kadhal Thantha Vali

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Cover credits @malanimaniraja22 "A misunderstanding that ruined love" ... Arjun:Hey... Unaku vekkama illa ak... More

Cast
Chapter 1: Late Logeshwari
Chapter 2: Farwell
Chapter 3: Veetula Vishesham
Chapter 4: Engagement
Chapter 5: Hey Crazy Penne
Chapter 6: First Time In My Home
Chapter 7: Nerukathin Avasthai
Chapter 8: First Kiss
Chapter 9: Kalyanam
Chapter 10: Ennai Edo Seigirai
Chapter 11 : Thidir Matram
Chapter 12: The Truth
Chapter 13: I Love You Arjun
Chapter 14: The Beginning Of The Worst
Chapter 15: Control Arjun Controlllll
Chapter 16: Aravind
Chapter 17 : My Lucky Charm
Chapter 18 : Apple Of Our Eyes
Chapter 19 : Arjun's Act
Chapter 20 : Engagement And Thaali Pirichu Korthal
Chapter 21: Virandhu Nagarum Naatkal
Chapter 22: Diya Weds Raghav
Chapter 23: Betrayal
Chapter 24: I Will Fight For My Love
Chapter 25: Act A Little Bit
Chapter 26: Vikram's Punishment
Chapter 27: Gift
Chapter 28: Party
Chapter 29 : Their Craziness
Chapter 30: Watching Her
Chapter 31 : Leaving You
Chapter 32 : Avanai Kanden
Chapter 33 : I Hate You......
Important Note
Chapter 35: Her Silent Treatment
Chapter 36: Diya & Raghav's Arrival"
Chapter 37:...........
Chapter 38: Her Pain
Chapter 39: Completely Broken
Chapter 40: His Rubbish Plan
Chapter 41: My Love For Her
Chapter 42: Nadikuriya Arjun
Chapter 43: Accident
Chapter 44: I'll Leave You Forever
Chapter 45 : Manam Ondre Inaiya Thudika... Udalo Vilagi Selgiradu
Chapter 46: Happy Birthday
Chapter 47 : Little Angel
Epilogue
Thanks Note And Honest Note
New Book 3
Bonus Chapter
New Book 4
New Story Update

Chapter 34 : Janani

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Arjun's pov

How dare she call me and talk rubbish..

Munnadi love nu poi solitu irunda. Ippo kozhandaiku aabathunu.. Enna ponnu Iva Ellam kozhandaiya vachu poi solra.

I tried to concentrate my mind on other things but I couldn't.... I feel something odd.

I took out a cigarette and lit it up.. Taking puffs....

What if she is telling the truth...... That can't be.. She will do anything to gain my attention...

I tried hard to divert my mind but couldn't. I put the cigarette down and ran to my car.

I looked at the message she sent me.. It was an address her address....

I got in my car and drove to the address she sent......

Shit shit shit.....

I got struck up in the traffic...... That day I felt that baby's movement. An unknown feeling caught my senses...
Making me long to feel it again but my ego didn't let me do it. That's why I left the coffee shop soon that day.

Rekha's pov ( y/n's neighbor)

Me and rishabh ji were coming back from the grocery store.

We were on the way to our house.... That's when we say... Y/n lying there on a pool of blood.

(just imagine she is unconscious)

Rishabh ji... I called him pointing at y/n.

We rush to her.... She was clenching her belly.

We got scared. Rishabh ji let's take her to the hospital.... I said

He carried her in his arms...

You close the door and come.... He said.

I hurriedly went inside the her house. I saw her phone lying on the phone. I picked it up with me and closed the door and went..

We got in an auto and rushed to the hospital.

Rishabh ji mujhe bohot dhar lag raha hai..... I said to my husband.

(rishabh I'm really scared)

Y/n ko kuch nehi hoga.... Tum fikar mat karo ..... He said
(nothing will happen to y/n, you don't worry)

We reached the government hospital...... We went inside. The doctor on seeing y/n's condition they took her to the emergency ward.

Rishabh ji yeh y/n ki phone..... I said handing him y/n's phone.

(rishabh this is y/n's phone)

Rishabh ji was calling someone from y/n's phone...

Hello... Y/n.. Friend... Rishabh ji talked to the person on the other side of the phone.

Y/n... Government hospital admitted.. Come fast..... He said.

I asked Rishabh ji about who did he talk to..

Mujhe bhi nehi pata...uski phone se last call iss number ka tha.. Isiliye Maine iss number ko call kiya..... He said.

(even I don't know, this is the last dialed number . So I called this number)

(dear makkazhe sorry for my horrible hindi please bear with it)

Arjun's pov

I was on the way to the address y/n sent.

I received a call... From the number y/n called me.

I quickly attended the call...

I heard a guy voice from the other side.

My eyebrows twitched in confusion.

That guy spoke in a broken English.

But I understood what he said.

I drove the car to the government hospital.

I feel tensed....

When I reach there I rushed inside...

I enquired about y/n in the reception.

I literally ran to the emergency ward.

There I saw few people... How can I find the guy who called me.

I quickly dialed y/n's number.

I heard the phone ringing somewhere near me. My eyes traveled in search of that person.

When I noticed him. I raised my hand and went to him.

Y/n.... I asked in a low tone.

Huh she. inside. treatment.... He said.

Oh... I replied.

But deep inside I want to meet her. I want to make sure she is fine. But why I'm feeling this way.

God nothing should happen to her.... I silently prayed.

I was about to go and see her through the small glass before I could move a nurse came calling for y/n's relations.

My legs ran in the direction.....

Y/n's relations.... The nurse said.

I'm. her. brother..... That guy said.

I remained silent. As I couldn't understand what she is saying in hindi.

He said something and looked at me.

Going.. House.. Y/n.. Report.. You come... He said.

I understood what he is trying to say and went along with him

He was about to hire an auto but. I stopped him and gestured him to hop in the car.

He did and I drove off to the address...

When we reached there I was aghast to see the surrounding there.

Garbage were on the road instead of the trashcan. I scrunch my nose when I see the drainage water leaking on the road.....

Ji... Come.... I was brought back to the world when that guy called me to follow him.

I went behind him. My heart was beating faster than it does.

I went with him. He climbed a narrow staircase.... How did y/n stay here in this condition..

My heart beat was raising every second passing...

He opened a door. And entered the house.

I too followed him....

I stepped on something.... I looked down and saw.... Blood....

Suddenly I couldn't breathe......

Ji ji..... He said taking me inside.

I felt suffocated... He bought a glass of water.

When I drank it the next second I spit it out... The water it stinks and it was salty.

I looked around the house.... No no, none can call it as a house. It has nothing, no furniture...

You.. Good... He asked.

Mmm.. I replied and went with him.

He searched something and went inside a room..

I went along with him... There was a foldable mat on the floor.

It was night time....

The wind was blowing inside through the window. My eyes got struck on a diary.

The pages were flipping rapidly by the wind.

I went next to it.. And took it in my hand.

I flipped the pages.

A picture fell out of it... I squatted to take it..

I turned the picture and my eyes widened in shock..


It was my picture which I send to janani when she asked for my photo.... How did y/n get this.

I damn sure it's that picture... Did diya give it y/n.... I know y/n can't get this picture from anywhere else. Because I took exclusively for janani... I didn't post it on social media either.

I looked through the diary.... I was stunned when I saw the handwriting.....

I flipped the page to the most recent one..... My hands started to tremble when I realized it's my janani's handwriting....

My breathe hitched for a second.

I looked around to find something else... But there was nothing...

I quickly took out my phone and took a snap of the handwriting but an old page and send it to diya's number...

I send a voice message too....

Diya idhu yaar handwriting....

I send it... I was impatiently waiting for the reply....

I received a voice message...

I opened it...

arjun... Un pondatti handwriting koodava unaku teriyadu.....i pity my sister 🤦‍♀️

The phone slipped out of my hand...

I fall on the floor.... Tears started coming out of my eyes

My vision blurred by my tears.

I was shocked and I couldn't utter a word.... My eyes let out the tears... My body shivered... My mind replayed diya words again and again.

Appo... Y/n tha janani ah...

Suddenly I felt heaviness in my heart...

I cried out loud...

That guy rushed to me in fear..

You good... No problem.. Y/n good. OK... He said.

But my ears weren't listening to anything..... I cried loudly.....

All these while I was torturing my janani my y/n...

My hands fell on something... I took it in my hand.

Its y/n kurti... I hugged it to my chest and cried....

Sir sir.... He called me..

Then only I remembered about y/n in the hospital...

Let's go to the hospital.... I said and he came with some files.

We rushed to the hospital. I had her diary with me.

When we entered the hospital. I ran to the emergency ward..

I tried to have a look at her but I couldn't.

I slide down the wall and silently cried.....

Patient y/n's relations.... A nurse called.

I rushed to her..

Reports.... she asked....

That's guy came and gave reports to her.

Nurse..... I called her.

She turned...

How is she now.... I called in a feeble tone.

She is in a critical condition.... We can't say anything now... She said and went.

I fall on the floor and started punching the floor to vend out my anger.

(ignore the telephone in his hand)

I closed my face and cried..... I'm sorry y/n.... I mumbled..

Sir... The guy gave me something wrapped in a white cloth...

I looked at him confused.

Y/n... Jewels... He said.

I got it from him and opened it...

I couldn't control my flowing tears....

It has her Thaali.. Which always dangles around her neck.... I wiped my tears and looked closely other than her Thaali there was a stud that too an artificial one.

I took her Thaali in my hand.... I remembered her smiling face.. When I tied her this, on the Thaali Pirichu Korthal function she had happy tears in her eyes. But I snatched all her happiness away because of my stupidity...

Why didn't you tell that you are my janani y/n.... I hugged her Thaali to my chest and cried...

Bhai... No cry... That guy said.

I couldn't control myself .... He sat beside me and rubbed my back.

After sometime the doctor came out. I rushed to him

Doctor how is my wife y/n.... I asked.

Mr. She is in a critical condition now.. We have stopped the bleeding but She has lost lots of blood.. so transfusion is going on. But her body is not responding to the medicines And about her baby..... He was hesitant to say about the baby.

Doctor tell me what's wrong with my baby... I asked him with my tears filled eyes.

There is high chance of miscarriage.... He said.

I slapped my face continously.

Ellam ennala thaa... Naa ippo enna seiven.. En y/n en kozhanda yum ipdi iruka naathan karanam....enga kozhandaiku edachum aachuna naa y/n enna badil sollven..... I cried and continued hitting myself

Sir calm down.... Don't lose your hope... Just pray to God for her speedy recovery.... We will have to wait for atleast 12 hours to know her condition.... He said and left.

I sat down leaning my head against the wall and closed my eyes....

I opened my eyes immediately.... Whenever I close my eyes... I only remember her smiling face....

Naa oru paavi ennala thaa en janani ipdi iruka.... Naa thaa ellathukum karanam... Naa.......... I couldn't think of anything further.....

I sat there plainly looking at the ceiling.... With leading trailing down my cheeks.

Sir... Coffee.... That guy said passing a coffee cup to me. I shook my head.

The time passed..... I sat on The same spot letting out my tears.... Holding her thaali tightly in my hand...

Sir... Food... He asked.

I shook my head..

I didn't move a bit....

Time skip after 12 hours

Mr. Someone tapped on my shoulder...

Its the doctor....

I quickly got up.

Doctor how is she now... How is our baby.... I asked.

Relax Mr..... He stretched the sentence.

Arjun... I said my name.

OK Mr. Arjun she is fine ... Can you come to the cabin. We have something to discuss... He said.

We went inside his cabin

Doctor what's wrong.... I asked.

Sorry to say Mr. Arjun... But her condition is really worse.... He said.

Doctor but you said she is fine.... I asked.

Now she is fine.. She gained her consciousness as well..her body is accepting the medicine but from the reports we found she is too weak to carry a baby now. Her body is completely lack of nutrition, seems like she didn't eat anything good during the whole period of pregnancy. After analyzing the her previous reports, we found that her body is completely lack of nutrition . Her body is not in the condition to carry a baby either she will lose her life or the baby would.... He said.

All the things around me started to freeze around me..

Doctor my baby.... I said.

The baby's condition is stable now but we kept them supervision because both the mother and baby are completely weak... And we have to wait further till the baby's condition is fine.. We might need to hospitalize your wife for a week ... He said.

Doctor is there any way to save both... When will they recover .... I asked.

Only through proper diet and care it can be cured. But.. That too only if its followed strictly..... He said.

Doctor I'll take care of them..... Can I see them please for once atleast ..... I'm literally begging him.

Amm you can..... we have shifted her to the ICU... But don't disturb her...... He said.

I rushed to the iCU. They handed me a mask and gloves to avoid any transmission of infection....

I saw y/n lying on the bed with lots of wires attached to her....

(imagine she is pregnant)

I went to her with tears flowing out of my eyes.

I sat on the chair near her......

Janani.....i called her.

Endi... En enkitta sollala neetha en janani nu... Adhu teriyama poi unna evlo kastham padutiten.....i took her hand in mine and held it close to me.

Sekkram ezhumbi vaa Di Nee naa namma kozhanda nu happy ah vazhanum..... Unna kastham padutunaduku ellam sethu vachu unna Happy ah pathukanum... I said and kissed her hand...

I felt her fingers moving.....

I looked at her and find her looking back at me.

Y/n.... Y/n.... I called her with a smile.. But her face remained like a stoic.

Iru naa. Doctor ah kootitu varen... I said and ran out.

I called the doctor. He came and examined y/n and said she is fine now.

But she has to stay here for at least a week....

I asked doctor.. Whether I can shift her to a private hospital but he denied it.

So I agreed to him.

The doctor shifted her to the VIP ward. Just for the name sake it is called that way other than that it's little bit neater than the normal one.

I tried to have some private time with y/n but that guy and his wife stayed and took care of y/n. Which I'm really thankful for.

one day I went inside the room when she was asleep and made her wear her Thaali back. I gently pecked her forehead and left the room.


Y/n's pov

My surroundings looked  dark I couldn't open my eyes.... But I remembered those venomous that Arjun said.... The one who I loved dearly....

Then I remembered about my baby... I was bleeding then. What happened to my baby.... Is she alright.

With lots of effort and struggle atlast I opened my eyes slowly but closed it immediately not able to see the bright light around.

After sometime I opened my eyes.. I placed my hands on my bump....

I let out breathe of relief... Tears slipped out of my eyes...

Namma nalla irukom baby... Amma unna eppovum nalla pathupen...sorry baby for everything you faced because of my blind love.

Doctor came and examined me and they put some injection which made me sleep again... I couldn't ask anything... I was too weak to utter a word.

Soon sleep took over me...

After an hour

I woke up hearing a familiar voice.

I couldn't properly hear what he is saying but I can feel that he is holding my hand in his.

I felt disgusted..

My body was too weak still I tried to remove my hand from his. His gaze turned towards me.. His eyes had tears but it didn't affect me..

He is reason behind my situation and what the need to act now...

I hate this man.... I'll never forgive him.


Arjun's pov

Time skip

Y/n didn't even speak a word to me. That's OK she must be angry with me.

The day to take y/n home also came.

I went to the doctor and got to know all about y/n's diet and medication.

I went to meet rishabh and his wife.. I thanked them and hugged him...

You want help call me.... I said handing my business card to him.

But he denied... I snuffed the card in his hand.

Thank you sister.... I thanked his wife.

I'll take y/n home... I said to them.

Mmm... We going.... He said and left with his wife back to his house.

I went back to y/n's hospital room just to find it empty...

I was searching her in the whole hospital... Finally I saw her walking towards the hospital entrance.

I ran to her an held her by her arm.

She passed a dead glare to me and shrugged off my hand from her's.

She tried to move but I blocked her way by standing infront of her.

I looked into her eyes.... My heart sank seeing that.

The eyes which always had love is now showing hatred.... And... Disgust.

Y/n.... Vaa veetuku polam... I said holding her hand

Chee.... She said and shrugged off my hand again.

Y/n... I called her in a broken voice.

She passed a glare and tried to move...

Y/n.... I'm sorry di... Nee janani nu teriyama paniten...... I said with my tears brimming eyes.

She crossed her hand and said..... Oh janani nu terijuruchadunala tha indha gavanipu illati sethu potum nu viturupa. Apdithane...

I shook my head....

Naa pannadu thappu thaa y/n please enna manichu en kooda vaduru....i begged to her.

I looked at me and passed a sardonic smile.

Enna arjun nadikuriya..... She asked smiling at me.

My heart broke into million pieces... I remember asking this question numerous time but when I'm facing it. It hurts like hell...

A drop of tear left my eyes.

I stood there. She started moving towards the entrance...

Y/n.... I ran to her and said.

Y/n... Diya 3 days la india vara... Nee enga kooda Illa ngradu yaarukum teriyadu.

Diya ku oru problem anga adan Inga vara..... I said. Because I know she cares about her sister and her family...

When I said Diya has a problem... Y/n's face changed.

Akka akka ku enna prachrana.... She asked.

Sollu akka ku enna prachrana.... She akses grabbing My collar.

Nee veetuku vaa naa solren.... I said.

Mudiyadu..... Yenna un veetuku vara vaika poi solriya... She asked.

I took my phone out and played diya's voice message.

Arjun... Chennai la doctor kitta appointment vangiyachu inum 3 days la india vanduruvom. Unnayum y/n vayum pathutu chennai kezhambanum. Naan varadu y/n surprise ah irukum.....

This was in the message..

Y/n looked at me..

Akka ku ennachu sollu please....atleast akka number kudu.... She asked with tears in my eyes.

Sorry y/n I can't... I said.

I wiped her tears... But she pushed my hands...

Veetuku poi solren... Vaa polam... I said taking her to my car..

Her face is dull and I can understand she doesn't want to come with me.. She is continously crying...

I'm sorry y/n... I don't have any other option to take you home.

I drove off straight to the airport.

I enquired about y/n flight travel already so it's not an issue.... It safe for her travel.

Enga porom... She asked.

Bangalore... I said.

She didn't reply anything. So I turned to look at her.

She was resting her head on the headrest.. With her eyes closed.

Y/n ennachu... I asked.

She didn't reply anything.

Y/n.... I called her. She raised her hands and gesture me to stop...

I understood her and silently drove to the airport.

We reached the airport. I got out first and opened the door for her. She just glared at me and came out.

She was holding her baby bump and walking... I didn't notice it till now. She has lost all her weight. She looked like some bones covered by skin structure.

I showed them our ID proof and tickets and went it. She looked at me in a questioning way.

Un things ellam already bangalore ku pack paniten and I have your ID .... I said.

She didn't reply...

We boarded our flight. We put on our seat belts.

I looked at y/n... She looks weak...

The next moment after the flight took off... Y/n removed her seat belt and went somewhere. I followed her... I saw her entering the bathroom...

I went in. She was puking her guts out..

I stood behind her and rubbed her back....

Onula y/n.. . Ellam sari aagirum.... I consoled her.

The stewardess knocked on the toilet door.

Sir is she alright.... Do you need any help..... She asked.

No she is fine. If you don't mind can I get some extra tissues ..... I asked.

Innum varuda.... I asked y/n who is still over the washbasin puking....

Mmhmm.. She said.

OK wash panna laamaa... I asked.

Mmm..she replied.

When she lift her head. I noticed her weak, pale face. Her eyes had tears, red nose...

My eyes watered a little seeing her condition. Did I make her go through all this alone. That's question was enough to make me guilty.

She washed her face and mouth... And grabbed the tissue and wiped her face.

She tried to go out. But I blocked her way.

She glared at me...

Romba tired ah irupa Naa kootitu poren... He said.

She totally ignored me and went out. Just to stumble on her feet.

I caught her in my hold at the right time.

She looked so weak.... She slowly closed her eyes in tiredness... I took her to our seat...

She slept the whole time..... When we reached Bangalore I woke her up.

She still looks tired. I carefully made her get down...

She shrugged of my hands from her shoulder. But I didn't leave her and took her with me safely.

We came to the exit..... I waved at the driver of my car...

He came and stopped the car beside us.

She got in the car and rested her head on the seat and closed her eyes.

When we reached our house... I got out first.

Before I could open the door for her. She opened the door and came out holding her baby bump securely.

I looked at her with love and adoration.... It's my love and our baby....

I hold her hand... But her one glare was enough for me take my hands back.

She walked into the house and I followed her.

She stopped on her tracks and looked around..

I can see tears welling up in her eyes.

I know I'm reason behind that....

I stayed a little faraway from her. I saw her climbing the stairs with difficulty...

I tried to lift her....

Enna thodatha.... She roared...

I stopped on my tracks and saw her reaching up.

I heard a loud thud....


Y/n's pov

Arjun took me to bangalore... This house looks like hell to me.

All my miseries started here.... Whenever I see him. I only remember the way he has treated me.

I slide down the Door and tried to hug my knees and cry but couldn't. My bump isn't letting me to do that.

I cried even harder seeing the room. This room reminded me how hopelessly I was in love with this monster and how he treated me.

How he played with me and my feelings.....

I got up and started breaking the things in the room

He turned me into this. He turned my love into hatred...

I HATE YOU ARJUN... I HATE YOU..........

I screamed on top of my voice....





Hi makkazhe

So things are on the track paapom enna nadakudunu....

I'm sorry makkazhe
I was quite busy yesterday and hereafter the posts will me on alternate days. I hope you understand my situation.

Seekram sandippom

Marakama vote panunga. ❤️

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