it's a mess!

By chynaqueen

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DISCLAIMER: this story was written when I was young and has faults. Was going to edit it and re-upload but I... More

its a madting.
Grown up?
Changing Slowly.
Think carefully
Moving on.
WTF?!
WTF-part 2
mad gyal?
change;is it good or bad?
Trying
party-part 1
party-part 2
Shit!
The unexpected.
Lord why?
Fucked up#
Thankful ;
Starting fresh?
shit den
Stepping Forward.
Okay or nah?
Lol. Roll safe
Allow it mate
Calm
Ayla?!
Sad
21st. ~reminiscing.

Can't believe it!

99 11 1
By chynaqueen

chapter 3 #part 2

Shakais pov;;

I went to the block where everyone was. and it's a bit strange coz everyone was there. I'm talking the whole gang and the other 2 we were joint with.

plemz:somebody took their time

me: iy don't start I'm pissed already.

Tankz: so u saw the video then

me: mmm

velly: u lot. the time!

everyone started getting ready. 20 minutes later we was all blacked out. plemz had a mac a gun and a couple other weapons. everyone had a shank on them most ppl had a gun. I wore two gloves over my levers.

we set out to the streets. got in the cars. and drove to the other side

Chanels pov;

I've been worried sick. it was now after 11. Shakai left here at 7. my stomach was turning differently. a tear shed down my face. I called shanay cos she always puts up with corys mess like this.

shanay:hellooo....chanelllaaa

me:...oh

..hi

shanay:ok what's up?

me:it's shakai

shanay:what's wrong?

me: he's going to kill Maxwell.

I blurted out. I was bare shaking

shanay:shit shit shit. but wait. is he after Temps gang.

me:yeah..that is Maxwell

shanay:thats the same gang Corys after . shit he's gone too. but he's gone for the oldas

me:oh what's his tag ?

shanay:Cripts

me: ooooohh. that was Cory all along shit!loool he's in the songs shakai listens to.

shanay:lol ik that's their gang.

me: so what do I do

shanay: don't get involved stay away. go to ur mum's or something

me: ite kl. thanks bye.

Shanay:yh b bye

locked off. *

I apps my mum and told her im coming home. but she's at work so I have to cook. idem. I miss home. kinda...

Maxwell's pov;

everyone is here on the block couple people others that were linked with but this isn't the full one. anyway our videos out and apparently they're coming after us. ok den it's been two days where they at?

y.shotz: Temps!

me:yh?

y.Shotz: dem man are on dere way.

me:ite Kl. wait. which man

y.shotz: the paigon dem.

me: ohh say narda.

everyone got out dere weapons. I have a broom dats it. I was holding shanks pole where is he doe?

Aylas pov;

I was in Nandos with Shanks. he payed for everything. we had a fun. talked about hella things. more info about eachother. we lipsed bare as well it was basically a date. holding hands whilst eating and drinking our drinks. awe. I'm starry-eyed over him. I looked at the time. 15 mins till midnight and I'm tired.

me: babe we should get going

him: yeh tru.

we got our stuff and everything and left.

we were holding hands. I called a cab and he called a cab since were going seperate ways. we called up the £1 ones. ukno. adison lee. well if ukno ukno. he got a call anyways

him: what now

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him: shit yh yh I'm coming.

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him: waiting on the cab , oh it's here

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him: don't lie. has to come spoil my night fucking pussy boys. Dw someone gonna learn their lesson.

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him: ite safe

both our cabs were here.

I looked at him. seductively.sexually.

him: I hate u ukno. how do u do this

he licked his lips. I sucked mines.

me: bye babe love you.

he picked me up. I put my legs around him.I sucked on his neck. I made sure it left a mark. even though he's Brown u could see the purpleness.

he left one on me it was just red. but it was kinda small cos he kissed me as well.

we lipsed again he said he loves me and then we went our seperate ways...

Chanel's pov;

I was walking cos I wanted to think and have fresh air . also burn some calories. I looked calm tho. I was wearing black Nike tracksuit. with all black 95's my hair was in two fishbones. holding a black medium sized MK bag. only bag I have at that niggas house.

my music was playing. eyes on you. yaas.

got the club going crazy

all these hittas but my eyes on you....

hmm. oh shit my tummy turned again this time worst. is Maxwell dead?

Maxwell's pov;

me: Shanks I gasped dw bout took a deep breath. - me. kill him! I managed to say.

some next blacked out boy shanked me about 5 times. two in my belly. one in my arm one in my leg. and my lower back. after that he was beating me up with my own broom he whacked my head about three times. that's how I dropped on the ground firstly. my vision was getting blurry. I heard three gunshots. shit I'm blacking out. .....

Shakais pov;

I was running for my life. for Chanel.

this nigga was running after me. he had a pole in his hands. I heard one shot. nope not this nigga he was still chasing me. someone else got shot. cba to find out who it was. BANG ohhh shit. it was velly. he got shot. ahh shit. this nigga was still after me. I saw cripts he gave me a signal. BANGG! the nigga that was chasing me dropped to the floor. I ran to the car out of breath and waited for everyone. dem lot was bringing velly in our whip .seeing as it was the least packed.

me: where's cript?

Tankz: I think he's gone with Leakz.

me:oh. kl

plemz was driving. Tankz was in the passenger seat. I was trying to put pressure on Vellys leg. we called his mum. she was a specialist nurse and doctor she'll knoe. what to do luckily she wasn't working so we went to Vellys.before we got there we took off our masks and undid our black suit we was all wearing Nike tracksuit underneath any ways I helped velly take off his. btw he could still move and speak. we got there. knocked on the door. his mum came out. we all said hi to his mum and family then his mum fixed him up but we wasn't in the same room.

his mum: does anyone know he shot this bullet in my son?

she was holding the bullet. obvs wearing gloves.

we all shook our head.

his mum: well erm okay. try find out coz wen his leg gets better he wouldn't be able to walk for a month.

what?! everyone said unison. to make things worst Plemz came in the room hands on his head.

Tankz: wagwaarn bro.

Plemz: Stagger.

we all looked at him. trying to make him carry on

plemz : hes-he's dead.

everyone stood up and started cussing. nah mate. can't belive they killed him. stabbed to death ukno. shit.

obviously Staggers in one of the gangs were joint with. can't believe this. he's 16. I never really mention him. but yh Chanel knows him. he's like a big bro to us. I looked for my fone. it was dead -_-

me: has anyone got a charger

his mum: use Masons it should be in the corner.

yep that's Vellys real name lol.

it was there and it could fit in my fone.

hella messages and things came thru

5 mis calls from mum.

54 mis calls from bae.

no one else is important apart from these two rn. I called chanel back.

me: babes

her: hey b

me: u ok

her: mmhm u alright

me: yh ok kl

her: wait hold on

before I could speak she said ha. it's my voicemail fool.

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ukno that's such a piss take. I messaged her and called her three times again obvs not falling for that dumb voicemail. now I'm shook where is she?

Chanels pov;

so im walking listening to my joints. a black young boy about my age came towards me. but he was riding a bike. this nigga try snatch my bag is dizzy. I yanked my bag from him I kicked him hard in his balls. I picked up the bike and dashed it it wasn't that heavy. arghhh he shouted some next niggas ran round the corner looking at me about 5 of them. now they looked older. I ain't got no time for this.

me: excuse me ur blocking the way.

they all circled me. ah fuck really?

the one that was directly in front of me was looking at me biting his lip.he was kinda buff but I don't care. I screwed dirty.

his friend was like oooh that was dirty. I screwed again even more dirty then sighed to signal how immature he is.

Unknown 1: ay b. what's with all the screwing.

I stared at him in his eyes blankly. is he serious right now. he was nice tho. the buffest in the circle. I looked him up and down with a screw face.

Unknown 2/ the immature boy: loool.

fucking hell I thought.

the other one was looking at me still waiting for an answer.

me: u really wanna know what's with all the screwing. fucking tough ed' bwoy. y u all here surrounding me like I'm some next object. can u please excuse me. fucking annoying bratz like seriousness look how late it is and u lot have time to surround a gyal. where's ur house where's ur parents where's ur bloodclart sense. urgghh can u please moveeeee??!!!!!

maann I'm bare angry my headphones were in shakai was calling me cos. beyonce u are my rock came on. that's only for wen he called me. the way I wanna answer but I wasn't in the mood too. I remembered I had one of Shakais weapons in my bag. let's just see if they move first...

Unknown 1 pov;

this girl has bare attitude she looks bare strong tho. had body and was a leng lightee. and she was pissed . I could tell she was Caribbean.

me: come man Marco let's just go man.

she looked at me. and faintly smiled.

Marco:nah wait. she looks like the. Thot that temps was talking about look. ohh yeah. everyone said in unison.

Chanels pov;

are you actually fucking having a laugh right now just then I bussed out laughing creasing in fact.

me: wait wait wait. u lot really think I'm a Thot. and who the fuck is temps anyways. sounds wack as hell.

I had to play it kool.

Unknown 2: so u don't know temps

I shook my head trying to give a curious looks

Unknown 5: some deep voice as well LooL. : so u don't know Maxwell.

I looked at them baffled

me: the only Maxwell ik is a dog.

r u sure. Unknown one&two said

yes I'm very sure. I exclaimed. I walked away fast and took a deep breathe. nah mate seriously I was bare close. then I heard running towards me.

just sounded like one person

oi he said.

I didn't turn around I looked at my fone then this bitch was standing in front of me.

what do u want. get out my face

I raised my voice and said it with bare attitude I'm so pissed.

Unknown 1:I want you still

me: r u feeling okay. go home.

he grabbed my arm as I walked away.

him: nah.his voice sounded so sexy but his grip was firm. -_-

me: listen yh I don't want no harm. can u pls leave me alone.

nah he said again. May I have ur number.

obviously im not giving him my actual number. I'm giving him my Samsung galaxy note 5 number. I don't use that fone. I use my iPhone 6+

I huffed and gave him that number. man said he miscalled it to see if it was the right fone. my fone rang.

me: ite happy now bye.

he dragged me close to him hugged me tightly and then grabbed my bum. it wasn't nice. and poked my tit then left fuckkingggheelllll

anyway. 10 mins of walking I was home. so was my mum. she looked down.

me: mum u ok.

mum: where the hell were you?

me:I'm sorry on the way back yh..

(I told her the whole story she was laughing

me: what's so funny.

mum: ur attitude.

me: lol

mum: anyways I have some news to tell u

me: umm ok.

mum: it's umm max he's back

me: Ik

mum: and he's in a coma from 10 -13 months. after been stabbed and beaten.

me: k. he deserves it. he should've died

after I said that I ran into my room and slammed the door I'm propa pissed

ahh man why is he alive for. if they trace it back shakai is going to get in big trouble cos Ik he's a snake arrghhh.

I was bare crying ..

my mum came in.

mum: I thought u loved Maxwell u two did so much things together he's a good boy not like shakai. he only went Dubai to see family that's all and he-

me: mum shut up u don't know nothing about him. he's a little devil. can u please don't ever compare him to shakai. he's not even close.

mum: what do u mean. his mum brought him up good.

me: that has nothing to do with it. the only reason y they went Dubai is cos he nearly killed someone and was in danger. he's not no little angel he's a fuck boy.

mum: but he didn't do u wrong did he. he always looked after u. even when u walked into the pole. he's the one that called me and brought u an ice pack.

me: I didn't mum. he abused me. he thumped me in my face.

I was sooooooo angrrryyy. hatred was in my eyes. fuckkkssaaakesss.

mum: so what else do u need to tell me about this yute. now I feel awful baby hush come here.

I sat on my mum's lap and she cradled me and kissed my forehead.

I let out so huge sigh and took a Deep breath

me: mum just make sure u could deal with what I'm about to say to u. it was last week.

he - he raped me.

I burst out crying my mum hushed me but I felt her anger..

Idk how long I was crying for all Ik is that I fell asleep. my mum was gone I looked at the time. afta 5 in the morning. I took my clothes off and then facetime called bae. I was in bed and I weren't naked just to inform u.

shakai's pov:

oh wife ftiming me. she's so sexy. I just wanna see more. she looks like she has been crying tho.

me: b what's wrong.

wife: I told my mum.

me: about what.

wife: the prickk

me: ooh so what's going on.

wife: nm she told me he's in a coma but I want him dead. y didn't u kill him.

me: it was maud dere. some other yute was ducking me till cory shot him. it's a madness I couldn't hack it. he don't know it was me tho

wife: oh I understand

me: and ukno what else

wife: yh

me: they killed Stagger

her face dropped and tears started falling.

me: b hush. do u want me to keep u company

wife: yh come I'm all alone.

me: ite give me 30 mins.

wife : ily so much ukno

awe she looked bare cute. Ik she is missing the d tho

me: ily 2. soon come give it to u.

she laughed and hanged up.I went to do my hygiene. I just got dressed brushed my hair and my teeth. got some clothes cah I'm staying there. I apps ed her saying omw x. she read it and didn't reply cha lol.

Chanels pov;

I heard th door knock. bae was here. I was bare happy and I was just wearing my underwear. idc I look sexy. he stared at me and I pulled him inside. whilst facing forwards to him I lifted my leg stretched it and kicked the door shut. he smirked then held my legs. he pushed me up whilst I jumped on him sexually. both my legs wrapped around his waist. he kissed my neck all around I was giggling. then I started sucking on his neck . he ran upstairs with me in his arms went in my room then dashed me on my bed. lightly tho. he was on top of me grinding. he was just in his Gucci boxers. omdss this nigga.

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