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By tirewriter

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Equestria. Land of Magic and Mysteries. You're one of them. You are part of a race known as LORTERO capable o... More

Prologue: Inmortality
Chapter 2:
3. AND NO TITLE BECAUSE I'M LAZY
CHAPTER 4: idk
chapter 5: revolution short
chapter 6: EG SUCKS.
chapter 7: this was a valentine special.
9. There was a joke here but no more.
10. the sond part
11.Achievement unlocked: You have trauma!
First RULE in latin america :No des papaya
You broke the first law

Chapter 1 : Return

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By tirewriter

Y/N looked longingly at the facade of Canterlot High School as she prepared to return to Equestria. It had been a few years since he had encountered the opposite version of her and merged with her, becoming a unique being. Now, he walked the familiar hallways of the school in search of direction, feeling the soft hum of the classrooms around him.The bell rang, marking the end of class time and the start of lunch. The students left the classrooms, some of them recognized Y/N and approached with curiosity.

???: Senior Director Y/N! What are you doing here?


Y/N: Calm your curiosity, Pinkie. And just call me Y/N, I don't like formalities.


Pinkie Pie: I'm sorry, Senior... I mean, Y/N. It's unusual to see you here, considering you're also in charge of the Crystal and Dragon Academies. We usually see you managing those schools.

Y/N: I'm not that absent, Pinkie. Simply running multiple schools at the same time can be complicated.

Pinkie: I guess so.


Y/N: You haven't organized any parties at the cafeteria recently, have you?


Pinkie smiled nervously at Y/N's question, and a voice behind him answered.


???: I assure you that she has not done so since the last time he saw us, Sir.


Y/N turned around to find a person who looked very much like a human, with yellowish skin and pink hair.


Y/N: I'm glad to hear that, Fluttershy. I don't know what I would do if I had to have a food fight again with inedible decorations. That was a disaster.

Everyone laughed remembering the event.

Fluttershy: Well, Professor, I have to take Pinkie with me. Rarity and Applejack are waiting for us.


Y/N nodded in understanding as Fluttershy led Pinkie away. In the middle of the conversation, 

Y/N managed to hear a question and a muffled answer.


Pinkie: Is Applejack going to confess?


Fluttershy: No, but I'm working on it. They are so obvious to each other that only they don't see it...

Y/N couldn't hear anymore because he started walking away towards the principal's office. He greeted other students and teachers, including the PE teacher, Chrysalis, who seemed to have some interest in him.

Y/N knew he was attractive, but he didn't understand why he was causing such a stir. He had white hair due to his albinism, a characteristic he did not possess in Equestria. Additionally, he had heterochromia in his irises; His left eye was green, and his right was colored (c/e). Although he could change the color of his left eye, he rarely did so so as not to scare people. His body was well exercised; After all, why not stay in shape if you were immortal? He had some battle scars that told stories of his adventures.

He gently knocked on the door of the address, and a voice from inside answered: "I'm coming." 

The door opened, revealing Luna.

Moon: *Gasp*

Luna ran towards Y/N and hugged him tightly.

Luna: Uncle Y/N!

Y/N accepted the hug warmly and balanced himself against Luna's weight on top of him.


Y/N: Nice to see you again, Luna.


At that moment, Celestia arrived at the door.

Celestia: Luna, what's wrong? -she asked from inside.

Moon: Flameball, come here. Uncle Y/N is back!


Y/N looked at Luna for an explanation, and she shrugged into her lap.


Y/N: Remind me why I taught you that nickname for your sister?


Luna: You know why.

Y/N rolled her eyes at Luna's response and started laughing.

Celestia, who had caught Y/N's drama from the beginning, also laughed.

Y/N: It's okay, Luna, I was just joking. Although you are right,  I did come with a specific reason

Celestia calmed down and asked, "Which one is it?"


Y/N: Well, you see, due to certain business matters, I must leave the country. You may not hear from me for a while, but I will try to get back to you as soon as possible.

Moon: Where are you going?

Y/N: I have to go to Jamaica, and due to a certain background, I probably won't be allowed to make calls.

Celestia: What happened?

Y/N: It's a long story, maybe I'll tell you later, but not now. What do you want me to bring you?


Celestia: I want the rarest flower you can find, obviously not poisonous.


Luna: I want a lion cub!

Y/N: You know that animal trafficking is illegal, right?

Luna pouted.


Luna: Then I'll settle for a lion's fang, but let it be a natural fall, please. I don't want poachers' products. She-she wrinkled her nose as she added the last bit.


Y/N: Sure, Luna. But that doesn't mean I won't leave you gifts.


Both princesses' faces lit up as Y/N searched through her backpack for the gifts. He took out a mask and offered it to Luna.

T/N: Luna, always so happy and playful, I give you this mask. It's an antique, and before you say anything, I've restored it so you can use it. It is assumed that a part of Loki's own power resides in it, so be careful. Unless you want to wear it just for Halloween, that is. Also, if you ever get bored of it, keep in mind that it is worth around 10 million euros.

They both opened their eyes in surprise at the exorbitant price, and Y/N continued taking out a golden bracelet for Celestia.


T/N: Celestia, I offer you the bracelet of the Sun, offered by the god Ra to the most beautiful woman in Egypt in her time. It is said to grant clarity in decision making and shine even on the darkest days. I offer it to you in recognition of your great responsibility and your ability to guide others. Plus, it's made of gold.

Celestia hesitated for a moment, but she finally put the bracelet on while Luna caressed her mask carefully.

Moon: Wow! Thank you, Y/N. Although it is very valuable to us...

Y/N: Have you ever bothered to check how much your inheritance is?

They both shook their heads.

Y/N: You should.

After a warm goodbye, Y/N left the office and, as she took one last look at the school he had so lovingly helped build.


With the cold night air touching her long wild locks, Y/N headed for the portal back to Equestria. It was time to return.


(skiptime provided by a chibi Y/N healing a scratch from a chibi Luna riding a skateboard.)



Y/N disappeared through the portal, leaving behind the school and his nieces, Princesses Celestia and Luna, with gifts and fond memories.


Y/N returned at night. With control of his power, he gave himself a few minutes to enter the portal. Time was pressing.He knew that his absence would not be permanent, but still, he was filled with nostalgia. Then, with the cold night air brushing against his long, wild hair, he stepped into the portal, returning to Equestria....



Shit they had forgotten about Sunset Shimer.

However, they brushed it off, trusting that someone else would take care of her.

Bacon hair wouldn't do much of a harm


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