manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

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My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 25
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ...1.5 Million Reads...!!!πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER - 31

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THANK YOU EVERYONE ONCE AGAIN AND THODA LATE HUWA UPLOAD KARNE ME.. HERE COMES THE 10TH UPDATE OF THE WEEK... AS I PROMISED, ITS A LONG UPDATE FOR YOU GUYS.. HAPPY READING..!!!


MAnik- saale bacho jaise behave math karna..!!

CAbir- wo kya hai na manik uncle..!! hum bacho ko sab kuch bacho jaise bathe hi atha hai..!!

everyone chuckles..

Manik- tujhe toh mein nahi chodunga.. saale rukh..!!

both were running and suddenly manik bumped into a girl....!!

she lost her balance and was about to fall but he hold her in time.. he was lost in her eyes..

and it was none other than NANDINI MURTHY..(nahi toh aap log mujhe nahi chodenge na.. ;-))

she just then came to meet fab 5 and share the soha incident with them.. while coming she bumped into him in hurry..!!

both of their trance was broken by cabir fake cough..!!

Cabir- ahem ahem..!!

both straightened themselves.. and manik glared at him..

Cabir- abey mujhe kyu ghoor rahe ho..!!

He gave whatever look to cabir.. and nandu stood blushing..

Manik- nandu.. tum tikh toh hona..?

Cabir- kyu nahi hogi..!! use bachane ke liye uska hero always ready hota hai na...!!

fab 4 chuckles.. she was blushing so hard that her face turned into complete red..

Manik- tu chup bey..!!!

NAndu- yeah.. i'm okay..!!

Cabir- wo hume patha hai..!

Mukthi- cabir..!!! kabhi toh bandh kar apna teasing session..!!

ALya- (smiling)- yeah cabir..!! look at nandu face.. its just like giving a competition to a red tomato...

EVeryone smiles.. nandu hides behind manik and blushes..

Manik- stop playing with her guys..

Dhruv- but when did we play with her..!!

Manik- buddy.. tum bhi..

Mukthi- okay guys.. stop it..!

Manik(to nandu)- waise tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?

Nandu- wo.. i came to meet you guys...!!(avoiding everyone's eye contact)

Cabir- to meet us or to meet....?

Manik- cabirrrrr...!!!

Cabir- okay.. cool..!

NAndu- i came to meet you all..

Mukthi- yeah.. chalo canteen pe chal ke bath karthe hai..!!

Dhruv- phir practice..?

Mukthi- dhruv.. tujhe seriously lagtha hai.. is cabir ki bacha rehne tak hum practice kar payenge...!!

Cabir- oye,..!! what did i do..?

Alya- cabir.. cabir.. cool down..!!

Manik- lets go guys..!!

everyone headed to canteen..

soha is already there..

Manik was sitting next to nandu wrapping his hand around her shoulder...

Soha- hai manik..!!

everyone gave a deathly glare to her...

Manik- hai...!! (in not so interested tone)

Soha- can i join you guys...?

NAndu- nahi..!! (in serious tone)

Soha- i didnt ask you ms.Nandini murthy..!!

Nandu- but i said to you Ms.Soha varma..!! (said confidently)

everyone chuckles...

Soha- manik tum ise kuch bolthe kyu nahi ho..?

Manik- tune suna nahi nandu ne kya kaha..!!

Soha nodded her head in disbelief and left..

everyone high fied themselves and laughed... had fun for sometime..

later on everyone dispersed to home..

manik and nandu left in one car and everyone else left in their respective vehicles..

IN CAR

Manik- nandu.. 

Nandu- hmm..

Manik- i must say now a days you became so bold ha..!!

Nandu- bold toh mein hu hi....!!

Manik- why do you fight with that soha all the time..?

Nandu- oh.. hello.. ladthi mein nahi hu.. wo ladthi hai mujh se..

Manik- jo bhi hai.. finally jeethegi tuhi na..!!

Nandu- do you mean to say ki i'm arrogant..?

Manik- arey baba.. maine aisa thodi na bola...!!

Nandu- and why are you supporting her..??

Manik- i just mean to say ki tum us se dhur rehna..!! she behaves like a pschyco..!!

Nandu- toh..!! mein bhi strong hu... 

Manik- oh god..!! tum girls na..!! itna difficult kyu hothe ho..?

NAndu- difficult hum nahi.. difficult tum log ho..!!

Manik- acha baba.. leave it na..  why are we fighting..?

Nandu- shuru kis ne kiya..?

Manik- okay.. i'm sorry..!!

Nandu- good...!! waise bhi us soha se mujhe bachane ke liye tum ho na..!! 

Manik smiles..

Manik- after all you're my girl..!!! nandu blushes..

MAnik- kab tak aise blush karthe rahogi..? tumhare chehra dekho..!! kitna laal ho gaya hai..!!

 both smiles for their childish behaviour..

they reached home in no time..

Manik- tum bhi andhar aona..!! you can go later..!!

Nandu- but mom..!!

Manik- mein hoon na..!

MALHOTRA MANSION

Nyo- wow..!! you both together..!!

Nandu- yes aunty...!!

Manik- mom..!! 

Nyo- yeah manik..!!

Manik- my green tea..!!

Nyo- i'll get it.. nandu.. tum kya loge..?

Nandu- juice aunty...!!

Nyo- okay.. you both have a talk.. i'll just be back..!!

Nandu- okay aunty..

nyonika comes back with green tea and juice..

Nandu- thank you aunty..!!

Nyo- waise manik..!! is baar bhi concert pe group me perform karoge kya..?

Manik- obviously..!! why did you ask so..?

Nyo- i think this time na... you both perform together...!!

Manik- who both..?

Nyo- arey.. you both..!!

MANAN- what...!!

Nyo- tum dhono aise kyu react kar rahe ho...?

Nandu- no aunty.. we had a band.. and we perform together in every concert.. so..

Manik- yeah.. exactly mom..!!

Nyo- par all the time same performance kyu..!! try something different na..!

Manik- jaise..!!

Nyo- do one thing.. both the bands perform together..!!

Nandu- idea bura nahi hai aunty..!!

Nyo- of course... and you two bands rock individually... so if you both bands mingle it'll be a magical performance..!!

Manik- i second that mom.. par wo log kaise manenge..!!

Nandu- dont worry manik.. wo bhi maan jayenge..!!

Manik- how can you be so sure..?

Nandu- because they are our friends and they can understand..!! i think they will be happy too..!!

Manik- but we've to give a test tomorrow right..!!

Nandu- we can practice na..!!

Manik- time kaha hai..!!

Nyo- dont you know.. the test will be for individual.. not as a band..!!

Nandu- cool then.. we can manage further..! what say manik...?

Manik- agar tum dhono bol rahe ho toh tikhe hai..!!

Nandu- hurray..!!

Nyo- all the best..!!

they discussed and after some time nandu left to her home..

MURTHY MANSION

Nandu- hai mom.. and hugs her..

Sanju- why so late nandu..?

Nandu- i came long back mom.. but went to meet nyonika aunty..

Sanju- tikhe.. go and freshen up..

Nandu- okay mom..!!

NANDINI ROOM 

she freshened herself.. 

Nandu(pov)- ek bar manik se bath karthi hu kal ke bare me..

she dialed his number..

Manik- hello jaan..!! 

Nandu(blushes)- wah..!! kya bath hai..!! sir bahuth ache mood me hai..

Manik- wo kya hai na.. abhi abhi mujhe bahuth acha news mila tha..!!

Nandu- aur wo kya tha..!!

Manik- bath ye hai ki kal hum dhono sath me perform karenge..!! and i'm so excited..!!

Nandu- hmm..

Manik- kya hmm.. aren't you happy..?

Nandu- arey manik..! i'm excited too.. but we've to inform our friends right..!!

Manik- lets do it now..!!

nandu- now..!! kaise..!!

Manik- Ms.EInstein conference call..?

Nandu- yeah..

he kept fab 4 in conference and nandu kept nh3..

CAbir- whats up manik..!!

Abhi- cabir tum bhi conference me ho..!!

Mukthi- abhi tum..?

Manik- guys,.. guys.. relax.. nh4 and fab 5 are in conference.. so dont get confused..!!

Alya- oh.. cool..!!

Dhruv- par huwa kya tha..?

Nandu- kuch nahi dhruv..!! mujhe aur manik ko tum sab se kuch share karna hai..!!!

Cabir- tum dhono ka shadi fix ho gayi hai kya..?

Everyone except manan- what..?

Manik- cabirr...!! tu chup kar..

Nandu- guys.. the thing is this concert me hum sab sath me perform karenge..!!

ARya- sath me kyu nandu..

Manik- all the time we perform in different bands na.. this time lets do it in a different way..!!

Mukthi- idea bura nahi hai..!!

Navya- par kal test ke liye hum sab prepare kaise honge...!!!

Nandu- navya, nyonika aunty said that the test is for individual..!! 

alya- matlab..!!

Manik- we've to perform individually alya...

Cabir- cool then..!!

manik- so you all are in right..?

Everyone- yes...!!!

Nandu- wow..!! that's great..!!

Dhruv- so finally singing together..!!

Abhi- i'm so excited bro..!!

ALya- me too..!!

Arya- so, all the best to us..!!

Mukthi- yep..!!

CAbir- kal bath karthe hai.. bye..!!

Everyone- bye.. goodnight..!!


  PRECAP- NH4 AND FAB5 PRACTICE TOGETHER..!!


#avoid mistakes.. its an unedited part.. so here i fulfilled my promise of 10 updates.. are you all happy...??????


loads of love

sru...








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