manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

2.9M 133K 14.6K

My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
💃💃💃...1.5 Million Reads...!!!💃💃💃
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER - 42

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HEY MY DEAR LOVELY READERS..!!! HOW IS EVERYONE DOING..??? I APOLOGIZE WHOLEHEARTEDLY FOR KEEPING YOU ALL WAIT FOR SOOOO LONG..!! KYA KAROON..!! VACATIONS HAI..!! ENJOY TOH KARNA PADEGA HI NA...!! AND YEAH.. I'M HAVING SUPER FUN BUT MISSING YOU ALL.. AND I CANT KEEP YOU ALL WAIT FOR LONG.. SO YOUR WAIT IS GOING TO END NOW..!!! YES... YES... HERE COMES THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR YOU ALL...!!!! A LONG CHAPTER FOR ALL OF YOU FELLAS..!!! HAPPY READING...!!! 


BOYS ROOM

All the boys were blabbering among themselves.. but our majnu manik was lost in his own thoughts.. thinking about his love..

Cabir- abey romeo.. apna lala land se bahar aa..

Manik just glared and sighed..

Dhruv- cabir..!! chod dho yaar..

Abhi- aaj kuch jyadha hi hogaya uski teasing session and all..

Cabir- tikhe.. aaj ke liye itna hi kaphi hai.. bakhi sab kal dheklenge..

Manik gave a whatever look..

all of them slept after awhile..

NEXT MORNING..

Raj- nyonika..!! mera juice...!!

Nyo- ha.. abhi lathi hu...!

she brought juice for him..

Raj- manik kaha hai..!!

Nyo- wo toh college chala gaya..! and sits next to raj..

Raj- wah bhai..!! kya bath hai..!! aaj itni jaldi chala gaya..!! 

Nyo- aap bhi na..!! and hits him with her elbow..!!

COLLEGE

Magical 9 entered the college.. all the students were praising them..

But none of the magical 9 given any heed to them and walked with attitude..

peon- principal sir aap sab ko bhula raha hai..!!

Manik- kyu..?

Peon- nujhe patha nahi sab..!!

Cabir- tikhe.. tum jao.. hum athe hai..

PRINCIPAL ROOM

Magical 9 - excuse us sir..!!

Principal- yeah.. please come in..

Alya- sir, you called us..!!

Principal- yes alya.. i wanted to praise you all for your magical performance yeaterday in the concert..

Abhi- Thank you sir..!!

Principal- any ways.. your education in SPACE is coming to an end..

Arya- yes sir...!! only 2 months left..

Principal- I'm really impressed with all of you.. hope you all get a bright future..!!

Nandu- thank you so much sir..!!

Principal- okay.. you all can leave..!!

Magical 9 left the cabin and went to jamming room..

JAMMING ROOM

Navya- arey itna dhin kaise ghujar gaye ye hume patha bhi naha chala..!!

Mukthi- ha yaar..!!

Manik- just chuck the thought of only 2 months left and lets be what we are..!!

Nandu- yes.. manik is right..

Cabir- obviouslyt wo jho bhi bholega tujhe tikh hi lagega na.. aakhir iski juliet jho hai..!!

Manik(grins)- cabirrr....!!

Cabir- ye kya hai yaar..!! Tum Nandu ka remote controller hai kya..?

Mukthi- Remote controller..??

Cabir-aur nahi toh kya..! jab bhi nandu ko kuch boltha hu toh ye respond hotha hai..!! 

Nandu blushes and hides her face blushing..

Manik- Hahaha...!! (sarcastically) pathetic joke..!!

Dhruv- guys.. calm down..

SOha enters the room..

Soha- Hello everyone..!!

Navya- tujhe kitni baar bola gaya ki aane se pehle knock kiya karo..!!

Soha- oh.. come on navya..!! dont be childish..!!

Mukthi- what do you need..??

Soha- i just came to congratulate you guys..!!

Arya- oh..!! really..!!

NAndu- come on arya.. leave it..

soha comes and hugs manik.. manik felt uncomfortable and came out of her grip..

Nandu was fuming in anger..

Soha- baby.. i'm so much impressed with your yesterday's performance..

Manik- thank you..

he observed nandu through his eye corners.. she was fuming in anger..

Soha- come.. lets go to canteen..

Without his response, she dragged him out..

On the way to canteen, manik jerked her hand and left to jamming room again..

But nandu already left from there..

Manik- nandu kaha hai..?

Abhi- wo yaha pe kyu hogi..!!

Manik- please abhi.. bolo yaar..

Alya- she already left when you went with that bloody bitch..!!

Cabir- stop it alya..!! manik, dont waste your time and go.. find her..!

Manik went to find her..

ALya- agar ye dhono aise hi jagadthe rahenge toh manik birthday ka kya..?

Dhruv- manik birthday..?

Mukthi- ha dhruv.. hum 3 ko lagtha hai ki nandu manik ka birthday bhul gayi hai..!!

Abhi- toh hum use yaad dhilayenge na..!

NAvya- mein bhi aise hi kaha..!!

CAbir- ha.. then we can say to her..

Mukthi- cabir..!! let her remind herself na.. 

Arya- agar wo bhul gayi toh..?

Mukthi- aryaman.. we can sort it out later..

Dhruv- kuch ghadbad hogayi toh..?

Alya- baby.. we can tease them na..

Abhi- manik ko tease karo.. par meri behen ko kyu..?

Mukthi- MR.Brother of nandu.. just keep calm until manik's birthday..

ABhi- tum girls na... kisi ko bhi nahi sunthe ho..!!

Cabir- wo iss janam me nahi hone wala hai abhi.. chod dho..!!

NAvya- cabir.. tum bhi na.. 

Meanwhile Manik found her at the back side of the music room.. their routine place..

Manik- Nandu..

Nandu didnt respond...

He comes and settled next to her on the stairs..

Manik- Nandu.. let me explain you..

Nandu- no need manik..

Manik- arey suno toh..!

Nandu- i said na.. no need..

he wrapped his arms around her shoulder..

Manik- Nandu.. how would i know.. she'll come and hug ma all of a sudden..

nandu- you can hug whoever you want manik..!! 

MAnik- seriously..?

Nandu- ha.. bhilkul.. jao.. soha canteen pe tere wait kar rahi hogi...!!

Manik - nandu.. stop being typical girl friend..!!

NAndu- wooo... so ab mein typical hu..!!

Manik- arey nahi baba.. mera matlab wo nahi tha..

NAndu- wo nahi toh tum bole kyu..!!

Manik- okay.. i'm sorry..!!

NAndu- tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho..?

Manik- because...

Nandu- beacuse..

MAnik- because..

Nandu jerks his hand - agar bolna hai toh bolo.. warna let me go..

she was about to leave.. he pulled her with   a jerk.. she landed on his lap..

he slowly kept her hair strands behind her ears and caressed her face.. 

Manik- nandu.. you know na.. what kind of girl is that soha..!!

NAndu- hmm..

Manik- then.. matter solved..

Nandu- If she call you, how can you go along with her manik..!!

Manik- arey baba.. tumne dekha nahi.. she dragged me.. mein thodi na gaya uske sath..

Nandu- you're not a child na manik...!!

Manik- hmm..

Nandu- hmm kya hotha hai manik..!

MAnik- aur kya bolu..

Nandu- this is my order.. from now on.. never again be close with that soha.. did you get that..?

Manik- okay my princess.. 

Nandu- better..

Manik - ab toh has lo jaan..

she smiled.. he kissed on her cheek.. both hugged for sometime..

Manik- jaan..

Nandu-- hmm..

Manik- andhar chale.. sab humare wait kar rahe honge..!!

NAndu- chalo..

both went and joined the rest..

Mukthi- ho gaya.. tum dhono ka manofying session..

Cabir- mukthi.. tumhe nahi dikh raha hai kya..!!

Alya- guys..!! what are your future plans..?

Dhruv- what happen baby..? future plans ke bare me ab kyu..?

Navya- ab nahi toh kab sochenge..?


PRECAP- MANIK TEASES NANDU FOR HIS KISS...!!!


#PLEASE AVOID MISTAKES.. ITS AN UNEDITED PART.. I APOLOGIZE IF ITS NOT UP TO  YOUR MARK OF IMAGINATION..!!


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