manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

2.9M 133K 14.6K

My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ...1.5 Million Reads...!!!πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER - 33

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GUYS.. GUYS.. NOW MY FF IS IN 100TH POSITION..!! PLEASE KEEP READING AND SUPPORTING ME..!! HERE COMES YOUR NEXT CHAPTER..!!

Everyone left from college.. MANAN left together in manik's car...

IN CAR

Nandu- manik...!! change the song na..!

Manik- nope.. i love this song..

Nandu turned her face annoyed..!!

Manik- acha baba.. tum khud hi change karlo..!!

Nandu(shouts) - thank you...!!

manik- you always make these faces and win over me...!!

She smiled..

both were enjoying their journey with some music along.. while she was making cute faces... he was just staring at her.. 

Manik- nandu..

Nandu- hmm..

Manik- aaj alya ne dhruv ko kya bol rahi thi..!!

Nandu- manik.!! mujhe kaise patha hoga..!! 

Manik- arey hum sab the na waha pe..!

NAndu- tum kis ki bath kar rahe ho..?

Manik- jab dhruv ne bola ki wo alya ke liye surprise plan kiya tha..!!

NAndu understood what he want to listen..

Nandu- ha.. yaad aaya..!!

Manik(excited)- really..!!

Nandu(casually)- yeah..

Manik- toh bolo alya ne kya kaha tha..?

Nandu(acting like thinking deep)- you are such a sweetheart dhruv..!!

MAnik- seriously nandu..!! 

Nandu(innocently)- ha..

Manik(sighed)- aur uske baad....

Nandu- uske baadh toh dhruv hugged her..!

Manik(curious)- arey us sey pehle..!!

Nandu- kya hai manik..! tum un dhono ke liye itna curious kyu ho..!! 

Manik pov- tumhe kaise samjhaoo..

Nandu- tumne kuch kaha..?

Manik- nahi toh..! tumne kuch suna kya..!!

Nandu- nahi..!! 

Manik- hmm..

NAndu- waise manik..!! i never thought that we'll sing together..!!

AMnik- mein bhi..!!

both smiled..

Manik- But it's actually happening right..!!

Nandu- yeah.. and i'm loving it..!!

Manik- chalo.. isi bath pe ek chota sa ice cream party ho jai..!!

Nandu- wow..!! icecream..!!

Manik stopped the car infront of an icecream shop and took two butterscotch..

she happily scratched the icecream from him as a cute little child..

manik already parked their car at little distance... its an empty road... they both sat on the car bonnet leaning backward to each other..

Manik- Nandu.. mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha..?

nandu- ha..  pucho na..!!

Manik- actually puchna nahi..!! sunna tha..

Nandu turns to face him.. now both were sitting next to each other holding hands..

Nandu- bolo manik..!!

Manik- i'm dying to listen those 3 magical words from you nandu..!!

nandu- wooooo... toh yeh bath hai..!

manik(anger)- nandu...!! i'm serious okay...!! 

Nandu slowly slides her hands around his neck and holds him..!!

Nandu- gussa ho...!!

Manik remained silent..

Nandu- manik..!! kuch toh bolona..!

Manik(still angry)- mein kya bolu..?

Nandu- tikhe..! just 3 days.. for those 3 magical words..!! then nandini promise.. pakka boldungi..!!

Manik- what..? 3 days..?

NAndu- manik..!! itna dhin wait kiya hai.. bas 3 dhin ki bath hi toh hai...!!

Manik lies on her shoulder.. and just hmmed..

Nandu- manik..!! how about new year day..?

Manik(excitedly)- awesome..!!

Nandu- ab toh smile karo..?

Manik- of course.. sirf 2 dhin hai..!!

Nandu- acha.. new year ka kuch plan kiya hai kya..?

MAnik- ab tak toh nahi.. par ab toh definitely plan karna padega....

Nandu(excitedly)- yeah.. we all together can have fun..!!!

Manik- we all...!! matlab..?

Nandu- arey magical 9..?

Manik(sighed)- ha.. ha.. bhilkul.. humare parents bhi honge..!!

Nandu- yeah..! how cool..!

Manik(fake smile)- haha.. no.. it's not...

Nandu(childishly)- par kyu..?

Manik- nandu... just now you said that you'll say those 3 magical words on new year day na..!!

NAndu(blushing)- ha.. toh..!! 

Manik- so only us.. no one else..!! and wrapped his hands around her shoulder like a possessive boy friend...

Nandu- wo log kya sochenge..?

Manik- wo tum mujhpe chodo..

Nandu- hmm..

Manik- so.. new year only you and me...!!!

Nandu- lets start our new beginning with this new year..!!

Manik- new relation..!!

both shared an eyelock with a smile... and lied on car bonnet facing all the stars under the moonlight..

Manik- nandu.. these stars look so cool na.. gives lot of peace..

Nandu- hmm... tumhe stars bahuth pasand hai na..!!

Manik- ha.. pasandh tha...!!

NAndu(questioned face)- ab nahi hai kya..?

Manik- ab meri shining star jo aagayi hai mere paas humesha mere sath rehne ke liye...!!

Nandu blushed..!!

Manik- am i wrong..?

Nandu- bhilkul bhi nahi..!!

Manik- so you'll never leave me na....!!

Nandu- never..!!! both hugged each other..

NAndu- manik..!! its too late.. i think hume ghar jana chahiye..!!

Manik- nahi na nandu..!! abhi toh aaya tha..!

Nandu- no manik...!! everyone will be worried.. so lets go..!

MAnik- hmm.. chalo..

both left to home..

He dropped nandu outside her mansion..

she stepped out from the car and went to manik's side..

Manik- sooo...

nandu- so...

Manik- goodnight bhi nahi bologe..!

Nandu- okay... goodnight...!!

MAnik- aise..?

Nandu kissed him on his cheek and whispers goodnight in his ears..

Manik- goodnight jaan..!!

she blushes and ran inside her mansion..

he touched his cheek where she kissed and  ruffled his hair blushing..!

He was still there at the outside of her home..

she came to have a look on him through window.. he was still there..

she waved him bye.. he too smiled and waved back and then left to his home..!!



PRECAP- BOTH THE FAMILIES PLAN FOR NEW YEAR.. MANAN DISAPPOINTED..!!


#HAPPY READING AND STAY COOL...!!


LOADS OF LOVE.. <3 <3

SRU..




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