it's a mess!

By chynaqueen

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DISCLAIMER: this story was written when I was young and has faults. Was going to edit it and re-upload but I... More

its a madting.
Grown up?
Changing Slowly.
Think carefully
Can't believe it!
Moving on.
WTF?!
WTF-part 2
mad gyal?
change;is it good or bad?
Trying
party-part 2
Shit!
The unexpected.
Lord why?
Fucked up#
Thankful ;
Starting fresh?
shit den
Stepping Forward.
Okay or nah?
Lol. Roll safe
Allow it mate
Calm
Ayla?!
Sad
21st. ~reminiscing.

party-part 1

59 9 1
By chynaqueen

chapter 10#part1
shanay:party party today wake upp
kyla:ahh u lotss
me:someone better go bade
ayla:tru I'm first
Chantel:second!
Ayla got her shit and went to my bathroom
I layed down for a bit. then got up and stretched then I went downstairs to get food. btw it's like around 12 so yh party starts at 7 calmmmm. anyway I toasted a pitter bread and made my self some lemon and ginger tea. half tea spoon of sugar. I want to be healthy.
anyways I ate up all my food then kyla and shanay came down to make their food. I walked back upstairs.
I went to see my mum
I opened her door
me:hey mum thanks for letting my friends stay over
mum:no problem sweetie , how r u
she said as she rubbed my stomach
me:I'm good and so is the baby
mum:alright, well I got an email from the doctors. u have an appointment on Sunday
me:um okay. what they gonna check
mum:well ur gonna get ur first scan then they gonna check on the baby to see how it is and you
me:oh itee. but why after I go partying for.
mum:dw just be safe and healthy and everything will be fine.
me: ok

I hugged her and left her room.
I walked towards my room I could hear
partynextdoor-Persian rugs
playing and the shower on. I went in my room got my hygiene things got clothes then I went towards darnels room
me: let me use ur shower mines in use
darns:gwarn
me:kl
I did my hygiene and stuff then I put on a black and white adidas tracksuit with a white vest top underneath. not forgetting my belly tucker. I combed and greased my hair. then I used my edge control to slick my hair up into a messy bun my hair was sticking out a bit cause it wasn't perfectly slicked just slightly. it looked nice anyway cause my hair is kinda long. I looked at my self in the mirror then did my eyebrows and added mascara to my eyelashes and pink Vaseline to my lips . then I looked at my self my breast are getting bigger by the day fml. I took a couple of pics with my iPhone 6 then came out the bathroom Darnel wasn't in his room and he left his phone up here then I heard the sound he got a message. it was from jay : yea , ur sisters good for me still

I smiled at that he had hella other messages and shit but that caught my eye. I pressed the lock button at the top but before I did. I took a selfie with my tongue out. I ak looked buff .
I went back to me room. we were all wearing adidas tracksuits
kyla:light blue and black
ayla:dark blue and white
Chantel:purple and black
shanay:red and white.
me: black and white.
we all wore either a white top or a black top we were all rocking different styles. when everyone was complete. we all wore adidas superstars. I wore white and black ones
kyla wore light blue supercolours
chantel wore black superstars
shanay wore red supercolours
Ayla wore dark blue and white sude ones.

we was all looking buff. by the time we was all ready it was around 3 . then we all left to the nail shop. after that we decided to go nandos. I swear it hit the belly once more. sexyness it was live tho. then we got back to mines to get ready. I got out the dress I got from vibe it was a sundress but was heart shaped and no sleeves it showed off my figure. I wore my belly tuck thing. it had slits on either side wso I wore black shorts underneath. my dress it red and black. my tits looked nice negl. and my piercing looked sexy I did my make up wearing bright red lip gloss which had a cherry flavor. I added more mascara. then I combed my hair out and did a side parting then slicked up the sides and loose curled my hair. I looked buff. I was wearing black heels which was red on the bottom and the heel is half gold. I was in the second floor bathroom cah my room is too pack up Darnel went out he said hes not coming home till the party is over. he's doing tings rn. I went to my room dem lots were slaying
shanay: blue ripped battyriders with boob tube top. covered in lace designs it was white. her heels were white. it was boot heels. woiiii sexy tings ah gwarn
Chantel:a see through belly top (it didn't expose her ) which she wore with a matching pencil skirt it was see through at the bottom her outfit is black btw. she wore wedged black and silver heels. it's ak buff
kyla:a pink belly top. with a dark blue skater skirt her bum lifted it at the back but she wore blue shorts underneath. then pink heeled jellys. she looked cute and leng
ayla: a turtle neck it was a dark green goodish color but it was cut on her cleavage like a squashed diamond. it's a dress. that comes up to her knees. she wore gladiator heels in black. it's buff tho

i swear when we turn up we turn upp shitt.

6:30. everyone's hair is done except shanay and Ayla
chantels hair was in a high ponytail with a middle parting. it suits her bare .
kylas hair was in natural curls all out it's nice cause she dyed some of her hair honey brown
shanay finished her Malaysian weave was in tight curls and it had a side parting. it looks like her real hair tho cause hers is blended in on top. she looked nice with a gold spectrum piercing.
aylas hair was straightened with a middle parting. her hairs jet black with bright red dip dyed ends. it suited her bareee.

we all got our stuff seen as it's December everyone had the long furr jackets. there's a cloak room anyways. we got there at 7:02and it was pack upp outside and this is only the beginning wow.

we squeezed our way through inside we walked towards the far corner there were seats round there. we all took pics of and with each other. and we got someone in the party to take a pic of all of us. the pic of all of us I uploaded it on insta and tagged all of them got hella comments and that raah. the music that was playing in the background stopped it's now 7:15
mya was on the stage.
mya:hey everyone thanks for coming to my party. I don't want no arguments or fights in here thanks. now enjoy.
everyone clapped and cheered then the music went straight to bashment

ben ova Ben ova Ben ova back ways back ways.
tbh I went to the bar to get a drink but I caught jay with his friends and dat blick ting.
I was walking pass and I felt a hand grab me I turned around and it was Mario standing with mason
me:hey twins
I hugged them.
Mario:u gd b u look buff btw
me:thanks. y ain't u controlling a gyal
Mario:lemme control u den.
he said whilst coming behind me
me:oh my gosh Mario get off me.
I said struggling to get off him but he got tighter.
but then mason clocked and got him off me. now cos of that I went to get a drink from the bar. only lambrini cah it's not that strong I backed it then walked towards jay again.
ramping shop came on
every man grab a gal

jays pov:
and every gal grab a man.

I caught sight of chanel walking towards me. I walked quickly towards her. kissed her then bent her ova shit she was going ham. na I lied we were going ham. the amount of times we changed position. this is my baby. when the song finished. then we heard
sink in yuh back
tek ur time and look pon di man yuh ah wine pon
then the beat went. chanel went in my dick was hard . she was dancing like mad she lifted up her dress and was bruking out in shorts raahhh

shakai's pov;

party is maud up. I saw chanel bruking out on that same yute. y she his for? and that Olivia ting ik she's some big sket. but she don't know that ik. some next girl is bruking out on me rn. hmm

Chantel's pov;

me and my boo go in idc
Tankz: yess b gwaarn

I was just creasing.
then I caught eyes with the rest of the squad then we heard kotch we made our way to the middle. then we started doing the whole routine to the song we go in idc. there was a circle surrounding us.

darnel's pov;

raah my sister and her squad go hard. bare man preeing my sister and I don't like that lol but anyways I went up to her and put my arm around her she introduced me to her friends
nels:this is Chantel , shanay , kyla & ayla. u lots this is my twin Darnel
shanay:he ak looks like u bare
kyla: lol trus
me:yh. up two r twins inih
kyla&ayla:yh
me:ite. someone take a pic of me and chanel.
as we did our poses my boys came towards me. me and chanel took hella pics it was kl. then my bros jumped in. chanel was in the middle of me and jay. her friends went off somewhere. when cript came shanay went with him chanel told me they've been doing a ting for 2 years. raah mad klipz and Tankz came with Plemz and leakz . velly came with rando it was mad tho. I felt tension between Klipz and my twin. idk y
chanel:I'm going outside qwick yh
Jay: ite b
they lipsed and that bare hugging.
she laughed when she saw my face and patted my back. lol k. Sasha said she was gonna come.

sasha's pov;

I was with my girls dancing and that then I caught eye of some girl taking pics with my man. she's pretty but idc. propa bening ova in front of him and that. then she slapped him in the face playfully. then they hugged. wtf y she on my man I went to get a drink of Rosé then when I came back she was routing outside
me: iy u lots come. I need to go tell a bitch a lesson
Patrice:why wait is she the one that was up on darns
keelia:na u don't say.
we made our way outside. she was in some corner on the phone. she didn't see us coming cos she was putting away her phone. I ran up to her and pushed her down she banged keelia in her face then I started kicking her hard. Patrice was giving her blows to her face. but then the bitch kicked me in my belly then I thumped her in her belly I carried on banging her on her body until she didn't fight back. she was curled in a ball. I left her and went back to the party trying to be normal I tried to avoid Darnel all night. then I went on his insta and saw the pics he took with the girl. love these. laughing face emoji and a red heart. I saw the comments. rah u lots look alike , bros love heart emoji-I'm guessing that was her.
hella more but icba.
Idk if I did the wrong thing or what.

shakais pov;
I went out side to go smoke I was just walking around then I saw something from the corner of my eyes I heard soft cries. I looked over it was chanel.
me:chanelllll
I dropped my spliff
she was covered in blood. her eyes wernt open. she was bleeding bare from her pussy. is my baby gonna make it. I called the ambulance with in 3 mins they were here. that's kinda long tho.
I went in with her and say holding her hand I squeezed it but it felt lifeless but she was alive. she was connected with hella tubes. when we got there I had to wait in the waiting room as they operated on her. I was thinking deep. What if she's not okay? What about my yute? 20minutes through that doctor came out
doctor:family of Chanel Tamiyrah Simmons?
He looked around. I signalled him by nodding so he came over to me speaking at a level that I could only hear him.
Doc:I'm sorry but she lost -
me: ok bye.
I got up came out the hospital. my first fucking baby. who ever did this is gonna pay. why would they do this in the first place ? anyhow it got something to do with her man. cha kmt. When Chanel wakes up she's going to be devastated but I'm not staying until she gets up. Can't deal with all her cries and shit. Especially cos she's not my responsibility anymore even though I slyly still care for her.
I went back to the party all moody and shit. I just drank away my problems.

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