manan- a cute love story

By sruthilaya13

2.9M 133K 14.6K

My very first fanfiction story: #1 in #fanfiction on 09/05/2016 for a week & again on 09/06/2016 more than a... More

INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
NEED A REPLY
THANK YOU
CHAPTER 3
ALERT
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER-6
CHAPTER-7
CHAPTER-8
CHAPTER-9
CHAPTER-10
CHAPTER-11
CHAPTER-12
CHAPTER- 13
CHAPTER - 14
CHAPTER - 15
CHAPTER - 16
CHAPTER - 17
CHAPTER - 18
CHAPTER - 19
CHRISTMAS + WEEKEND BONANJA
CHAPTER - 20
CHAPTER - 21
CHAPTER - 22
CHAPTER - 23
CHAPTER - 24
CHAPTER - 26
CHAPTER - 27
CHAPTER - 28
CHAPTER - 29
CHAPTER - 30
HAPPINESS OVERLOADED
CHAPTER - 31
CHAPTER- 32
CHAPTER - 33
CHAPTER- 34
CHAPTER- 35
CHAPTER - 36
CHAPTER- 37
HURRAH...!!!
CHAPTER - 38
CHAPTER - 39
CHAPTER - 40
CHAPTER - 41
MY FF IN 3RD POSITION
EXCUSE ME....!!!
CHAPTER - 42
CHAPTER - 43
CHAPTER - 44
CHAPTER - 45
CHAPTER - 46
No.2
ANOUNCEMENT
CHAPTER - 47
Har ek friend zaroori hotha hai
CHAPTER - 48
CHAPTER- 49
CHAPTER- 50
CHAPTER - 51
CHAPTER - 52
CHAPTER - 53
200k SPECIAL....!!!
CHAPTER- 54
NOTICE
CHAPTER - 55
CHAPTER - 56
KAISE LAGA NEW VERSION...??
CHAPTER - 57
HOW TO ADD PICTURES...???
CHAPTER - 58
MY FF IN INDIA FORUMS..!!
NEW STORY
CHAPTER- 59
CHAPTER - 60
CHAPTER - 61
CHAPTER - 62
SURPRISE GIFT..!!!!!
CHAPTER- 63
CHAPTER - 64
CHAPTER- 65
CHAPTER - 66
CHAPTER - 67
OUR WEEKLY SCHEDULE...!!
New cover
CHAPTER - 68
VOTINGS.....!!!
CHAPTER - 69
NO.1....!!!
CHAPTER- 70
CHAPTER- 71
CHAPTER- 72
CHAPTER- 73
CHAPTER- 74
READ AGAIN...!!!
SRU IS BACK...!!!!
CHAPTER- 75
CHAPTER- 76
400K+.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 77
CHAPTER- 78
CHAPTER- 79
CHAPTER- 80
WISH MY BROTHER...!!!
CHAPTER- 81
CHAPTER- 82
No.1 & 500k+ views.....!!!!
CHAPTER- 83
BACK TO INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER- 84
CHAPTER- 85
BAD NEWS..!!
!...LOOF LIRPA
CHAPTER- 86
WILL BE BACK SOON...!!
STOP BASHING.. START LOVING..!!!
CHAPTER- 87
CHAPTER- 88
CHAPTER- 89
CHAPTER- 90
CHAPTER- 91
PLAY A GAME..!!!
NOMINATIONS...!!!
CHAPTER- 92
PLAY A GAME -2...!!!
700K.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER - 93
CHAPTER- 94
CHAPTER- 95
NO.1 In Fanfiction....!!!!
CHAPTER-96
CHAPTER- 97
CHAPTER- 98
IMPORTANT NOTE...!!
CHAPTER- 99
900K+ VIEWS & 10K FOLLOWERS...!!!
BACK TO REGULAR UPDATES..!!
CHAPTER- 100(A)
CHAPTER- 100(B)
CHAPTER- 100(C)
******!!!...."1 MILLION READS"...!!!!! ******
MY YOUNGER BROTHER BIRTHDAY BASH..!!!
CHAPTER- 101
FEEDBACK TIME...!!!
NEW COVER.....!!!!!!
CHAPTER- 102
DECISION MAKING..!!!
CHAPTER- 103
MY FIRST INTERVIEW...!!!
PROMO...!!!
HAPPY 50TH BIRTHDAY DAD...!!!
CHAPTER- 104
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY....!!!
PROMO..!!
CHAPTER- 105
CHAPTER- 106
SOME FUN TIME...!!!
CHAPTER- 107
Ganapati Bappa Maurya...!!!
PROMO..!!
UPDATE WANTING WANTING....???
CHAPTER- 108
CHAPTER- 109
PLAY A GAME 3...!!!
DOLL NITI TAYLOR's BIRTHDAY BASH...!!!
PROMO...!!!
CHAPTER- 110
Interview No.2...!!!
SANGEET OUTFITS...!!!
CHAPTER- 111
1+1+1...!!!
CHAPTER- 112
CHAPTER- 113
TIME FOR ALVIDA..!!!
CHAPTER- 114
CHAPTER- 115
💃💃💃...1.5 Million Reads...!!!💃💃💃
Thanksgiving..!!!
Impress your Writer...!!!
New Book Arrival...!!!
BOOK-2 Coming soon..!!
New Story Updated..!!
GENERAL FICTION..!!
let's interact..???

CHAPTER - 25

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GUYS, ITS 40K VIEWS.. THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE FOR YOUR LOVELY SUPPORT..!!! AND MERRY CHRISTMAS..!!! 4TH UPDATE IS HERE.. HAPPY READING MY DEAR FELLAS..!!!

Manik reached amms home..

Manik(pov)- you can do it manik.. uhh..

he rang the bell...

servant opened the door..

Servant- manik baba.. aap..?

Manik- ha.. aap kaise ho..?

Servant- mein achi hu.. aap andhar aayiye..!

Amms- rama(servant).. kaun hai..?

Servant- ji.. manik baba hai..!

Amms comes to him..

Amms- manik beta..! tum..?

Manik- jiii amms... how are you..?

AMms- i'm fine beta..!! tum kaise ho..?

Manik- super cool amms..!!

amms- how come you are here all of a sudden..?

Manik(stammering)- wo bas aise hi aaya tha amms..!!

Amms- tikhe kanna.. tum jao aur fresh ho jao.. mein tumhe badh me miltha hu.. 

Manik- tikhe amms..

Amms- rama.. manik ka acha se khyal rakhna,,..!!

SErvant- ji amma..

amms left..

Servant- baba.. chaliye aap ko room tak chod detha hu..

Manik- tikhe par.. nandu kaha hai...?

Servant- wo apni kamre me hai baba..!!

Manik- acha... tikhe..!!

Servant- ye raha aap ka room.. agar aap ko kuch chahiye ho toh hume batha dijiye,..

Manik- hmm..

rama left..

Manik(pov)-  manik ab jao ya nahi jao..! koi bath nahi.. ek bar jake toh dekthe hai uska reaction.. bakhi sab badh me dekhthe hai..!!

manik sneeked into nandu's room.. she was sitting in the couch closing her eyes and listening to the music...

manik slowly reached her..

Manik- nandu..!!

she quickly opened her eyes and shocked..

Nandu(shouted)- tum...!!!

Manik- ha.. mein...!

Nandu- tum yaha kaise...?

Manik- i think i should ask that question.. why did you come here all of a sudden..?

Nandu- tumse matlab..!!

Manik- nandu.. meri bath toh suno..!

Nandu- mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai..!

Manik- nandu... please na..!

Nandu- maine kaha na.. mujhe nahi sunni hai..!

Manik- why are you being so stubborn..?

Nandu- acha.. mein stubborn hu toh tumhara kya..!!

Manik- mera kya..?

Nandu- mr.manik malhotra.. kal tum kis tarah se chilla rahe the.. sab kuch bhul gaye ho kya..?

Manik(stammering)- ha... wo gusse me bol diya..!

Nandu- seriously manik..!! gusse me kuch bhi bol dhoge kya..?

Manik- nandu.. i'm sorry na..!

NAndu- sorry not accepted mr.malhotra..!!

Manik- so, ms.murthy.. tumhe cool karne ke liye mujhe kya karna hoga..?

Nandu- just get lost from here..!!

MAnik- nandu.. i'm apologizing na,..

Nandu- i dont need your apology..!

Manik- nandu.. please ek bar suno na..!!

Nandu- will you go out or should i..?

Manik- jab tak tum mera apology accept nahi karoge, tab tak mein kahi nahi jane wala.. 

Nandu(stamping her foot)- fine.. i'm leaving..!!

Manik- nandu.. rukho na..!!

she left and manik face palmed..

NIGHT

Amms returned home..

Amms- rama,.. nandu aur manik ko dinner ke liye bhulao..!

Rama- ji amma..

both manik and nandu comes and sits opposite to each other and are silent..

Amms understood something is wrong between them..

amms- toh manik beta.. you are comfortable na..!!

MAnik- ji amms..

Amms- nandu.. tum kuch kha kyu nahi rahe ho..?

nandu- kha raha hu amms..!

throught out the dinner both of them were silent..

after finishing dinner, nandu excused herself and left to her room.. manik was about to leave too. .but amms stopped..!

Amms- manik..!!

manik- yes amms..!

amms- tum dhono ke bech sab kuch tikh hai na..!!

Manik(stammering)- ji amms.. aap aise kyu bol rahe ho..?

amms- apni amms se bhi jhut bologe..?

manik gave up..

Manik- actually we both fought..!! (he said lowering his head)

Amms- what..? jagada kiya....!! par kyu..?

manik- wo mein aap ko badh me bathatha hu.. aap pehle mera help ki jiye na amms.. please..

Amms- konsa help beta..?

Manik- mujhe nandu ko manana hai..!

Amms- bas itni si bath..!! i know how to cool her,..!

Manik- really amms.. please mujhe bhi bathadho na...!!

amms gave him a suggestion.. he gave a winning smirk and left..!!

NANDINI ROOM

Manik knocks the door.. nandu without looking at the door..

Nandu- amms..!! aap knock kyu kar rahe ho.. aayiyena..

Manik starts singing...

"lal lal girl.. jaise tamatar..!!

nandu ka gussa chad gaya chath par...!!

kaise manaoo use lagtha hai dar..!!

kahogi toh royegi wo bhalti bhar bhar....!!! 

lal lal girl.. jaise tamatar..!

nandu ka gussa chad gaya chath par...!!"

Nandu smiles and hugs him.. he too hugs her tightly and twirls her around..

Nandu- tumhe ye gana kaise patha hai...!!

Manik- bas patha hai..!!

Nandu- manik..!! bolo na please..!!

Manik- acha.. tikh hai baba...!! aur kaun bathayega.. amms ne bathaya,,..!!

Nandu- ye toh hum dhono ka secret hai..!! tumhe kyu bathaya hai..!!

Manik- because she want to help me..!!

NAndu- smart ha...!!! and hugs him..

both settles in the balcony on the floor cuddling each other..

manik wrapped his arms around her.. nandu was playing with his hands..

Manik(caressing her hair)- nandu..

Nandu- hmm..

Manik- tum ab gussa toh nahi hona..!!

NAndu- bhilkul bhi nahi..!! he smiles...

Manik- acha.. ye bolo.. tum achanak mangalore kyu aagaye...!!!

Nandu- tum kal mera phone kyu nahi uta rahe the..!!

Manik- you know na.. i was angry then..

Nandu- mein bhi.. is liye amms ke paas aagayi..!!

Manik- aage se aisa kabhi math karna.. do you know how much scared i was..!!

NAndu- you too dont shout on me aage se..

Manik- hmm.. aur apna phone bhi kabhi bandh nahi rakhna..!!

NAndu- tikhe baba.. aur kuch..?

Manik- abhi ke liye itna hi kaphi hai..!!



PRECAP- MANAN TOGETHER IN MANGALORE...!!!! 


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