En Swasa Kaatre

By Rishnas_diary

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An emotional Love story of Aadhavan and Sandhya❤️ Hi all, Tried a new story.. Give it a read and comment your... More

Introduction
Chapter 1
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
New Story
Chapter 76

Chapter 2

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Recap: Aadhavan reached munnar..

A girl was in the kitchen.. as it was Sunday, she is doing her cleaning work..  it is her weekly duty to clean her messed up kitchen weekly once..

: che.. evlo tha pathu pathu senjalum intha kitchen matum yen dha ipdi nasamagutho therila.. itha clean paniye enoda Sunday fulla poidum pola.. ahh.. indha kara vera pogave matuthu.. pesama inime namalum pattama mari velila iruka adupula saapadu senji palagika vediyathu tha.. (she is doing her works in between her polambals.. at the time she heard a voice from out side..)

: sandhya... sandhya... enga iruka..

: eii.. sandhya veliya va di.. inga vanthu paru ivaloda kolatha.. (Yes it is our heroine..)

Sandhya: itho vara ma.. ethuku ipdi kathuringa.. inga thana iruk..

(her words stopped in the middle and her eyes widened due to the shock seeing the scenario.. there a lady stood with two kids.. a boy at the age of 6 and a girl at the age of 3.. both of them fully covered with mud..)

Sandhya: ayiayoo.. enachi.. enna ipdi dress ellam seru (mud).. enga vilunthinga rendu perum..

Lady: inga paru sandhya.. vara vara un ponnoda vaalu thanam romba jaasthi aaiduchi.. paru en paiyana epdi pottu adichi sethula thalli vitruka.. onu kadaka onu aairuntha yaru paapa..

(sandhya glarred the girl who tried to hide behind her paati pattama..)

Saandhya: aadhu.. paati pinadi oliyatha.. olunga vandhu munadi nilu.. enna nadanthuchi.. neetha avana adichiya.. (the girl was our Aadhya..)

(Imagine all of the Aadhu's conversation in her baby (mazhalai) tone..)

Aadhu: (pouted..) no ma.. avantha first en cycle a sethukula thalli vittan.. adhuku apra tha na avanayum sethukula thalli vitta.. apra nanga rendu perum sethukulla sanda potukitom..

Boy: ila aunty iva poi soldra.. ivaloda pudhu cycle la oru vaati otitu tharanu ketathuku iva thara mudiyathunu soli ena adichi keela thalli vituta..

Pattama: yen da.. un vayasu enna ava vayasu enna chinna pulla unna adichi thalli vitutanu soldra..

Lady: pakkatha chinna pulla.. engitaye enna kathu kathura.. vitta enaye adichiruva pola.. pavo en paiyan appavi ndra naala ipdi adiya vangitu nikuran..

Sandhya: (glarred aadhu..) enna Aadhu ithellam.. enga un cycle..

Aadhu: (face palmed.. and started to ran..) iru ma.. ore oru nimishathula vanthudra..

Sandhya: eii.. aadhu nillu di.. enga odra..

(before that she ran away and came with her cycle which is also covered with mud..)

Aadhu: (pouted..) paru ma.. namma pudhu babya epdi sethukula pottu alukakitanu.. pavom ithuku evlo valichirukum.. adhutha avanayum sethukula thalli vitta..

Lady: ethu.. cycle ku valichirukuma.. enna di kadha vitutu iruka.. paru sandhya ivala.. pandrathayum panitu epdi moonjiya onume theriyatha mari vechitu irukanu..

Sandhya: aadhu inga vaa.. (she kneeled down before her..) enna nadandhuchinu theliva solu amma kita.. ethuku avana thalli vitta..

Aadhu: maa.. na cycle eduthutu ponala.. apa ivanga veetukita poitu irunthana.. ivan apa engita vanthu enaku unoda cycle la oru round thanu ketan.. first na oru round pora, second round nee po nu sonna ma.. sari adhu varaikum na unna thali vidranu soli ena ivanga veetu pakathula iruntha sethula thali vitutu ena pathu sirichan ma.. adhutha enaku kovam vandhurichi.. iavanayum sethukula thalli vituta..

Boy: poi soldra aunty.. na patuku tha enga veetla ukanthutu iruntha.. ivale vanthu venune enna thalli vitta..

Pattama: suma ukanthutu irukavana kuptu ava ethuku da thalli vida pora.. nee avakita pogama ava ethuku ungita vambuku vara pora solu..

Lady: nalarukunga.. iva pandra rowdism tha intha theruvuke nalla theriyume.. summa irukama dailyum yaravathu oruthara vambiluthu kitu thana iruka..

Lady2: aama ka.. neega soldrathu correct tha.. nethu kuda unga veetuku ethutha veetu seetha akka kita poi en ponnu tha dailyum avanga veetu Bell a adichitu odirathunu soliruka.. avanga kalangathala vanthu en veetla kathitu poranga..

Aadhu: na onum poi solala.. seetha aunty tha nethu ena kuptu ketanga.. neetha bell adichiyanu.. na patha sidhu anna vum, sharmi akka vum tha bell adichitu odunaga.. adhutha andha aunty kita sonna..

Lady: nee vaaya mudu di.. ithula unaku enna dhairiyam iruntha engitaye vanthu un cycle a kaluvi thara soluva..

Aadhu: aama unga paiyan thana sethula thalli vitan.. apa neegathana kaluvi tharanum.. enaku theriyathu enoda cycle a clean panni thanga.. (she sat in the road before her home started to whining..) enoda pudhu cycle tha enaku venum.. clean panni thanga.. (she started to cry..)

Pattama: achoo.. en thangame ethuku di alugura.. ava clean panalana enna.. vaa namale poi clean panikalam.. paru dress fulla seru.. vaa namalum cycle um senthu kulikalam.. vaa da en thangam.. (she cooed, lifted her and took her back side..) Aadhu ma.. nee un dress ellam kalatitu ingaye iru.. paati vanthura..

Lady: ithellam enathu sandhya.. iva vayasuku etha pechiya pesitu iruka.. engitaye thimira vanthu en cycle a clean pani kudunganu sandaiku nikira.. un mugathukaga patha ilana apdiye naalu ara vitrupa..

Pattuma: adiye yaru veetu pullaya yaru adikirathu.. kaiya odachi adupula vechiruva.. avatha theliva solurale di, un paiyantha vanthu modhala thalli vitanu.. ava aasaiya vechiruntha cycle la vanthu ivan thalli vita ava ninnu vedika pathutu irupala.. ava enna elathukum ivala mari poruthu povanu nenachikitu irukiya nee.. aala paru vanthuta paiyana kutikitu complaint pandrathuku.. unaku enna di, etho un pulla panatha mari pesura.. iva onum ivala poi avanga kita pottu kudukala.. avangatha ivakita ketrukanga.. adhu kolandha epdi di poi solum adha adhu pathatha soliruku.. nee nyayama patha un pullaya tha adakki vekanum adha vitutu vandhuta aadikitu ivaluku vakkaalathu vanga..

Lady: neenga un velaya parunga pattama.. ivaluku ethavathu oru prachana naa neenga ethuku munadi varinga.. yen avaluku vaai ilaya.. ava pesa matala.. ava pullaya pathi therinja nala thana amaithiya nikkira.. ungaluku enna rosham pongitu varuthu..

Sandhya: akka theva ilama pesathinga.. na onum en ponnu mela thappu iruka naala amaithiya ila.. ithu kolandhainga vishayam.. inaiku adichipanga nalaiku senthupanga.. ithula namma nadula vanthu ethu sari thappunulam aaraichi panitu iruka kudathu.. en ponnu epavum unmaiya tha soluva.. avaluku poi pesa theriyathu.. ava kanula iruka kovatha pathapaye therijikita ava mela thappu ilanu.. irunthalum ithula nama thalaittu prachanaya perusakka kudathunu tha na amaithiya iruntha.. matha padi neega nenaikira marilam onum ila.. ivan avala thalli vitta nalatha ava ivana adichiruka.. ivan onum seiyama ava ivana kandipa thalli vitruka maata.. kutitu poi ethavathu adi patrukanu pathutu ivana kulika veinga.. adha vitutu suma kolandhai kita potti potutu irukathinga.. (with that she moved from there.. but the ladies..)

Lady2: (murmured..) vidu kamala.. iva kita pesi ena aaga poguthu.. veetla aambalanu oruthan iruntha ivangaluku bayam irukum.. kekrathuku yaru ilandra thimirula tha ivalunga ipdi aaditu irukalunga.. ithuku indha kelavi support vera..

Lady: (murmured..) nanume appa ilatha pullandra nala tha ka suma vidra.. pavom.. polachi pogatum.. (Hearing that sandhya's eyes started to welledup in tears..)

Pattama: adiyei nillunga di rendu perum.. neega pathingala di ava appa ilatha pullanu neega pathingala.. eva di ava enga veetu pullaiku pavam pakruva.. dhairiyam iruntha munadi ninnu solu di.. naaka iluthu vechi otta aruthuruva.. vanga di inga rendu perum..

(Hearing pattama's voice the ladies started to walk fast towards their house like they heard nothing.. pattama seen sandhya who stood there with tears.)

Pattuma: enna thangam nee.. ivalunga oru aalunu ivalunga soldrathuku ellam ipdi kanna kasakitu irupiya.. ivalungaluku ithe vela urula endha ilicha vaayi kedapa avakita vambu ilukalamne thiriya vediyathu.. inaiku etho unaku neram sari ila nee sikkikita avlotha.. itha ellam kedanthu yosichitu nikatha.. paru nama singa kutty avala left and right vangi vitutu vanthuruku.. andha bayathula tha paiyana kutitu vanthuta inga aadikitu.. nee ethukum kavala padatha papa.. ellame sekira sari aadium.. va.. poi andha vaalu polamburatha kepom.. ava vera bayangra kovathula iruka.. vaa.. poi papom..

(she dragged sandhya.. she too went back side and seen aadhya who sulked and tried to clean her cycle with her kutty kai.. seeing her sandhya neared and tightly hugged her..)

Aadhu: amma.. thalli po na alukka iruka.. (she tried to wriggle.. sandhya left her and kissed her forehead..)

Sandhya's Mv:

"Sorry da pattu.. enala tha nee inaiku ivanga kita indha mari pechilam keka vendi iruku.. ammava manichiru da.. amma voda avasarathala tha en thangatha ivanga vaaiku vandha padi ellam pesuranga.."

"Anaiku enganga poninga neega.. neega matum anaiku anga irunthuruntha na indha mari muttal thanamana mudiva eduthuruka maata.. pavam unga pullaiku neega irunthum, avala ivanga appa ilatha pullanu soldranga.. ellame enala tha anaiku na vaaya thoranthu ungakita soliruntha inaiku namaku intha nelama vandhurukathula.. unga rendu perayum oruthar kita irunthu oruthara pirichi vechitendra kutra unarchi ena mothama konurathukula engita vandhurunga please.. enaku unagala pakanum pola iruku.. aana uruku vanthu ungala pakra thairiyam ila.. please.. ena manichirunga.. enga kita vanthurunga please.."

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Hi all,

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P.S: Guys it's just my imagination..  naraya edathula logic idikum.. so romba stricta logic pakathinga.. throughout the story engayavathu logic mis achina manichidunga🙏

Thankyou🤍

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