Dil Jale

By QueenOfSoftness

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English translation: Burning Heart Mubashira,s breakdown had driven Zaid to the edge, causing him to questio... More

Chapter no 1
Covers
Chapter no 2
Chapter no 3
Chapter no 4
Chapter no 5
Chapter no 6
Chapter no 7
Chapter no 8
Teaser
Chapter no 9
Chapter no 10
Chapter no 11
Chapter no 12
Chapter no 13 (Nikah)
Chapter no 14
Teaser 2
chapter no 15
(Upcoming) Teaser
Teaser 3
Chapter no 16
Chapter no 17
Very important note
Chapter no 18
Chapter no 19
Teaser no 4
Chapter no 21 (pool scene)
Chapter no 22
Chapter no 23 (Past)
Chapter no 24
(25) Vulnerability
Teaser 5
Chapter no 26
Chapter no 27
Chapter no 28
Chapter no 29
Chapter no 30
Chapter no 31
Teaser no 6
Chapter no 32
ZaiRa special teaser
Chapter no 33
Chapter No 34
Important Note
Chapter no 35

Chapter no 20

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By QueenOfSoftness

Important: this chapter is unedited

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Mubashira everybody is waiting.

Zaid entered inside and stopped as his heart skipped a beat. He watched her, a soft, genuine smile spread across her face. His feet automatically moved towards her as their eyes locked through the mirror.
She felt her heart skipping a beat as he walked towards her and leaned down, standing just behind her, their eyes still locked through the mirror.

Main pehenun?

He asked, his voice was a notch lower, husky yet soft. Mubashira,s heart skipped a beat and she found herself nodding in a state of daze.

He smiled, she felt a tickling sensation when his fingers grazed the nape of her neck, her heart quickened it's pace as he unclasped her hair. She gasped and closed her eyes as her beautiful dark hair cascaded down her back like a waterfall of silk. He leaned down to her ear and whispered

Mujhe tumhare khule baal pasand hain.

She closed her eyes, her breath hitching for a moment. Mubashira sighed. She felt a tickling sensation as his fingers grazed her neck. She felt Zaid cradling her hair and pushing them onto the right. Her neck and shoulder bare to him now. She felt butterflies in her stomach as she felt his gaze onto the skin which was unveiled beneath him now. She felt a trail of goosebumps at the edge of her spine. She breathed sharply, a rozy hue spreading across her face.

She felt him breathing into her hair and her breath hitched. The fragrance of jasmine and sandalwood that came from her hair seemed to envelope him completely. He lowered his head slightly and she felt him breathing into her hair and then a warm tickle raced down her spine. She felt her breath hitch as the tip of his nose grazed her collar bone. The darkness of his hair peered over her shoulder. She closed her eyes as sparks flowed through her body.

Zaid.

She let out a gasp of his name as she felt him holding the delicate curve of her waist, his fingers spreading to cover more of it. Her eyes closing as she felt his breath, warm and tickling grazing her collar bone and then she felt sparks flowing through her body all over again, her breath hitching. Her heart started pounding in her chest like a wild drum as she felt her face flush with warmth. She visibly trembled, her legs growing weak but she forced herself to stand as her lips parted slightly and her breath came out in short gasps.

He reached out for the delicate pink diamond studded necklace and gently clasped it around her neck, the sound of the necklace closing around her neck echoed in the quite room. Mubashira shivered as the necklace felt cool against her warm skin. She blinked her eyes as she felt shivers cascading down her spine. Her breath came out trembling.

She shivered visibly and then gulped as she felt him graze her ear with the tip of his finger. She closed her eyes feeling her heart quickening it's pace as he made her wear the matching earrings. She let out a soft sigh.

She watched as he reached out for the blush palette and gently adorned her cheeks with a natural baby pink blush.

Mubashira smiled and let out another trembling breath as she reached out and applied the dark pink lipstick on her lips.

Beautiful

He whispered in her ear and she shivered, her heartbeat stopped for a moment before starting to race like a bullet train and then her heart skipped several beats as she felt him pressing a tender kiss on the back of her head. Her breath hitched audibly for a moment and then left her in a trembling whoosh.

She turned and stood in front of him. He extended his hand towards her for her to hold. Her heart skipped a beat and then she looked at him softly. She uplifted her hand and then placed it in his. She gasped as he interlocked their fingers. She looked at him, her breath catching in her chest for a moment, her eyes wide in surprise and her lips parted slightly.

Aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Zaid asked, his eyes a mixture of tenderness and affection.

It's all new.

Mubashira whispered, surprise evident in her tone as she looked at him softly and then a slow smile spread across her face and Zaid,s heart skipped a beat.

Mubashira adat dal lo.

Zaid said softly. Mubashira felt her heart racing in her chest and her eyes sparkled with happiness.

Then she turned towards the mirror, Zaid stood behind her. She watched their reflection in the mirror. They looked ethereal together.

Khubsurat lag rahi ho tum.

Zaid said softly looking at their reflection, his eyes filled with awe.

Khubsurati dekhne wale ki ankhon mein hoti hai.

Mubashira whispered, her heart swelling with love for Zaid. Zaid smiled hearing her.

Chalein?

Zaid asked. Mubashira nodded her head in positive and they both walked out, their fingers still interlocked.

Zaid bhai is seriously in love.

Haya whispered, her voice filled with awe.

Seriously he's falling hard.

Shahmeer whispered back.

Ho gaya tum donon ka? Zaid ke dil mein main hoon aur main hi rahungi Mubashira ki aukat nahin ke woh meri jagah le le.

Ayra said angrily glaring at both of them.

Well humne tumse baat nahin ki so it's better ke tum humse baat na karo.

Haya responded, her voice filled with anger.

Tameez se baat karo. Mujhe disrespect kerne ka haq nahin hai tumhein.

Ayra said, her voice filled with rage.

Disrespect usko kiya jata hai jiski hum respect kerte ho.

Shahmeer said rather sarcastically.

Aur haan Mubashira bhabhi ki aukat ke bare mein kuch mat kehna. Unhone bhai ke dil mein apni jagah khud banayi hai.

Haya said, her voice filled with sarcasm.

Are woh dekho.

Shahmeer said pointing his finger ahead.

Zais stood in the middle. He forwarded his hand to Mubashira. He looked at her face with unknown affection in his gaze, she was the same woman who had changed herself completely for him. Mubashira smiled softly still unable to believe her destiny. She placed her hands in his. He shivered slightly. He looked at her angelic face, her one touch was making him go crazy.

Khamoshiyan awaz hain,
Tum sunne toh aao kabhi

While she was still looking at him and in a moment, she found herself in his arms as he wrapped his arm around her waist and kept her hand on his shoulder. Mubashira felt a delicate shiver race down her spine. Zaid looked into her eyes, his heart skipped a beat as he locked eyes with hers confused. He wanted answers that what the hell he is feeling

Chu ker tumhein
Khil jayengi
Ghar inko bulao kabhi

They were now closer to each other and were able to hear each other,s raced heartbeats. Zaid,s heart pounded like a drum in his chest as he felt something growing between him and Mubashira which he felt more then good.

Twirling her around, he pulled her even more closer then before while their eyes stayed locked.

Bekarar hai
Baat kerne ko
Kehne do inko zara

Running his hand through her soft, silky hair, he pulled her so close that now there was no space between them, not even for the air to cross while he kept looking at her with unknown emotions in his eyes.

Khamoshiyan...
Teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan
Lipti hui khamoshiyan

Zaid and Mubashira were lost in each other. Zaid,s heart pounded in his chest as he looked at her, they were lost in each other's touches and embraces. They were beautifully trapped. Zaid found himself gazing at her with unknown affection. He was unaware of the fact that he was beautifully trapped in her love from which he didn't wanted to get free.

He took her hand in his and interlocked their fingers as they continued gazing at each other. He loved the fact that how perfectly their hands fit together as if it was meant to be.

Kya uss gali mein kabhi tera jana hua
Jahan se zamane ko guzre zamana hua

He held her shoulder and twirled her around while she bent down opposite to him while he held her securely in his arms looking into her beautiful eyes which were as deep as an ocean in which he found himself knowingly drowning with each passing second.

Mera samey toh wahin pe hai tehra hua
Bataun tumhein kya mere sath kya kya hua

Making her stand, he caressed the soft skin of her both arms through the net fabric. Mubashira closed her eyes for a moment sighing softly and Zaid pulled her closer and then picked her up in his arms twirling her around.

Their eyes met again and the world around them seemed to blur into insignificance leaving only the two of them in their own bubble. Mubashira looked into his eyes, her love shining in their depths while Zaid looked into her eyes with affection and a lot of questions shining in his own eyes.

Hmm
khamoshiyan
Ek saaz hai
Tum dhun koi lao zara

As their eyes remained locked, they remembered their journey that has led them to this point. They smiled at each other, their affection pulpable. Zaid,s hands reached up, cupping her face rather delicately as If she was the most precious thing to him.

Khamoshiyan
Alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le Zara.

Zaid kneeled down in front of her which surprised her and made her heart hitch in her chest. He took her hands in his and planted gentle, affectionate kisses on both of them. Mubashira looked at him with a lump raising in her throat as a delicate sheen of tears welled up in her beautiful eyes.

Bekarar hai
Baat kerne ko
Kehne do inko zara... Haa...

Standing up, he gently brushed away the crystal droplets that were about to escape her eyes and then caressed her cheeks rather affectionately shaking his head sideways telling her to not to cry and then she looked at him with love filled eyes. He made her stand a little away and then lifted her up in the air earning a gasp of surprise from her.

Khamoshiyan
Teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan
Lipti hui khamoshiyan

He looked at her with a soft smile gracing his lips, his heartbeats syncing with hers as she looked back at him, their eyes locked and then she let out the brightest smile she could and he felt his heart full. He felt as if he has conquered the world.

Khamoshiyan
Teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan
Lipti hui khamoshiyan

He twirled her around and she wrapped her arms around his, already secured around hers smiling brightly looking at him with such love that seemed to resonate deep within his soul.

He twirled her around and she left his shoulders and spread her arms wide as rose Patels started falling on them. She closed her eyes still smiling as she felt him pressing his forehead against hers. He made her stand, they both opened their eyes and their eyes locked as he gently made her stand on the floor. He smiled at her affectionately and she couldn't help but smile back, their hearts continued beating in unison as Zaid,s eyes screamed a silent confession of his growing feelings for her which made her smile brightly. Her eyes twinkling like beautiful stars in the night sky as she continued looking at him with love filled eyes and he looked back at her with his eyes filled with more love which he couldn't realize.

Ayra clenched her hands at her sides in fists and she left from there teary eyed.

Main haar nahin maanun gi Mubashira. Zaid ko tumse door kerke rahungi.

End Of Chapter!!!

Coming up next: The pool scene.

Next chapter mein pool scene pakka. I promise.

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