Avatar The Rise Of The Blue B...

By ArkScorpion669

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YN Augustine is a normal 15 teenager he lived with his parents things were fine until the terrible event happ... More

Bio
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chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
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chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
Bio Avatar TWOW
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
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chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20πŸ‹
Avatar 3 Bio
Black Manta Bio
On Hold

chapter 10

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A few hours pass YN Kiri Lo'ak Spider and Tuktirey are exploring they are on a giant roots of the Hallelujah Mountains they are having a good time  as they were having fun and laughing

Lo'ak: bro

Kiri: go monkey boy

YN: this is awesome

Tuktirey: guys wait up

The scene shows of them walking through the jungle Tuktirey sees a plant and she started playing with it

Lo'ak: Tuk keep up

Tuktirey: okay okay

Spider: bro why'd you bring her anyway

Lo'ak: she's such a cry baby she's all I'm telling you're not supposed to go to the battlefield I'll tell mom if you don't let me come

Kiri: don't pick on her

Tuktirey stick her tongue out at Lo'ak

YN: come on Lo'ak Tuk here is just bord being stuck at home all the time so why not like her come she stay close to me

Lo'ak: right

The scene shows of YN Lo'ak  Spider and Tuktirey going to a old gunship

Lo'ak: come on

Spider: oh sick

Tuktirey: are there any dead bodies up there

YN: Don't worry Tuk no dead bodies

Spider: bro wish this thing works

YN: Spider if it did you don't know how to fly it

Lo'ak: yeah monkey don't fly

Spider: shut up

Tuktirey: hey guys where's Kiri

YN looks around and doesn't see Kiri anywhere

YN: I'll go look for her Tuk stay close to Lo'ak or Spider

Tuktirey: okay

YN starts looking around for his half sister why she did she disappear then YN saw Kiri on the ground and looked like she was sleeping as the seeds of the sacred tree were around her

YN: Kiri hey Kiri wake up

YN shakes Kiri and she wakes up

YN: you okay sis

Kiri: I was doing that thing again wasn't I

YN: yeah you were

Lo'ak: Kiri

Spider: Kiri

Tuktirey: Kiri YN we have to get back

YN: let's go before dad and mom get back

Kiri: right

YN Kiri Lo'ak Spider and Tuktirey started heading back home before Jake and Neytiri get back then YN notice something and investigates

Kiri: what is it brother

Tuktirey: we're always supposed to be home by eclipse

YN looks at footprints and they are way too big for a normal person

YN: these are way too big for a person

Spider: Avatars

YN: maybe

Lo'ak: but they're for sure not ours

YN: he's right why would Avatars be out here

YN Lo'ak and Spider started following the footprints

Kiri: what are you doing

YN: tracking

YN starts tracking the footprints he sees multiple footprints of Avatars Lo'ak Kiri Spider and Tuktirey followed him then YN sees something he would not see again it was the old base of where he fought against Quaritch years ago and he sees Avatars

Kiri: we are never supposed to come here dad is going to ground you for life

YN: Kiri stop

Lo'ak: bro we have got to check this out

YN: what no Lo'ak we should go back and tell dad about this

Lo'ak: come on don't be a wuss

Lo'ak and Spider go closer YN followed them with Kiri and Tuktirey behind him

Spider: bro that's where your dad YN and my dad fought

YN: yeah it's a place that I was never going to see again

Lo'ak: that's your dad's actual suit

YN: and what's left of his body

Spider: holy shit

???: Lyle sees if you can pull some date off that dash cam

Lyle: that thing dealer then shit colonel

YN heard that Avatar sounds like Quaritch

YN: I gotta call this in

Spider: no bro we're gonna get in trouble

YN: Jake needs to know about this

YN contacts Jake

YN: Devil Dog Devil Dog this is Blue Beetle over

Jake coms: Blue Beetle send your traffic

YN: I got eyes on some guys they look like Avatars but they're wearing camo and carrying ARs there's six of them over

Jake coms: what's your pos over

YN: uh we're at the old shack

Jake coms: who's we

YN: me Lo'ak Spider Kiri and uh Tuk

Jake coms: Son you listen to me very carefully you pull back right now do not make a sound you get the hell out of there move you copy

YN: yes sir moving out

Kiri: see I told you

YN: Kiri let's not worry about that let's get out of here

Everyone started quietly moving making sure not to be seen by the RDA Avatars

Kiri: you're going to be in so much trouble

Lo'ak: Kiri stop

YN: guys come on

Tuktirey: it's almost eclipse come on

Then a Avatar came out of the bushes and grab Tuktirey as more Avatars come out with their weapons out YN turned his arms into arm cannons and aims as Lo'ak and Spider aimed their bows then something wrap around YN making him drop on his knees his HUD was staticing as red electricity was around him the Scarab systems were malfunctioning then YN saw Black Manta

YN: Manta

Black Manta: hello Beetle

Black Manta grab YN by the of his head and place a dagger at his neck Lo'ak and Spider drop their bows as the Avatars grabbed them then the other RDA Avatars arrived

???: what have we here

Then a Avatar grabbed Kiri hand showing her fingers

???: hey Colonel check it out four fingers we got a half breed

He looks at Lo'ak

???: show me your fingers

Lo'ak hold up his hands and gives him a double bird

???: you're his aren't you

Lo'ak hissed at him

???: you're his all right

He grabbed Lo'ak by his hair

???: where is he

Lo'ak in Na'vi: sorry I don't speak English to buttholes

??? In Na'vi: where is your father

He pulled Lo'ak hair really hard as it hurt him

Tuktirey: YN I'm scared

YN: it's okay Tuk just stay calm

Black Manta: shut up

The Avatar looks at YN

???: YN is that you

YN: sorry I don't know you

???: show me you're face

YN wasn't gonna until Black Manta place the dagger closer to his neck

Black Manta: show him your face

YN helmet deform showing his face

???: hahaha it is really you look at you haven't aga a day

YN: do I know you

???: you may not remember me since I was dead

YN: was dead

???: remember you and Jake fight against

YN realize who it was it was Quaritch

YN: Quaritch

Quaritch: ahh you figure it out Hello YN long time no see

YN: how you're dead

Quaritch: was dead now where is Jake

YN: I ain't telling you shit

Question: really you wanna play it this way kid Manta step back

Black Manta step back then Quaritch grabbed his AR and started hitting and beating YN with the back of his weapons

Tuktirey: STOP IT

Kiri in Na'vi: PLEASE STOP

Spider: HEY GET OFF HIM

Lo'ak: I'LL KILL YOU

Quaritch continues beating YN almost to death and stop to catches his breath he grabbed YN by the back his head as his face was bloody and beating up

Question: now where is Jake

YN spit out blood on Quaritch face as he wipe off the blood off his face

Quaritch: really still wanna play games

Quaritch grabbed his knife and let out his YN as Black Manta grabbed him and Quaritch walked over to Kiri

Lo'ak: Kiri no

Spider: HEY HEY DON'T TOUCH HER

YN: YOU TOUCH HER I'LL KILL YOU

Black Manta hits YN and Quaritch looks at Spider

Quaritch: what's your name kid

Spider: Spider Socorro

Quaritch: Miles

Spider: nobody calls me that

Quaritch: well I'll be damned well I figured they sent you back to earth

Spider: they can't put babies in cryo dipshit

???: Where are we doing boss

Black Manta: why don't I just kill the Beatle right now

Quaritch: not yet Manta

Black Manta: why you how much I want him dead

Quaritch: you'll kill him once we get the Scarab off him and when we do you can kill him

Black Manta: fine

Timeskip

It was nighttime the Avatars were for extraction YN Lo'ak Kiri Spider and Tuktirey were being taken as prisoners Black Manta hold on to YN then he heard a familiar call YN know that Neytiri was closed meaning also Jake Kiri started speaking in Na'vi a RDA tell her to shut up but Kiri speaking in Na'vi he told to shut up again and then a Arrow hit him in the eye killing him everyone starts firing were the arrow was YN manged to Black Manta off him and break out the electric rope and runs off and continue running and he meet up with Jake and Neteyam

Jake: YN

YN: dad

Jake hug YN

Jake: Thank Eywa you're okay are you hurt

YN: I'm fine

Jake noticed YN face was bloody and beating then everyone was together Neytiri hug YN and Tuktirey as Jake hug Lo'ak YN notice that Spider was missing

YN: Kiri where's Spider

Kiri: they took him they took him

YN: hey sis it's okay

YN hug Kiri as she crys

YN: Spider is tough he'll be okay

Timeskip

Back at home base YN Kiri Neteyam Lo'ak and Tuktirey where listening to Jake and Neytiri conversation

Jake: this thing this Quaritch whatever he is he can walk right in here he can walk right under Eywa nose

Neytiri: this is our family this is our home

Jake: this is about our family this is about our little ones

Neytiri: I cannot you cannot ask this I cannot leave my people I will not

Jake: he's hunting us he's targeting our family

Neytiri: you cannot ask this the children everything they've even known the forest this is our home

Jake: he had our children he had them under his knife he nearly beating YN to death

Neytiri grabbed her father ceremonial bow

Neytiri: my father gave me this bow as he lay dying and he said protect the people you're Toruk Macto

Jake: this will protect the people Quaritch has Spider and that kid knows everything he knows our whole operation and he can lead them right in here if the people harbor us they will die do you understand look I got nothing I got no plan but I can protect this family that I can do

Neytiri had tears going down her cheeks and Jake placed his hands on Neytiri shoulders

Jake: I know one thing whatever we go this family is our fortress

Jake and Neytiri hug and Kiri looks at her brother

Kiri: what do we do brother

YN looks down and he really doesn't know what do to do Lo'ak Neteyam Kiri and Tuktirey always trust of YN plan since he is the first adopted children of the family they always follow his plan but this time he doesn't have a plan

To be continue

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