The Deepest Desire • A Odell...

By SZariahWritten

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Erotic acts are instinctive; they fulfil a role in nature. The idea is familiar, but it is one that contains... More

Disclaimer/Character List
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12 (Part 1)
Chapter 12 (Part 2)
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26 (Part 1)
Chapter 26 (Part 2)
All That Glitters (Chapter 7)

Chapter 3

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"So let me get this straight, Omar invited you to spend the final week of our vacation with him?" Chaney asked with wide eyes, a knowing smirk playing on her lips.

Unbeknownst to her best friend, she had watched their interaction while they were yachting the day before, and it was clear Omar and Avery had a connection despite only knowing each other for a few days.

They had come to Turks and Caicos to let loose and enjoy themselves. Avery couldn't deny that Omar was the embodiment of her plans, adventure, and spontaneity. From the moment they met, there was an undeniable chemistry between them that seemed to transcend the boundaries of time. It was as if fate had intervened, bringing them together in this picturesque paradise.

Avery couldn't help but feel a rush of excitement at the thought of spending the final week of their vacation with Omar. She had been drawn to him since their first encounter. His zest for life was contagious, and she found herself craving more of his company with each passing day.

As Chaney continued to wear that mischievous smirk, Avery couldn't help but feel a slight pang of guilt. She hadn't mentioned anything about her growing connection with Omar to her best friend. But now, with Chaney's wide eyes fixed on her, it was impossible to hide the truth any longer.

Taking a deep breath, Avery decided to come clean. "Yes, Omar invited me," she admitted, her voice tinged with a mix of excitement and apprehension. "I know it may seem sudden, but there's something about him, Chaney. I can't explain it, but being with him feels like an adventure I don't want to miss out on."

Chaney's smirk softened into a gentle smile, her eyes filled with understanding. "I've noticed the way you two look at each other," she confessed, her voice filled with warmth. "It's like you've found a missing piece of yourself in him. Avery, life is too short to not indulge. If Omar is what you want, then I say go for it."

Avery felt a wave of relief wash over her. She had been worried about how her friends would react, fearing that her best friends might feel left out or betrayed. But Chaney's unwavering support only solidified the bond they shared.

"Did Avery tell you that Omar asked her to stay with him until we leave?" Brooke asked with a wide mischievous smile as she walked into her friend's bedroom that overlooked the glistening pool in the backyard and the beach beyond, which became almost invisible at nighttime.

"Yes," Chaney smirked. "Whatever Miss Avery Morgan got between her legs has him addicted."

Brooke burst into laughter, her mischievous smile widening. "Oh, Chaney, you always know how to put it bluntly," she chuckled.

As if Omar knew he was being spoken of, his name flashed across Avery's phone screen, making both of her friends laugh.

"Well, clearly I'm not wrong," Chaney smirked as she picked up Avery's phone, handing it to her.

Avery blushed, feeling a mix of embarrassment and amusement. She took her phone from Chaney and answered the call with a playful tone. "Speak of the devil, Omar. We were just talking about you."

Omar's deep laughter echoed through the phone, sending a shiver of excitement down Avery's spine. "I hope it was all good things," he replied, his voice filled with warmth.

Chaney couldn't help but interject, her mischievous smirk still in place. "Oh, don't worry, Omar. Only the best!"

"I was wondering if you wanted to come over. I'm on the way back to my place from dinner and I want to see you."

Avery's heart skipped a beat at Omar's invitation. She exchanged a quick glance with Chaney, who raised an eyebrow suggestively. "Well, it seems like you're in luck," Avery replied, her voice laced with playful anticipation. "We were just about to head out for a nightcap. How about we swing by your place instead?"

Omar's voice held a hint of excitement as he responded, "That sounds perfect. I'll be waiting for you."

As Avery hung up the phone, she couldn't help but feel a surge of nervous energy. The thought of spending more time with Omar, exploring their connection further, was both thrilling and intimidating. But she knew deep down that she couldn't let fear hold her back from embracing this newfound adventure.

With a renewed sense of determination, Avery turned to her friends. "Well, ladies, it seems like the night is just getting started. Shall we go and see what surprises await us at Omar's place?"

Chaney and Brooke exchanged knowing glances before nodding in agreement. "Absolutely," Chaney replied, a mischievous glint in her eyes.

And with that, the three friends set off into the night, ready to embrace the unknown and let the magic of Turks and Caicos guide them on their unforgettable journey.

Getting up from her place on the bed, Avery walked over to the dresser, pulling it open to grab a body-hugging maxi dress. Although it was long, the dress showcased her cleavage in a tasteful yet sexy way. It was too late in the evening to put on any makeup onto her face, so she settled for a little mascara and lip gloss.

As she slipped into the dress, Avery couldn't help but feel a surge of confidence. She knew that tonight was going to be fun, and she wanted to look and feel good without having to do much. With a final glance in the mirror, she adjusted her dress and took a deep breath, ready to face whatever the night had in store.

As they made their way to Omar's place, the warm Caribbean breeze brushed against Avery's skin, adding to the excitement in the air. The streets were alive with the sounds of laughter and music, and the vibrant colors of the island seemed to come alive under the moonlight.

When they arrived at Omar's place, Avery's heart raced with anticipation. The door swung open, revealing Omar standing there with a wide smile on his face. He looked effortlessly handsome.

"Welcome," he said, his voice filled with genuine warmth. "I'm so glad you could make it."

Avery's friends exchanged knowing glances, silently giving her their support. With a smile, she stepped forward, feeling a surge of electricity as Omar took her hand and led her inside.

The atmosphere inside was intimate and inviting, as he led them into the living room where his friends sat vibing, Omar poured each woman a glass of champagne, the bubbles dancing in the crystal glasses.

Although he'd invited over all of the women as a courtesy, Omar couldn't help but to take Avery's hand into his own, leading her away from where he girls sat talking with his friends as music played lowly in the background.

They found themselves in a secluded corner of the balcony, overlooking the shimmering ocean. The moon cast a soft glow on their faces as they stood there, their hands still intertwined.

"I have to admit, Avery," Omar began, his voice filled with a lustful sincerity, "I've been thinking about you since you left here this morning," he revealed as he thought about the way her body felt beneath his, the way her lips tasted against his own. "I can't seem to get you out of my mind."

Avery's heart fluttered at his words, her own desire for him growing with each passing moment. She leaned in closer, her voice barely above a whisper. "I've been thinking about you too, Omar. The way you make me feel... it's unlike anything I've ever experienced."

Omar's eyes darkened with a mix of desire and longing. He gently brushed a strand of hair behind Avery's ear, his touch sending shivers down her spine. "I feel the same way, Avery. Being with you is intoxicating, and I can't deny the connection we have.

Their gazes locked, the intensity between them palpable. Without another word, Omar leaned in, capturing Avery's lips in a passionate kiss. It was a kiss that spoke volumes, conveying all the insatiable desire they had for one another.

As their lips moved in sync, the world around them seemed to fade away. The sound of the waves crashing against the shore and the distant laughter of their friends became nothing more than a distant echo. In that moment, it was just the two of them, lost in a sea of passion and longing.

Their bodies pressed against each other, the heat between them intensifying with each passing second. Avery's hands found their way to Omar's hair, running over his flawlessly shaped hairline and neat tapered waves.

Omar's hands roamed over Avery's body, exploring every curve and contour. The sensation of their bodies pressed together ignited a fire within them, a hunger that could not be quenched. Their kisses grew deeper, more fervent, as their desire for one another consumed them.

Lost in the moment, they moved further onto the balcony, their bodies still entwined. The cool night air brushed against their heated skin, heightening their senses and adding to the intensity of their connection. They couldn't get enough of each other, their bodies moving in perfect harmony as they danced to the rhythm of their desires.

"Have you thought about my offer yet?" He spoke against her lips. "I want you to stay with me until the end of your vacation,"

Avery had already made her mind up, she was going to stay with him for the week, until it was time to head home, but she wanted to make him wait a little for her answer.

A mischievous smile played on Avery's lips as she pulled away slightly, teasingly. "Well, Omar, I have to say, your offer is quite tempting," she replied, her voice filled with playful anticipation. "But I think I'll make you wait just a little longer for my answer."

Omar's eyes sparkled with a mixture of desire and amusement. He leaned in, his lips brushing against Avery's ear as he whispered, "I can be patient, but I warn you, the longer you make me wait, the harder I'm gonna fuck you when you finally do say yes," Omar smirked knowingly.

He knew she was going to give in to his proposition. Avery's breath hitched at his words, her body already craving his touch. She couldn't deny the effect he had on her, the way he awakened a side of her she never knew existed.

With a playful glint in her eyes, Avery leaned in closer, her lips brushing against Omar's ear. "Well, then, I guess you'll just have to wait and see," she whispered, her voice dripping with seduction.

Omar's grip tightened around her waist, his desire evident in the way his eyes darkened. He pulled her even closer, their bodies pressed together, and whispered, "Challenge accepted."

After their moment alone, Avery and Omar pulled themselves together and headed back downstairs to join their friends.

They found Chaney and Brooke engaged in a lively conversation with Omar's friends, laughter filling the air. As Avery and Omar approached, their friends turned to greet them with knowing smiles.

Chaney raised an eyebrow suggestively. "Well, well, well, what took you two so long?" she teased, a mischievous glint in her eyes.

Avery blushed, feeling a mix of embarrassment and excitement. "We were just... catching up," she replied, her voice laced with a hint of playfulness.

Brooke chimed in, her eyes twinkling with amusement. "Oh, we can see that," she said, her voice filled with a knowing tone. "You two were practically glowing when you came back."

Omar chuckled, his arm draped casually around Avery's waist. "Well, we couldn't resist stealing a few moments alone," he admitted, his voice filled with warmth.

Their friends exchanged knowing glances, their smiles widening. It was clear that they were happy for Avery and Omar, and that their connection was undeniable.

As the night wore on, the group continued to enjoy each other's company, sharing stories, laughter, and drinks. The energy in the room was electric, fueled by the newfound romance between Avery and Omar.

Avery couldn't help but feel a sense of gratitude for her friends' support. They had embraced this unexpected turn of events with open arms, and it only made her connection with Omar feel even more special.

As the night drew to a close, Omar pulled Avery aside, his eyes filled with a mixture of tenderness and desire. "I hope you had a good time tonight," he said, his voice filled with sincerity.

Avery smiled, her heart filled with warmth. "I had an amazing time," she replied, her voice soft. "Thank you."

"Then spend the night with me." He rasped into her ear.

Avery's breath caught in her throat at Omar's request. The intensity in his eyes sent a shiver down her spine, and she couldn't deny the longing she felt for him.

Her nipples hardened as she looked into his eyes, her own sparkling with lust as he gazed down at her, his hand on the small of her back as Avery's friends watched their interaction in amusement.

"But I'm coming over tomorrow to spend the rest of my vacation here with you," she smirked. "What's one night without me?"

"A night I don't get to make you nut." Omar whispered hotly into her ear, answering her question.

Avery's cheeks flushed with desire at Omar's words, her body responding to his boldness. She leaned in closer, her lips brushing against his ear as she whispered, "Well, in that case, I guess I can't deny you any longer. One night won't hurt."

Omar's eyes lit up with a mixture of excitement and anticipation. He took her hand and led her towards the door, his friends cheering them on playfully. As they stepped out into the warm night air, Avery couldn't help but feel a surge of excitement for the passionate night that awaited them.

They walked hand in hand towards Omar's luxurious beachfront villa, the sound of the waves crashing against the shore creating a soothing soundtrack to their journey. The moonlight illuminated their path, casting a romantic glow on their faces as they made their way inside.

Once inside, Omar wasted no time in pulling Avery into his arms, their bodies pressed together in a passionate embrace. Their lips met in a searing kiss, their tongues dancing in sync as their desire for one another intensified.

Taking Avery up to his bedroom, Omar took his time to remove her clothes, admiring her body as he went.

Once she stood naked in front of him, Avery sat Oman down on the edge of bed before she settled on the floor between his legs, her hands working to pull him free from the shorts he wore.

"Make a fucking mess, I want it sloppy." Omar groaned as he watched Avery sit up on her knees as she took him into her mouth.

His body tensed with pleasure as Avery's lips wrapped around him, her tongue teasing and exploring every inch. The room was filled with the sound of their heavy breathing and the wet, intoxicating noises of their passionate encounter.

Omar's hands instinctively found their way into Avery's hair, gripping it gently as he guided her movements. Her enthusiasm and eagerness only fueled his desire, and he couldn't help but let out a low, guttural moan.

Lost in the intensity of the moment, their inhibitions faded away. The world outside ceased to exist as they surrendered to their primal instincts. The room became a playground of desire, their bodies moving in perfect sync.

Avery's mouth worked tirelessly, her lips sliding up and down Omar's length with a rhythm that drove him to the edge. She reveled in the taste of him, savoring every delicious sensation. Her hands caressed his thighs, nails leaving faint marks as she sought to please.

"Tilt your head back and give your throat to me." Omar whispered, his voice laced with a raw need. Avery complied without hesitation, tilting her head back and exposing her vulnerable throat to him. The sight sent a surge of dominance through Omar, intensifying the connection between them.

With his grip still firmly tangled in her hair, Omar guided Avery's head forward, urging her to take him deeper. She willingly obliged, her throat opening up to accommodate his size. The sensation was overwhelming, a mix of pleasure and a hint of discomfort that only heightened their arousal.

As Avery continued to pleasure him with her mouth, Omar's control began to slip. His hips moved in sync with her movements, thrusting gently into her mouth, seeking more of the mind-blowing pleasure she was offering.

In an attempt to keep himself from nutting prematurely, Omar pulled his length from her throat. Keeping his eyes on Avery's Omar leaned down, allowing a bead of spit to fall from his mouth into hers.

Avery eagerly accepted the offering, her tongue darting out to catch the droplet. The taste of their combined desire only fueled her hunger for him. With a mischievous glint in her eyes, she pulled away slightly, teasing him with her lips before engulfing him once again.

Omar's breath hitched at the sensation, his grip on her hair tightening involuntarily. He couldn't help but marvel at the way Avery's mouth worked wonders on him, her expertise driving him to the brink of ecstasy.

Omar adore the quiet confidence Avery had in the bedroom, she knew what she was doing, but still she allowed Omar to lead, willingly submitting herself to him.

Pulling himself from her mouth, Omar felt a tightening in his core as their eyes me. "Crawl over to the bed, but don't get on." He instructed.

Avery nodded, her eyes filled with anticipation and a hint of mischief. She gracefully moved off her knees and onto all fours, crawling towards the bed as Omar had commanded. Her movements were slow and deliberate, accentuating the curves of her body and leaving Omar breathless with desire as he eyed her pussy.

Avery had observed that Omar was a man who enjoyed visuals, crawling over the the bed, she positioned herself on her hands and knees, her legs a shoulder width apart as bounced her ass, making it jiggle invitingly.

Omar's eyes widened at the sight before him, his desire reaching new heights. The way Avery presented herself, her ass bouncing and jiggling, was a tantalizing invitation that he couldn't resist.

Grabbing a condom and quickly rolling it onto his length, he approached her slowly, his hands trailing along her smooth skin, feeling the warmth radiating from her body. The anticipation in the room was palpable, their connection electric as they both craved the next level of pleasure.

Omar positioned himself behind Avery, his hands gripping her hips firmly. He leaned in, his lips brushing against her ear as he whispered, "You're such a naughty girl, teasing me like this."

Avery's breath hitched at his words, her body trembling with anticipation. She knew exactly what he wanted, and she was more than willing to give it to him. With a playful smile, she arched her back, offering herself to him completely.

"I'm not teasing you," Avery declared looking back at him over her shoulder. "I'm inviting you to fuck me deep." She said, her voice dripping with desire. The words hung in the air, thick with anticipation and a raw hunger that consumed them both.

Omar's control slipped further, his primal instincts taking over. He positioned himself at her entrance, the tip of his throbbing length teasing her wetness.

"Like this?" Omar asked snapping his hips forward, sending a hard deep thrust into Avery that she felt at the bottom of her stomach.

"Just like that." She moaned, her voice filled with pleasure and satisfaction. The force of Omar's thrust sent waves of pleasure coursing through her body, igniting a fire within her that burned with intensity.

Sending a stinging slap to her butt, Omar's dominance found its way to the surface. Avery gasped, a mixture of surprise and pleasure coursing through her. The sting only fueled her desire, igniting a primal need within her.

"Is that what you want, my naughty fucking girl?" Omar growled, his voice laced with a commanding tone. He relished in the power he held over her, the way she responded to his touch and his words.

Avery nodded, her eyes filled with a mix of submission and excitement. "Yes, please," she whispered, her voice barely audible. She craved the intensity, the raw passion that Omar unleashed within her.

Without hesitation, Omar continued his assault, his thrusts growing harder and faster. The room filled with the sound of their skin slapping together, their moans and gasps echoing in the air. They were lost in a world of pleasure, their bodies moving in perfect harmony.

Avery was a mess beneath Omar as he took her on the floor of his bedroom situated at the highest point of his enormous villa, the arch in her back deepening to the point her nipples made contact with the cold marble floor, sending a chill up her spine.

Omar's primal instincts took over completely as he ravaged Avery, their bodies locked in a passionate dance of desire. The intensity of their connection was overwhelming, the pleasure building with every thrust.

Avery's moans grew louder, her body trembling with ecstasy. She reveled in the feeling of being completely dominated by Omar, surrendering herself to his every whim. The cold marble floor beneath her only added to the sensory overload, heightening her pleasure to new heights.

Omar's grip on her hips tightened, his thrusts becoming more forceful. He could feel himself nearing the edge, the pleasure building to an almost unbearable level. With one final, powerful thrust, he pushed Avery over the edge, her body convulsing in waves of pleasure.

As the waves of pleasure subsided, Omar collapsed onto the floor beside Avery, their bodies covered in a sheen of sweat. They lay there, panting and basking in the afterglow of their passionate encounter.

Avery turned her head to look at Omar, a satisfied smile playing on her lips. "That was incredible," she whispered, her voice filled with a mix of awe and contentment.

Omar nodded, his chest rising and falling with each breath. "You're amazing," he replied, his voice filled with genuine admiration. He reached out to gently caress her cheek, his touch tender and filled with affection.

They lay there in silence for a moment, their bodies intertwined and their hearts still racing. The room was filled with a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment, a testament to the deep connection they shared having only known one another for less than a week.

Lifting Avery from the floor into his strong embrace, Omar carried her to the bed, their bodies still entangled. He laid her down gently, his touch gentle yet possessive. Avery looked up at him, her eyes filled with a mix of desire and trust.

Omar hovered over her, his gaze intense and filled with a hunger that mirrored her own. He leaned down, capturing her lips in a passionate kiss, their tongues dancing together in a perfect rhythm. Their kiss was a fusion of raw desire and a deep emotional connection, a testament to the bond they had formed in such a short time.

"I want more." Avery said just above a whisper as Omar pulled away from the kiss, his eyes locked with Avery's. He could see the hunger in her gaze, the unspoken desire for more. A smile tugged at the corners of his lips as he realized that he wanted more too.

"More?" he repeated, his voice filled with anticipation. "Tell me, my naughty girl, what is it that you want?"

Avery's breath hitched at his words, her heart pounding in her chest. She knew exactly what she wanted, and she wasn't afraid to ask for it. With a newfound confidence, she looked up at Omar and spoke her deepest desires.

"I want you to make me cum again," she said, her voice filled with a mix of excitement and vulnerability. "I want to explore every inch of pleasure with you, to surrender myself completely to you." Even if it was only until the end of their time in Turks and Caicos.

Omar's eyes sparkled with a mixture of desire and admiration as he listened to Avery's words. He had never met someone so open and willing to explore their desires, and it only fueled his own hunger for her.

"Consider it done," he replied, his voice filled with determination. He leaned down, capturing her lips in another passionate kiss, his hands roaming her body with a newfound urgency. Their bodies intertwined once again, their connection reignited with a fiery intensity.

As their exploration continued, their bodies moved in perfect harmony, each touch and caress driving them closer to the edge of pleasure. Omar reveled in the way Avery responded to his every touch, her moans and gasps of pleasure spurring him on.

With each passing moment, their desires grew more intense, their hunger for one another insatiable. They explored every inch of pleasure, pushing each other to new heights of ecstasy. The room was filled with the sounds of their passionate encounter, their bodies moving in sync as they chased their mutual release.

As they reached the peak of pleasure once again, their bodies convulsed in waves of ecstasy. Their moans mingled in the air, a symphony of pleasure that echoed throughout the room. They clung to each other, their bodies trembling with the intensity of their shared release.

As the waves of pleasure subsided, they lay there, their bodies intertwined and their hearts racing. The room was filled with a sense of fulfillment and contentment, a testament to the deep connection they had formed in such a short time.

Omar looked down at Avery, his eyes filled with a mixture of awe and adoration. "You're incredible," he whispered, his voice filled with genuine admiration. "I've never experienced anything like this before."

Avery smiled up at him, her eyes sparkling with a mix of satisfaction and affection. "You're pretty incredible yourself," she replied, her voice filled with warmth. "I'm grateful for this experience, for the way you've awakened something within me."

Omar leaned down, capturing her lips in a tender kiss. Their connection had transcended the physical, evolving into something deeper and more profound. They had discovered a passion and a connection that would forever be etched in their memories.

As they lay there, basking in the afterglow of their passionate encounter, they knew that their time together was limited. But in that moment, they were determined to make the most of it, to explore every inch of pleasure and desire that they could.

And so, they continued their exploration, their bodies moving in perfect sync as they surrendered themselves to the intoxicating world of pleasure and desire. They were two souls intertwined, lost in a moment of pure bliss, cherishing every second they had together.

The next morning Avery woke up in bed alone, her body feeling light as a feather as she lay in Omar's sheets.

Taking her time before she got up, Avery found a T-shirt of Omar's, pulling it over her head before she pulled open the bedroom door in search of him.

She found Omar in the kitchen, shirtless and preparing breakfast. The sight of him, his muscular frame and the way his sweat glistened in the morning light, sent a shiver of desire down Avery's spine.

"Good morning," she greeted him, her voice filled with a mix of playfulness and anticipation.

Omar turned to face her, a smile spreading across his face. "Good morning, beautiful," he replied, his voice filled with warmth. "I hope you slept well."

Avery walked over to him, her eyes locked with his. "I slept like a dream," she said, her voice filled with contentment.

I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter!

I feel like this book is definitely my most erotic, I love it here!

I'm loving Avery and Omar's chemistry.

If there are any plots you'd like to see or you have any suggestions for the story, don't hesitate to let me know.

Thank you for reading my story! Don't forget to vote and comment!

Please remember this is an erotic novel and intended for a mature audience, there are explicit adult themes though out this book!

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