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(There is no janki's sister in this story..Think of her as some friend of her rather than ragini's maasi..)
There will be lots of new characters jinka vastavikta se koi lena dena nhi hai.. I meant swaragini world ki vastavikta.. Fiction in a fiction..
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Ragini was sitting in front of mirror getting dressed for her sangeet..
She can't believe she turned out this lucky. Finally she is getting her love, her laksh..
She has always wanted his love back but had stopped hoping for it long back.. But now with some miracle he had wanted to give them a chance..
Smiling happily she was fixing her necklace when there was a knock on the door..
Ragini turns and saw dadi standing there..
Ragini - dadi aap..
(Dadi you..)
Dadi - dekh kaun aaya hai thaare se milne..
(Look who is here to meet you)
She looks confused but soon her confusiin turns into happiness seeing the person standing there..
Ragini - Mamu..
She screams loudly and runs to hug him..
Ragini's mama , Jatin Saraf saw his neice and happily hugged her..
Jatin- kaisi hai humaari gudiya.. ??
(How is my gudiya ?? )
He looks at her emotionally..
Ragini - hum theek hai.. Aap kitne din baad humse milne aaye.. Aise koi karta hai kya.. ??
(I m ok.. You have came to meet me after so long.. Who does that..??)
Jatin - Sorry..Sorry my baby, tumhe toh pata hai na hume business k chakkar m abroad jana pada, itne time tumhe mil bhi nhi paaye..
(Sorry.. Soory my baby, you know I had to go abroad for business, I couldn't meet you for so long..)
Ragini - par ab hum bahut khush hai aap aaye..
(But now I m very happy that you have come...)
Jatin - kaise nhi aate.. ?? Humaari gudiya ka itna special din hai, hum miss kare aisa ho sakta hai kya.. Waise bhi pichli baar sab itna achanak hua, humein pata tak nhi chala..
(How would I not come ?? It's such a special day of my gudiya, How can i miss it?? Anyways last time everythi g happened so suddenly, I didn't even got to know..)
Ragini looks down hearing that..
Ragini - aapko sab pata hai?? Aap humse ghussa hai..??
(You know everything?? You are angry with me..?? )
Jatin makes her look at him. .
Jatin - agar hum yeh kahe ki hume bura nhi laga toh yeh jhuth hoga.. Hume bura laga lekin humein khushi hai ki ab tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai.. Aur waise bhi hum apni gudiya se ghussa reh sakte hai bhala.. Tum toh humaare dil ka tukda ho..
(If I say that I didn't feel bad then I will be lying.. I felt bad but I am happy that now you have realized your mistakes.. And anyways can I stay angry at my gudiya..?? You are a piece of my heart..)
Ragini smiles with tears and hugs him again..
Ragini - I am sorry mamu.. I m so sorry..
Jatin (caressing her head) - it's ok beta.. It's ok.. (Looking down at her) tum khush ho na??
(Are you happy..??)
Ragini nods happily..
Jatin - toh bas phir, hum bhi khush.. Bas aise hi khush raho..
(Then that's it, even I am happy.. Just stay happy like this..)
Ragini smiles widely at him..
Jatin - khush raho beta..
(Be happy child..)
Ragini - mamu raghu kaha hai.. ?? Wo nhi aaya.. Aisa ho hi nhi sakta ki wo aaye aur humse na mile..
(Mamu where us raghu?? He didn't come?? It's not possible that he will come and wont meet me..)
Jatin - wo aaya hota toh seedha toofan ki tarah aata tumse milne ..
(If he would have come he would have came to meet you directly like a tornado..)
Ragini(getting a little upset) - par wo kyu nhi aaya?? Hum usse kitna miss kar rahe hai.. Kitna time ho gaya hai.. Sirf video calls p baat karte ahi hum..
(But why didn't he come?? I m missing him so much.. It's been so long.. We only talk on video calls..)
Jatin - wo toh bahut excited tha tumse milne k liye but uska last exam baaki hai.. 12th board hai isliye rukna pada.. Par bahut muh phula kar baitha hai..
(He was very excited to mmet you but his last exam is remaining. It's 12th board that's he had to stay.. But he is very annoyed by it )
Ragini - Arey, pehle pata hota toh toh hum koi aur date rakh dete.. Wo humaari shaadi miss karega ab..
(Oh, if I had known earlier we would have kept some other date.. He will miss my wedding now..)
She gets upset with this thought..
Jatin - humse usse promise kiya hai ki uske exams hote hi wo aa sakta hai aapse milne..
(I have promised him that he can come to meet you as soon as he finishes his exams..)
Ragini - nhi toh hum hi milne aa jayenge.. Bahut miss kar rahe hai hum usse..abhi hum usko call kar lete hai.. Hum nhi chahte ki kaharaab mood ki wajah se uske exam par affect ho..
(If not then I will go to meet him.. I m missing him a lot.. I will give him a call now.. I don't want his exam to be affected because of his ruined mood..)
Jatin - haa haa kar lo.. Tumse baat karke uska mood thik hona hi hai.. Waise bhi bahut bigaad rakha hai tumne sahabzaade ko..
(Yes yes do it.. His mood is found to improve after talking with you.. Anywyas you have sopiled that brat too much..)
Ragini (pouting) - arey yeh kya baat hui.. Humaara chota bhai hai, usse nhi pamper karenge toh kisse karenge, aap bhi toh humri kitna pamper karte hai aur humein pata hai ki aap bhi kaise humesha maa k paas hi jaate the har cheez k liye.. Aap dono par hi gaye hai hum log..
(Hey.. That's not fair.... He is my younger brother, if I won't pamper then whom I will, even you pamper me so much and I know that you also use to go to maa for everything.. We both have gone on you both only..)
Jatin - haa haa baba.. Sahi hai.. Meri mazaal jo tumhe kuch keh saku.. ??
(Yes yes.. It's right.. Could I even dare to. Say anything to you..?? )
Ragini - bilkul..
(Right..)
He looks at her and ragini laughs loudly.. He smiles at her.. She was exactly like his sister janki whom he loved dearly..
Seeing ragini dressed like a bride he was reminded of when he saw janki as a bride.. She looked so beautiful and so is ragini....
It's sad that who was their princess, his sister couldn't get her happiness she deserved from her marriage..
When he got to know about shekhar's second marriage and the whole story behind it, he was extremely angry.. He would have definitely done something extreme if ragini wouldn't have stopped him..
Although he is still angry, it's impossible for him to see someone else getting what his sister deserved but for his gudiya he can do anything.. He will control himself because that's what ragini want..
Now he really hope that his gudiya will get all her happiness from her marriage.. Honestly he isn't sure about the guy considering their history and his so called feelings for shekhar's other daughter and the way he hurt ragini but he can't deny ragini's faults in it as well, so he is ready to give a chance .. As long as his gudiya is happy..
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Ragini was heartbroken.. She still couldn't come to terms with fact that laksh betrayed her... Laksh whom she trusted once again betrayed her once again.. And not only that, he cruelly broke her heart, her dignity.. Once again..
She looked at the fan and duppata which she hamged from it.. Wrapping it around her neck, she pushes the stool , closing her eyes..
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Jatin was still in shock.. He just couldn't get the picture of ragini hanging herself out of his mind and then of his sister wrapped in white cloth, lying lifelessly .. He closes his eyes tight trying to remove that picture away..
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Ragini was sitting on her bed leaning on bedpost deep in her thoughts..
What a big idiot she was.. She was about to finish herself not even thinking about her family.. What a big blundee she tried to do.. Such a cowards she is..
She realized her mistake seeing crying and broken expressions of her family..
They all scolded her, pleaded her, comforted her except one person..
He was just standing there in background, without saying anything, without looking at her and it was breaking her heart even more..
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Jatin slowly opens the door and saw her sitting on her bed.. Seeing her fine, atleast physically, he takes a relieved breath..
He just can't help but to check over her again and again.. He was extremely scared by what she did..
After checking up on her, he turns back to go but was stopped by a soft voice..
Ragini - Mamu..
He stops in his tracks but doesn't turn back..
Ragini - itna naaraz hai aap humse.. ??
(Are you that angry with me..??)
He clenches his fist trying to control himself..
Seeing him not responding, ragini gets up from the bed but since she was weak, she stumbles ..
Hearing the noise he turns back and hets shocked to see her.. He immediately comes towards her nad supports her and makes her lie back on the bed properly..
Jatin - kya kar rahi ho.. ?? Agar lag jaati toh.. ??
Abhi bhi kamzori hai tumhe..
(What are you doing?? What if you got hurt?? You still have weakness..)
Ragini doesn't say anything but just looks at him with teary eyes..
Jatin looks at her and turns to go from there but was stopped as she holds her sleeve from behind..
Jatin stops in shock..
He remembered little ragini who would always hold his sleeve from behind to stop him or to hide behind him..
Tears starts flowing rapidly..
Ragini - I am sorry mamu..
Not being able to control himself he turns and hugs her crying..
Ragini also cries with him..
Jatin - kyu ragini?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa?? Tumne kisi k baare m nhi socha?? Pata hai kitni takleff hui humein?? Kitna dar gaye hum..
(Why ragini?? Why did you do this?? You didn't think about anyone?? You know how much it hurt me.. How scared I was??)
Ragini - I m sorry.. Sorry..
Jatin - Kya woh shaksh tumhaare liye itna zaruri hai?? Hum sabse jyada jaruri ki tumhe uske saamne apni daadi k aansu nhi dikhte, apne pita ki takleef nhi dikhti, kaise sahenge yeh sab tumhaare dadaji?? Aur hum?? Humaare baare m bhi nhi socha?? Kya tum nhi janti humaari duniya aap dono se hi toh hai.. Agar aap m se kisi ko jara si kharoch aa jaaye toh hum bardhaasht nhi kar paate.. Yeh sab kaise sahe hum..??
(Is that guy so important to you?? More important than all of us that you can't see your grandmother's tears in front of him, can't see your father's pain, how your grandfather will bear it all?? And me?? You didn't think about even me?? Don't you know that both of you are my wholeif world..?? If any one of you even gets a minor scracth then also I can't bear it.. How do I bear all this..?? )
Ragini looks at him teary eyed..
Ragini - humse galti hogayi.. Maaf kar dijiye humein..
(I made a mistake.. Please forgive me..)
He caress her head..
Jatin - aapke saath itna kuch huya aur humein pata tak nhi chala tha,jab tak pata chala,der ho gayi,uss waqt hum kuch nhi kar paaye par abhi humne apni aankon se tumhaari yeh haalat dekhi.. Humaare dimaag se wo manzar jaa hi nhi raha.. Hum apni behan kho chuke hai par wo tumhaare andar abhi bhi zinda hai.. Agar kuch ho jata toh?? Hum apni behan aur apni gudiya dono ko kho dete.. Tum itni selfish kaise ho sakti ho?? Hum jaante hai ki tumhe kitni takleef hui hai, tumhaara dil toota hai par life m aisi koi problem nhi hoti jo solve na ho sake sab kuch sahi ho sakta hai.. Bas neeyat honi chahiye.. Khud ko nuksaan pahuchana kisi problem ka solution nhi hota.. Bas apno ko takleef dene ka jariya hota hai..
(So much happened and I didn't even know.. When I came to know it was late, I Couldn't do anything but now I have seen you condition from my own eyes.. I couldn't get that scene away from my mind.. I have already lost my sister but she is still alive in you.. What if something happened?? I would have lost both my sister and my gudiya.. How could you be so selfish..?? I know how much it hurt you, your heart broke but there is no problem in life that can't be solved.. Everything can turn right.. All we need to have is intention.. Harming yourself is no way to solve any problem.. It's just a way of hurting your loved ones...)
Ragini was feeling extremely guilty hearing all this..
Jatin - bahut pyaar karti ho na uss insaan se.. ?? Paaglo ki tarah?? Itna ki uske bina rah nhi sakti?? Itna zaruri hai wo tumhaari zindagi main?? Itna ki uske peeche apne bhai ko bhi bhul gayi..
(You love that guy a lot, right?? Like a crazy? So much that you can't live without him?? He is that important in your life?? So much that you even forgot your brother for him )
Ragini realizes in shock..oh god.. Her raghu.. Her baby brother.. How could she forget about him..
Jatin - Jab usse yeh pata chalega toh uspar kya bitegi..?? Uski behan uski duniya hai.. Wo behan sabse dur jaana chahti hai, kaisa lagega usse..?? Tut jayega wo.. Kya tumhe manzoor hai yeh..??
Jo humne face kiya, jo dard humne saha, wo bhi sahe.. Yeh chahti ho tum.. ??
(What he will go through when be will come to know about it?? His sister is his world.. That sister wants to go away from everyone, how would he feel?? He will break apart.. Do you agree with this?? What I have faced, the pain I have gone through, he should also go through with it.. You want this??)
Ragini - nhi nhi.. Hum.. Hum apne raghu ko koi takleef nhi de sakte.. Bilkul bhi nhi..
(No no. I.. I can't hurt my raghu even a little.. Not at all..)
She looks at him pleadingly..
Ragini - humein maaf kar dijiye.. Plz mamu.. Humne kuch socha hi nhi.. Sivaay apni takleef k.. Humaraa raghu.. Nhi.. Hum usse koi takleef nhi hone de sakte..Hum samajh gaye hai ki hum kitni badi bewkuffi karne jaa rahe the..
(Forgive me.. Plz uncle..I don't even think about anything except my pain.. My raghu.. No.. I can't let hi be hurt.. I have umderstood what big stupidity I was about to do..)
She holds his hand with her both hands..
Ragini - plz mamu..
Jatin looks at her crying face.. He softly wipes her tears..
Once again he failed.. Failed to protect the happiness of her, just like he couldn't do it for his sister..
Ragini also got heartbroken by the person he loved..
What is the use of his power if he can't protect his loved ones.. If he can't make his gudiya happy..??
Jatin - ro mat.. Hum tumhaari aankho m aansu nhi dekh sakte..
(Don't cry..I can't see tears in your eyes..)
He thinks about something..
Jatin - Tumhaare saath jisne yeh kiya, chodenge nhi hum usse.. Usse bhi pata chale ki jatin saraf ki gudiya ka dil todne ka kya hasra hota hai..
(I won't leave who did this to you.. Even he should know what is the consequence is breaking heart of jatin saraf's gudiya..)
Ragini - nhi mamu.. Plz..
(No uncle. Plz..)
Jatin - nhi ragini.. Hum usse nhi chodenge.. Uski himmat kaise huyi.. Wo..
(No ragini.. I won't leave him.. How dare he.. He..)
Ragini holds his arm from and puts her head on his shoulder..
Ragini - plz mamu..Hum yeh sab nhi chahte.. Bahut ho gaya yeh badla, nafrat.. Hum thak gaye hai.. Hum bahut thak gaye hai.. Hume nhi chahiye kuch bhi.. Kuch bhi nhi chahiye..
(Plz uncle.. I don't want all this.. It's enough of this revenge , hatred.. I m tired..I m very tired.. I don't want anything. Nothing at all..)
Jatin felt her tears on his sleeves.. He puts his hand on her head..
Jatin - sab thik ho jayega beta.. Hum hai na tumhaare saath.. Sab thik ho jayega..
(Everything will be fine child.. I m with you.. Everything will be ok..)
Ragini keeps sobbing while jatin confronts her..
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Dadi - yeh kya keh rahe ho tum ??
(What are you saying..??)
Jatin - sach keh raha hi kakisa.. Hum gudiya ko wapas apne saath le jaana chahta hai..
(I m saying truth aunty.. I want to take gudiya back with me..)
Dadi - par..
(But..)
Jatin - yahi theek rahega..yaha rahegi toh toh buri yaadein satayegi .. Humaare saath chalegi toh uska dil behal jayega..
(That would be best.. Bad memories with trouble her if she will be here.. If she will come with me, she will be diverted..)
Shekhar - par bhaisahab, aise kaise wo humse dur jaa sakti hai..
(But brother, how could she go away like this..)
Jatin looks at him and then looks down..
Jatin- pehle bhi toh wo rahi hai na humaare saath.. Abhi usse jarurat hai iss sabse dur jaane ki.. Humne puch liya hai gudiya se, usse aitraaz nhi hai..
(Earlier also she use to stay with me.. Now she need to get away from all this.. I have asked from gudiya, she doesn't have any objection..)
Dadi - waise baat toh sahi hai.. Udhar uska man behal jayega.. Aur phir apne bhai k saath toh phir wo sab ko hi bhul jaati hai.. Shayad yeh sahi rahe..
(By the way he is saying right.. She will feel better there.. And then she forget everyone with her brother.. Maybe it will be right.. )
Swara - par dadi ragini aise kaise dur jaa sakti hai.. ??
(But dadi how can ragini go away like this ..??)
Jatin - dur nahi jaa rahi.. Apne ghar hi jaa rahi hai.. Wo uska bhi ghar hai aur hum uska parivaar..
(She is not going away.. She is going to her home only.. That's her home as well and we her family..)
Swara looks down.. She had realized that he hadn't still warmed up to the idea of shekhar's second marriage..
Dadi - theek hai beta.. Agar usse bhi koi aitraaz nhi toh mhaare ko bhi koi aitraaz nhi hai.. Tu Le ja laado ko apne saath..
(Ok son.. If she doesn't have any objection then I don't have any objection as well.. You take ladoo with you..)
Jatin smiles at her.. He can't help but feel happy about the prosepect of his gudiya coming back to live with them..
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On the other side , a guy was riding a horse in fast speed, hitting the ball on the ground with mallet towards the goal post..
People in stands cheering loudly for him..
He hits the ball with force and it goes straight towards the goal....
A loud cheer erupts from the crowd..
He smirks looking at it..
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He gets down from the horse , removing his shades, he looks at the people who were hooting for him..
He smiles charmingly and winks at them..
They all cheers even more loudly especially girls....
Smirking he goes from there..
Another guy comes in front of him.. That guy looks at him with raised eyebrows..
That another guy forward his hand..
Another guy - congratulations for your victory..
Taht guy smiles and shakes his hand..
First guy - thank you Mr rathore.. And nice game but hard luck.. Once again..
He says this last line with a smirk..
Mr. Rathore grits his teeth..
Mr. Rathore - maybe I will have a better luck next time..
First guy - maybe.. But luck chahe jo bhi ho,But ab tak aisa koi bana hi nhi jo humein hara sake..
Mr. Rathore saw his usual arrogant demeanour..
If only he could destroy this arrogance.. Even if once..
Rathore goes from there and another guy comes running there with a bottle and hands it over to him..
That guy - wow.. Congratulations .. You wo once again..Aaj tak tum kabhi uss game m nhi haare..
First guy(taking a sip from his bottle) - sirf iss game m hi nhi, humne kabhi kisi cheez m haarna seekha hi nhi.. Dusre log hume hara sake, ausa sirf khwaab dekh sakte hai..
(Not only in this game, I have not even learnt to be defeated in anything.. Other people to defeat me, they can only dream about it..)
He throws the bottle towards that other guy and putting his shades back goes from there arrogantly..
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Here is other story of mine.. Hopefully you will like it as well..
Actually I haven't decided on a face for this story yet.. I m hell confused.. I have gone through itv, bollywood, south actors but couldn't decide perfect face for this character..
I thought about barun Or vivian but couldn't get that ASR or Rishab image out of my mind..
I know many likes karan but I m not keen on it, atleast not for this story..
Zain is good as well but he has been sanket already..
I also played with the idea of sanket in an all new avataar..
Like they do in reboots or season 2 ..
But then I didn't want to ruin or spoil our sanket which we all love....
Do comment whether you liked it or not and also give suggestions, till then even I will try searching..