I would be changing the writing from my standard, takes a long time, less efficient, and hard to understand to
Character:- ""(Speaking)
Character:-''(Thought Communication)
Only POV:-(Thinking)
And I would keep the POV, but I believe you get the point, and I would also kept the battle part kind of same, but with few differences.
And Thank You Guys for all the support.
My book has grown a lot thanks to your guys' support, especially for a beginner like me.