi..!!

NAndu- ha.. ha.. come with me..!!

MAnik- come with you but where..?

NAndu- manik..!! do i ever questioned you..?

MAnik- always..!!

she glared at him..

MAnik- look kya dhe rahi ho..!! such hi toh bola hu..!!

NAndu- manik... please na..

MAnik- okay... fine.. chalo..

Nandu- come and sit in the car..

Manik- you go and sit.. i'll drive...!!

NAndu- nahi...!!! i want to drive..

MAnik- dont be stubborn nandu.. let me drive..!!

NAndu- manik please.. please..!!

Manik- okay..

Nandu- thank you.. go and sit now..

both were settled in the car.. nandu in driver seat and manik in passenger seat..

Manik- ab toh bolo.. hum ja kaha raha hai..!!

Nandu- manik..!! tum kitne impatient ho...!! thodi dher wait nahi kar sakthi..!!

MAnik- nahi..!!

NAndu- manik.. bas thodi dher aur..

he was silent through out the drive...

finally they reached the destination.. she stopped the car and asked him to get down..

he has no clue what she was upto..!!

MAnik- nandu.. atleast say it now..

NAndu- hmm.. turn to your right..

MAnik turned to his right and found nothing..

Manik- what..!!

NAndu- come with me..!!

she took an umbrella from the car..

Manik- whats the need of umbrella nandu.. its not raining either..

NAndu- soon it will be manik..!!

MAnik- tumhe ho kya gaya hai..!! ek toh itni raat ko is jagah pe le aaaya.!! aur itna sara suspenses..!!

Nandu- manik wait na..!!

MAnik- aur kitna wait karoon..?

NAndu looked at her watch and shouted HAPPY BIRTHDAY MANIK.. and hugged him tight..!!

It was a dark lonely place.. her voice got echoed.. he got surprised first.. and again kept his thoughts to a side and hugged her even tight.. 

MAnik- so tumhe yaad hai..!!

NAndu- how can i forget my monster birthday..?

MAnik- aaj bhi monster hu kya..!! asked her making a puppy face..

NAndu- aww..!! you look so cute my sweet monkey monster manik malhotra..!! said pulling his cheeks..

MAnik- thank you jaan..!!

Nandu- sirf wishes se  kush ho gayi ho kya...!! mujhe laga tumhe kuch aur cheez se khusi milthi hai..!!

he didnt understood..

MAnik- wo kya hai..?

she stepped on his foot and went closer to him making an intense eye contact with him.. he too got lost in her.. she finally reached his height and pecked on his lips.. he surprised and then responded too and deepened the kiss.. soon it started raining..!! he opened the umbrella without disturbing their kiss moment..!! the backgroung song started..!!

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2

they kissed for a long time.. they parted when they were out of breath..

Nandu- HAPPY BIRTHDAY JAAN......!!!! I LOVE YOU TILL MY LAST BREATH..!!

manik- I LOVE YOU TOO JAAN..!!! AND THANK YOU..!!

He pecked on her forehead and took her in his embrace..

NAndu- sorry manik..!!

MAnik- sorry kyu..?

NAndu- i wanted to give you a big surprise..!! but i didnt..!! said lowering her head in disappointment..

he lifted her face with his thumb

MAnik- this was the best surprise i ever had..!!

she smiled and hugged him even tight..!!!

Nandu- thank you..! come with me..!!

MAnik- ab kya..?

NAndu- offo manik...!! birthday hai..!! cake cutting toh bantha hai na..!!

she brought a cake from the car and placed it on top of the car..

she lighted the candles..

Nandu- MAnik make a wish and blow the candle..

MAnik- as you say princess..!!

both of them smiled looking at each other..!!

he closed his eyes and made a wish.. and blown the candles..

NAndu- now cut the cake..!!

he cut the cake.. she sang the birthday song..

he kept a piece in her mouth... she took a bite and made him eat.. 

naughty manik is back again...

so he took the opportunity and licked her fingers too..

she blushed.. they took a selfie together and posted in their insta account..

MANIK:

#bestbirthday #with my princess #always shine for me..!! @nandinimurthy

NANDU:

#happybirthdayjaan #stayblessed #youmeanmyworld @manikmalhotra

both of them liked each others posts..

both went to their car and sat on the car bonnet cuddling.. 

MAnik- nandu.. tum toh mere sath the na..!! toh ye kab plan kiya..? and how is that rain thing happened..?



PRECAP- MANIK BIRTHDAY CELEBRATION WITH FRIENDS AND FAMILY...!!!


#SORRY AGAIN..!!! PLEASE DO AVOID MISTAKES..!! 


LOADS OF LOVE..

SRU.. 



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