Pure (Complete) Sample

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Pure
Life of Analise
Prank...
Smart coward or dead hero
Dying Hurts
New Vampire...
Memories...
First Feed...
Hype...
Ability...
The Pit...Part 2
Escape...
***Bonus***Seb Pov*****
Welcome Home Ana...Part 1
Welcome Home Ana....Part 2
Welcome Home Ana......Part 3
Meeting with Maximus...
Fact or Fiction...
First Party...
Emotional Roller-coaster
Helia~The Great Witch~ Part 1
Helia~ The Great Witch~ Part 2
Hello, My Name Is Analise Walker...
Ana vs. Kim...Round 1
Is Santa Clause real too?
Ana & Seb Vs Kim & Talon...Round 2
Trouble Down Under....
There's no place like.....Nexus.....
Unexpected...
This happens when you anger a vampire...
Witch Intervention...
Blood Castle....
He's not Prince Charming....
The Princess...
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The Pit...part 1

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The Pit...part 1 

Marcos Pov

Marcos sat in his oversized office chair in a daze.

He still couldn’t wrap his mind around the girl’s ability. Kinetic?! That just shouldn’t be possible! There hasn’t been a vampire around that powerful for at least a thousand years. So how is it possible she exists in the here and now?


Marcos fuming was interrupted by Talon barging into his office. It’s been two days since the girl almost killed him. Marcos still remembered the way his body shook as the blue lightning raked through him. Luckily they were able to get him when they did and pump large quantities of blood into him to speed up the healing. Even still Talon didn’t wake for two days.


“Nice to see you finally awake” Marcos stated as Talon approached his desk with purposeful strides.

“Where the hell is that bitch?!” Talon demanded voice filled with so much anger even Marcos was slightly surprised.

“Calm down. The incident still has her unconscious and I haven’t authorized anyone to give her blood to help her heal” Marcos stated going through some files on his desk.

There has to be something in these records that could clue him in on the usual vampire he accidently created. Talon pounded his fist against the desk cracking it. Marcos looked up at the unstable vampire noting Talons black eyes staring at him in rage

“That’s not good enough! I’ll kill her!” Talon yelled viscously. Marcos had enough of this. He stood slowly never taking his eyes off Talon before flashing his own long fangs

“She belongs to me! And you will not touch her unless you want to die for good.” Marcos ended in a low growl still showing his elongated teeth.

Talon has been his charge for a hundred years and he’s grown fond of the vampire he created. But he wouldn’t hesitate to rip his throat out if he under minded his authority.

Gradually the black left Talons eyes and his fangs receded. Good boy, Marcos thought.


“Now that you’re under control we can discuss the incident.” Marcos said taking his seat. Talon sat at the chair across the desk pulling out a cigarette.

“Nothing to tell. I pissed her off, she sent a bolt of electricity or something at me” Talon said taking a long drag of his cigarette. He was still beyond mad that girl was able to get the upper hand. No one makes a fool of him! He would find a way to make her suffer.


Marcos continued to go through his files but nothing gave him any information on the last known kinetic vampires’ origin. All he could find was how rare they are and how dangerous. Apparently kinetic vamps powers are vast. This angered Marcos. The mere thought this newly changed vampire could be more powerful than he?! He needed more answers and he needed them now


“You know you could just ask your brother” Talon stated simply blowing smoke rings. Marcos immediately felt his eyes bled black at the mention of his brother. The traitor is the reason he was exiled to this mediocre life! Marcos forcibly threw the papers across the desk

“Never mention him in my presence ever again!” Marcos roared voice laced with hate and venom. Talon put his hands up in surrender  

“Alright, relax I won’t bring up your family issues again” Talon said.


Talon knew Marcos hated his older brother for something that happened three hundred years ago when they lived with the royal vampires. Talon himself hasn’t met any of the royals but he didn’t care. He already had Marcos as his maker telling him what to do, he didn’t need another. Besides he’s heard the king is the cruelest most powerful vampire existing so he’d probably be better off sticking with Marcos anyway.  


“How about I question the girl about who she was before you killed her?” Talon suggested. What he really was after was an excuse to be near her to find out her weakness, and then crush the bitch.

“Stay away from her.” Marcos stated off handedly. But his thoughts drifted away as he thought of another vampire.

He hadn’t seen her in forever but she knew everything about every vamp. Marcos just couldn’t stand her seductive ways; it was just too much. Still, she might have some answers on the mystery vampire he’s keeping prisoner. With a final resolution he stood gathering some things from his drawer

“Talon I’ll be gone a few days, keep an eye on things and do not hurt the girl” Marcos stated firmly. Talon nodded in agreement trying to hide his smirk. Marcos pulled out his walkie giving orders to the guards before disappearing from the room.   

Talon was overjoyed. With Marcos gone for the next few days he would have doll face all to himself. The question is what did he plan on doing to her...?


Ana Pov

My body feels heavy. So damn heavy. All I want to do is open my eyes but they too are heavy. What’s wrong with me now? My throat aches so badly. It’s like hot sand was poured down my mouth. I need something…. I can’t put my finger on it but I need it so desperately

“It’s been three days!”

Voices. I can hear voices. The last one was soft and feminine but slightly upset. I know that voice but I just can’t place it. Crap! What’s happening to me? Am I dead? Wait no I already died once and this feeling isn’t anywhere close to that one. So I wonder why I can’t move or better yet why I am so freaking thirsty but not for water. Something else…

“I know Marie, what do you expect me to do?”

Yes Marie! That was the first voice I heard. And the second I recognized instantly. That deep husky voice makes me want to swoon every time I hear it. Seb’s voice. What are they talking about? It sounds serious and from their tones upsetting too. Ugh I wish I could open my eyes or something

“She needs blood Seb!”

Blood… the moment the word left Maries mouth it all made sense. The uncomfortable burning in my throat, my overly weak state; I needed blood. My new found knowledge further increased my agony

“Watch the door” 

I could hear Marie’s small feet shuffling away and Seb’s heavy steps grow near. He sat next to me and the heat from his body was so intense a normal person would have broken out in a sweat.

He smelled so good too.

I could hear his heart pumping sweet blood through him. If I could move I’m sure I would jump him right now.

Seb drew closer and pressed his wrist to my mouth. Instincts took over the second his skin touched my lips. My fangs ascended swiftly sinking into the bulging vein. The warm sweet liquid pouring down my throat made me feel alive. My body was rejoicing. Every part of me awakens, stronger and aware like never before…

I could feel something snap inside me. I needed more blood. I needed all his blood!

 

My eyes snapped open.

They landed on Seb who was watching me as I greedily drank his blood. He tried to tug his wrist away but I was too strong.

I wanted more!

In a quick move I flew over him pinning him beneath me. His blood tasted so good it made want more and more of it.

And him… Unknowingly I grinded my hips against him.

Seb groaned or moaned I can’t be sure; my mind is lost in blood lust. I was starting to feel sexually excited. I rolled my hips again and from Seb’s stiff member between my thighs he was feeling it too.

Alarms were going off in the back of my head. I know this feeling? Something’s not right with me but what is it? I moan as more blood slides down my throat. When I look at Seb’s aroused face it hits me.

Hype!

Damn it! Hype has taken over and I’m losing control. If I don’t stop myself I’ll end up having sex with Seb or drinking all his blood or both!

I closed my eyes tightly and concentrated harder than I have in my whole life. Even harder than I did for that calculus final last year. Gradually I could feel my need decreasing and I was able to stop feeding on Seb.


I gently pulled my fangs out of his wrist, almost laughing at his shocked face. Clearly he thought I had lost control. For fun I grinded my hips one last time on his hard member before quickly jumping up to expose him. Marie gasped and Seb tried to roll over so fast he fell off the bed. Ha! Payback is fun.


“I’m so glad you’re finally awake!” Marie exclaimed crushing me in a hug. I hugged her back

“Finally? What do you mean? What happened?” I asked confused

“You don’t remember?” She asked instead of answering my questions

“Remember what exactly?” I asked again even more confused. Seb finally adjusted his little situation and walked over to us. Maybe I shouldn’t say little because what I felt definitely wasn’t little

“What is the last thing you remember?” Seb asked snapping me out of my inappropriate thoughts.

I thought back to my shower, Talon being in my room and then the three of us in the empty gym.

“We were at the gym with Talon. He was teaching me about vampires…” I trailed off when flashes of Talon and I fighting entered my mind. The jerk beat the shit out of me for no reason! Tossed me around like a rag doll! The next time I see I’ll beat his ass for that!


“Talon kicked my ass and I blacked out” I say still angry about the whole thing. I mean who needs a lesson on how to get their ass kicked anyway.

“That’s all you remember” Seb probed. Am I missing something? I thought back again and the last thing I see is my face hitting a wall; after that nothing

“Yes! That’s it, why?” I asked growing irritated that they know something I don’t.

“Ana, you have an ability. One that almost killed Talon” Seb informed me slowly.


That doesn’t make sense to me. I have an ability? And why didn’t I kill Talon? Must not be that cool if he lived through it. I start to question him about this ability and why I can’t remember it when my least favorite vampire saunters in the room; Talon. Speak of the devil and he shall enter smirking


“Hello party people” He greets in welcoming tone unlike his usual sarcastic one.

I’m not buying it. Seb said I almost killed him and I don’t know Talon that well but I know him well enough to know he’s pissed about it. Shouldn’t he be trying to rip my throat out?

“What’s the catch?” I ask getting straight to the point. He grins and pulls a black dress bag from behind his back handing it to me. Is this a trick? I think staring at the bag

“It’s a peace offering. Let’s leave our little fight in the past. And as a token of good faith I got this for you to wear when I take you to the pit tonight” Talon says still holding out the bag. Slowly I take it from him a little curious to see the dress. What? I’ve been fat most of my life I never got to wear a dress.

“What’s the pit?” I ask absentmindedly unzipping the bag

“Seb will explain. Be ready in one hour” Talon replies before leaving the room just as quickly as he entered it.


The dress is blood red, strapless and short. The bust was curved into a heart shape and I loved it. I’ve never been able to wear something like this before. Even if I had to endure Talons presence it would be worth it for this dress. Marie was looking at the dress with the same excitement I had. I looked to Seb and he looked the opposite; more hard and angry


“A pit is vampire slang for a club only different” Seb explained in a tight voice. Talons taking me to club? Didn’t see that one coming

“Different how?” I wondered. I have no experience with clubs but on TV everybody just drank and danced like whores. How much different could a vampire club be?

“A pit is where vampires go to get drunk, feed and have sex all in one place. Vampires can only get drunk if they feed from a human with a high blood alcohol level. At a pit all the drinks are made with the intention of getting the human drunk from one glass.” He told me.

So vampires get drunk from drinking a drunken person’s blood. That’s interesting and in a weird way makes sense.  


“Why would a human willingly go to a pit?” I ask curiously. Doesn’t seem logical to party with vampires in exchange for strong drinks.


“Vampires are beautiful creatures. Humans are shallow and vain. The humans want in the pits because their exclusive and they see all the beautiful vampires entering. Of course they don’t know it’s a vampire feeding frenzy. And those who get in will never know either. The blood loss leaves them unconscious and when they wake the next day they believe they just had a crazy fun night and a hangover.” Seb explained still in a hard voice.


All of a sudden this pit isn’t sounding so fun even with a hot dress. I’ve never been drunk for one and two I’m having a hard enough time getting a handle on my hype. Not to mention apparently I have an ability I don’t remember using. If I was human I’m sure I would be having a panic attack right now. Then again if I was human none of this would be happening either.

Seb eyebrows are furrowed together in deep thought. It has me a little worried about what he’s thinking

“Seb, are you worried about me going to the pit?” I ask thinking maybe he’s afraid I’ll lose myself to my hype and kill some one

“Yes. But I’m more concerned with Talons reason for taking you” He answers staring directly into my eyes.

Once again his mind is on the right track. I shouldn’t be focusing on going to this pit in a killer dress. What I should be focusing on is what that bastard Talon has up his sleeve.

My guess would be something involving his fist and my face…

Oh boy, let the rematch begin…

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********A/N: SORRY I HAD TO SPLIT THIS CHAPTER INTO 2 PARTS.. IT WOULD HAVE BEEN TOO LONG IF THEY WERE BOTH TOGETHER*******

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